Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF6X12MKHF4P81NJD4N8JS

Run Details

Duration:
17.7s
Cost:
$0.000386
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in thegrove tasted like wet stone and crushed petals, thick and sweet, clinging to the back of Aurora’s throat. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the faint warmth of the Heartstone Pendant against her skin a constant, low hum. Nyx, a shifting silhouette of deepest shadow, flowed like smoke around the ancient oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary. Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, scanned the towering ferns and luminous wildflowers that bloomed in impossible shades of sapphire and gold, even under the dappled twilight filtering through the canopy. “This place... it’s like breathing underwater,” Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. “Too much life, not enough air.” Isolde stood apart, her silver hair shimmering like moonlight on still water. She traced a finger along the rough bark of a colossal oak, her pale lavender eyes distant. “It’s the Fae,” she said, her voice a riddle. “They breathe the dreams of the world. You feel it, Rory? The weight of unspoken wishes?” Aurora took a step forward, her boot sinking slightly into the soft, mossy earth. The ground felt alive, humming with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in her bones. She reached out, fingers brushing a cluster of glowing blue mushrooms. They pulsed faintly, like tiny hearts. “It’s... alive. But not like anything I’ve ever felt. It’s watching us.” Nyx shifted, solidifying into a more distinct form, their shadow-form dissipating. “Watching, or waiting?” they asked, their voice sharper now. “The Veil is thin here. Too thin.” Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the light. “The solstice draws near, Rory. The barrier between realms weakens. This grove... it’s a tear in the fabric. A place where Hel’s hunger can whisper.” Aurora felt a chill, not from the air, but from the implication. She glanced at the pendant at her throat. It pulsed, a stronger, warmer throb against her skin. “Then we’re not alone,” she stated, her voice low and controlled. “But we’re not exactly welcome either.” They moved deeper, the path winding between colossal, gnarled roots that seemed to reach out like grasping hands. The air grew denser, the scent of damp earth and exotic blossoms overwhelming. Aurora’s senses were on high alert, her quick mind cataloging every detail: the way the light fractured through the leaves into impossible colors, the faint, musical chime of unseen insects, the sudden, cold draft that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end. Nyx flowed ahead, their form flickering like a candle flame in the breeze. “The Fae are here,” they said, their voice a thread of sound. “Not the courtly kind, but the wild ones. The ones that live in the trees, in the shadows between the stones.” Isolde stopped, her silver hair swirling around her. “They see you, Rory. The human. The one who carries the Heartstone. They remember the pact made long ago, in the time before the Veil was sealed.” Aurora felt the pendant’s warmth intensify, a steady pulse against her skin. “Pact? What pact?” “The pact that binds the Veil,” Isolde intoned, her voice echoing slightly in the enclosed space. “A bargain struck to keep Hel at bay. But bargains have a way of unraveling when the terms are forgotten.” A sudden, sharp cry pierced the air – a sound like a hawk’s screech mixed with the tearing of silk. All three froze. Nyx solidified completely, their violet eyes narrowing to slits. “Demon,” they breathed, the word a hiss. Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade, the cold steel humming faintly in her hand. The blade’s edge seemed to shimmer with a faint, internal light. “Where?” “Over there,” Nyx pointed, their shadow-form flickering towards a cluster of ancient, twisted trees. “In the heart of the grove. It’s drawn to the Heartstone. To you.” Aurora pushed through the dense foliage, the blade held ready. The air grew colder, the scent of decay mingling with the floral perfume. She saw it then – a flicker of crimson in the gloom, a shape shifting between shadow and substance. It was smaller than she expected, more like a large, emaciated wolf, but its eyes were pools of molten gold, burning with an unnatural hunger. It snarled, a sound like grinding bone, and lunged. Aurora didn’t hesitate. She drove the Fae-Forged Blade forward, the blade’s edge biting deep into the creature’s flank. It shrieked, a sound that vibrated in her bones, and vanished back into the shadows, leaving only a trail of shimmering, noxious smoke. Nyx was already moving, flowing like darkness towards the source of the disturbance, their incorporeal form slipping through the trees with impossible speed. “It’s drawn to the pendant!” Aurora shouted, wiping blood from her blade on her trousers. “The Heartstone! It’s a beacon!” Isolde appeared beside her, her silver hair whipping around her face. “The Veil weakens, Rory. Demons sense the weakness. They come to feast on the chaos.” She touched the pendant, her fingers brushing the crimson gem. It pulsed violently, a deep, resonant throb that seemed to shake the very ground beneath them. “The pact is breaking. The barrier is failing.” Aurora felt the ground tremble, a low rumble that made the flowers sway. The air crackled with unseen energy. “Then we need to get out of here,” she said, her voice tight with adrenaline. “Now.” Nyx reappeared, their form solidifying, panting slightly. “The exit is blocked,” they stated, their voice strained. “The grove’s magic is resisting. It’s trying to keep us here.” “Then we fight our way through,” Aurora declared, gripping the Fae-Forged Blade tighter. “Or we find another way. Isolde, any ideas?” Isolde looked around, her silver eyes scanning the ancient trees. “The stones,” she murmured, her voice barely audible. “The standing stones. They are the anchors. If we can disrupt the magic binding them...” Before she could finish, a wave of overwhelming dread washed over them. The air grew thick, suffocating. The flowers wilted instantly, their light extinguishing. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches like skeletal fingers. A guttural roar, deeper and more primal than the wolf’s, echoed from the heart of the grove, shaking the very foundations of the earth. “The Prince of Gluttony,” Nyx whispered, the words choked. “Belphegor. He senses the weakness too. He comes to feast on the feast.” Aurora felt the pendant’s warmth become a searing heat, a warning. The Fae-Forged Blade hummed with a fierce, protective energy. She looked at her companions, their faces etched with fear and determination. This was no longer just an exploration. This was survival. And the ancient, wondrous, terrifying heart of the Fae Grove was about to reveal its true, monstrous appetite.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1116
