Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF3WV8WP691BR81W2G8PT2

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Duration:
34.0s
Cost:
$0.006434
Provider:
Minimax

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first thing Aurora noticed was the sound of the deadbolts. Three of them, sliding back in sequence—the distinctive rhythm of Eva's paranoia, the one quirk she'd never managed to shake. The second thing she noticed was Ptolemy, who had been dozing on the back of the couch, suddenly rigid with his ears flat against his skull, a low growl vibrating in his throat. "Rory." Eva's voice came from somewhere behind her, tight with something that might have been warning. "Don't open it." But Aurora was already crossing the room, her bare feet silent on the worn carpet, her hand reaching for the handle. She told herself it was just curiosity. She told herself she hadn't spent three weeks wondering if he'd come looking, if the last words they'd exchanged had left the same bitter taste in his mouth that they'd left in hers. She told herself a lot of things in those three seconds before she pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway like he owned the building, one hand resting on the head of his cane, the other loose at his side. The fluorescent light above him caught the platinum of his slicked-back hair and made his eyes seem to glow—amber and black, that unsettling asymmetry that had captivated her from the first moment she'd seen him across a crowded room in a club that didn't exist on any map. He was wearing charcoal, as always, the fabric impeccable, the cut highlighting shoulders that looked like they'd been built for suits rather than the other way around. Three weeks. Three weeks since she'd walked out of his apartment in Shoreditch without looking back. Three weeks since she'd told him she couldn't do this, couldn't be the woman who fell for a man whose family history included roasting souls over open flames in a dimension she'd never see. Three weeks of pretending she didn't check her phone every time it buzzed, hoping it was him, dreading it was him, hating herself for either response. "Rory." He said her name like a test, like he was checking to see if it still fit. "It's Aurora." The words came out sharper than she intended. Or perhaps exactly as sharp as she intended. "And how did you find me?" He tilted his head, a gesture that reminded her far too much of Ptolemy when the cat was deciding whether to purr or scratch. "You forget who I am. Finding people is rather the point of what I do." "This is my friend's flat." "Eva Ashworth. Twenty-seven. Works in records management at the Tower of London—not the tourist attraction, the actual repository. Childhood friend of yours from Cardiff. Sent you a plane ticket when you left your ex." A pause, those mismatched eyes flickering over her face. "She's also the reason you started running deliveries for Yu-Fei, isn't she? Put in a good word." Aurora's jaw tightened. "That's private." "Everything is private until it isn't." He didn't move from the doorway, but something in his posture shifted, a softening at the edges that made her chest ache. "May I come in?" "No." "Ptolemy seems to have already made up his mind." She glanced down. The cat had wound between her ankles and was now staring up at Lucien with an expression of profound suspicion, his tail lashing. "He hates everyone," Aurora said, but she didn't step back, didn't close the door. The hallway felt too small, the space between them charged with everything they hadn't said. "Even people who feed him premium salmon. He's a snob." "Reykjavik," Lucien said. "What?" "The salmon. It was Reykjavik, not the standard grocery brand. He preferred it, but he was too proud to show it." Aurora stared at him. "You fed my friend's cat?" "I fed *you*." His voice dropped, barely above a whisper, and suddenly the air felt thicker, harder to breathe. "I fed you, and you let me, and then you left." There it was. The accusation she deserved, wrapped in a voice that somehow made it sound like grief. "I had to leave." She heard herself say it, the words scraped from somewhere deep. "You know why." "I know what you *said*." He stepped closer, just one step, but it was enough to close the distance enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and understated, with a hint of something underneath that she'd never been able to name. Demon, maybe. Or just him. "What you *believed* might be different." "It doesn't matter what I believed. What matters is what you are." "And what am I, Rory?" She flinched at the name, at the way it sounded in his accent, the soft 'r' and the way he drew out the vowels. "A half-demon whose father—" "My father is a creature I have never met, who lives in a realm I cannot reach, and who has no more influence over my choices than the Queen has over the weather in Marseille." His eyes blazed, that amber one flaring bright. "I did not choose my lineage any more than you chose yours. The difference is, you have the luxury of pretending your blood is clean." "That isn't fair." "Life isn't fair." He laughed, but there was no humor in it. "Do you know what I remember, Rory? I remember you showing up at my club with a delivery for a woman who wasn't there. I remember you trying to bluff your way past my bouncer, all five-foot-six of righteous