Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF5P8MXDRGD0PD65V22315

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.189030

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The transition from Richmond Park to Isolde's grove hit Aurora like diving into cold water. One moment she stood on familiar earth, the next her feet sank into moss that sparkled with impossible colors. The Heartstone pendant against her chest pulsed warm, then cool, as if confused by the crossing. "Steady." Nyx's whisper came from her left, though their shadow-form seemed to flicker and stretch in the strange light. "The grove tests newcomers." Aurora forced her breathing to slow, drawing on the same calm that had carried her through pre-law exams and Evan's worst tantrums. The air here tasted of honey and copper pennies, sweet and metallic on her tongue. Above them, the sky rippled between sunset amber and midnight blue, colors bleeding into each other like watercolors on wet paper. "Is it always like this?" she asked, then stopped. Her voice sounded different here—fuller somehow, as if the grove added harmonics she'd never possessed. "Time moves as it wishes in Fae-touched places." Nyx drifted ahead, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it. The violet glow of their eyes left brief afterimages when Aurora blinked. "We may have minutes. We may have days." The path beneath their feet wasn't quite a path. It appeared only as they walked, moss and tiny white flowers springing up to cushion each step. Aurora glanced back and saw their trail already fading, the grove reclaiming itself with patient hunger. The ancient oaks that marked the boundary had vanished entirely. "Don't look back." Nyx's warning came sharp. "The grove feeds on doubt." Aurora fixed her gaze forward. The trees here defied logic—silver bark twisted into spiral patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long. Their leaves chimed in a breeze she couldn't feel, each note hanging in the air longer than it should. Some branches bore fruit that looked like jewels, others flowers that opened and closed in rhythm with her heartbeat. A clearing opened before them, perfectly circular and carpeted with wildflowers that shouldn't bloom together. Spring bluebells nodded beside autumn asters. Summer roses tangled with winter hellebore. The scent should have been overwhelming, but instead each fragrance took its turn, as if the flowers had arranged themselves into an olfactory symphony. At the clearing's heart sat a cottage that looked built from moonlight and shadows. Its walls shifted between solid stone and translucent pearl, revealing glimpses of the interior before hiding them again. The door—if it was a door—appeared to be woven from twilight itself. "She knows we're here," Nyx said. The door dissolved like sugar in rain. Isolde stood in the opening, and Aurora's breath caught. The half-fae's silver hair moved in its own wind, each strand catching light that didn't exist. Her lavender eyes held depths that promised answers to questions Aurora hadn't thought to ask. When she smiled, Aurora noticed her teeth were just slightly too sharp to be human. "The one who carries the Heartstone arrives at last." Isolde's voice rang like struck crystal. "Though whether too early or too late remains to be seen." Aurora's hand went instinctively to the pendant. Its warmth had steadied to match her pulse. "You know about—" "Questions later, young seeker. First, hospitality." Isolde stepped aside. "Enter, but remember—in my domain, all choices have weight." The cottage's interior defied its modest exterior. Aurora found herself in a circular room that stretched up into darkness, walls lined with shelves that climbed beyond sight. Books bound in scales and starlight sat beside jars filled with captured storms. A fire burned blue-green in a hearth carved from a single geode, casting shadows that danced independently of the flames. Isolde gestured to chairs that hadn't been there a moment before. Aurora sat carefully, noting how the cushion adjusted to support her perfectly. Nyx remained standing, or rather hovering, their shadow-form pooling and reforming in the strange light. "Tea?" Isolde asked, already pouring from a pot that steamed with golden vapor. The liquid in Aurora's cup swirled through colors she had no names for. "Is it safe?" Aurora asked. "Nothing here is safe." Isolde's laugh tinkled like breaking glass. "But it won't harm you. Today." Aurora sipped. The tea tasted like memories—her mother's garden in summer, her father's cologne, Eva's laughter. Tears