Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF323678A06EM90190KH2K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.001943
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was settling in with a mug of Earl Grey and a well-thumbed copy of Eva’s latest grimoire. Ptolemy, sprawled across the arm of the threadbare sofa, twitched an ear but didn’t bother to move. Rory didn’t either, at first. Eva was out of town, and no one else had any business showing up unannounced. The knock came again, sharper this time, insistent. Rory sighed, set her mug down on the cluttered coffee table, and padded to the door, shoving a loose strand of black hair behind her ear. She peered through the peephole and froze. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, impeccably dressed as always in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than Rory made in a month. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and he leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, the picture of casual elegance. Even through the distorted lens of the peephole, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—bore into her with an intensity that made her stomach flip. Rory opened the door just enough to wedge herself in the gap, her bare arms crossed over her chest. “Luc.” “Rory.” His voice was smooth, low, and infuriatingly calm. “May I come in?” She didn’t move. “Eva’s not here.” “I’m aware.” His lips curved into a faint smile that didn’t reach his eyes. “I came to see you.” Of course he did. Rory’s jaw tightened. She hadn’t seen him in months, not since that night at the Black Cat when they’d argued—no, when *she’d* argued—and she’d walked out, leaving him standing in the dim light of the club, his expression unreadable. She’d told herself it was for the best, that whatever strange, magnetic thing had been between them was better off extinguished before it consumed her. And yet, here he was, looking like he’d stepped out of a magazine spread and smelling faintly of sandalwood and something darker, something she couldn’t name. “Why?” she asked, her voice cooler than she felt. “Because we need to talk.” His tone was calm, but there was an edge to it, a hint of something deeper simmering beneath the surface. “And because avoiding me hasn’t worked out well for either of us.” “I haven’t been avoiding you,” she lied. The corner of his mouth twitched. “Then invite me in.” Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening on the edge of the door. She could send him away, could shut the door and pretend he wasn’t standing there with that look in his eyes that made her chest ache. But she didn’t. Instead, she stepped back, pulling the door wide, and gestured for him to enter. Lucien stepped inside, his cane tapping softly against the wooden floor. He paused just past the threshold, glancing around the cluttered flat with mild curiosity. Ptolemy, deciding that a newcomer warranted his attention, leapt down from the sofa and approached with the regal air of a cat who knew he owned the place. “Hello, Ptolemy,” Lucien said, extending a hand for the tabby to sniff. Ptolemy rubbed against his leg once, then twined around him in a figure-eight before sauntering off, apparently satisfied with his inspection. “Make yourself at home,” Rory muttered, closing the door and resetting the deadbolts more out of habit than necessity. Lucien turned to face her, his mismatched eyes studying her with that unnerving intensity. “You’ve been well?” “Fine,” she said shortly, leaning against the door. “What do you want, Luc?” He sighed, leaning his weight on his cane as if it suddenly felt heavier. “Must we be so adversarial?” “I don’t know,” Rory shot back. “Must you show up unannounced and expect me to be thrilled to see you?” “I didn’t expect you to be thrilled,” he said quietly. “But I hoped you’d at least hear me out.” Rory pressed her lips together, her stomach churning with emotions she didn’t want to name. She pushed off the door and stalked past him into the small living room, busying herself with straightening the already chaotic pile of books and scrolls on the coffee table. It gave her something to do with her hands, something to focus on besides the way her heart was pounding in her chest. Lucien followed her, his cane tapping softly against the floor. He stopped just behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, could smell the faint scent of sandalwood and that darker, indefinable something that was uniquely him. She stiffened, her fingers curling around the edge of a battered grimoire. “Rory,” he said softly, “look at me.” She didn’t want to. Looking at him felt like staring into the sun—too much, too bright, too dangerous. But she turned anyway, because she couldn’t help herself, because something in his voice compelled her. He was closer than she’d expected, and she had to tilt her head back slightly to meet his gaze. His amber eye burned like molten gold, while the black one seemed to swallow the light. She swallowed hard, her throat suddenly dry. “I’ve missed you,” he said, his voice low and rough, and Rory felt something inside her crack open. “Don’t,” she whispered, shaking her head. “Don’t say that.” “Why not?” He took a step closer, and she found herself stepping back until her legs bumped against the