Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF1S9MY55GGQ0D5NEK06ZN

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Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at an ungodly hour, somewhere between midnight and dawn when the city's edges blurred into shadows. Rory stirred from a restless sleep, Ptolemy's weight on her chest making it difficult to breathe. She pushed the cat aside and sat up, rubbing her eyes. Three sharp raps echoed through the flat, followed by a familiar voice. "Rory. Open the door." Lucien. Of course it was Lucien. Her heart hammered against her ribs as she stumbled from bed, bare feet finding the cold floorboards. She grabbed a robe from the chair and tied it hastily, glancing at the clock. 3:47 AM. What could possibly bring him here at this hour? The peephole revealed his silhouette, tall and lean in a dark coat, platinum hair catching the hallway light. She hesitated, hand on the deadbolt. They hadn't spoken in weeks, not since that disastrous dinner where she'd finally admitted how much his secrets hurt her. He'd listened, that infuriatingly calm expression never wavering, and when she'd finished, he'd simply nodded and said, "I understand," before walking away. She turned the lock. Lucien stood in the doorway, soaked from the rain that had started sometime in the early hours. Water dripped from his coat onto the welcome mat. His eyes—one amber, one black—searched her face with an intensity that made her want to step back. "You're dripping on my mat," she said, the first thing that came to mind. He smiled, just a slight curve of his lips. "I apologize. May I come in?" She stepped aside, and he moved past her with that liquid grace she remembered. He shed his coat, revealing a charcoal suit that looked untouched by the weather. How did he do that? Everything about him seemed calculated, from the way he carried himself to the precise angle at which he hung his coat on the rack. "Coffee?" she asked, heading to the kitchen. It was easier than asking why he was here. "Please." The kettle whistled, and she busied herself with mugs and grounds, trying to ignore the way her hands shook slightly. When had it become so difficult to be near him? They'd worked together for months—she delivering packages for his information network, he paying her generously for her discretion. It had been simple. Efficient. Until it wasn't. "I didn't expect to see you again," she said, keeping her back to him as she poured water over the grounds. "No. I imagine you didn't." The words hung between them, heavy with implication. She turned, leaning against the counter, and studied him. He looked tired, dark circles under his eyes that she'd never seen before. Whatever had brought him here had cost him something. "Eva's not here," she said, though she knew he knew that. "She's in Dublin for the week." "I'm not here for Eva." The directness of it made her breath catch. She set her mug down carefully. "Then why are you here, Lucien? It's the middle of the night, and we—" She stopped herself from saying they weren't on speaking terms. It felt too petty, too small for whatever this was. He took a step closer, then another. "I made a mistake. Several, actually. The largest was thinking I could keep certain parts of my life separate from you without consequence." She laughed, a short bitter sound. "You mean lying to me? Or just omitting the truth?" "Both. Neither." He ran a hand through his hair, and she noticed it was trembling slightly. "Rory, the world I inhabit—the one you've glimpsed through our work—it's more complicated than you know. There are things about me, about what I am, that I've kept hidden not to hurt you, but to protect you." "From what? Yourself?" He flinched. "Yes. From the reality that someone like me—someone with my heritage, my connections—can never truly be with someone like you without putting them at risk." The words landed like blows. She'd suspected, of course. The late-night meetings, the coded messages, the way he sometimes disappeared for days without explanation. But hearing him say it aloud, admitting that she wasn't worth the risk—it hurt more than she'd expected. "Someone like me," she repeated softly. "Meaning what, exactly? Human? Ordinary? Not part of your supernatural underworld?" "All of that. And none of it." He stepped closer still, until they were nearly touching. "You're the most extraordinary person I've ever met, Rory. Your mind, your courage, the way you see through deception to the truth beneath—it's why I hired you. Why I kept you close. Why I fell in love with you, despite every instinct telling me it was a terrible idea." Her heart stuttered. "You what?" "I love you." The words came out rough, almost angry. "I have for months. And every day that I'm near you, I risk exposing you to dangers you can't even imagine. My father, my enemies, the factions that would use you to get to me—" "Stop." She held up a hand. "Just stop. You don't get to show up here in the middle of the night, confess your love, and then tell me all the reasons it can't work. That's not fair." "Life isn't fair." "Neither is love, apparently." She moved around him, needing space, needing air that didn't smell like him, like rain and expensive cologne and something darker underneath. "You want to protect me? Fine. But you should have thought about that before you let me fall for you." "I didn't let you do anything. You fell despite my best efforts to keep you at arm's length." "Oh, that's rich. You're the one who started leaving those notes with the deliveries. You're the one who always seemed to know exactly when I'd be working late. You're the one who made me laugh when I wanted to cry, who listened when I talked about my father's cases, who—" She stopped, throat tight. "Who made me believe, even for a moment, that maybe I deserved something good in my life." He was silent for a long moment. When he spoke, his voice was quiet. "And now?" "Now I don't know what to believe." She sank onto the couch, suddenly exhausted. "I trusted you, Lucien. I let myself care about you, even when my better judgment was screaming at me not to. And you used that. Whether you meant to or not, you used my feelings for you to keep me close, to keep me working for you, to keep me in a world I never asked to be part of." "That wasn't my intention." "But it was the result." She looked up at him, standing there like a statue in her tiny living room. "Tell me one thing. Just one. Were any of those late-night conversations real? Or was everything just another way to keep me compliant?" "Everything was real." He sank to his knees in front of her, taking her hands in his. His were cold from the rain. "Every word, every laugh, every moment we shared—it was all real to me. I swear it on my mother's memory." She searched his face, looking for deception, for the calculated mask he usually wore. But tonight, with exhaustion and emotion stripping him bare, she saw only a man who looked as lost as she felt. "What do we do now?" she asked. "I don't know." He squeezed her hands. "But I know I can't walk away from you. Not anymore. Not after tonight." "Because