Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF5MH07N59DDKV7VNWHV0B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.162480

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn ducked under the yellow tape and descended the rusted stairs into Camden's abandoned Jubilee line extension. The beam of her torch cut through the underground darkness, revealing graffiti-covered tiles and the detritus of urban decay. Twenty feet below street level, the air tasted of mildew and something else — incense, maybe, or burnt herbs. "Body's this way," Sergeant Mills said, leading her deeper into the tunnel. His voice echoed off the curved walls. "Found him about two hours ago. Urban explorer called it in." Quinn's boots splashed through puddles of stagnant water. The leather watch on her wrist caught on her jacket sleeve, and she tugged it free with practiced irritation. Three years since Morris died in a place like this — another abandoned station, another case that made no sense. She pushed the memory aside. The platform opened before them, lit by the harsh glare of police work lights. Forensics had already begun their choreographed dance around the body. Quinn counted twelve people, maybe thirteen. Too many for a simple death in an abandoned station. "What's the story?" she asked Mills. "Male, mid-thirties. No ID. Looks like he fell from the platform edge and cracked his skull on the rail." Quinn crouched beside the body. The man wore expensive clothes — designer jeans, leather boots that cost more than her monthly car payment. His right hand clutched something small and brass. She pulled on latex gloves and carefully pried his fingers open. A compass. But not just any compass — the face was etched with strange symbols, and the needle pointed steadily west despite the metal tracks that should have thrown off any magnetic reading. The casing felt warm against her palm, its surface mottled with green patina. "Sir?" A young constable appeared at her elbow. "We've got another one." Quinn's jaw tightened. "Another body?" "No, ma'am. Another person claiming to be investigating the death. Says she knows the deceased." Quinn followed the constable back toward the entrance, where two uniforms flanked a young woman with curly red hair. Round glasses magnified worried green eyes. She clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest like armor. "I need to see him," the woman said, her accent carrying hints of Eastern Europe. Polish, maybe. "Please. I think it might be my colleague." "And you are?" Quinn kept her tone neutral. "Eva Kowalski. I work at the British Museum." She fumbled in her satchel and produced an ID badge. "Research assistant, special collections. The man who died — was he carrying anything unusual? Old artifacts, maybe?" Quinn studied her. The woman's hands trembled slightly, but not from cold. She kept tucking the same strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous gesture that spoke of genuine distress. But there was something else too — the way her gaze kept drifting past Quinn toward the platform, as if drawn by an invisible thread. "How did you know someone died here?" Quinn asked. Eva's freckled face flushed. "I... I monitor certain online forums. Urban exploration sites. When someone posted about finding a body in the old Camden extension, I came straight away." "At eleven thirty at night?" "Some of our researchers work odd hours. We're cataloguing the Dee collection — sixteenth century occult texts. Marcus, he's been helping with translations. He didn't show up for his shift today." Quinn made a note. "Marcus have a surname?" "Chen. Marcus Chen. Thirty-four years old, about five-ten, black hair. Has a scar through his left eyebrow from a climbing accident." The description matched. Quinn felt the compass's weight in her pocket. "Ms. Kowalski, what kind of artifacts would Mr. Chen have been carrying?" Eva's hand went to her ear again, tucking the same strand of already-tucked hair. "I couldn't say specifically. We handle hundreds of items each week." "Items like this?" Quinn produced the compass. Eva's sharp intake of breath told Quinn everything she needed to know. The woman reached for it instinctively, then caught herself. "Where did you get that?" "Answer the question." "It's... it looks like a navigation device. Seventeenth century, maybe. The sigils are protective wards. Enochian script." Eva's words came faster now, her academic training overriding caution. "But the craftsmanship is wrong for the period. Too precise. Almost modern." Quinn pocketed the compass again. "You're coming with me." They walked back to the platform. Eva's breathing quickened as they approached the body. When she saw the face, she let out a soft cry and pressed her knuckles to her mouth. "That's him. That's Marcus." Quinn watched her carefully. Genuine grief, but layered with something else. Fear? Guilt? "Ms. Kowalski, I need you to look at the scene and tell me if anything seems wrong." Eva circled the body slowly, careful not to disturb the forensics team. She paused at the platform edge, then looked up at the ceiling. Her brow furrowed behind her glasses. "The blood," she said quietly. Quinn stepped closer. "What about it?" "The pattern's wrong. If he fell from the platform and hit his head on the rail, the blood should have pooled differently. And look —" She pointed to the man's boots. "No scuff marks. If he'd struggled or slipped, there should be marks on the soles." Mills had missed that. So had forensics, apparently. Quinn's respect for the nervous academic rose a notch. "There's more," Eva continued. She'd found her confidence now, treating the scene like one of her manuscripts. "See the dust patterns on the platform? Someone swept this area clean. Recently. But they missed a spot near the wall." Quinn followed her gaze. In the corner where the platform met the tunnel wall, a small pile of what looked like ash and bone fragments had been hastily brushed aside. "Sergeant Mills," Quinn called. "Get forensics over here. Full spectrum photography of this corner." She turned back to Eva. "You know what this place is, don't you?" Eva's hand found her ear again. Tuck. Tuck. "I don't know what you mean." "Ms. Kowalski, your colleague is dead. If you know something that could help me find his killer, now's the time." The younger woman's shoulders sagged. She glanced around at the other officers, then leaned closer to Quinn. Her voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "Have you heard of the Veil Market?" Quinn kept her expression neutral, but her pulse quickened. "Should I have?" "It's... a gathering place. For collectors of unusual items. They say it moves around, never the same place twice. Marcus had been trying to find it for months. He thought he'd finally gotten an invitation." "An invitation?" "A bone token. Old finger bone, carved with symbols. He showed it to me last week." Eva's voice caught. "I told him not to go alone." Quinn processed this. A secret market for occult artifacts. Her dead urban explorer carrying what looked like a very special compass. And now this nervous researcher who knew far more than any museum employee should about crime scene analysis. "Ms. Kowalski," Quinn said slowly, "I'm going to need you to come to the station. Make a full statement." "Am I under arrest?" "Not yet. But I have questions, and I think you have answers." As they prepared to leave, Quinn took one last look at the scene. The work lights threw harsh shadows across the abandoned platform, turning everyday objects into sinister shapes. She thought of Morris again, of the case that had killed him. The official report blamed a structural collapse, but Quinn had never bought it. Too many inconsistencies, too many witnesses who couldn't quite remember what they'd seen. Now here was another death in another abandoned place, and once again the evidence didn't add up. The compass weighed heavy in her pocket, its brass surface still unnaturally warm. As she followed Eva Kowalski up the rusted stairs, Quinn noticed something odd. The younger woman had stopped tucking her hair behind her ear. Instead, her hand had moved to her satchel, fingers tracing patterns on the worn leather. They looked almost like the sigils on the compass. Quinn filed that observation away. She had a feeling this case would need all the observations she could gather. Because if Eva Kowalski was right about the Veil Market, then Marcus Chen's death was just the beginning. And somewhere in London's abandoned places, someone was cleaning up loose ends.