indignation. I remember the way you looked at me when I finally came out to see what the commotion was about—like I was a puzzle you couldn't solve." "You were. You are." "And yet you stayed. For months, you stayed." He reached out, slowly, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist—the one she'd told him came from a childhood accident, the one that was actually from Evan, from the night she'd finally gathered the courage to leave. "You stayed, and you let me in, and then you ran." "I didn't run." Her voice cracked. "I walked away. There's a difference." "Tell me." "I was scared." The admission cost her something, she could feel it leaving her body like water from a cracked vessel. "Not of you—well, yes of you, but not in the way you're thinking. I was scared of how much I felt. How fast it was happening. How easy it was to pretend that the world was normal when I was with you, even though it's not, it's never been normal, and I—" She stopped, breathing hard, her eyes burning. Lucien watched her, his expression unreadable. "And you what?" "I couldn't keep pretending." She looked up at him, let him see all of it—the fear, the want, the terrible hope she'd been trying to drown for three weeks. "You scare me, Lucien. Not because of what you are, but because of what I feel when I'm around you. It was easier to walk away than to wait for you to realize you didn't want me the way I wanted you." For a long moment, he said nothing. Then he raised his free hand—the one not gripping his cane—and touched her face, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone with a gentleness that made her knees weak. "You impossible woman," he murmured. "You absolute disaster of a human being. Do you think I came here because I wanted information? Do you think I tracked you down through three layers of misdirection and a warding that would have stopped anyone less determined because I was bored?" "I don't know why you came." "I came because I couldn't stop thinking about you. I came because every time I close my eyes, I see you standing in my kitchen at three in the morning, eating cereal out of the box because you claimed it was superior to any bowl. I came because—" He stopped, swallowed, and for the first time since she'd known him, Lucien Moreau looked uncertain. "I came because I don't know how to let you go, and I was hoping you might tell me to leave." Aurora's hand moved before she could stop it, rising to cover his where it rested against her cheek. His skin was warm, warmer than human, a heat that had nothing to do with fever. "You should leave," she whispered. "Should I?" "No." She pulled his hand away from her face but didn't let go, threading her fingers through his. "But you should stay, too. If you want. If you're sure." He stepped forward, and she stepped back, and together they crossed the threshold of Eva's flat, leaving the hallway and its fluorescent light behind. The door swung shut behind them with a soft click—neither of them noticed Ptolemy slinking out into the hall, mission accomplished, off to find somewhere warm to sleep. Somewhere inside the flat, a phone buzzed. Then another. Then a third, as Eva, checking her messages from work, realized that her three deadbolts had just been rendered completely pointless. But that was a problem for later. Right now, there was only Lucien, and Aurora, and all the things they'd left unsaid finally finding their way into the open air between them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped barely [barely]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.037
84.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slowly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"repository"
count1
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"repository"
1"profound"
2"charged"
3"standard"
4"whisper"
5"could feel"
6"unreadable"
7"tracing"
8"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1548
ratio0.002
matches
0"you"
1"said"
2"believed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"For a long moment, he said nothing."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount930
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Three"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Eva4
Ptolemy3
Moreau2
Shoreditch1
Lucien6
Demon1
Evan1
Three5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Shoreditch"
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they'd been built for suits r"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.646
wordCount1548
matches
0"Not of you—well, yes of you, but not in the way you're thinking"
95.74% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"blazed, that amber"
1"realized that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean30.35
std26.5
cv0.873
sampleLengths
064
119
261
317
4101
576
618
724
839
95
1060
115
1232
131
149
1526
1639
173
181
1921
209
2130
2218
2318
2453
2512
265
2728
2868
293
3079
314
3266
3312
342
3573
367
379
3871
3937
4048
416
4285
4334
445
452
4629
4752
4830
497
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"been built"
1"been rendered"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was checking"
2"was deciding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences94
ratio0.074
matches
0"Three of them, sliding back in sequence—the distinctive rhythm of Eva's paranoia, the one quirk she'd never managed to shake."