you love me?" "Because I need you. Because being near you makes me want to be better than I am. Because the thought of you in danger makes me physically ill." He brought her hands to his lips, pressing a kiss to her knuckles. "I'm not asking for forgiveness. I'm not even asking for another chance, not yet. I'm just asking you to let me try to make this right. Let me show you that what we have is worth the risk." The rain had stopped outside, leaving the city quiet in that strange pre-dawn stillness. Rory looked down at the man kneeling before her—the man who'd turned her world upside down, who'd made her feel things she'd sworn she'd never feel again after Evan, who'd broken her heart even as he'd been trying to protect it. "Okay," she said finally. "Show me." He stood, pulling her up with him, and for the first time since he'd arrived, he smiled. It transformed his face, made him look younger, more human. "Thank you." "Don't thank me yet. I haven't decided if this is the smartest decision I've ever made or the stupidest." "Knowing you, probably both." He reached out, brushing a strand of hair from her face with a tenderness that made her breath catch. "Sleep. I'll be here when you wake up." "Here? In my flat? At 4 AM?" "I'm not leaving you alone tonight. Not after everything." He moved toward the couch. "I'll take the couch. You need rest." She wanted to argue, but the exhaustion was catching up with her, the emotional rollercoaster of the past hour leaving her drained. "Fine. But if you snore, I'm kicking you out." "I don't snore." "Everyone snores." He smiled again, that devastating smile that made her knees weak. "We'll find out, won't we?" She retreated to her bedroom, Ptolemy following at her heels. As she changed into sleep clothes, she could hear Lucien moving around in the living room, probably trying to make the couch comfortable. The thought made her smile despite everything. As she climbed into bed, she realized something. For the first time in weeks, she felt something other than hurt and anger toward Lucien Moreau. She felt hope. It was a fragile, tentative thing, easily shattered. But it was there. And maybe, just maybe, that was enough to start with.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she repeated softly [softly]"
1"She moved around [around]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.1
81.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"wavering"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count2
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"implication"
count1
8
word"coded"
count1
9
word"tenderness"
count1
10
word"comfortable"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echoed"
2"familiar"
3"wavering"
4"intensity"
5"calculated"
6"efficient"
7"implication"
8"coded"
9"tenderness"
10"comfortable"
11"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1632
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions9
wordCount925
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Lucien5
Evan1
Moreau1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed calculated from the way he carried himself to the precise angle at which he hung his coat on the rack"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.613
wordCount1632
matches
0"not to hurt you, but to protect you"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"admitting that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean28.14
std21.25
cv0.755
sampleLengths
046
112
24
349
466
54
643
714
815
957
1016
111
1256
1321
145
1539
1617
175
1848
1930
2016
2153
223
2327
2442
2517
2665
275
2845
2937
303
3146
3218
3371
3416
3574
364
3743
3843
3935
407
4121
424
4379
4455
456
4629
4719
4831
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was catching"
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences124
ratio0.032
matches
0"His eyes—one amber, one black—searched her face with an intensity that made her want to step back."
1"They'd worked together for months—she delivering packages for his information network, he paying her generously for her discretion."
2"But hearing him say it aloud, admitting that she wasn't worth the risk—it hurt more than she'd expected."
3"Rory looked down at the man kneeling before her—the man who'd turned her world upside down, who'd made her feel things she'd sworn she'd never feel again after Evan, who'd broken her heart even as he'd been trying to protect it."
92.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount931
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04833512352309345
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02040816326530612
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean13.16
std10.82
cv0.822
sampleLengths
019
116
211
312
44
51
65
717
815
92
109
1118
126
1320
1422
154
1617
179
1817
1914
209
216
2214
2314
245
2524
267
279
281
2920
3010
3118
324
331
343
3521
365
378
389
3913
409
4111
426
435
448
456
4624
4710
487
4923
75.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.46774193548387094
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners58
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Of course it was Lucien."
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences81
matches
0"She pushed the cat aside"
1"Her heart hammered against her"
2"She grabbed a robe from"
3"She hesitated, hand on the"
4"They hadn't spoken in weeks,"
5"He'd listened, that infuriatingly calm"
6"She turned the lock."
7"His eyes—one amber, one black—searched"
8"she said, the first thing"
9"He smiled, just a slight"
10"She stepped aside, and he"
11"He shed his coat, revealing"
12"she asked, heading to the"
13"It was easier than asking"
14"They'd worked together for months—she"
15"It had been simple."
16"she said, keeping her back"
17"She turned, leaning against the"
18"He looked tired, dark circles"
19"she said, though she knew"
ratio0.63
46.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences81
matches
0"The knock came at an"
1"Rory stirred from a restless"
2"She pushed the cat aside"
3"Her heart hammered against her"
4"She grabbed a robe from"
5"The peephole revealed his silhouette,"
6"She hesitated, hand on the"
7"They hadn't spoken in weeks,"
8"He'd listened, that infuriatingly calm"
9"She turned the lock."
10"Lucien stood in the doorway,"
11"Water dripped from his coat"
12"His eyes—one amber, one black—searched"
13"she said, the first thing"
14"He smiled, just a slight"
15"She stepped aside, and he"
16"He shed his coat, revealing"
17"Everything about him seemed calculated,"
18"she asked, heading to the"
19"It was easier than asking"
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He shed his coat, revealing a charcoal suit that looked untouched by the weather."
1"But tonight, with exhaustion and emotion stripping him bare, she saw only a man who looked as lost as she felt."
2"Rory looked down at the man kneeling before her—the man who'd turned her world upside down, who'd made her feel things she'd sworn she'd never feel again after …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated softly (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.117
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.033
84.1437%