| 25.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He swallowed visibly [visibly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 81.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 813 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 813 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 95.33% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn paused, one hand going to her sidearm, the other wiping rainwater from her sharp jaw تاخذ نفساً عميقاً." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 802 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 770 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Tomás | 8 | | Herrera | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Spanish | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | London | 1 | | Thames | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.786 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like dangling animal bones" | | 1 | "looked like jeweled beetles in jars" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 802 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 32.08 | | std | 23.43 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 131 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the figure she'd been tailing for six blocks ducked into an alley—Tomás Herrera, or at least someone matching his description." | | 1 | "The door led down—stairs disappearing into darkness." | | 2 | "The corridor turned sharply right—and opened onto a sight that momentarily froze her in place." | | 3 | "Crowds moved through the space in uneasy currents—some figures hooded, others wearing riotous masks, still others too tall, too thin, perfectly normal except for the wrongness in their movements." | | 4 | "There—passing a stall selling what looked like jeweled beetles in jars." | | 5 | "That man inspecting a dagger had—" | | 6 | "A hand shot out—long fingers wrapping around Quinn's forearm with impossible strength." | | 7 | "Something unseen brushed Quinn's ankle—cold and insubstantial." | | 8 | "But the way he clutched at his medallion—the tension in his shoulders—it wasn't fear of arrest." | | 9 | "Maps covered the walls—London, but not as Quinn knew it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 781 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03329065300896287 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008962868117797696 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 9.44 | | std | 5.79 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 77.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.49411764705882355 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She skidded around the corner" | | 1 | "Her fingers brushed the damp" | | 2 | "Her hand stayed near her" | | 3 | "He moved with purpose toward" | | 4 | "Her boots hit the platform" | | 5 | "She reached the alcove just" | | 6 | "She reacted on instinct, driving" | | 7 | "She lunged backward, drawing her" | | 8 | "His warm brown eyes widened." | | 9 | "He swallowed visibly" | | 10 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 11 | "He jerked his chin toward" | | 12 | "It was fear for her." | | 13 | "She lowered her weapon an" | | 14 | "He held the curtain aside." |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 34.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain came down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through" | | 2 | "That scar on his forearm" | | 3 | "She skidded around the corner" | | 4 | "Quinn paused, one hand going" | | 5 | "The scent of stale beer" | | 6 | "The door led down—stairs disappearing" | | 7 | "Military training took over." | | 8 | "The stairwell smelled of mildew" | | 9 | "Her fingers brushed the damp" | | 10 | "The faint murmur of voices" | | 11 | "Dozens, maybe hundreds of people." | | 12 | "Quinn edged forward, her leather-soled" | | 13 | "The corridor turned sharply right—and" | | 14 | "The abandoned Tube station sprawled" | | 15 | "Crowds moved through the space" | | 16 | "A vendor handed something glassy" | | 17 | "Quinn exhaled sharply through her" | | 18 | "The air smelled of burnt" | | 19 | "Her hand stayed near her" |
| | ratio | 0.851 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Voices rose in some language that scraped against her eardrums wrong." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Tomás was saying, his Spanish accent thickening with urgency" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Tomás was saying (be say)" | | 1 | "she lied (lie)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |