Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF40CD3J3A8D4QYSN8QZ41

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The rain came down in sheets, turning the Soho pavement into a black mirror reflecting neon signs and the occasional flash of headlights. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through the downpour, her worn leather watch slipping against her wrist as she pumped her arms. Ahead, the figure she'd been tailing for six blocks ducked into an alley—Tomás Herrera, or at least someone matching his description. That scar on his forearm had been visible when he'd glanced back at her under a streetlight. She skidded around the corner just in time to see him vanish through a rusted service door. Quinn paused, one hand going to her sidearm, the other wiping rainwater from her sharp jaw تاخذ نفساً عميقاً. The scent of stale beer and damp concrete filled her nostrils. The door led down—stairs disappearing into darkness. No markings. Not on any of her precinct maps. Military training took over. Assess threats. Three steps at a time, weight balanced, she descended into the gloom. The stairwell smelled of mildew and something metallic beneath. Her fingers brushed the damp bricks to her left, steadying herself as herorsi ها eyes adjusted. At the bottom, a long corridor stretched into shadows, punctuated by the occasional flickering bulb. The faint murmur of voices reached her. Not just Tomás. Dozens, maybe hundreds of people. Quinn edged forward, her leather-soled shoes silent on the concrete. The corridor turned sharply right—and opened onto a sight that momentarily froze her in place. The abandoned Tube station sprawled before her like a cathedral of the damned. Makeshift stalls lined the curved platform walls, their awnings strung with fairy lights and what looked like dangling animal bones. Crowds moved through the space in uneasy currents—some figures hooded, others wearing riotous masks, still others too tall, too thin, perfectly normal except for the wrongness in their movements. A vendor handed something glassy and pulsing to a buyer whose fingers ended in claws. Quinn exhaled sharply through her nose. The air smelled of burnt sugar and ozone. Her hand stayed near her sidearm as she scanned the crowd for Tomás's curly dark hair. There—passing a stall selling what looked like jeweled beetles in jars. He moved with purpose toward the platform's far end. Her boots hit the platform tiles with barely a sound. Years of tactical training kept her stride measured despite the adrenaline singing in her veins. Whatever this place was, it wasn't just some black-market operation. That woman by the incense stand had eyes that reflected the light like a cat's. That man inspecting a dagger had— No. Focus. Tomás disappeared behind a curtained alcove. Quinn quickened her pace, sidestepping a group clustered around a bubbling cauldron. Voices rose in some language that scraped against her eardrums wrong. She reached the alcove just as the curtain fell back into place. Through the gap, she caught a glimpse of a back room lit by candles, shelves stacked with glass bottles. Three figures seated at a wooden table. "...blood samples from the last batch," Tomás was saying, his Spanish accent thickening with urgency. "They're accelerating the—" The curtain twitched. A hand shot out—long fingers wrapping around Quinn's forearm with impossible strength. She reacted on instinct, driving her elbow toward where a face should be. Hit cartilage. A hiss. The grip loosened. She lunged backward, drawing her sidearm in one smooth motion. The market's ambient noise died. Hundreds of faces turned toward her at once. Tomás emerged from the alcove, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting in the weird light. His warm brown eyes widened. "Detective." He swallowed visibly. "You shouldn't be here." Quinn kept her weapon trained between them. "You're coming in for questioning." A murmur rippled through the crowd. Something unseen brushed Quinn's ankle—cold and insubstantial. She resisted the urge to look down. Tomás wet his lips. "Not here. Not like this." He jerked his chin toward the alcove. "Five minutes. Then I'll go peacefully." Every instinct screamed trap. But the way he clutched at his medallion—the tension in his shoulders—it wasn't fear of arrest. It was fear for her. Quinn inhaled slow through her nose. The calculus changed. This wasn't just a chase anymore. She lowered her weapon an inch. "Two minutes," she lied. Tomás exhaled in what might have been relief or resignation. He held the curtain aside. The market's noise resurged the moment she stepped through, as if someone had turned up a radio dial. Inside, the scent of rosemary and something coppery filled the air. Maps covered the walls—London, but not as Quinn knew it. Streets that shouldn't connect formed spirals. The Thames branched into dozens of tributaries. And at the table sat two figures who turned toward her with smiles too wide for human faces. Quinn's finger twitched on her trigger. The chase had ended. The real hunt was just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
