Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF6XAFHMVP1YKB484DN5GR

Run Details

Duration:
8m 10s
Cost:
$0.001135
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp of the abandoned Tube station seeped through the soles of Harlow Quinn’s boots. The air tasted of rust, wet earth, and something else, a metallic tang that set her teeth on edge. The Veil Market, usually a riotous clutter of stalls and murmuring patrons, was a crime scene. Yellow tape, jarringly mundane, cordoned off a section where a vendor’s table of crystalline oddities now lay shattered. Uniformed officers moved with that careful, ponderous gait they reserved for locations that made them uneasy. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as she scanned the scene. Her brown eyes missed nothing: the way the flickering witch-light in the sconces threw long, dancing shadows, the anxious glances the remaining Market denizens cast from beyond the tape, the peculiar, ozone-heavy stillness that had replaced the market’s usual hum. Eva Kowalski stood just inside the tape line, clutching her worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. Her round glasses reflected the eerie light, hiding her green eyes. She’d called it in. Of course she had. Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been sniffing around Eva’s kind—the bookish, fringe-dwelling researchers who knew too much about things they shouldn’t—three years ago. The memory was a cold stone in Quinn’s gut. Morris had ended up in the Thames with a look of perfect, uncomprehending terror frozen on his face. No weapon, no signs of a struggle the forensics team could quantify. Case closed, they’d said. Quinn had never closed it. “Detective,” Eva said, her voice small. She tucked a strand of unruly red hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn had noted in their previous, tersely professional interactions. “Kowalski.” Quinn’s tone was flat, a professional courtesy. She didn’t look at the younger woman, instead focusing on the tableau. The victim—a male Shade, according to Eva’s stammered report—was a crumpled heap of dark cloth and indistinct form behind the table. “Walk me through it. Again.” Eva took a shaky breath. “I was here for research. The Market moves next week, and I needed to cross-reference some alchemical symbols with a reputable vendor. I heard a shout. A sort of… tearing sound. Then he just… fell. When I got closer, he was like this. I checked for a pulse. Nothing. So I used the emergency line you gave me.” Quinn finally glanced at her. The freckles across Eva’s nose and cheeks stood out against her pallor. She was scared, but not, Quinn thought, surprised. Not entirely. “A tearing sound,” Quinn repeated, her voice devoid of inflection. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket with a snap. She knelt by the body. Up close, the Shade’s form was less substantial, like smoke given temporary shape. Its edges bled into the shadows of the station floor. No visible wounds. No blood, or whatever passed for it among his kind. The stall was a disaster: delicate glass ampoules shattered, their contents—iridescent powders, viscous silver fluids—soaking into the grimy concrete. A ledger lay open, its pages blank. Quinn leaned closer. Not blank. Faint, heatless phosphorescence glowed from symbols that seemed to squirm if she stared too long. She looked away, a headache beginning to throb behind her eyes. A uniformed sergeant, a young man named Peters with a permanently bewildered expression, approached. “Ma’am. No signs of forced entry that we can… well, that we can recognize. No projectile weapons. The witness says it was instantaneous.” “The witness is an occult researcher in a black market for magical artifacts, Sergeant,” Quinn said, not unkindly. “Instantaneous covers a multitude of sins.” She rose, her knees protesting. The military precision of her bearing was a habit, a cage for the frustration boiling inside. Eighteen years, and she was still policing scenes that defied the manuals. Her gaze swept the stall again. The shattered crystals. The spilled potions. The open, glowing ledger. And the body, utterly unmarked. “It was a psychic blast,” Eva said from behind her, more confident now. She’d edged closer, her academic curiosity overcoming her fear. “You see the pattern of the crystal shards—radiating outward from a central point above the table, not from an impact on the table itself. And the victim’s ephemeral form is disrupted, see? It’s fraying at the edges. That’s a classic signature of a mental attack. Someone with strong telepathic or psychokinetic ability targeted him. Probably from a distance. An assassination.” Quinn listened, checking the worn leather watch on her left wrist. It was a relic from Morris. *Keep your feet on the ground, Harlow*, he’d say. *The answer’s always in the dirt, not the stars*. She looked at the dirt here—the stained concrete. Eva’s theory was neat. Logical, given the context. It fit the supernatural setting. It was what everyone here expected. A magical murder in a magical place. That was precisely what bothered her. “An assassination,” Quinn echoed. She stepped over the tape and moved to the perimeter of the stall, opposite the body. She ignored the palpable discomfort of the uniforms, the whispering from the shadowy arches. Her eyes tracked over the ground. There. A scuff mark on the concrete, faint. Not from a boot. It was a drag mark, ending at the leg of the vendor’s table. She followed an invisible line from that mark to the body. Then she looked at the table’s surface. Among the glittering debris was a small, cleared space. A perfect square of dust-free wood. “Kowalski. You handle artifacts. What sits on a vendor’s table, about… four inches square?” Eva blinked, thrown by the question. “Uh, lots of things. Small ritual boxes, enchanted stones, payment scales…” “Something a regular customer might expect to see. Something that belongs.” Eva’s green eyes widened behind her glasses. “A display stand. For a particularly valuable item.” Quinn nodded once, a sharp movement. She walked back to the body and, ignoring Peters’ muted gasp, carefully rolled the Shade’s