total_cost0.16248

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.082
74.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"very"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"dance"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count2
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"processed"
count1
12
word"sinister"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"dance"
2"etched"
3"magnetic"
4"trembled"
5"eyebrow"
6"weight"
7"quickened"
8"furrowed"
9"whisper"
10"pulse"
11"processed"
12"sinister"
13"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1393
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount891
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity3.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn28
Camden1
Jubilee1
Mills3
Morris2
Eastern1
Europe1
Polish1
Eva12
Kowalski2
Veil1
Market1
Marcus1
Chen1
London1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Camden"
2"Mills"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Marcus"
7"Chen"
places
0"Eastern"
1"Europe"
2"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like ash and bone fragments had be"
1"looked like a very special compass"
2"quite remember what they'd seen"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1393
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"filed that observation"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean22.84
std15.87
cv0.695
sampleLengths
056
130
252
340
46
519
642
746
812
95
1015
1136
1225
138
1435
1557
169
1729
185
1931
208
2121
2223
2325
247
2521
265
273
2839
299
3032
314
3213
3317
3430
355
366
3746
3817
3938
4030
4114
4213
4314
4420
4525
467
4712
4835
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was cleaning"
32.12% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences129
ratio0.039
matches
0"Twenty feet below street level, the air tasted of mildew and something else — incense, maybe, or burnt herbs."
1"Three years since Morris died in a place like this — another abandoned station, another case that made no sense."
2"The man wore expensive clothes — designer jeans, leather boots that cost more than her monthly car payment."
3"But not just any compass — the face was etched with strange symbols, and the needle pointed steadily west despite the metal tracks that should have thrown off any magnetic reading."
4"But there was something else too — the way her gaze kept drifting past Quinn toward the platform, as if drawn by an invisible thread."
81.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount894
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"revealing graffiti-covered tiles"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.05480984340044743
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.015659955257270694
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean10.8
std7.19
cv0.666
sampleLengths
018
119
219
312
47
511
68
719
820
95
1014
1110
126
1310
146
1519
165
1718
188
1911
202
2131
2213
238
244
253
262
2715
2819
296
3011
3115
322
338
348
3518
3617
373
389
3920
4025
419
424
4325
445
4531
464
474
4821
493
78.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4728682170542636
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"Too many for a simple"
1"Too many inconsistencies, too many"
2"Instead, her hand had moved"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences85
matches
0"His voice echoed off the"
1"She pushed the memory aside."
2"she asked Mills"
3"His right hand clutched something"
4"She pulled on latex gloves"
5"She clutched a worn leather"
6"She fumbled in her satchel"
7"She kept tucking the same"
8"They walked back to the"
9"She paused at the platform"
10"Her brow furrowed behind her"
11"she said quietly"
12"She'd found her confidence now,"
13"She turned back to Eva."
14"She glanced around at the"
15"Her voice dropped to barely"
16"Her dead urban explorer carrying"
17"She thought of Morris again,"
18"They looked almost like the"
19"She had a feeling this"
ratio0.235
65.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences85
matches
0"Detective Quinn ducked under the"
1"The beam of her torch"
2"Sergeant Mills said, leading her"
3"His voice echoed off the"
4"Quinn's boots splashed through puddles"
5"The leather watch on her"
6"She pushed the memory aside."
7"The platform opened before them,"
8"Forensics had already begun their"
9"Quinn counted twelve people, maybe"
10"she asked Mills"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body."
12"The man wore expensive clothes"
13"His right hand clutched something"
14"She pulled on latex gloves"
15"The casing felt warm against"
16"A young constable appeared at"
17"Quinn's jaw tightened."
18"Quinn followed the constable back"
19"She clutched a worn leather"
ratio0.788
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Now here was another death"
1"Because if Eva Kowalski was"
ratio0.024
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She kept tucking the same strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous gesture that spoke of genuine distress."
1"But there was something else too — the way her gaze kept drifting past Quinn toward the platform, as if drawn by an invisible thread."
2"Too many inconsistencies, too many witnesses who couldn't quite remember what they'd seen."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the woman said, her accent carrying hints of Eastern Europe"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.327
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.041
84.8715%