| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1757 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1757 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 22 | | word | "shared breath" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "unspoken" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "unwavering" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "sanctuary" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "perfect" | | 13 | "facade" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "effortless" | | 16 | "electric" | | 17 | "chaotic" | | 18 | "stark" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "could feel" | | 21 | "down her spine" | | 22 | "shared breath" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 24.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1750 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1307 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 5 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "thunk* that seemed to echo in the sudden quiet of the hallway" | | 1 | "felt like a lifetime ago" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1750 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "heard that name" | | 1 | "screamed that this" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 39.77 | | std | 21.65 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 76 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 84 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 52 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 86 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 66 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes scanned her face, taking in what she couldn’t hide—the fear, the old hurt resurfacing." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1312 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "claustrophobic, paper-filled maze." | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "silent, book-filled room." |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.038109756097560975 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01524390243902439 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 13.89 | | std | 9.61 | | cv | 0.692 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "More than trusted him." | | 1 | "Even the cat knew he" | | 2 | "Instead, it sent a shiver" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 4.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She opened the door a" | | 1 | "He stood in the dim," | | 2 | "His platinum hair was perfectly" | | 3 | "They fixed on her through" | | 4 | "His voice was a low" | | 5 | "He never called her Rory." | | 6 | "Her own voice, when she" | | 7 | "She made no move to" | | 8 | "She’d trusted him." | | 9 | "he said, his gaze unwavering" | | 10 | "He shifted his weight slightly," | | 11 | "She knew what was hidden" | | 12 | "She’d seen him use it." | | 13 | "She began to push the" | | 14 | "Her hand froze on the" | | 15 | "She hadn’t heard that name" | | 16 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 17 | "Her heart was a frantic" | | 18 | "He stepped inside, and the" | | 19 | "He was too large, too" |
| | ratio | 0.54 | |
| 25.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back" | | 1 | "Rory hadn’t been expecting anyone." | | 2 | "Eva was out of town" | | 3 | "She opened the door a" | | 4 | "He stood in the dim," | | 5 | "His platinum hair was perfectly" | | 6 | "The sharp lines of his" | | 7 | "They fixed on her through" | | 8 | "His voice was a low" | | 9 | "He never called her Rory." | | 10 | "Her own voice, when she" | | 11 | "She made no move to" | | 12 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 13 | "The memory was a fresh" | | 14 | "She’d trusted him." | | 15 | "he said, his gaze unwavering" | | 16 | "He shifted his weight slightly," | | 17 | "She knew what was hidden" | | 18 | "She’d seen him use it." | | 19 | "She began to push the" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic *thunk* that seemed to echo in the sudden quiet of the hallway." | | 1 | "Eva was out of town at a conference, and the only people who visited this flat were either terrified witnesses seeking her friend’s magical expertise or takeawa…" | | 2 | "He stood in the dim, turmeric-scented hallway of the curry house, looking as though he’d just stepped out of the pages of a different, more elegant story." | | 3 | "The name was a key, turning a lock deep inside her, releasing a cold dread that pooled in her stomach." | | 4 | "His mismatched eyes scanned her face, taking in what she couldn’t hide—the fear, the old hurt resurfacing." | | 5 | "He didn’t touch her, but his proximity was its own kind of contact, a warmth that radiated from him, a gravitational pull she had to consciously resist." | | 6 | "But the rest of her, the part that remembered the thrill of working beside him, the part that had lain awake too many nights wondering what his skin would feel …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his gaze unwavering" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" | | 2 | "she shot back, the old defiance flaring" | | 3 | "he finished, his voice barely a whisper" | | 4 | "he said, his voice firm" | | 5 | "she asked, her own voice soft now" | | 6 | "he confessed, the admission seeming to cost him something" |
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| 75.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien confirmed (confirm)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "he confessed (confess)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.15 | |