edge of the sofa. “It’s the truth. I’ve missed you, Rory. Every day since you walked out.” Her chest tightened, and she wrapped her arms around herself, as if that could protect her from the ache his words stirred in her. “Stop.” “No.” His voice was firm now, his gaze unwavering. “You walked away without letting me explain—without giving us a chance. I’m not going to let you do that again.” “There’s no *us*,” she said, her voice breaking. “There can’t be.” “Why not?” he demanded, his frustration bleeding through the calm facade. “Because you’re scared? Because you think I’ll hurt you?” “Yes,” she snapped, her eyes blazing. “You’re half-demon, Luc. You deal in secrets and lies and—” “And you?” he interrupted sharply. “You’re no stranger to secrets, Rory. You’ve been running from your own truth for years.” She flinched, his words hitting too close to home. “That’s not fair.” “Isn’t it?” He stepped closer again, until there was barely any space between them. “You accuse me of being dangerous, but you’re the one who keeps pushing everyone away. You think it’s safer to be alone, but it’s not. It’s just lonely.” Tears pricked at the corners of her eyes, and she blinked them away furiously. “You don’t know what you’re talking about.” “I know more than you think,” he said softly. He reached out, his fingers brushing against the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a touch so light it sent shivers up her arm. “I know you, Rory. Better than anyone.” She wanted to pull away, to tell him he was wrong, but she couldn’t. Her breath hitched, and she looked up at him, her bright blue eyes clouded with confusion and longing. “Luc…” His name was barely a whisper, but it was enough. His hand slid up her arm, cupping her face gently, his thumb brushing over her cheekbone. “Stop running,” he murmured, his voice rough with emotion. “Stop pretending you don’t feel this.” She wanted to argue, to tell him he was wrong, but the words caught in her throat. Because he wasn’t wrong. She felt it—had always felt it—that pull, that magnetism that drew her to him like a moth to a flame. And it terrified her. But as his lips brushed against hers, soft and tentative, the fear melted away, replaced by something softer, warmer. Her hands found their way to his chest, fingers curling into the fabric of his suit jacket as she kissed him back, tentatively at first, then with a desperation that surprised even her. When they finally broke apart, both of them breathing heavily, Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed. “Don’t push me away again,” he whispered. Rory swallowed hard, her heart pounding in her chest. “I’ll try,” she said quietly, her voice trembling. “But I can’t promise anything.” “That’s enough,” he murmured, his lips brushing against hers again. “For now, that’s enough.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
34.62% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said shortly [shortly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
3"he interrupted sharply [sharply]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
5"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.885
rawRatio0.261
effectiveRatio0.231
63.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count4
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
4"sharply"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"intensity"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"simmering"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count2
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"moth to a flame"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"unreadable"
3"magnetic"
4"simmering"
5"weight"
6"churning"
7"chaotic"
8"pounding"
9"could feel"
10"unwavering"
11"facade"
12"whisper"
13"moth to a flame"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"d with confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1373
ratio0.001
matches
0"she’d"
1"us"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1104
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Earl1
Grey1
Eva2
Moreau1
Black1
Cat1
Ptolemy3
Lucien6
Tears1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Earl"
2"Grey"
3"Eva"
4"Moreau"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Lucien"
7"Tears"
places(empty)
globalScore0.957
windowScore0.833
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"auntering off, apparently satisfied with his"
1"felt like staring into the sun—too much"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1373
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"deciding that a"
1"pull, that magnetism"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.21
std19.76
cv0.677
sampleLengths
060
141
275
320
413
56
619
794
89
937
107
1110
1254
1353
1433
1519
1617
1713
1819
1920
2019
2168
2253
237
2434
2542
2618
279
2836
2925
3029
3111
3220
3316
3420
3512
3642
3721
3839
3932
401
4141
4245
4352
4426
4522
4614
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been between"
70.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was settling"
1"was, looking"
2"wasn’t standing"
3"was pounding"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"Even through the distorted lens of the peephole, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—bore into her with an intensity that made her stomach flip."
