| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her smile faded slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 2 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 3 | "The seer turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 74.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1577 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1577 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "clenching" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "streaming" | | 11 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 82.07% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.65% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 71 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You have seen the Veil. You have walked through Hel's门. You know what lies beyond.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1585 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1079 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 19 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | December | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Nyx | 3 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.62 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 7.14% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite decide what to do with them" | | 1 | "blue that seemed to breathe, to shift between hues like oil on water" | | 2 | "seemed woven from moonlight, her silver hair unbound and reaching past her waist" | | 3 | "looked like solid silver" |
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| 73.82% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.262 | | wordCount | 1585 | | matches | | 0 | "not pity, exactly, but something close" | | 1 | "not moving, exactly, but changing color, cycling through hues like a slow-motion rain" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 32.35 | | std | 23.72 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 70 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 107 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 57 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 56 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 69 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 50 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 64 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 12.73% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was grounding" | | 2 | "was listening" | | 3 | "was beating was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd imagined something grand — a sweeping archway, perhaps, or an ancient stone portal wreathed in mist like something from a storybook." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her chest — a steady, warm rhythm she'd grown accustomed to over the past weeks." | | 2 | "They had assumed solid form for the journey — a tall, shadow-dark silhouette that somehow still seemed to shift at the edges, as if the light couldn't quite decide what to do with them." | | 3 | "It wasn't darker or brighter — it was *different*, as if the sun here burned at a slightly different temperature, casting colors she'd never seen before." | | 4 | "Behind her, the ancient standing stones rose in a rough circle — twelve oaks, gnarled and massive, their roots crawling across the mossy ground like frozen rivers." | | 5 | "Aurora's hand flew to her belt where the Fae blade hung — Isolde's gift, cold as ice even now, its moonsilver surface dimly luminescent." | | 6 | "Her voice was like music played underwater — beautiful and strange and slightly wrong." | | 7 | "\"No.\" Isolde smiled, and it was a strange thing — too wide, too many teeth, but somehow still beautiful." | | 8 | "The seer laughed — a sound like wind chimes in a storm." | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed again, and Aurora became aware of something she'd missed at first — the quality of the silence." | | 10 | "It wasn't truly silent; there were sounds, distant and ethereal, music that wasn't music, voices that spoke in languages she didn't recognize." | | 11 | "\"Neither do they,\" Isolde said, and there was something in her voice — not pity, exactly, but something close." | | 12 | "The flowers seemed to shift as they passed — not moving, exactly, but changing color, cycling through hues like a slow-motion rainbow." | | 13 | "Aurora leaned closer, curious despite herself, and saw her reflection looking back — but wrong." | | 14 | "And somewhere, far away, Aurora could have sworn she heard music — soft and sweet and terrible, the kind of music that made you want to dance until you forgot who you were." |
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| 87.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1084 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.0544280442804428 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02029520295202952 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 13.32 | | std | 10.03 | | cv | 0.753 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 53.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.36134453781512604 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, there was only a" | | 1 | "Only this place." | | 2 | "Then she thought of Evan." |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd imagined something grand —" | | 1 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 2 | "They had assumed solid form" | | 3 | "She stepped through." | | 4 | "It wasn't darker or brighter" | | 5 | "She turned, and stopped" | | 6 | "They weren't there." | | 7 | "They marked a clearing perhaps" | | 8 | "She drew it without thinking," | | 9 | "She wore a gown of" | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes watched" | | 11 | "Her voice was like music" | | 12 | "Her smile faded slightly" | | 13 | "It wasn't truly silent; there" | | 14 | "Her pale eyes flickered to" | | 15 | "She looked back once more" | | 16 | "They walked in silence for" | | 17 | "She could feel it now," | | 18 | "she asked finally" | | 19 | "Her features were slightly too" |
| | ratio | 0.287 | |
| 34.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate wasn't what Aurora" | | 1 | "She'd imagined something grand —" | | 2 | "The air there tasted different." | | 3 | "Isolde said, already stepping toward" | | 4 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 6 | "Nyx's voice came from just" | | 7 | "They had assumed solid form" | | 8 | "Aurora took a breath" | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The change was immediate and" | | 11 | "The next, she was somewhere" | | 12 | "Aurora staggered, her balance reeling" | | 13 | "The light was wrong." | | 14 | "It wasn't darker or brighter" | | 15 | "The sky above was still" | | 16 | "She turned, and stopped" | | 17 | "They weren't there." | | 18 | "Neither was the gap in" | | 19 | "Aurora spun, her heart clenching," |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silver hair caught the fading light of the winter afternoon, glowing faintly as if lit from within." | | 1 | "They had assumed solid form for the journey — a tall, shadow-dark silhouette that somehow still seemed to shift at the edges, as if the light couldn't quite dec…" | | 2 | "It wasn't darker or brighter — it was *different*, as if the sun here burned at a slightly different temperature, casting colors she'd never seen before." | | 3 | "She wore a gown of some fabric that seemed woven from moonlight, her silver hair unbound and reaching past her waist." | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes watched Aurora with an expression that might have been amusement, or might have been something else entirely." | | 5 | "It wasn't truly silent; there were sounds, distant and ethereal, music that wasn't music, voices that spoke in languages she didn't recognize." | | 6 | "The trees stood silent, their bark gleaming with an odd luminescence now, their branches swaying in that wind she couldn't feel." | | 7 | "And somewhere, far away, Aurora could have sworn she heard music — soft and sweet and terrible, the kind of music that made you want to dance until you forgot w…" |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora kept, though her arm trembled slightly" | | 1 | "Isolde began, her bare feet leaving no impressions in the moss" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |