Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF6K1ADKYEFC1N39DPDR6F

Run Details

Duration:
50.9s
Cost:
$0.001939
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock at the door was soft, almost hesitant. Aurora set down her book on the cluttered table and frowned. Eva wasn’t due back for hours, and no one else knew where she was staying since she’d moved into Eva’s chaotic, book-strewn flat above the curry house. She crossed the room, careful not to trip over Ptolemy, who lay sprawled in the middle of the floor like a furry obstacle. Three deadbolts clicked open under her fingers. She cracked the door just enough to peer out—and froze. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, looking as immaculate as ever in a charcoal suit that clung to his frame like it had been tailored by angels. His platinum hair was perfectly slicked back, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—piercing as they met hers. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the picture of composed elegance, but Aurora noticed the faint tension in his jaw, the way his fingers tightened imperceptibly on the cane’s handle. “Bonjour, Rory,” he said, his voice smooth as silk, with just a hint of that French accent that had always made her stomach flip. She stared at him, her heartbeat suddenly loud in her ears. Months. It had been months since she’d last seen him, since she’d walked away from his opulent townhouse in Mayfair without looking back. Months of silence, of unanswered texts, of deliberately avoiding the places she knew he frequented. And now here he was, standing on Eva’s doorstep like he’d just strolled in from a leisurely afternoon in Hyde Park. “What are you doing here?” Her voice came out sharper than she intended, but she didn’t care. Lucien raised an eyebrow, his lips curling into that infuriating half-smirk she’d once found irresistible. “Is that any way to greet an old friend?” “We’re not friends,” she said flatly, though her traitorous pulse quickened at the word “old.” He tilted his head, studying her with that unnerving intensity that always made her feel like he could see straight through her. “Aren’t we?” Aurora crossed her arms over her chest, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a nervous habit she couldn’t seem to break. “Cut the crap, Lucien. What do you want?” His smirk faltered, just for a moment, before he schooled his expression back into its usual mask of cool detachment. “May I come in?” She hesitated, her mind racing. Letting him in felt like opening a door she’d fought hard to keep closed, but turning him away would only prolong this awkward encounter. And deep down, beneath the anger and the hurt, there was a part of her that wanted to know why he was here. With a sigh, she stepped back and gestured him inside. “Fine. But make it quick.” Lucien stepped past her, his cane tapping softly against the wooden floorboards. Ptolemy, ever the curious cat, immediately padded over to investigate, sniffing at the polished leather of Lucien’s shoes. Lucien glanced down, his expression softening for a brief moment before he turned his attention to the cluttered room. “Charming,” he remarked, his gaze sweeping over the piles of books and scrolls that covered every available surface. “Cozy, even.” “I didn’t invite you for a critique of Eva’s decorating skills,” Aurora said, shutting the door and leaning against it. She crossed her arms again, her bright blue eyes fixed on him. “Talk.” Lucien turned to face her, his cane resting lightly between them. For a moment, he said nothing, just looked at her with that unreadable expression that drove her mad. Then he exhaled, a barely audible sigh, and said, “I want to apologize.” Aurora blinked. Of all the things she’d expected him to say, that wasn’t one of them. “What?” “I said I want to apologize,” he repeated, his voice quieter now, less polished. “For how things ended between us.” She laughed, a sharp, humorless sound. “You mean how you disappeared for weeks without so much as a text? Or how you acted like I didn’t exist when I finally showed up at your damn townhouse?” His jaw tightened, but he didn’t argue. “Both. And more.” Aurora shook her head, her black hair brushing against her shoulders. “You’re unbelievable. You think you can just waltz in here, say you’re sorry, and everything’s going to be fine?” “No,” he said simply. “I don’t expect anything. I just… needed you to know that I regret it. All of it.” She stared at him, her chest tight with emotions she didn’t want to name. Anger, yes, but also something softer, something she’d tried to bury. “Why now?” she asked finally. “Why bother after all this time?” Lucien hesitated, a rare crack in his usually flawless composure. “Because I couldn’t stop thinking about you,” he admitted, his voice low. “Because every time I walked into a room, I kept expecting to see you there. And when you weren’t…” He trailed off, his gaze dropping to the floor. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. She hadn’t expected that, hadn’t prepared for it. She’d spent months convincing herself that he hadn’t cared, that whatever they’d had had been as fleeting for him as it had been inevitable for her. But now, here he was, looking almost vulnerable, and it shattered something inside her. “Lucien…” she began, but he cut her off. “I know I don’t deserve your forgiveness,” he said quickly, raising his eyes to meet hers again. “And I’m not asking for it. I just… I needed you to know. That’s all.” For a long moment, they just looked at each other, the tension in the room thick enough to cut with a knife. Aurora wanted to stay angry, to hold onto the hurt like armor, but it was hard to do when he was standing there, looking at her like she was the only thing in the world that mattered. “You’re an asshole,” she said finally, her voice softer than she intended. Lucien chuckled, a small, rueful sound. “I know.” “And I’m an idiot for even considering this,” she added, though her heart wasn’t in the words. “But?” he prompted, his amber eye glinting with something like hope. Aurora sighed, running a hand through her hair. “But… I missed you too,” she admitted quietly. The relief that flickered across his face was almost palpable. He stepped closer, his cane forgotten at his side. “Rory…” She held up a hand, stopping him before he could say more. “Don’t. Not yet. I… I need time to think.” He nodded, his expression serious. “Of course. Take all the time you need.” Silence settled between them, heavy but not uncomfortable. Ptolemy, having lost interest in Lucien’s shoes, wandered over to curl up on the pile of books by the window. Somewhere outside, the sounds of Brick Lane filtered through the thin walls—laughter, the hum of traffic, the faint sizzle of food from the curry house below. “I should go,” Lucien said finally, breaking the quiet. Aurora nodded, though she wasn’t ready for him to leave just yet. “Yeah. Okay.” He turned toward the door, but hesitated before reaching for the handle. “There’s a party tomorrow night,” he said, glancing back at her. “At the townhouse. If you wanted to come…” She raised an eyebrow. “Is that an invitation?” “It’s whatever you want it to be,” he replied, his tone carefully neutral. Aurora considered that, her mind racing with possibilities. “I’ll think about it,” she said finally. A small smile tugged at the corner of his lips. “That’s all I can ask.” With that, he opened the door and stepped out into the hallway. Aurora watched him go, her heart still pounding in her chest. She closed the door softly and leaned against it, letting out a long breath. Ptolemy meowed softly from his perch, as if offering his opinion. “Don’t look at me like that,” she muttered, pushing away from the door and heading toward the kitchen. She needed a cup of tea, or maybe something stronger, and a lot of time to think about what had just happened. Because one thing was certain: nothing about Lucien Moreau was ever simple.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"he said simply [simply]"
