Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF58PVBKB9YA3KX4K5NNVV

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Duration:
38.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shifted as they stepped through the standing stones, and Aurora felt it like a physical thing against her skin—cool and electric, raising the fine hairs on her arms. The grove opened before them in a burst of color that made her breath catch. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion, their petals shimmering with an inner light that shifted from gold to violet to pale blue as she watched. The scent was overwhelming—honeysuckle and jasmine and something else, something ancient and green that made her think of forests that had never known an axe. Nyx moved ahead of them, their shadow-form flowing across the ground like spilled ink. "The boundaries are thin here," they murmured, voice barely louder than the wind through the trees. "Between Earth and the Fae realm. Between now and then." Aurora glanced at the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a steady warmth, answering some unseen call. The silver chain felt heavier than it should, weighted with purpose she didn't yet understand. Eva had insisted on coming along, her curiosity outweighing any sense of self-preservation. She moved with careful steps, eyes wide as she took in the impossible beauty around them. "It's like something out of a dream," she whispered, reaching out to touch a cluster of flowers that glowed like captured starlight. Her fingers passed through them, and the blossoms shivered as if laughing at her attempt. The grove stretched in all directions, bounded by ancient oaks that rose like sentinels. Their bark was silver-gray, smooth as polished stone, and their branches wove together overhead to form a living ceiling. Through gaps in the canopy, Aurora could see a sky that wasn't quite right—too purple, too close, scattered with stars that moved in patterns that made her head ache if she tried to follow them. Isolde appeared from behind one of the oaks, moving without sound. Her silver hair caught the strange light, and her lavender eyes held depths that made Aurora think of winter oceans. "You've come," she said, and it wasn't a question. "We need answers," Aurora said, squaring her shoulders. The Fae blade at her hip felt cold even through her jacket, a constant reminder of the power she now carried. "About the Heartstone. About why it brought me here." The seer smiled, a slow curve of her lips that didn't reach her eyes. "Answers are easy to give. Understanding is harder." She gestured with one elegant hand, and the flowers around them seemed to lean closer, as if listening. "Walk with me. The grove has much to show those who know how to look." They followed her along a path that hadn't been there moments before, winding between trees that whispered secrets in languages Aurora didn't know. The ground beneath their feet was soft, layered with moss that glowed faintly green, lighting their way. Time felt slippery here, the way it did in dreams where minutes could be hours or hours could be seconds. "Tell me," Isolde said as they walked, "what do you see when you look at the Heartstone?" Aurora hesitated, then pulled the pendant from beneath her shirt. The crimson gem caught the strange light, its facets seeming to shift and change as she turned it. "I see a doorway," she said slowly. "A way to somewhere else. But I don't know where, or why it chose me." The seer's eyes narrowed slightly. "It didn't choose you, child. It recognized you." She stopped beside a pool of water so clear it might have been air. "The Heartstone is drawn to those who carry the blood of the old ways. Those who can walk between worlds without breaking." Eva made a small sound, drawing their attention. She stood at the pool's edge, staring down at her reflection. But it wasn't her reflection—not quite. The water showed her as she might have been in another life, with longer hair and different eyes, wearing clothes that belonged to a time long past. "What is this place?" she asked, voice trembling. "A mirror," Isolde said simply. "The waters here show truth, or sometimes possibility. They show what was, what is, and what might yet be." She knelt beside the pool, her own reflection rippling as she touched the surface. "But water is only one of the grove's gifts." Nyx drifted closer to the pool, their shadow-form causing the water to darken where they passed. "The grove is a place of power," they said, more to themselves than to the others. "A convergence point. That's why the Heartstone brought you here—it needed you to understand what you are." Aurora frowned, looking from the pendant to the Fae blade at her hip. "What I am? I'm just a delivery driver from Cardiff who got caught up in something I don't understand." Isolde laughed, a sound like wind chimes. "Oh, sweet child. You are so much more than that." She rose gracefully and continued along the path. "Come. There is something you must see." The path led them deeper into the grove, where the trees grew closer together and the air grew thick with magic. Aurora could feel it pressing against her skin, tingling in her fingertips. The Heartstone pulsed faster now, warming against her chest until she thought it might burn. They emerged into a clearing where a single tree stood, its trunk twisted and ancient. Its leaves were silver, catching the strange light and throwing it back in a thousand different directions. At its base lay a stone altar, covered in symbols that made Aurora's eyes water if she tried to focus on them too long. "This is a gateway," Isolde said, gesturing to the tree. "One of many that connect the realms. But this one is special—it was planted by the first of the Fae, when the worlds were young and the Veil was thin." Nyx moved to examine the altar, their shadow-form stretching across the symbols. "There's old magic here. Very old. And something else..." They paused, head tilting as if listening to a sound only they could hear. "Something that doesn't belong." Aurora stepped closer to the altar, drawn by a compulsion she couldn't name. The Heartstone flared against her chest, so bright she could see its glow through her shirt. As she reached out to touch the stone, a vision slammed into her with the