Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF6Y1DTSNYMSG74ZBV8TQH

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1m 44s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was a cocktail of damp earth, rust, and something else, something electric and wrong that made the fine hairs on Detective Harlow Quinn’s arms stand up. Her boots echoed with a hollow, military precision on the cracked tile of the disused platform, a sound that felt too loud, too intrusive for this sepulchral place. Flickering emergency lights cast long, dancing shadows that seemed to twitch with a life of their own, their source a mystery in the absolute dark beyond the platform’s edge. This was the Veil Market, or at least, where it had been last night. The body lay near a grimy tiled wall once adorned with vintage advertisements now faded to spectral whispers. A man, late fifties, well-dressed in a cashmere coat that was now ruined. The cause of death was obvious, grotesque: a vicious wound to the throat. The initial reports had called it an animal attack, a mugging gone horrifically wrong in this lawless place. But Quinn’s sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes missing nothing. Animals didn’t leave their victims’ wallets full of cash. “Grisly,” a voice said from behind a bank of rusted turnstiles. Eva Kowalski emerged, her freckled face pale in the sickly light. She nervously tucked a curl of her vibrant red hair behind her ear, her round glasses reflecting the gloom. Her worn leather satchel, bulging with books, was slung across her body like a shield. “The constables said you’d want to see it before they moved him.” “They were right,” Quinn said, her voice clipped. She didn’t take her eyes off the scene. “What are you doing down here, Eva? The British Museum’s restricted archives are a long way from Camden.” “I heard the call on the scanner. The location… I thought you might need a consultant.” Eva’s gaze was fixed not on the body, but on the space around it. She was scanning the walls, the floor, the very air, as if reading an invisible text. Quinn grunted, unconvinced. She knelt by the body, the worn leather of her watch strap pressing against her skin. The forensics team had done their initial work, their chalk outlines and evidence markers looking absurdly mundane in the eldritch setting. The lack of blood spatter was the first thing that snagged in her mind. A wound like that should have painted the tiles. Here, there was only a thick, congealing pool directly under the man’s neck, as if the blood had been… contained. “Mugging, they’re saying,” Quinn stated, more to herself than to Eva. “It would seem so,” Eva replied, though her tone was hesitant. She pointed a finger at the victim’s outstretched hand. “His watch is gone. A nice one, by the look of the tan line. And his signet ring.” Quinn had seen it. It was the obvious conclusion. But the obvious felt like a poorly constructed lie. She shifted her weight, her focus narrowing. The victim’s other hand was curled into a loose fist against his chest. Gently, she pried the cold fingers open. Resting on his palm was a small, circular object. A compass. Its brass casing was aged with a soft green patina, and its face was etched with intricate, swirling symbols that made Quinn’s head ache slightly to look at. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It was spinning in a slow, lazy circle, unaffected by the movement of her hand. “A compass?” Quinn frowned, holding it up. “What kind of mugger takes a watch and leaves a antique?” “Perhaps it’s not valuable to… conventional thieves,” Eva said softly. She took a step closer, her green eyes wide behind her glasses. “May I?” Quinn handed it over. Eva’s hands, usually fluttering and nervous, were suddenly steady and reverent. She cupped the compass, her thumb tracing the etched sigils. “Verdigris. And these markings… they’re protective. Old. This isn’t an antique, Harlow. This is a tool. A Veil Compass.” The name meant nothing to Quinn, but the reverence in Eva’s voice sent a fresh chill down her spine. “A tool for what?” “It doesn’t point north. It points toward the nearest source of intense supernatural energy. A rift. A portal. Things that shouldn’t be open.” Eva looked from the compass to the victim’s terrified, frozen expression. “He wasn’t just down here to buy something. He was down here looking for a way out. Or running from something that came in.” The pieces began to shift, rearranging themselves into a new, darker picture. Quinn stood up, her gaze sweeping the scene again. The missing spatter. The taken watch and ring, a perfect red herring. The compass, left behind because it was useless to anyone who didn’t know what it was, or worse, because the killer knew exactly what it was and its presence would muddy the waters. “This wasn’t a mugging,” Quinn said, the certainty solidifying in her gut. “This was a hunt. They took the valuables to make it look like one.” She pointed to the clean tiles around the body. “There’s no struggle. No defensive wounds. He was killed quickly, efficiently. The wound is messy, but the act was clean. Professional. And the blood… it’s all right here. As if it all came out at once and just… stopped.” Eva was nodding, her earlier nervousness replaced by a grim focus. The researcher in her was fully engaged now. “Something that can control blood. Or consume it. Not an animal. Something that understands human patterns enough to stage a crime scene.” Quinn’s mind raced, three years of unexplained grief for her partner, DS Morris, roaring to the surface. His case file, forever open on her desk, was full of similar oddities – evidence that didn’t add up, scenes that felt staged, a sense of a reality fraying at the edges. She had always suspected there was a layer she couldn’t see. Now, Eva was giving her the lexicon for it. She looked at the spinning needle of the compass Eva still held. It was no longer making full circles. It was shuddering, twitching, slowly coming to rest. It pointed past the body, past the platform, into the profound darkness of the tunnel. “It’s not pointing at the body,” Quinn observed, her voice low. “No,” Eva whispered, her knuckles white where she gripped the compass. “The