2"she asked finally [finally]"
3"he said quickly [quickly]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
5"she admitted quietly [quietly]"
6"Lucien said finally [finally]"
7"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.489
leniency0.978
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.356
66.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count3
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"deliberately"
3"softly"
4"lightly"
5"quickly"
6"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"tension"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"racing"
count2
10
word"encounter"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"flawless"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
15
word"glinting"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"palpable"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"tension"
2"silk"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"pulse"
7"quickened"
8"intensity"
9"racing"
10"encounter"
11"unreadable"
12"flawless"
13"fleeting"
14"shattered"
15"glinting"
16"flickered"
17"palpable"
18"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1352
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"For a moment, he said nothing, just looked at her with that unreadable expression that drove her mad."
94.08% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1073
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy4
Moreau2
Aurora12
French1
Mayfair1
Hyde1
Park1
Lucien11
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Mayfair"
1"Hyde"
2"Park"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.941
windowScore1
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like opening a door she’d fought h"
1"something like hope"
2"as if offering his opinion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1352
matches(empty)
73.21% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"cared, that whatever"
2"considered that, her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.77
std18.18
cv0.632
sampleLengths
070
117
274
324
470
517
624
715
824
932
1024
1152
1215
1349
1420
1533
1642
1717
1820
1936
2010
2130
2221
2336
2450
2554
268
2732
2859
2912
308
3117
3211
3316
3420
3521
3613
3754
389
3914
4031
418
4213
4315
4415
4548
4652
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"been tailored"
67.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was staying"
1"was, standing"
2"was, looking"
3"was standing"
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"She cracked the door just enough to peer out—and froze."
1"His platinum hair was perfectly slicked back, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—piercing as they met hers."
2"Aurora crossed her arms over her chest, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a nervous habit she couldn’t seem to break."
3"Somewhere outside, the sounds of Brick Lane filtered through the thin walls—laughter, the hum of traffic, the faint sizzle of food from the curry house below."
78.56% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.056429232192414434
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.02127659574468085
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.64
std7.57
cv0.599
sampleLengths
09
111
227
323
47
510
627
717
830
924
1011
111
1222
1315
1421
1517
1615
179
1815
1922
202
2124
228
2320
244
255
2624
2723
2810
295
3012
3118
3219
3318
342
3520
3612
371
3811
3918
4013
412
4214
431
4414
456
466
4730
487
493
67.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4205607476635514
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners45
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then he exhaled, a barely"
1"Somewhere outside, the sounds of"
ratio0.024
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences82
matches
0"She crossed the room, careful"
1"She cracked the door just"
2"His platinum hair was perfectly"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"he said, his voice smooth"
5"She stared at him, her"
6"It had been months since"
7"Her voice came out sharper"
8"she said flatly, though her"
9"He tilted his head, studying"
10"His smirk faltered, just for"
11"She hesitated, her mind racing."
12"he remarked, his gaze sweeping"
13"She crossed her arms again,"
14"he repeated, his voice quieter"
15"She laughed, a sharp, humorless"
16"His jaw tightened, but he"
17"he said simply"
18"She stared at him, her"
19"she asked finally"
ratio0.5
51.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences82
matches
0"The knock at the door"
1"Aurora set down her book"
2"Eva wasn’t due back for"
3"She crossed the room, careful"
4"She cracked the door just"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"His platinum hair was perfectly"
7"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
8"he said, his voice smooth"
9"She stared at him, her"
10"It had been months since"
11"Months of silence, of unanswered"
12"Her voice came out sharper"
13"Lucien raised an eyebrow, his"
14"she said flatly, though her"
15"He tilted his head, studying"
16"Aurora crossed her arms over"
17"His smirk faltered, just for"
18"She hesitated, her mind racing."
19"Lucien stepped past her, his"
ratio0.817
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Because one thing was certain:"
ratio0.012
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, looking as immaculate as ever in a charcoal suit that clung to his frame like it had been tailored by angels."
1"For a moment, he said nothing, just looked at her with that unreadable expression that drove her mad."
2"Aurora wanted to stay angry, to hold onto the hurt like armor, but it was hard to do when he was standing there, looking at her like she was the only thing in t…"
3"Ptolemy meowed softly from his perch, as if offering his opinion."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he repeated, his voice quieter now, less polished"
1"he admitted, his voice low"
2"He trailed, his gaze dropping to the floor"
3"she said finally, her voice softer than she intended"
4"she added, though her heart wasn’t in the words"
5"he prompted, his amber eye glinting with something like hope"
6"he replied, his tone carefully neutral"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she added (add)"
3"she admitted quietly (admit)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.222
72.4463%