Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3GP5E3MB06R2TZMFM19H

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1m 11s
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the rain hammering against Eva's windows. Rory paused with her hand on the deadbolt, recognizing the rhythm—patient, measured, distinctly French in its precision. Her stomach twisted. She'd known this moment would come. Three months of silence couldn't erase what had happened between them, couldn't undo the words spoken in anger or the kiss that had followed. Through the peephole, Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, rain darkening his platinum hair and beading on his charcoal suit. Even soaked, he looked immaculate. Rory worked the locks one by one, each click loud in the quiet flat. Behind her, Ptolemy stretched on his perch atop Eva's research notes, yellow eyes tracking her movement. The tabby had always liked Lucien, the traitorous beast. She opened the door six inches. "Eva's in Prague." "I know." Lucien's mismatched eyes—amber and black—met hers without flinching. Water dripped from his coat onto the curry-stained carpet. "I came to see you." "At midnight. In a storm." "Would you have answered in daylight?" The question hung between them like smoke. Rory's fingers tightened on the door frame, the crescent scar on her wrist catching the dim hallway light. She'd gotten that scar the summer she turned eight, falling from the apple tree in her parents' Cardiff garden. Lucien had traced it once with his fingertip, called it her first battle wound. That was before— "You're bleeding," she said. A dark stain spread across his left shoulder, almost invisible against the wet fabric. He shifted his weight, leaning heavier on his ivory-handled cane. "A disagreement with some of Dmitri's people. Nothing serious." "Demon blood or human?" "Mostly human tonight." His lips quirked in that half-smile she'd tried to forget. "May I come in? I'd rather not bleed on Mrs. Kapoor's carpet. She already dislikes me." Rory stepped back, and he moved past her into Eva's flat. The scent of rain and expensive cologne followed him, undercut by the metallic tang of blood. She secured the locks while he stood dripping in the entry, taking in the organized chaos of books and scrolls. "Eva's research has expanded," he said. "She's tracking portals across Eastern Europe. Thinks she's found a pattern." Rory fetched a towel from the bathroom, tossing it at his head. "Coat off." "Always so direct." But he complied, movements careful as he shed the ruined jacket. The shirt beneath was worse—a ragged tear across the shoulder, edges dark with blood. "Knife or claw?" She guided him to Eva's kitchen table, sweeping aside a stack of medieval grimoires. "Knife. One of Dmitri's human mercenaries. They lack imagination." He settled into the chair with practiced ease, like sitting wounded in her kitchen was perfectly normal. Which, once, it had been. Rory retrieved Eva's first aid kit from beneath the sink. The familiar ritual of tending wounds created a buffer between them, something to focus on besides the way lamplight caught in his pale hair or how his fingers drummed against his cane's handle—a tell she'd learned meant pain. She cut away the shirt fabric, revealing a deep gash across his deltoid. The edges were already knitting together, his demon heritage accelerating the healing, but not fast enough. "This needs stitches," she said. "I trust your hands." The words were neutral, but she heard the echo of other times he'd said them. Her hands steady on his skin as she cleaned the wound, his breath warm against her neck. She pushed the memory away. "Why did you really come here, Lucien?" He was quiet while she threaded the needle, while she made the first careful stitch. The rain had softened to a steady patter against the windows. Somewhere below, a door slammed in the curry house. "I have information about Evan," he said finally. The needle slipped, pricking her thumb. A bead of blood welled up. "What kind of information?" "He's in London. Has been for two weeks." Her hands stilled. Through the thin walls, she heard Mrs. Kapoor's television droning. Normal sounds from a normal world, one where ex-boyfriends stayed in the past and half-demons didn't show up bleeding at midnight. "How do you know?" "I make it my business to know when threats enter the city." His good shoulder lifted in a shrug. "Evan Hartley qualifies as a threat." "To whom? Your business interests?" "To you." She resumed stitching, each pass of the needle precise. "I'm not your responsibility." "No," he agreed. "You made that quite clear three months ago." "You're the one who walked away." "After you told me to leave." "After you suggested I was just another asset to manage." The words came out sharper than intended. "Another contact in your network of useful people." His hand caught her wrist, stilling her work. "You know that's not what I meant." "Do I?" She met his heterochromatic gaze, amber and black boring into her. "You said, and I quote, 'Emotions complicate business arrangements.'" "We had just escaped a burning warehouse. I was attempting to—" "To what? Put me in a neat little box? Categorize whatever this was between us so you could file it away?" "To protect you." His grip gentled but didn't release. "My world, what Irishman—it's dangerous for humans. You've seen what happens to people close to me." "I've been dodging supernatural threats since before we met. Or have you forgotten how we met?" A ghost of a smile crossed his face. "You threw a pint glass at my head." "You were terrorizing Silas's customers." "I was conducting business." "With a knife to Big Tom's throat." "A negotiation tactic." He released her wrist, letting her return to the stitches. "You have excellent aim, by the way." "Star player on the Cardiff University darts team." She tied off the last stitch, smoothing a bandage over her work. "There. Try not to get stabbed again this week." He caught her hand before she could pull away, thumb brushing over her knuckles. "Rory—" Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the table, batting at