| 92.31% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice rang like [like]" | | 1 | "Isolde stepped aside [aside]" | | 2 | "Isolde's laugh tinkled like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.115 | | effectiveRatio | 0.115 | |
| 76.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "crystallized" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "desire" | | 14 | "wavered" | | 15 | "carried the weight" | | 16 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1454 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 18 | | Aurora | 26 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.328 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 20.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a path" | | 1 | "looked like jewels, others flowers that o" | | 2 | "tasted like memories—her mother's garden" | | 3 | "as if recognizing an old friend's name" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.688 | | wordCount | 1454 | | matches | | 0 | "not painful but clarifying, like the first breath of winter air" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "understood that feeling" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 29.08 | | std | 17.09 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 50 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice sounded different here—fuller somehow, as if the grove added harmonics she'd never possessed." | | 1 | "The trees here defied logic—silver bark twisted into spiral patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long." | | 2 | "The door—if it was a door—appeared to be woven from twilight itself." | | 3 | "The tea tasted like memories—her mother's garden in summer, her father's cologne, Eva's laughter." | | 4 | "The moment her fingers touched the hilt, cold shot up her arm—not painful but clarifying, like the first breath of winter air." | | 5 | "Around them, the cottage walls flickered between opacity and transparency, showing glimpses of impossible vistas—cities of glass, forests of metal, seas of stars." | | 6 | "The word triggered something in Aurora's memory—a flash of amber sky, the scent of impossible spices." | | 7 | "For a moment, Aurora could have sworn she saw shapes in the flames—faces twisted in expressions of endless want." | | 8 | "Aurora checked her phone—only twenty minutes had passed." |
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| 99.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1128 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.040780141843971635 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01152482269503546 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 11.54 | | std | 5.89 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 75.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4603174603174603 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 35.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the cold weight of" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, then stopped" | | 1 | "Her voice sounded different here—fuller" | | 2 | "It appeared only as they" | | 3 | "Their leaves chimed in a" | | 4 | "Its walls shifted between solid" | | 5 | "Her lavender eyes held depths" | | 6 | "Its warmth had steadied to" | | 7 | "Her fingers, Aurora noticed, had" | | 8 | "She drifted to one of" | | 9 | "She opened the box." | | 10 | "She leaned forward" | | 11 | "Her voice dropped to barely" | | 12 | "It pulsed with renewed warmth," | | 13 | "They passed through the ring" |
| | ratio | 0.147 | |
| 23.16% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition from Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 2 | "Nyx's whisper came from her" | | 3 | "Aurora forced her breathing to" | | 4 | "The air here tasted of" | | 5 | "she asked, then stopped" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded different here—fuller" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form" | | 8 | "The violet glow of their" | | 9 | "The path beneath their feet" | | 10 | "It appeared only as they" | | 11 | "Aurora glanced back and saw" | | 12 | "The ancient oaks that marked" | | 13 | "Nyx's warning came sharp" | | 14 | "Aurora fixed her gaze forward." | | 15 | "The trees here defied logic—silver" | | 16 | "Their leaves chimed in a" | | 17 | "Some branches bore fruit that" | | 18 | "A clearing opened before them," | | 19 | "Spring bluebells nodded beside autumn" |
| | ratio | 0.874 | |
| 52.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Even now, the grove felt" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment she stood on familiar earth, the next her feet sank into moss that sparkled with impossible colors." | | 1 | "Aurora forced her breathing to slow, drawing on the same calm that had carried her through pre-law exams and Evan's worst tantrums." | | 2 | "Her voice sounded different here—fuller somehow, as if the grove added harmonics she'd never possessed." | | 3 | "The trees here defied logic—silver bark twisted into spiral patterns that made her eyes water if she stared too long." | | 4 | "A clearing opened before them, perfectly circular and carpeted with wildflowers that shouldn't bloom together." | | 5 | "The scent should have been overwhelming, but instead each fragrance took its turn, as if the flowers had arranged themselves into an olfactory symphony." | | 6 | "The half-fae's silver hair moved in its own wind, each strand catching light that didn't exist." | | 7 | "A fire burned blue-green in a hearth carved from a single geode, casting shadows that danced independently of the flames." | | 8 | "The Heartstone grew warmer with each repetition, as if recognizing an old friend's name." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted, their form more solid than she'd ever seen it" |
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| 92.31% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde's smile revealed (reveal)" | | 2 | "Nyx explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.192 | | leniency | 0.385 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.115 | |