"Not dramatically—more like the subtle shift when an elevator begins to move."
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"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in defiant bloom—bluebells and foxgloves, primroses and flowers Aurora had no names for, all flowering together in cheerful disregard for season or sense."
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"She could feel the wrongness of her presence—not unwelcome, exactly, but noticed."
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"Aurora caught glimpses of movement in their branches—not birds, but something that giggled like water over stones."
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"The water ran uphill, collecting in a pool that reflected not the strange sky above but something else—a ceiling of stars arranged in no constellation Aurora recognized."
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"Images flickered across the surface—her face but older, marked by scars she didn't have."
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"Nyx studied their own reflection—or lack thereof."
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"The path didn't reappear, but a new way opened—not through the forest but up, into the canopy where twisted branches formed steps and bridges."
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"Aurora glimpsed other clearings through the leaves—some filled with dancing lights, others dark and still."
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"Aurora hauled herself up, legs trembling from the climb and from something else—the weight of being observed by inhuman eyes."
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"The way down was clearer—a spiral staircase of branches that hadn't existed on the way up."
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"Aurora touched the pendant through her shirt, feeling its warmth—stronger now, as if the Grove had awakened something in it."
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"The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their oak surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to shift when Aurora wasn't looking directly a…"
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"She pressed her palm against the nearest stone, feeling the rough bark pulse with something that wasn't quite warmth, wasn't quite electricity."
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"The gray October sky above Richmond Park bled into something else entirely: a twilight that belonged to no earthly hour, painted in shades of violet and gold th…"
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"They moved deeper, following Isolde along a path that hadn't existed until her feet found it."
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"Aurora caught glimpses of movement in their branches—not birds, but something that giggled like water over stones."
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"The water ran uphill, collecting in a pool that reflected not the strange sky above but something else—a ceiling of stars arranged in no constellation Aurora re…"
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"Aurora touched the pendant through her shirt, feeling its warmth—stronger now, as if the Grove had awakened something in it."