1"The fluorescent light above him caught the platinum of his slicked-back hair and made his eyes seem to glow—amber and black, that unsettling asymmetry that had captivated her from the first moment she'd seen him across a crowded room in a club that didn't exist on any map."
2"\"I know what you *said*.\" He stepped closer, just one step, but it was enough to close the distance enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and understated, with a hint of something underneath that she'd never been able to name."
3"His fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist—the one she'd told him came from a childhood accident, the one that was actually from Evan, from the night she'd finally gathered the courage to leave."
4"\"I couldn't keep pretending.\" She looked up at him, let him see all of it—the fear, the want, the terrible hope she'd been trying to drown for three weeks."
5"Then he raised his free hand—the one not gripping his cane—and touched her face, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone with a gentleness that made her knees weak."
6"The door swung shut behind them with a soft click—neither of them noticed Ptolemy slinking out into the hall, mission accomplished, off to find somewhere warm to sleep."
96.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04430379746835443
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011603375527426161
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean16.47
std14.31
cv0.869
sampleLengths
011
120
233
316
43
521
67
733
817
926
1048
1127
122
1314
1434
1526
1618
1710
188
196
2024
2115
225
2343
2417
253
262
2728
284
291
309
313
3223
3314
3415
3510
363
371
3821
394
405
4119
4211
433
4415
4515
463
4742
482
493
55.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.40425531914893614
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then he raised his free"
1"Somewhere inside the flat, a"
2"Then a third, as Eva,"
ratio0.056
49.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences54
matches
0"She told herself it was"
1"She told herself she hadn't"
2"She told herself a lot"
3"He was wearing charcoal, as"
4"He said her name like"
5"He tilted his head, a"
6"He didn't move from the"
7"She glanced down."
8"His voice dropped, barely above"
9"She heard herself say it,"
10"He stepped closer, just one"
11"She flinched at the name,"
12"His eyes blazed, that amber"
13"He laughed, but there was"
14"He reached out, slowly, giving"
15"His fingers brushed the crescent"
16"Her voice cracked"
17"She stopped, breathing hard, her"
18"She looked up at him,"
19"He stopped, swallowed, and for"
ratio0.426
89.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences54
matches
0"The first thing Aurora noticed"
1"The second thing she noticed"
2"Eva's voice came from somewhere"
3"She told herself it was"
4"She told herself she hadn't"
5"She told herself a lot"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"The fluorescent light above him"
8"He was wearing charcoal, as"
9"He said her name like"
10"The words came out sharper"
11"He tilted his head, a"
12"A pause, those mismatched eyes"
13"Aurora's jaw tightened."
14"He didn't move from the"
15"She glanced down."
16"The cat had wound between"
17"Aurora said, but she didn't"
18"The hallway felt too small,"
19"Aurora stared at him."
ratio0.741
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The second thing she noticed was Ptolemy, who had been dozing on the back of the couch, suddenly rigid with his ears flat against his skull, a low growl vibrati…"
1"But Aurora was already crossing the room, her bare feet silent on the worn carpet, her hand reaching for the handle."
2"The fluorescent light above him caught the platinum of his slicked-back hair and made his eyes seem to glow—amber and black, that unsettling asymmetry that had …"
3"He was wearing charcoal, as always, the fabric impeccable, the cut highlighting shoulders that looked like they'd been built for suits rather than the other way…"
4"The cat had wound between her ankles and was now staring up at Lucien with an expression of profound suspicion, his tail lashing."
5"Then he raised his free hand—the one not gripping his cane—and touched her face, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone with a gentleness that made her kne…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She heard, the words scraped from somewhere deep"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She heard (hear)"
1"He laughed (laugh)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.259
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.148
82.1795%