insubstantial form. It was like pushing against cold fog. Beneath it, on the ground, was not a pool of blood, but a single, mundane item. A small brass compass. Quinn picked it up. It was cold. The casing was etched with fine, protective sigils, now familiar to her from other confiscated items. A patina of verdigris coated the brass. The needle didn’t point north. It spun lazily, then quivered, pointing insistently towards a bricked-up archway at the far end of the station platform. “A Veil Compass,” Eva breathed, coming to her side. “It points to supernatural rifts. Very rare. Very expensive. Crafted by Shade artisans.” She looked from the compass to the empty space on the table. “So… the assassin took it? But why leave it under the body?” “They didn’t,” Quinn said, her voice low. She held the compass up. “This wasn’t the display piece. This is the victim’s. His personal property. Probably kept in a pocket or a pouch. When he fell, it spilled out.” “Then what was on the stand?” “The item he was killed for.” Quinn’s mind was racing, the pieces clicking into a different, darker configuration. “Your psychic blast theory is good, Kowalski. It fits the aesthetic. But it’s wrong.” “How can you be sure?” “Because the blast, if it was a blast, came from *here*.” Quinn pointed to the cleared square on the table. “The epicenter was the item itself. Not from the arches, not from a distance. The crystals radiate out from that spot. The victim was standing right in front of it. He wasn’t assassinated by a rival. He was demonstrating a product to a customer. A product that malfunctioned. Catastrophically.” The silence that followed was thicker than the station’s damp. Eva stared, her scholarly reassurances crumbling. Peters looked utterly lost. “A customer…” Eva whispered. “Who panicked,” Quinn continued, the scene reconstructing itself in her mind with cold, brutal clarity. “They saw the vendor struck down. They saw the lethal item, maybe still unstable, sitting there. In their panic, they grabbed the closest thing of value to cover their tracks—the displayed item, the real target of the theft—and fled. They didn’t search the body. They didn’t see this compass fall. They just ran.” She turned the compass over in her gloved hand. The needle still pointed to the bricked arch. A rift. An escape route. “But the tearing sound I heard…” Eva protested weakly. “Could have been the sound of the item activating. Or the sound of the rift being opened by the thief to get away.” Quinn looked at Eva, her brown eyes hard. “This wasn’t a premeditated magical hit. This was a botched transaction. Theft turned to manslaughter. The killer isn’t a powerful psychic. They’re a desperate amateur who bought—or tried to steal—something they couldn’t control.” The pieces settled. The wrongness she’d felt was the dissonance between the sophisticated, otherworldly method everyone assumed and the clumsy, avaricious, all-too-human reality. It was a flavor of tragedy she knew intimately. It was the kind of thing that left a detective dead in the Thames with terror in his eyes, over a case everyone else wanted to call unsolvable. She slipped the Veil Compass into an evidence bag. The needle quivered, trapped in plastic, still pointing the way. “Sergeant Peters, seal this area. Everything gets bagged, especially the ledger. Kowalski, you’re with me. You’re going to tell me everything about who manufactures unstable high-grade artifacts, and who’s been shopping for them lately.” Eva nodded, her earlier fear replaced by a dawning, grim understanding. Quinn turned her back on the shimmering, impossible crime scene, her boots echoing on the wet concrete. The answer was in the dirt. And the dirt here, for all the magic, smelled of greed, fear, and human error. It was a scent she knew well. It was the only thing, in eighteen years, that had ever made sense.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
89.39% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
1"Eva protested weakly [weakly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.121
78.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"precisely"
2"carefully"
3"lazily"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1645
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count3
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"ephemeral"
count1
9
word"disrupted"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"quivered"
count2
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"otherworldly"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"shattered"
2"scanned"
3"dancing"
4"perfect"
5"pulse"
6"throb"
7"crystal"
8"ephemeral"
9"disrupted"
10"echoed"
11"palpable"
12"etched"
13"familiar"
14"quivered"
15"racing"
16"silence"
17"otherworldly"
18"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences117
matches
0"was scared"
1"s with terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords17
totalWords1625
ratio0.01
matches
0"Keep your feet on the ground, Harlow"
1"The answer’s always in the dirt, not the stars"
2"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1094
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow2
Quinn22
Veil2
Market2
Kowalski1
Morris3
Eva16
Thames2
Shade2
Peters2
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Shade"
6"Peters"
places
0"Thames"
1"Compass"
globalScore0.495
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"symbols that seemed to squirm if she stared too long"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.615
wordCount1625
matches
0"not a pool of blood, but a single, mundane item"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean41.67
std26.88
cv0.645
sampleLengths
084
149
2109
330
446
563
650
798
837
957
1021
1182
1243
1326
146
1540
1658
1714
1817
1911
2015
2146
224
2354
2446
2538
266
2732
285
2969
3020
314
3268
3322
349
3564
3660
3753
3869
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was racing"
57.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences134
ratio0.03
matches
0"Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been sniffing around Eva’s kind—the bookish, fringe-dwelling researchers who knew too much about things they shouldn’t—three years ago."