force of a physical blow. She saw Dymas as it had been centuries ago, before it became what it was now. She saw a Fae prince standing in this very spot, his silver hair falling to his waist, his lavender eyes holding the weight of ages. He held a crimson gem in his hand—the Heartstone, she realized with a jolt. And he was speaking to someone she couldn't quite see, his words carrying the weight of prophecy. "The stone will find its way to the one who can heal what has been broken," the prince said, his voice echoing across time. "The one who carries both Fae blood and human heart. When the Veil grows thin and the realms bleed together, she will come. And with her, the chance to set things right." The vision faded, leaving Aurora gasping. She stumbled back from the altar, her hand flying to the pendant. "I don't understand," she whispered. "What does it mean? What's been broken?" Isolde's expression was unreadable. "The balance between the realms. The natural order that keeps the worlds separate but connected." She moved to stand beside Aurora, her presence both comforting and unsettling. "For centuries, the Fae have watched as the Veil weakened, as the boundaries between Earth and Hel and the Fae realms grew thin. We knew something would have to change, but we didn't know what form that change would take." "Or who it would take," Nyx added, their voice soft. "The Heartstone didn't just find you, Aurora. It was waiting for you." Eva had moved to stand beside them, her face pale. "This is insane. I mean, I've always believed there was more to the world than what we can see, but this..." She gestured at the clearing, at the ancient tree, at the symbols on the altar. "This is beyond anything I could have imagined." The grove seemed to pulse around them, as if responding to their presence, to their understanding. The flowers swayed without wind, the trees whispered without voice, and the Heartstone burned against Aurora's chest like a brand. Isolde placed a hand on Aurora's shoulder, her touch cool and electric. "You have been chosen for a purpose greater than you can imagine. The Heartstone has marked you as the bridge between worlds, the one who can walk where others cannot." Her lavender eyes held Aurora's, and in their depths she saw the same vision of the Fae prince, the same sense of destiny. "But being chosen is only the beginning. Now you must choose to accept what you are." Aurora looked down at the pendant, at the crimson gem that had changed her life. She thought of the visions, of the worlds bleeding together, of the balance that needed to be restored. She thought of the Fae blade at her hip, of the power it represented, of the responsibility. "I don't know if I'm ready for this," she said quietly. "But I know I can't ignore it. Not anymore." The grove seemed to sigh around them, a sound of approval or perhaps anticipation. The Heartstone pulsed once, a final flare of warmth, then settled into a steady, comforting glow. "Then we begin," Isolde said, and there was something like hope in her voice. "The journey ahead will not be easy, and there will be those who seek to stop you, to use you for their own purposes." She gestured to the altar, to the symbols that still made Aurora's eyes ache. "But you will not walk this path alone. The grove will guide you, as will those who have been drawn to your side." Nyx drifted closer, their shadow-form merging with the darkness beneath the ancient tree. "And remember," they said, their whisper carrying the weight of centuries, "the Heartstone chose you because you have the strength to bear its burden. Trust in that strength, and in the friends who stand with you." Aurora looked at Eva, at her childhood friend who had followed her into this impossible world. She looked at Nyx, at the being of shadow who had become an unexpected ally. And she looked at Isolde, at the seer who held the keys to understanding. She took a deep breath, feeling the magic of the grove settle into her bones. "Then let's begin," she said, and her voice was steady. "Tell me what I need to know." The ancient tree seemed to lean toward her, its silver leaves whispering secrets in a language older than time. And somewhere in the distance, a door between worlds creaked open, waiting for her to step through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
90.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
1"Isolde said simply [simply]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.12
89.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1835
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"electric"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"sense of"
count2
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"depths"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count2
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"sense of"
4"sentinels"
5"depths"
6"reminder"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
9"echoing"
10"unreadable"
11"comforting"
12"pulse"
13"anticipation"
14"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1822
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1252
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora19
Heartstone6
Fae5
Eva4
Isolde9
Nyx6
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.741
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"as if laughing at her attempt"
1"as if listening"
2"not quite"
3"as if listening to a sound only they could hear"
4"quite see, his words carrying the weight of prophecy"
5"as if responding to their presence, to their understanding"
6"something like hope in her voice"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1822
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
58.43% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean47.95
std17
cv0.355
sampleLengths
094
140
234
366
468
540
638
755
860
917
1050
1149
1260
1347
1449
1532
1632
1748
1856
1940
2039
2149
2272
2356
2430
2571
2622
2754
2836
2981
3050
3120
3230
3375
3449
3545
3632
3736
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs228
matches
0"was speaking"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences110
ratio0.045
matches
0"The air shifted as they stepped through the standing stones, and Aurora felt it like a physical thing against her skin—cool and electric, raising the fine hairs on her arms."
