Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF68ZZC3DW5CWVMX3XVE6D

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Duration:
2m 18s
Cost:
$0.001839
Provider:
SambaNova

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic *thunk* that seemed to echo in the sudden quiet of the hallway. Rory hadn’t been expecting anyone. Eva was out of town at a conference, and the only people who visited this flat were either terrified witnesses seeking her friend’s magical expertise or takeaway delivery drivers who always looked relieved to escape the claustrophobic, paper-filled maze. She opened the door a crack, the security chain still engaged, and the breath caught in her throat. He stood in the dim, turmeric-scented hallway of the curry house, looking as though he’d just stepped out of the pages of a different, more elegant story. Lucien Moreau. His platinum hair was perfectly slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the drizzle clinging to the shoulders of his charcoal suit. The sharp lines of his jacket seemed to defy the shabbiness of his surroundings. And his eyes. One was the warm, disconcerting amber she remembered, the other a pool of absolute black. They fixed on her through the narrow gap in the door, and a lifetime of unspoken words seemed to pass between them in that single, silent look. “Aurora,” he said. His voice was a low baritone that vibrated through the wood of the door, familiar and utterly unwelcome. He never called her Rory. Her own voice, when she found it, was tight. “Lucien.” She made no move to unhook the chain. “You’re lost. The demonic gentlemen’s club is several blocks over.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, there and gone so fast she might have imagined it. “I need to speak with you.” “We said everything there was to say. The last time. As I recall, it ended with you calling me a ‘reckless liability’ and me telling you what you could do with your proprietary information.” The memory was a fresh bruise, even now. She’d trusted him. More than trusted him. And he’d treated her like a loose thread to be snipped from his impeccably tailored world. “Circumstances have changed,” he said, his gaze unwavering. He shifted his weight slightly, and the polished ivory handle of his cane gleamed under the weak hall light. She knew what was hidden inside that elegant prop. She’d seen him use it. “I don’t care. My circumstances haven’t changed. I’m busy.” She began to push the door shut. “It’s about Evan.” Her hand froze on the door. The name was a key, turning a lock deep inside her, releasing a cold dread that pooled in her stomach. Evan. Her past. The reason she’d fled Cardiff for the dubious sanctuary of London, for this flat above a curry house and a life of magical odd jobs. She hadn’t heard that name in over a year. “What about him?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. “He’s in London. And he’s asking questions. The wrong kind of questions, directed at the wrong kind of people. People who talk to me.” Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes were serious, all traces of his usual detached amusement gone. “He’s not the boy you left in Cardiff, Aurora. He’s… connected.” The chain felt suddenly flimsy, a child’s toy against the reality he was describing. Her heart was a frantic drum against her ribs. With a trembling hand, she slid the chain free and opened the door fully. He stepped inside, and the flat seemed to shrink around him. He was too large, too polished for this space. His presence sucked the air from the room, making the towers of books and scrolls feel like precarious ruins. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby, uncurled from a nest of parchment on the sofa, gave Lucien a baleful look, and stalked off into the bedroom with his tail in the air. Even the cat knew he was trouble. Rory closed the door, engaging all three deadbolts again with a series of definitive clicks. The sound did nothing to quell her racing heart. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to pulse, a souvenir from a simpler time, a childhood fall from a tree. It felt like a lifetime ago. “Start talking,” she said. He leaned his cane against a stack of grimoires and began to methodically remove his leather gloves, finger by finger. It was a maddeningly slow, deliberate act. “Evan has fallen in with a syndicate that deals in supernatural artifacts. Dark ones. They have… recruitment methods. They find people with specific hatreds and offer them power to settle scores.” “And he’s looking for me.” It wasn’t a question. The pieces clicked into place with a sickening finality. Evan’s rage had always been a cold, possessive thing. Her leaving had been the ultimate insult, one his brittle ego could never withstand. “He is,” Lucien confirmed, tucking his gloves into his pocket. His mismatched eyes scanned her face, taking in what she couldn’t hide—the fear, the old hurt resurfacing. “He believes you took something that belonged to him. His property.” “I’m not a thing,” she shot back, the old defiance flaring. “I left. That’s all.” “You know that’s not how men like him see it. And now he has