| 38.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" | | 1 | "Isolde said calmly [calmly]" | | 2 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |
| 74.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "truly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1558 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "magnetic" | | 6 | "kaleidoscope" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1576 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 62 | | wordCount | 1180 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Rory | 23 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 17 | | London | 1 | | Greek | 1 | | Middle | 1 | | Eastern | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.525 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if speaking too loudly might shatter the delicate balance of this place" | | 1 | "quite identify — nostalgia, perhaps, or regret" | | 2 | "colors that seemed to shift and change" | | 3 | "things that seemed to be made entirely of crystal or liquid metal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.635 | | wordCount | 1576 | | matches | | 0 | "not in a way she could point to exactly, but in the quality of the air, the slant of the light through th" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 39.4 | | std | 19.45 | | cv | 0.494 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 79 | | 21 | 78 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 56 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 52 | | 38 | 60 | | 39 | 25 |
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| 85.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "was covered" | | 1 | "were carved" | | 2 | "being solved" | | 3 | "being herded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.178 | | matches | | 0 | "The forest around them had shifted — not in a way she could point to exactly, but in the quality of the air, the slant of the light through the canopy, the way the shadows seemed to hold themselves differently." | | 1 | "Even in their incorporeal form, they cast no shadow of their own — a detail that made Rory's skin prickle with unease." | | 2 | "They emerged into a clearing where the ground was covered in a carpet of flowers that shouldn't exist together — snowdrops and bluebells, foxgloves and forget-me-nots, all blooming simultaneously regardless of season." | | 3 | "Nyx solidified beside them, their form coalescing from shadow to something almost human — tall, with indistinct features that seemed to shift when Rory tried to focus on them." | | 4 | "Not Nyx's shadow — something else." | | 5 | "Through it, she could see a landscape that didn't belong in Richmond Park — rolling hills covered in vineyards heavy with grapes the color of amethyst, orchards where trees bore fruit in impossible combinations, and in the distance, the spires of a city that gleamed like polished amber." | | 6 | "Nyx moved between them, their form solidifying further until Rory could make out sharp features and eyes that held no pupils — just endless, consuming darkness." | | 7 | "The air grew warmer, carrying scents that made Rory's mouth water — baking bread, roasting meat, spices she couldn't name." | | 8 | "\"Welcome to Dymas,\" Isolde said, her voice tinged with something Rory couldn't quite identify — nostalgia, perhaps, or regret." | | 9 | "The architecture was unlike anything she'd seen in London — a blend of classical Greek columns, Middle Eastern domes, and something else entirely that defied categorization." | | 10 | "But it was the people — if they could be called that — who truly made Rory's breath catch." | | 11 | "The streets were alive with sound — music from unseen musicians, the chatter of countless conversations in languages she couldn't understand, the sizzle of food cooking in countless kitchens." | | 12 | "Everywhere she looked, there was abundance — food, drink, beauty, pleasure." | | 13 | "Here, the buildings were older, their surfaces carved with scenes that made Rory's skin crawl — images of consumption and excess taken to horrific extremes." | | 14 | "The streets around them began to change — buildings shifting, walls moving, the very layout of the city rearranging itself like a puzzle being solved." | | 15 | "The air grew heavy with the scent of cooking meat and baking bread, but beneath it lay something else — the coppery tang of blood, the sweetness of decay." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1165 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.036051502145922745 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014592274678111588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 17.51 | | std | 9.41 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 61.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.43333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 49.02% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Everywhere she looked, there was" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 1 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 2 | "She stopped herself with effort," | | 3 | "They stepped through the archway" | | 4 | "They moved through the streets" | | 5 | "They paid no attention to" | | 6 | "It was beautiful." | | 7 | "It was terrifying." | | 8 | "They turned down a narrower" |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 26.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed with" | | 1 | "The forest around them had" | | 2 | "The trees here were older," | | 3 | "Nyx moved ahead of them," | | 4 | "Isolde followed behind, her silver" | | 5 | "Rory touched the pendant again," | | 6 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 7 | "The forest seemed to demand" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her voice musical" | | 9 | "They emerged into a clearing" | | 10 | "Isolde murmured, moving toward them" | | 11 | "Rory approached cautiously, reaching out" | | 12 | "The moment her fingers made" | | 13 | "Nyx solidified beside them, their" | | 14 | "Rory asked, but the question" | | 15 | "Something that watched." | | 16 | "Isolde's hand found her arm," | | 17 | "Rory forced her gaze forward," | | 18 | "Isolde said, following her gaze" | | 19 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, and" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 73.53% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in their incorporeal form," |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed with a warmth that seeped through Rory's shirt, a steady rhythm against her skin that grew stronger with each step." | | 1 | "Even in their incorporeal form, they cast no shadow of their own — a detail that made Rory's skin prickle with unease." | | 2 | "They emerged into a clearing where the ground was covered in a carpet of flowers that shouldn't exist together — snowdrops and bluebells, foxgloves and forget-m…" | | 3 | "Through it, she could see a landscape that didn't belong in Richmond Park — rolling hills covered in vineyards heavy with grapes the color of amethyst, orchards…" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, and this time Rory felt a pull toward the archway, a magnetic attraction that made her feet move forward almost of their own accord…" | | 5 | "Isolde's lavender eyes held ancient wisdom that made Rory feel like a child." | | 6 | "Nyx moved between them, their form solidifying further until Rory could make out sharp features and eyes that held no pupils — just endless, consuming darkness." | | 7 | "The air grew warmer, carrying scents that made Rory's mouth water — baking bread, roasting meat, spices she couldn't name." | | 8 | "Buildings rose in graceful curves, their surfaces decorated with mosaics that depicted scenes of feasting and celebration." | | 9 | "Bridges arched over canals filled with water so clear Rory could see fish swimming below, their scales reflecting colors that seemed to shift and change." | | 10 | "A group of children ran past, laughing, their skin the color of burnished copper, their eyes glowing like tiny suns." | | 11 | "Here, the buildings were older, their surfaces carved with scenes that made Rory's skin crawl — images of consumption and excess taken to horrific extremes." | | 12 | "Nyx solidified fully, their form now that of a tall human man with sharp features and eyes that held centuries of darkness." | | 13 | "But as Rory looked around at the transforming city, at the beauty that was becoming something else, something hungry, she realized that in Dymas, there might be…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice musical and strange" | | 2 | "Rory asked, but the question died on her lips as she noticed movement in the shadows beyond the clearing" | | 3 | "Rory asked, unable to keep the wonder from her voice" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice tight with tension" | | 5 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind" |
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| 11.11% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered again (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.313 | | effectiveRatio | 0.278 | |