the bloodied gauze. The spell broke. Rory snatched her hand back, busying herself with cleaning up the medical supplies. "You should go," she said. "Eva will be back Tuesday. Whatever information you have about Evan, you can tell her then." "The information isn't for Eva." He stood, favoring his injured side. "Evan's been asking questions about you. Where you work, where you live. Who you spend time with." Ice slid down her spine. "He doesn't know about the flat?" "Not yet. But he knows about the Golden Empress. Knows about Silas's bar." Lucien retrieved his ruined jacket, extracting a manila envelope from an inner pocket. Somehow it had stayed dry. "Details are in here. His current address, his movements, who he's been talking to." She took the envelope, its weight both negligible and enormous. "Why bring this to me? Why not handle it yourself?" "Because despite what you think, I don't see you as an asset to be managed." He moved toward the door, then paused. "I came because I wanted you to have choices. Information is power, and power means the ability to choose your own path." "Very philosophical for midnight." "I've had three months to think." He worked the locks one-handed, the familiar click-slide-click she'd heard a hundred times before. "Be careful, Rory. Evan's not the same man you left in Cardiff." "Neither am I." He studied her for a long moment, amber eye and black eye seeing too much. "No. You're not." Then he was gone, leaving only the scent of rain and the ghost of might-have-beens. Rory locked the door and leaned against it, the envelope heavy in her hands. Ptolemy wound around her ankles, purring his opinion. "I know," she told the cat. "I'm an idiot." Outside, the rain continued its assault on London's streets. Somewhere out there, Evan was asking questions. Somewhere else, Lucien was walking home wounded, probably already regretting his midnight visit. And here in Eva's flat, surrounded by the detritus of other people's lives and research, Rory opened the envelope and began to read.
total_cost0.16626

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.029
89.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"practiced ease"
6"familiar"
7"echo"
8"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"n in anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1351
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount867
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva6
French1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Water1
Rory9
Which1
Mrs1
Ice1
Somehow1
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Water"
5"Rory"
6"Ice"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1351
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean20.47
std14.36
cv0.702
sampleLengths
039
156
239
39
424
55
66
761
84
933
104
1129
1247
136
1425
1528
1617
1731
1848
1929
205
214
2237
237
2435
258
2616
278
2834
294
3025
315
322
3313
3411
356
366
3725
3815
3922
4011
4121
4225
4316
4416
455
464
477
4820
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was asking"
1"was walking"
29.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences126
ratio0.04
matches
0"Rory paused with her hand on the deadbolt, recognizing the rhythm—patient, measured, distinctly French in its precision."
1"\"I know.\" Lucien's mismatched eyes—amber and black—met hers without flinching."
2"That was before—"
3"The shirt beneath was worse—a ragged tear across the shoulder, edges dark with blood."
4"The familiar ritual of tending wounds created a buffer between them, something to focus on besides the way lamplight caught in his pale hair or how his fingers drummed against his cane's handle—a tell she'd learned meant pain."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount884
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.027149321266968326
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005656108597285068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.72
std6.53
cv0.609
sampleLengths
019
117
23
36
424
521
65
714
816
99
106
113
1210
139
145
155
166
177
1818
1919
2014
213
224
2314
2410
259
264
2713
2816
2911
3016
3120
326
3323
342
3514
3614
3717
3826
395
4010
4138
4213
4316
445
454
4615
4717
485
497
67.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences76
matches
0"Even soaked, he looked immaculate."
1"Somewhere below, a door slammed"
2"Somehow it had stayed dry."
3"Then he was gone, leaving"
4"Somewhere out there, Evan was"
5"Somewhere else, Lucien was walking"
ratio0.079
67.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her stomach twisted."
1"She'd known this moment would"
2"She opened the door six"
3"She'd gotten that scar the"
4"He shifted his weight, leaning"
5"His lips quirked in that"
6"She secured the locks while"
7"She guided him to Eva's"
8"He settled into the chair"
9"She cut away the shirt"
10"Her hands steady on his"
11"She pushed the memory away."
12"He was quiet while she"
13"he said finally"
14"Her hands stilled."
15"His good shoulder lifted in"
16"She resumed stitching, each pass"
17"His hand caught her wrist,"
18"She met his heterochromatic gaze,"
19"His grip gentled but didn't"
ratio0.382
58.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences76
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory paused with her hand"
2"Her stomach twisted."
3"She'd known this moment would"
4"Rory worked the locks one"
5"The tabby had always liked"
6"She opened the door six"
7"Lucien's mismatched eyes—amber and black—met"
8"Water dripped from his coat"
9"The question hung between them"
10"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
11"She'd gotten that scar the"
12"Lucien had traced it once"
13"That was before—"
14"A dark stain spread across"
15"He shifted his weight, leaning"
16"His lips quirked in that"
17"Rory stepped back, and he"
18"The scent of rain and"
19"She secured the locks while"
ratio0.803
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The knock came at half past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the rain hammering against Eva's windows."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.206
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.029
89.0036%