resources. Dangerous ones.” He took a step closer. The scent of him, sandalwood and something colder, like frost on stone, cut through the smells of old paper and spices. “You are not safe here.” “I have three deadbolts and a neighbour who practices defensive hexes. I’ll be fine.” The bravado sounded hollow even to her own ears. Another step. He was close enough now that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the perfect cut of his suit jacket. “Hexes will not stop what he has access to. This is not a neighbourhood dispute, Aurora. This is my world. And it is unforgiving.” “Your world,” she repeated, the words tasting like ash. “The one you so kindly informed me I was too much of a ‘liability’ to be a part of. Why are you here, Lucien? Really? To warn me? Out of the goodness of your half-demon heart?” His jaw tightened. For a moment, the polished facade cracked, and she saw a flash of something raw beneath it. Frustration. Anger. Something else. “We both said things that night.” “You said them. I just agreed and left.” The memory was a physical pain. The heat of the argument in his tastefully oppressive office, the way he’d shut down, walling himself off behind a mask of cold practicality. The way she’d walked out, her pride the only thing keeping her from crumbling. “I was trying to protect you,” he said, the words low and strained. “By pushing me away?” “By making you leave! This life… it grinds down anything good. Anything pure. It would have consumed you, Aurora. I saw it happening.” His amber eye seemed to glow with a faint inner light. The black one remained an abyss. She gave a bitter laugh. “You don’t get to decide what consumes me. You don’t get to make those choices for me. I wasn’t some precious object for you to put on a shelf to keep safe, Lucien. I was your…” She trailed off. They had never put a name to it. The late nights trading information, the effortless rhythm they’d found, the electric charge that arced between them whenever their hands accidentally brushed. It had been something. Until he decided it was nothing. “You were becoming my greatest vulnerability,” he finished for her, his voice barely a whisper. He looked away, his gaze sweeping over the chaotic room before returning to her, weighed down by a honesty she’d never heard from him before. “And I was yours. That is a luxury we cannot afford.” The truth of it hung in the air between them, stark and terrifying. The attraction that had drawn them together was the very thing that made them a threat to each other. In his world, attachment was a weakness to be exploited. The fight went out of her. The anger dissolved, leaving behind a weary ache. She uncrossed her arms, her shoulders slumping. “So what now? You deliver your warning and go back to your shadows? Leave me to wait for my obsessed ex-boyfriend and his new artifact-wielding friends to kick my door in?” He closed the final distance between them. He didn’t touch her, but his proximity was its own kind of contact, a warmth that radiated from him, a gravitational pull she had to consciously resist. “No,” he said, his voice firm. “Now. Properly.” His gaze dropped to her lips for a heartbeat, so fast she might have imagined it. “He will not touch you. I will make certain of it.” The air crackled. All the history, the hurt, the unsaid things, coalesced into that small space between their bodies. The cautious, pragmatic part of her brain screamed that this was a bad idea, that letting Lucien back in was just trading one kind of danger for another. But the rest of her, the part that remembered the thrill of working beside him, the part that had lain awake too many nights wondering what his skin would feel like under her fingertips, was tired of being pragmatic. She was tired of being scared. “Why?” she asked, her own voice soft now. “Why now, after all this time?” He finally raised a hand, but didn’t touch her. He simply hovered his fingers near her cheek, close enough that she could feel the heat of his skin. “Because I was a fool,” he confessed, the admission seeming to cost him something. “And because the thought of him anywhere near you makes me want to tear this city apart stone by stone until I find him.” The raw possessiveness in his tone should have frightened her. Instead, it sent a shiver of something else entirely down her spine. It was the most honest thing he had ever said to her. She didn’t move away. She held his mismatched gaze, seeing the demon and the man, the broker and the protector, the one who pushed her away and the one who had come back. Outside, the rain began to fall harder against the window, a steady drumbeat against the glass. Inside, the only sound was their shared breath in the silent, book-filled room. The past was at the door, and the only thing standing between her and it was the complicated, dangerous man she had never quite stopped wanting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"really"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"effortless"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"chaotic"
count1
18
word"stark"
count1
19
word"warmth"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"down her spine"