1"The scent was overwhelming—honeysuckle and jasmine and something else, something ancient and green that made her think of forests that had never known an axe."
2"Through gaps in the canopy, Aurora could see a sky that wasn't quite right—too purple, too close, scattered with stars that moved in patterns that made her head ache if she tried to follow them."
3"But it wasn't her reflection—not quite."
4"He held a crimson gem in his hand—the Heartstone, she realized with a jolt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1263
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.021377672209026127
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007125890736342043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean16.56
std8.44
cv0.51
sampleLengths
030
115
224
325
414
516
610
79
810
915
1013
1116
1222
1315
1414
1519
1635
1711
1820
199
208
2121
229
2314
2426
2515
2623
2717
2820
2917
3010
3118
327
3315
345
3522
3622
378
3811
396
4027
418
425
4333
449
4516
4616
4717
4813
4919
50.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.34545454545454546
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences89
matches
0"they murmured, voice barely louder"
1"It pulsed with a steady"
2"She moved with careful steps,"
3"she whispered, reaching out to"
4"Her fingers passed through them,"
5"Their bark was silver-gray, smooth"
6"Her silver hair caught the"
7"she said, and it wasn't"
8"She gestured with one elegant"
9"They followed her along a"
10"she said slowly"
11"She stopped beside a pool"
12"She stood at the pool's"
13"she asked, voice trembling"
14"She knelt beside the pool,"
15"they said, more to themselves"
16"She rose gracefully and continued"
17"They emerged into a clearing"
18"Its leaves were silver, catching"
19"They paused, head tilting as"
ratio0.393
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"The air shifted as they"
1"The grove opened before them"
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion,"
3"The scent was overwhelming—honeysuckle and"
4"Nyx moved ahead of them,"
5"they murmured, voice barely louder"
6"Aurora glanced at the Heartstone"
7"It pulsed with a steady"
8"The silver chain felt heavier"
9"Eva had insisted on coming"
10"She moved with careful steps,"
11"she whispered, reaching out to"
12"Her fingers passed through them,"
13"The grove stretched in all"
14"Their bark was silver-gray, smooth"
15"Isolde appeared from behind one"
16"Her silver hair caught the"
17"she said, and it wasn't"
18"Aurora said, squaring her shoulders"
19"The Fae blade at her"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.01% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The grove opened before them in a burst of color that made her breath catch."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion, their petals shimmering with an inner light that shifted from gold to violet to pale blue as she watched."
2"The scent was overwhelming—honeysuckle and jasmine and something else, something ancient and green that made her think of forests that had never known an axe."
3"Eva had insisted on coming along, her curiosity outweighing any sense of self-preservation."
4"Through gaps in the canopy, Aurora could see a sky that wasn't quite right—too purple, too close, scattered with stars that moved in patterns that made her head…"
5"Her silver hair caught the strange light, and her lavender eyes held depths that made Aurora think of winter oceans."
6"The seer smiled, a slow curve of her lips that didn't reach her eyes."
7"The water showed her as she might have been in another life, with longer hair and different eyes, wearing clothes that belonged to a time long past."
8"And he was speaking to someone she couldn't quite see, his words carrying the weight of prophecy."
9"The grove seemed to pulse around them, as if responding to their presence, to their understanding."
10"Aurora looked at Eva, at her childhood friend who had followed her into this impossible world."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"they murmured, voice barely louder than the wind through the trees"
1"she asked, voice trembling"
2"She knelt, her own reflection rippling as she touched the surface"
3"they said, more to themselves than to the others"
4"the prince said, his voice echoing across time"
5"She moved, her presence both comforting and unsettling"
6"Nyx added, their voice soft"
7"they said, their whisper carrying the weight of centuries,"
8"she said, and her voice was steady"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx added (add)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.174
64.9574%