1"The victim—a male Shade, according to Eva’s stammered report—was a crumpled heap of dark cloth and indistinct form behind the table."
2"The stall was a disaster: delicate glass ampoules shattered, their contents—iridescent powders, viscous silver fluids—soaking into the grimy concrete."
3"She looked at the dirt here—the stained concrete."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1116
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.035842293906810034
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.017025089605734768
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean12.13
std10.37
cv0.855
sampleLengths
015
119
216
318
416
59
640
719
811
94
104
1123
129
1318
1412
154
165
176
1824
198
2012
2121
225
235
2458
255
2612
278
282
2910
3013
315
3213
3310
343
3510
3619
377
383
392
4015
4111
4214
4323
4418
4511
4616
4712
486
493
49.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.35074626865671643
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners47
60.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"Of course she had."
1"Then she looked at the"
ratio0.018
97.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences111
matches
0"Her brown eyes missed nothing:"
1"Her round glasses reflected the"
2"She’d called it in."
3"She tucked a strand of"
4"She didn’t look at the"
5"She was scared, but not,"
6"She pulled a pair of"
7"She knelt by the body."
8"Its edges bled into the"
9"She looked away, a headache"
10"She rose, her knees protesting"
11"Her gaze swept the stall"
12"She’d edged closer, her academic"
13"It was a relic from"
14"She looked at the dirt"
15"It fit the supernatural setting."
16"It was what everyone here"
17"She stepped over the tape"
18"She ignored the palpable discomfort"
19"Her eyes tracked over the"
ratio0.306
36.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences111
matches
0"The damp of the abandoned"
1"The air tasted of rust,"
2"The Veil Market, usually a"
3"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as"
4"Her brown eyes missed nothing:"
5"Eva Kowalski stood just inside"
6"Her round glasses reflected the"
7"She’d called it in."
8"Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had"
9"The memory was a cold"
10"Morris had ended up in"
11"Case closed, they’d said."
12"Quinn had never closed it."
13"Eva said, her voice small"
14"She tucked a strand of"
15"Quinn’s tone was flat, a"
16"She didn’t look at the"
17"The victim—a male Shade, according"
18"Eva took a shaky breath."
19"Quinn finally glanced at her."
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air tasted of rust, wet earth, and something else, a metallic tang that set her teeth on edge."
1"Uniformed officers moved with that careful, ponderous gait they reserved for locations that made them uneasy."
2"Her brown eyes missed nothing: the way the flickering witch-light in the sconces threw long, dancing shadows, the anxious glances the remaining Market denizens …"
3"Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been sniffing around Eva’s kind—the bookish, fringe-dwelling researchers who knew too much about things they shouldn’t—three yea…"
4"Faint, heatless phosphorescence glowed from symbols that seemed to squirm if she stared too long."
5"Quinn turned her back on the shimmering, impossible crime scene, her boots echoing on the wet concrete."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva said, her voice small"
1"Quinn repeated, her voice devoid of inflection"
2"Quinn said, not unkindly"
3"Quinn said, her voice low"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
1"She rose her knees protesting (protest)"
2"Eva breathed (breathe)"
3"Eva whispered (whisper)"
4"Quinn continued (continue)"
5"Eva protested weakly (protest)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.364
75.7018%