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"implication"
count1
10
word"throb"
count2
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"unraveling"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"disrupt"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"searing"
count1
23
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanned"
2"whisper"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"vibrated"
7"pulsed"
8"chill"
9"implication"
10"throb"
11"fractured"
12"pulse"
13"echoing"
14"unraveling"
15"silk"
16"flicker"
17"gloom"
18"beacon"
19"scanning"
20"disrupt"
21"echoed"
22"searing"
23"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences67
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"d with fear"
57.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount821
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Isolde6
Fae-Forged4
Blade4
Nyx9
Fae5
Grove1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Blade"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Pendant"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.769
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like wet stone and crushed petals"
1"roots that seemed to reach out like grasping hands"
2"appeared beside her, her silver hair whipping around her face"
3"throb that seemed to shake the very ground beneath them"
20.14% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.799
wordCount1112
matches
0"not from the air, but from the implication"
1"Not the courtly kind, but the wild ones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
92.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean42.77
std20.3
cv0.475
sampleLengths
094
122
254
358
427
533
646
778
846
935
1015
1136
1239
1325
1427
1576
1664
1720
1860
1935
2027
2121
2233
2359
2422
2560
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences86
ratio0.023
matches
0"A sudden, sharp cry pierced the air – a sound like a hawk’s screech mixed with the tearing of silk."
1"She saw it then – a flicker of crimson in the gloom, a shape shifting between shadow and substance."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount825
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ancient, wondrous, terrifying heart"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.037575757575757575
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013333333333333334
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.93
std7.19
cv0.556
sampleLengths
021
122
221
330
416
56
612
717
89
916
1014
1115
1211
136
1412
1511
169
177
188
1925
2012
218
229
2311
246
2518
2613
2747
2813
2912
3021
318
3227
3312
343
3516
3620
3720
383
399
407
4113
4211
431
4414
4513
4610
4713
4819
4925
42.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3023255813953488
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences67
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing,"
2"She traced a finger along"
3"she said, her voice a"
4"She reached out, fingers brushing"
5"They pulsed faintly, like tiny"
6"they asked, their voice sharper"
7"She glanced at the pendant"
8"It pulsed, a stronger, warmer"
9"she stated, her voice low"
10"They moved deeper, the path"
11"they said, their voice a"
12"they breathed, the word a"
13"She saw it then –"
14"It was smaller than she"
15"It snarled, a sound like"
16"She drove the Fae-Forged Blade"
17"It shrieked, a sound that"
18"She touched the pendant, her"
19"It pulsed violently, a deep,"
ratio0.358
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"The air in thegrove tasted"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"Nyx, a shifting silhouette of"
3"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing,"
4"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
5"Isolde stood apart, her silver"
6"She traced a finger along"
7"she said, her voice a"
8"Aurora took a step forward,"
9"The ground felt alive, humming"
10"She reached out, fingers brushing"
11"They pulsed faintly, like tiny"
12"Nyx shifted, solidifying into a"
13"they asked, their voice sharper"
14"Isolde turned, her silver hair"
15"Aurora felt a chill, not"
16"She glanced at the pendant"
17"It pulsed, a stronger, warmer"
18"she stated, her voice low"
19"They moved deeper, the path"
ratio0.955
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Before she could finish, a"
ratio0.015
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Nyx, a shifting silhouette of deepest shadow, flowed like smoke around the ancient oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary."
1"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, scanned the towering ferns and luminous wildflowers that bloomed in impossible shades of sapphire and gold, even under the d…"
2"The ground felt alive, humming with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in her bones."
3"They moved deeper, the path winding between colossal, gnarled roots that seemed to reach out like grasping hands."
4"Aurora’s senses were on high alert, her quick mind cataloging every detail: the way the light fractured through the leaves into impossible colors, the faint, mu…"
5"It shrieked, a sound that vibrated in her bones, and vanished back into the shadows, leaving only a trail of shimmering, noxious smoke."
6"It pulsed violently, a deep, resonant throb that seemed to shake the very ground beneath them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"she said, her voice a riddle"
2"they asked, their voice sharper now"
3"she stated, her voice low and controlled"
4"they said, their voice a thread of sound"
5"Isolde intoned, her voice echoing slightly in the enclosed space"
6"they breathed, the word a hiss"
7"She touched, her fingers brushing the crimson gem"
8"she said, her voice tight with adrenaline"
9"they stated, their voice strained"
10"she murmured, her voice barely audible"
11"Nyx whispered, the words choked"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she stated (state)"
2"they breathed (breathe)"
3"Aurora shouted (shout)"
4"they stated (state)"
5"Aurora declared (declare)"
6"she murmured (murmur)"
7"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.471
66.4081%