Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3TWCRF48NHHA1G3HK5GT

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Duration:
54.0s
Cost:
$0.001258
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something sharper beneath—burnt ozone with an undercurrent of copper. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the tattered police tape, her boots crunching on broken tiles as she descended the hidden staircase. The echoes of dripping water and murmured voices bounced off curved walls where posters for long-closed theaters still clung in shreds. "Christ, Quinn. Took you long enough." The voice came before the man—Sergeant Yates materialized from a side passage, his fluorescent jacket too bright against the gloom. The bounce in his step suggested he'd missed the tension curdling Quinn's gut as she surveyed the scene. "Got held up at the courthouse," she lied, adjusting the worn leather watch on her left wrist. She'd been at the archives again, chasing threads about Morris's last case. Threads that kept tangling in places like this—places that shouldn't exist. Yates jerked his chin toward the platform. "Body's fresh. Male, late twenties. No ID. And before you ask—no, we've got no bloody clue how he ended down here. Maintenance crews swore these tunnels were sealed." The platform should have been pitch black, but flickering witchlights in rusted sconces revealed the sprawled corpse. Quinn crouched, her knees protesting, and peeled back the forensic sheet. The young man's face was waxy under the unnatural light, his lips slightly parted as if caught mid-sentence. No visible wounds, no lividity that matched his position. Clean hands, too—no defensive marks, nothing under the nails. "Looks like an overdose to me," Yates offered, shifting his weight. "Probably some rich kid slumming it. You know how they crawl through Camden looking for thrills." Quinn's gaze tracked upward to the platform edge. No tracks, no trains—just an empty void where the rails should have been. "Where's the kit? The needle?" "Still searching. Maybe he swallowed something." "No foam, no pupil dilation." She nudged the man's collar aside with a gloved finger. A faint mark curved behind his ear—three intersecting arcs like a brand. Her thumb twitched toward her own wrist, where the watch hid matching scars from a case she couldn't explain. A scuffle of footsteps made her turn. A petite woman in a patched wool coat stood at the base of the stairs, clutching a leather satchel to her chest. Round glasses reflected the witchlights as she froze under the combined weight of Quinn and Yates's stares. "You're not authorized—" Yates began. "Eva Kowalski, British Museum." The woman's freckles stood out against suddenly pale skin as she fumbled for a laminated badge. "The, ah, curator sent me. You found artifacts with the body?" Quinn's pulse spiked. No one had mentioned artifacts. She cut Yates off with a look. "What kind of artifacts, Ms. Kowalski?" Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear, twice, before kneeling beside the body. From her satchel, she produced a small evidence bag containing a brass compass slick with verdigris. "This was in his pocket. It's... rare. My department tracks these." Quinn took the bag. The compass needle spun lazily despite the lack of motion, its etched sigils catching the light. When she tilted it, the needle snapped rigidly toward the tunnel's darkness. Yates snorted. "GPS must be borked down here. Let's get this logged and—" "No." Quinn stood abruptly, her sharp jaw tightening. "We're securing this tunnel. No one comes in or out until CSU processes every inch." "But the overtime budget—" "Look at his shoes." She pointed to the dead man's polished loafers. No scuffs, no dust. "He didn't walk here. Someone—or something—brought him." Eva's breath hitched. The compass in Quinn's hand grew warmer. Somewhere beyond the platform, the darkness stirred like a living thing. Yates shook his head. "You're seeing ghosts, Quinn." She curled her fingers around the compass, its heat seeping through the plastic. "No," she murmured, staring at the brand behind the dead man's ear. "But someone else is."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn stood abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.091
77.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount656
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount656
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"gloom"
2"tension"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
5"pulse"
6"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences43
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords645
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount481
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Sergeant1
Yates8
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Yates"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.564
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount645
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean29.32
std16.43
cv0.56
sampleLengths
060
144
240
335
464
527
626
76
846
946
105
1131
1221
1341
1432
1513
1623
174
1823
1921
208
2129
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs88
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences56
ratio0.107
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something sharper beneath—burnt ozone with an undercurrent of copper."
1"\"Christ, Quinn. Took you long enough.\" The voice came before the man—Sergeant Yates materialized from a side passage, his fluorescent jacket too bright against the gloom."
2"Threads that kept tangling in places like this—places that shouldn't exist."
3"Clean hands, too—no defensive marks, nothing under the nails."
4"No tracks, no trains—just an empty void where the rails should have been."
5"A faint mark curved behind his ear—three intersecting arcs like a brand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount489
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.034764826175869123
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010224948875255624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean11.52
std6.15
cv0.534
sampleLengths
018
121
221
326
418
517
612
711
87
928
1017
1111
1218
139
149
1511
1616
178
1813
195
206
2115
2212
2319
247
2522
2617
275
2820
2911
303
315
327
336
3414
3516
3611
374
3816
3912
402
4111
428
4315
444
4512
464
477
483
497
87.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5357142857142857
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners30
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences41
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the platform, the"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences41
matches
0"she lied, adjusting the worn"
1"She'd been at the archives"
2"She nudged the man's collar"
3"Her thumb twitched toward her"
4"She cut Yates off with"
5"She pointed to the dead"
6"She curled her fingers around"
7"she murmured, staring at the"
ratio0.195
69.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences41
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The echoes of dripping water"
3"The voice came before the"
4"The bounce in his step"
5"she lied, adjusting the worn"
6"She'd been at the archives"
7"Threads that kept tangling in"
8"Yates jerked his chin toward"
9"The platform should have been"
10"Quinn crouched, her knees protesting,"
11"The young man's face was"
12"Yates offered, shifting his weight"
13"Quinn's gaze tracked upward to"
14"She nudged the man's collar"
15"A faint mark curved behind"
16"Her thumb twitched toward her"
17"A scuffle of footsteps made"
18"A petite woman in a"
19"The woman's freckles stood out"
ratio0.78
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The young man's face was waxy under the unnatural light, his lips slightly parted as if caught mid-sentence."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The voice came, his fluorescent jacket too bright against the gloom"
1"Quinn stood abruptly, her sharp jaw tightening"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
82.8047%