| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1116 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "implication" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "unraveling" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "gloom" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "scanning" | | 20 | "disrupt" | | 21 | "echoed" | | 22 | "searing" | | 23 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "d with fear" |
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| 57.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1112 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.92% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 821 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 4 | | Blade | 4 | | Nyx | 9 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.769 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like wet stone and crushed petals" | | 1 | "roots that seemed to reach out like grasping hands" | | 2 | "appeared beside her, her silver hair whipping around her face" | | 3 | "throb that seemed to shake the very ground beneath them" |
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| 20.14% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.799 | | wordCount | 1112 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the air, but from the implication" | | 1 | "Not the courtly kind, but the wild ones" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.77% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 42.77 | | std | 20.3 | | cv | 0.475 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 76 | | 16 | 64 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 60 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.41% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "A sudden, sharp cry pierced the air – a sound like a hawk’s screech mixed with the tearing of silk." | | 1 | "She saw it then – a flicker of crimson in the gloom, a shape shifting between shadow and substance." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 825 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, wondrous, terrifying heart" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.037575757575757575 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013333333333333334 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 12.93 | | std | 7.19 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 42.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3023255813953488 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.72% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes, faintly glowing," | | 2 | "She traced a finger along" | | 3 | "she said, her voice a" | | 4 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 5 | "They pulsed faintly, like tiny" | | 6 | "they asked, their voice sharper" | | 7 | "She glanced at the pendant" | | 8 | "It pulsed, a stronger, warmer" | | 9 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 10 | "They moved deeper, the path" | | 11 | "they said, their voice a" | | 12 | "they breathed, the word a" | | 13 | "She saw it then –" | | 14 | "It was smaller than she" | | 15 | "It snarled, a sound like" | | 16 | "She drove the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 17 | "It shrieked, a sound that" | | 18 | "She touched the pendant, her" | | 19 | "It pulsed violently, a deep," |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in thegrove tasted" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes, faintly glowing," | | 4 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "Isolde stood apart, her silver" | | 6 | "She traced a finger along" | | 7 | "she said, her voice a" | | 8 | "Aurora took a step forward," | | 9 | "The ground felt alive, humming" | | 10 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 11 | "They pulsed faintly, like tiny" | | 12 | "Nyx shifted, solidifying into a" | | 13 | "they asked, their voice sharper" | | 14 | "Isolde turned, her silver hair" | | 15 | "Aurora felt a chill, not" | | 16 | "She glanced at the pendant" | | 17 | "It pulsed, a stronger, warmer" | | 18 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 19 | "They moved deeper, the path" |
| | ratio | 0.955 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could finish, a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of deepest shadow, flowed like smoke around the ancient oak standing stones that marked the grove’s boundary." | | 1 | "Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, scanned the towering ferns and luminous wildflowers that bloomed in impossible shades of sapphire and gold, even under the d…" | | 2 | "The ground felt alive, humming with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in her bones." | | 3 | "They moved deeper, the path winding between colossal, gnarled roots that seemed to reach out like grasping hands." | | 4 | "Aurora’s senses were on high alert, her quick mind cataloging every detail: the way the light fractured through the leaves into impossible colors, the faint, mu…" | | 5 | "It shrieked, a sound that vibrated in her bones, and vanished back into the shadows, leaving only a trail of shimmering, noxious smoke." | | 6 | "It pulsed violently, a deep, resonant throb that seemed to shake the very ground beneath them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a riddle" | | 2 | "they asked, their voice sharper now" | | 3 | "she stated, her voice low and controlled" | | 4 | "they said, their voice a thread of sound" | | 5 | "Isolde intoned, her voice echoing slightly in the enclosed space" | | 6 | "they breathed, the word a hiss" | | 7 | "She touched, her fingers brushing the crimson gem" | | 8 | "she said, her voice tight with adrenaline" | | 9 | "they stated, their voice strained" | | 10 | "she murmured, her voice barely audible" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, the words choked" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she stated (state)" | | 2 | "they breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Aurora shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "they stated (state)" | | 5 | "Aurora declared (declare)" | | 6 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.471 | |