count1
22
word"shared breath"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"unspoken"
2"vibrated"
3"familiar"
4"unwavering"
5"weight"
6"stomach"
7"sanctuary"
8"whisper"
9"racing"
10"pulse"
11"scanned"
12"perfect"
13"facade"
14"oppressive"
15"effortless"
16"electric"
17"chaotic"
18"stark"
19"warmth"
20"could feel"
21"down her spine"
22"shared breath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"looked relieved"
24.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1750
ratio0.001
matches
0"thunk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1307
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory3
Cardiff1
London1
Lucien5
Eva2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"thunk* that seemed to echo in the sudden quiet of the hallway"
1"felt like a lifetime ago"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1750
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"heard that name"
1"screamed that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean39.77
std21.65
cv0.544
sampleLengths
065
118
267
345
426
528
624
765
841
916
103
1163
1210
1348
1437
1576
1664
174
1858
1941
2038
2115
2248
2323
2451
2545
2630
2752
2813
294
3040
3184
3251
3342
3452
3534
3635
3786
386
3914
4066
4134
4233
4355
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was describing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences126
ratio0.008
matches
0"His mismatched eyes scanned her face, taking in what she couldn’t hide—the fear, the old hurt resurfacing."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1312
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"claustrophobic, paper-filled maze."
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
2"silent, book-filled room."
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.038109756097560975
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01524390243902439
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean13.89
std9.61
cv0.692
sampleLengths
021
15
239
318
427
52
624
714
83
915
1027
113
1218
135
149
159
1610
1718
186
1942
203
214
2216
238
2419
259
265
2716
283
296
3020
311
322
3325
349
3510
3637
3711
3814
399
4014
4111
429
4319
4430
457
4615
479
4811
4923
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"More than trusted him."
1"Even the cat knew he"
2"Instead, it sent a shiver"
ratio0.03
4.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences100
matches
0"She opened the door a"
1"He stood in the dim,"
2"His platinum hair was perfectly"
3"They fixed on her through"
4"His voice was a low"
5"He never called her Rory."
6"Her own voice, when she"
7"She made no move to"
8"She’d trusted him."
9"he said, his gaze unwavering"
10"He shifted his weight slightly,"
11"She knew what was hidden"
12"She’d seen him use it."
13"She began to push the"
14"Her hand froze on the"
15"She hadn’t heard that name"
16"she asked, her voice barely"
17"Her heart was a frantic"
18"He stepped inside, and the"
19"He was too large, too"
ratio0.54
25.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences100
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory hadn’t been expecting anyone."
2"Eva was out of town"
3"She opened the door a"
4"He stood in the dim,"
5"His platinum hair was perfectly"
6"The sharp lines of his"
7"They fixed on her through"
8"His voice was a low"
9"He never called her Rory."
10"Her own voice, when she"
11"She made no move to"
12"A ghost of a smile"
13"The memory was a fresh"
14"She’d trusted him."
15"he said, his gaze unwavering"
16"He shifted his weight slightly,"
17"She knew what was hidden"
18"She’d seen him use it."
19"She began to push the"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic *thunk* that seemed to echo in the sudden quiet of the hallway."
1"Eva was out of town at a conference, and the only people who visited this flat were either terrified witnesses seeking her friend’s magical expertise or takeawa…"
2"He stood in the dim, turmeric-scented hallway of the curry house, looking as though he’d just stepped out of the pages of a different, more elegant story."
3"The name was a key, turning a lock deep inside her, releasing a cold dread that pooled in her stomach."
4"His mismatched eyes scanned her face, taking in what she couldn’t hide—the fear, the old hurt resurfacing."
5"He didn’t touch her, but his proximity was its own kind of contact, a warmth that radiated from him, a gravitational pull she had to consciously resist."
6"But the rest of her, the part that remembered the thrill of working beside him, the part that had lain awake too many nights wondering what his skin would feel …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said, his gaze unwavering"
1"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
2"she shot back, the old defiance flaring"
3"he finished, his voice barely a whisper"
4"he said, his voice firm"
5"she asked, her own voice soft now"
6"he confessed, the admission seeming to cost him something"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien confirmed (confirm)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"he confessed (confess)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.15
76.7493%