pricked her eyes before she could stop them. "Ah." Isolde settled into her own chair, which appeared to be carved from crystallized moonbeams. "You taste deeply. Good. The shallow-souled find only bitterness here." "We need your help," Aurora began, but Isolde raised a hand. Her fingers, Aurora noticed, had too many joints. "Need is a heavy word in places where bargains bind tighter than iron." The seer's eyes went distant. "You seek knowledge of the Heartstone. Of why it chose you. Of what comes next." "Yes." "Truth has a price here, as does everything." Isolde stood, her movements liquid grace. She drifted to one of the shelves and pulled down a box made of whispers and cobwebs. "But perhaps we can trade in smaller coins first." She opened the box. Inside, nestled in fabric that looked cut from the night sky, lay a dagger. Aurora recognized the leaf-shaped blade from dreams she'd forgotten until this moment. The moonsilver caught the firelight and threw it back changed, colder. "A gift," Isolde said. "Or a burden. In Fae-touched lands, they're often the same." Aurora reached for the dagger. The moment her fingers touched the hilt, cold shot up her arm—not painful but clarifying, like the first breath of winter air. The blade hummed against her palm, a frequency felt rather than heard. "It knows you," Isolde murmured. "How interesting." "I don't understand." "Understanding is overrated." Isolde returned to her seat. Around them, the cottage walls flickered between opacity and transparency, showing glimpses of impossible vistas—cities of glass, forests of metal, seas of stars. "Tell me, Aurora Carter of Cardiff, what do you think the Heartstone is?" Aurora's hand closed around the pendant. "A key?" "All things are keys if you know which doors they open." Isolde's smile revealed those too-sharp teeth again. "But the Heartstone is older than keys. Older than doors. It remembers when the Veil was new-woven, when the realms pressed against each other like lovers rather than enemies." Nyx stirred, their form rippling. "The solstice approaches." "Indeed." Isolde's expression darkened. "And the Heartstone grows restless. It seeks its purpose, as do all awakened things." She leaned forward. "What do you know of Dymas, child?" The word triggered something in Aurora's memory—a flash of amber sky, the scent of impossible spices. "Nothing. I've never heard that name." "Haven't you?" Isolde's fingers traced patterns in the air, leaving brief trails of silver light. "The Heartstone knows it well. Ask it, when you dream. Ask about the vineyards that grow sorrow, about the kitchens that serve desire." Her voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "Ask about the prince who collects hungers." The fire in the hearth flared, casting wild shadows. For a moment, Aurora could have sworn she saw shapes in the flames—faces twisted in expressions of endless want. "That's enough prophecy for one day," Isolde said, suddenly brisk. "The grove grows tired of visitors." Aurora stood, the Fae-forged blade strange but balanced in her grip. The cottage around them began to blur at the edges, like a painting left in the rain. "Wait—I have more questions." "Questions are seeds." Isolde's form wavered, becoming translucent. "Plant them carefully. Some grow into trees, others into nooses." The cottage dissolved. Aurora found herself back in the flower-filled clearing, Nyx beside her. The path they'd taken had reappeared, leading back toward the normal world. But now she carried the weight of the blade at her hip and new mysteries in her mind. "Did that help?" Nyx asked as they walked back through the impossible forest. Aurora touched the Heartstone pendant. It pulsed with renewed warmth, almost eager. "I'm not sure 'help' is the right word." They passed through the ring of ancient oaks, and Richmond Park reassembled around them. The normal world felt flat after the grove's layered reality. Aurora checked her phone—only twenty minutes had passed. A jogger ran by without giving them a second glance, though Nyx's shadow-form should have sent him screaming. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx explained, reading her confusion. "His mind edits out what it cannot accept." Aurora understood that feeling. Even now, the grove felt more like a vivid dream than a place she'd actually visited. Only the cold weight of the blade at her side proved otherwise. As they made their way back toward the city, one word echoed in her thoughts: Dymas. The Heartstone grew warmer with each repetition, as if recognizing an old friend's name. Or an old enemy's.