1"She hadn’t seen him in months, not since that night at the Black Cat when they’d argued—no, when *she’d* argued—and she’d walked out, leaving him standing in the dim light of the club, his expression unreadable."
2"Looking at him felt like staring into the sun—too much, too bright, too dangerous."
3"She felt it—had always felt it—that pull, that magnetism that drew her to him like a moth to a flame."
81.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1115
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.059192825112107626
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.02242152466367713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean12.71
std8.16
cv0.642
sampleLengths
023
117
25
315
48
526
67
725
826
924
1019
111
129
134
143
153
1614
175
184
193
2036
2125
2226
239
2425
2512
267
276
284
2911
3026
313
3214
3311
3414
3528
3612
3721
3819
3914
403
418
425
4314
445
456
4614
4710
489
4915
53.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.35185185185185186
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners38
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Of course he did."
1"Instead, she stepped back, pulling"
ratio0.025
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences79
matches
0"She peered through the peephole"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"His voice was smooth, low,"
3"She didn’t move."
4"His lips curved into a"
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"She’d told herself it was"
7"she asked, her voice cooler"
8"His tone was calm, but"
9"She could send him away,"
10"He paused just past the"
11"she said shortly, leaning against"
12"He sighed, leaning his weight"
13"he said quietly"
14"She pushed off the door"
15"It gave her something to"
16"He stopped just behind her,"
17"She stiffened, her fingers curling"
18"he said softly"
19"She didn’t want to."
ratio0.582
29.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences79
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"Ptolemy, sprawled across the arm"
2"Rory didn’t either, at first."
3"Eva was out of town,"
4"The knock came again, sharper"
5"Rory sighed, set her mug"
6"She peered through the peephole"
7"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"Rory opened the door just"
10"His voice was smooth, low,"
11"She didn’t move."
12"His lips curved into a"
13"Rory’s jaw tightened."
14"She hadn’t seen him in"
15"She’d told herself it was"
16"she asked, her voice cooler"
17"His tone was calm, but"
18"The corner of his mouth"
19"Rory hesitated, her fingers tightening"
ratio0.861
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Even through the distorted lens"
1"Because he wasn’t wrong."
ratio0.025
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Even through the distorted lens of the peephole, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—bore into her with an intensity that made her stomach flip."
1"She could send him away, could shut the door and pretend he wasn’t standing there with that look in his eyes that made her chest ache."
2"Ptolemy, deciding that a newcomer warranted his attention, leapt down from the sofa and approached with the regal air of a cat who knew he owned the place."
3"He sighed, leaning his weight on his cane as if it suddenly felt heavier."
4"He stopped just behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, could smell the faint scent of sandalwood and that darker, indefinable something t…"
5"Her chest tightened, and she wrapped her arms around herself, as if that could protect her from the ache his words stirred in her."
6"His hand slid up her arm, cupping her face gently, his thumb brushing over her cheekbone."
7"Her hands found their way to his chest, fingers curling into the fabric of his suit jacket as she kissed him back, tentatively at first, then with a desperation…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she asked, her voice cooler than she felt"
1"she said, her voice breaking"
2"he demanded, his frustration bleeding through the calm facade"
3"she snapped, her eyes blazing"
4"he murmured, his voice rough with emotion"
5"she said quietly, her voice trembling"
6"he murmured, his lips brushing against hers again"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he demanded (demand)"
4"she snapped (snap)"
5"he interrupted sharply (interrupt)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
7"he whispered (whisper)"
8"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.346
71.6818%