25.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He swallowed visibly [visibly]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
81.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount813
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount813
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gloom"
2"scanned"
3"measured"
4"quickened"
5"glinting"
6"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"g with urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
95.33% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0.012
matches
0"Quinn paused, one hand going to her sidearm, the other wiping rainwater from her sharp jaw تاخذ نفساً عميقاً."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords802
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount770
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tomás8
Herrera1
Tube1
Spanish1
Saint1
Christopher1
London1
Thames1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Thames"
globalScore0.786
windowScore0.833
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like dangling animal bones"
1"looked like jeweled beetles in jars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount802
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean32.08
std23.43
cv0.73
sampleLengths
081
163
258
340
477
550
656
72
867
918
1035
1123
1227
1312
1420
1522
164
1736
1810
1933
2034
2118
226
234
246
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences85
ratio0.118
matches
0"Ahead, the figure she'd been tailing for six blocks ducked into an alley—Tomás Herrera, or at least someone matching his description."
1"The door led down—stairs disappearing into darkness."
2"The corridor turned sharply right—and opened onto a sight that momentarily froze her in place."
3"Crowds moved through the space in uneasy currents—some figures hooded, others wearing riotous masks, still others too tall, too thin, perfectly normal except for the wrongness in their movements."
4"There—passing a stall selling what looked like jeweled beetles in jars."
5"That man inspecting a dagger had—"
6"A hand shot out—long fingers wrapping around Quinn's forearm with impossible strength."
7"Something unseen brushed Quinn's ankle—cold and insubstantial."
8"But the way he clutched at his medallion—the tension in his shoulders—it wasn't fear of arrest."
9"Maps covered the walls—London, but not as Quinn knew it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount781
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03329065300896287
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008962868117797696
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean9.44
std5.79
cv0.614
sampleLengths
023
120
221
317
417
519
611
77
82
97
104
112
1212
139
1416
1515
167
173
185
1910
2015
2113
2220
2329
2415
256
268
2716
2811
299
3010
3115
3210
3315
346
351
361
376
3812
3911
4012
4119
427
4315
443
453
4612
4713
482
492
77.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.49411764705882355
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences74
matches
0"She skidded around the corner"
1"Her fingers brushed the damp"
2"Her hand stayed near her"
3"He moved with purpose toward"
4"Her boots hit the platform"
5"She reached the alcove just"
6"She reacted on instinct, driving"
7"She lunged backward, drawing her"
8"His warm brown eyes widened."
9"He swallowed visibly"
10"She resisted the urge to"
11"He jerked his chin toward"
12"It was fear for her."
13"She lowered her weapon an"
14"He held the curtain aside."
ratio0.203
34.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences74
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through"
2"That scar on his forearm"
3"She skidded around the corner"
4"Quinn paused, one hand going"
5"The scent of stale beer"
6"The door led down—stairs disappearing"
7"Military training took over."
8"The stairwell smelled of mildew"
9"Her fingers brushed the damp"
10"The faint murmur of voices"
11"Dozens, maybe hundreds of people."
12"Quinn edged forward, her leather-soled"
13"The corridor turned sharply right—and"
14"The abandoned Tube station sprawled"
15"Crowds moved through the space"
16"A vendor handed something glassy"
17"Quinn exhaled sharply through her"
18"The air smelled of burnt"
19"Her hand stayed near her"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Voices rose in some language that scraped against her eardrums wrong."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Tomás was saying, his Spanish accent thickening with urgency"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Tomás was saying (be say)"
1"she lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
73.8681%