total_cost0.18903

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.31% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde's voice rang like [like]"
1"Isolde stepped aside [aside]"
2"Isolde's laugh tinkled like [like]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.115
effectiveRatio0.115
76.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"crystallized"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"wavered"
count1
15
word"carried the weight"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"flicker"
4"symphony"
5"depths"
6"crystal"
7"warmth"
8"pulse"
9"weight"
10"crystallized"
11"flickered"
12"traced"
13"desire"
14"wavered"
15"carried the weight"
16"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1454
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1109
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde18
Aurora26
Heartstone3
Evan1
Eva1
Nyx10
Fae-forged1
Dymas1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.328
windowScore0.333
20.13% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite a path"
1"looked like jewels, others flowers that o"
2"tasted like memories—her mother's garden"
3"as if recognizing an old friend's name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.688
wordCount1454
matches
0"not painful but clarifying, like the first breath of winter air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"understood that feeling"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean29.08
std17.09
cv0.588
sampleLengths
050
123
258
324
440
552
612
763
851
944
106
1162
1226
1318
1418
1560
1638
1726
185
1916
2025
2125
2219
2333
241
2540
2641
2714
2839
297
303
3144
328
3347
348
3528
3622
3753
3828
3916
4032
4118
4244
4313
4420
4550
4618
4732
4830
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences126
ratio0.071
matches
0"Her voice sounded different here—fuller somehow, as if the grove added harmonics she'd never possessed."
1"The trees here defied logic—silver bark twisted into spiral patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long."
2"The door—if it was a door—appeared to be woven from twilight itself."
3"The tea tasted like memories—her mother's garden in summer, her father's cologne, Eva's laughter."
4"The moment her fingers touched the hilt, cold shot up her arm—not painful but clarifying, like the first breath of winter air."
5"Around them, the cottage walls flickered between opacity and transparency, showing glimpses of impossible vistas—cities of glass, forests of metal, seas of stars."
6"The word triggered something in Aurora's memory—a flash of amber sky, the scent of impossible spices."
7"For a moment, Aurora could have sworn she saw shapes in the flames—faces twisted in expressions of endless want."
8"Aurora checked her phone—only twenty minutes had passed."
99.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1128
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.040780141843971635
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01152482269503546
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean11.54
std5.89
cv0.511
sampleLengths
015
119
216
319
44
522
615
721
89
915
1020
1112
128
139
1417
1516
1610
177
185
195
2020
2119
2219
2315
246
256
2624
2714
2818
2912
306
317
329
3316
3415
3515
3615
3711
387
398
403
419
429
437
4420
4513
4620
4711
4812
4915
75.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4603174603174603
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners58
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Only the cold weight of"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences95
matches
0"she asked, then stopped"
1"Her voice sounded different here—fuller"
2"It appeared only as they"
3"Their leaves chimed in a"
4"Its walls shifted between solid"
5"Her lavender eyes held depths"
6"Its warmth had steadied to"
7"Her fingers, Aurora noticed, had"
8"She drifted to one of"
9"She opened the box."
10"She leaned forward"
11"Her voice dropped to barely"
12"It pulsed with renewed warmth,"
13"They passed through the ring"
ratio0.147
23.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences95
matches
0"The transition from Richmond Park"
1"The Heartstone pendant against her"
2"Nyx's whisper came from her"
3"Aurora forced her breathing to"
4"The air here tasted of"
5"she asked, then stopped"
6"Her voice sounded different here—fuller"
7"Nyx drifted ahead, their form"
8"The violet glow of their"
9"The path beneath their feet"
10"It appeared only as they"
11"Aurora glanced back and saw"
12"The ancient oaks that marked"
13"Nyx's warning came sharp"
14"Aurora fixed her gaze forward."
15"The trees here defied logic—silver"
16"Their leaves chimed in a"
17"Some branches bore fruit that"
18"A clearing opened before them,"
19"Spring bluebells nodded beside autumn"
ratio0.874
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Even now, the grove felt"
ratio0.011
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"One moment she stood on familiar earth, the next her feet sank into moss that sparkled with impossible colors."
1"Aurora forced her breathing to slow, drawing on the same calm that had carried her through pre-law exams and Evan's worst tantrums."
2"Her voice sounded different here—fuller somehow, as if the grove added harmonics she'd never possessed."
3"The trees here defied logic—silver bark twisted into spiral patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long."
4"A clearing opened before them, perfectly circular and carpeted with wildflowers that shouldn't bloom together."
5"The scent should have been overwhelming, but instead each fragrance took its turn, as if the flowers had arranged themselves into an olfactory symphony."
6"The half-fae's silver hair moved in its own wind, each strand catching light that didn't exist."
7"A fire burned blue-green in a hearth carved from a single geode, casting shadows that danced independently of the flames."
8"The Heartstone grew warmer with each repetition, as if recognizing an old friend's name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it"
92.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde's smile revealed (reveal)"
2"Nyx explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.115
77.7168%