energy here… it’s a residue. The source is that way.” Quinn followed the line of the needle into the blackness. The animal attack theory was a comforting blanket the world wanted to pull over its head to keep out the monsters. But Harlow Quinn had stopped believing in comfort a long time ago. She saw it now, what everyone else had trained themselves to miss. The perfect, logical setup. The one piece of evidence that didn’t fit the narrative, left behind not by she said to Eva, her voice leaving no room for argument. “Tell them to seal the entire tunnel network. No one comes in or out. And tell them the initial assessment is wrong.” “What should I tell them it is?” Eva asked, her voice barely a breath. Quinn took a step toward the tunnel, the beam of her torch trembling ever so slightly. “Tell them we don’t know yet. But we’re not looking for a mugger.” The darkness ahead seemed to swallow the light, and for a moment, Quinn could have sworn she heard a sound from its depths—a soft, wet rustle, like something shifting in the absolute black. The compass in Eva’s hand began to spin again, faster this time, frantic. The wrong thing was still here. And it was waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
64.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"quickly"
count1
7
adverb"slowly"
count1
8
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"very"
2"gently"
3"slightly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"quickly"
7"slowly"
8"ever so slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"spectral"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count2
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"roaring"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"profound"
count1
18
word"comforting"
count1
19
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"echoed"
2"dancing"
3"spectral"
4"gloom"
5"scanning"
6"constructed"
7"weight"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"tracing"
11"chill"
12"down her spine"
13"perfect"
14"raced"
15"roaring"
16"sense of"
17"profound"
18"comforting"
19"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
51.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount956
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow2
Quinn18
Veil1
Market1
Eva15
Kowalski1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.559
windowScore0.667
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shadows that seemed to twitch with a life of their own, their source a mystery in the absolute dark beyond the platform’s edge"
1"as if reading an invisible text"
2"felt like a poorly constructed lie"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.789
wordCount1267
matches
0"not on the body, but on the space around it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean48.73
std26.63
cv0.546
sampleLengths
0104
182
268
334
446
583
611
738
845
959
1018
1124
1244
1323
1458
1566
1674
1741
1869
1942
2011
2122
22106
2314
2429
2556
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"was curled"
1"was aged"
2"was etched"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was scanning"
1"wasn’t pointing"
2"was spinning"
3"was nodding"
4"was giving"
5"was shuddering"
6"was waiting"
80.06% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences91
ratio0.022
matches
0"His case file, forever open on her desk, was full of similar oddities – evidence that didn’t add up, scenes that felt staged, a sense of a reality fraying at the edges."
1"The darkness ahead seemed to swallow the light, and for a moment, Quinn could have sworn she heard a sound from its depths—a soft, wet rustle, like something shifting in the absolute black."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount962
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.0395010395010395
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.017671517671517672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean13.92
std8.24
cv0.592
sampleLengths
033
128
229
314
418
513
613
718
811
99
1011
1111
1219
1315
1412
158
168
1718
1830
1916
203
2116
2221
2314
249
2519
261
2711
2811
299
3018
314
325
339
347
3513
367
379
382
3928
405
4115
427
4311
4410
4512
462
474
4811
4910
46.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3516483516483517
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners32
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Gently, she pried the cold"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her boots echoed with a"
1"She nervously tucked a curl"
2"Her worn leather satchel, bulging"
3"She didn’t take her eyes"
4"She was scanning the walls,"
5"She knelt by the body,"
6"She pointed a finger at"
7"It was the obvious conclusion."
8"She shifted her weight, her"
9"Its brass casing was aged"
10"It was spinning in a"
11"She took a step closer,"
12"She cupped the compass, her"
13"She pointed to the clean"
14"His case file, forever open"
15"She had always suspected there"
16"She looked at the spinning"
17"It was no longer making"
18"It was shuddering, twitching, slowly"
19"It pointed past the body,"
ratio0.276
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences76
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Her boots echoed with a"
2"This was the Veil Market,"
3"The body lay near a"
4"A man, late fifties, well-dressed"
5"The cause of death was"
6"The initial reports had called"
7"Animals didn’t leave their"
8"a voice said from behind"
9"Eva Kowalski emerged, her freckled"
10"She nervously tucked a curl"
11"Her worn leather satchel, bulging"
12"Quinn said, her voice clipped"
13"She didn’t take her eyes"
14"Eva’s gaze was fixed not"
15"She was scanning the walls,"
16"Quinn grunted, unconvinced."
17"She knelt by the body,"
18"The forensics team had done"
19"The lack of blood spatter"
ratio0.895
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Now, Eva was giving her"
ratio0.013
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Her boots echoed with a hollow, military precision on the cracked tile of the disused platform, a sound that felt too loud, too intrusive for this sepulchral pl…"
1"Flickering emergency lights cast long, dancing shadows that seemed to twitch with a life of their own, their source a mystery in the absolute dark beyond the pl…"
2"A man, late fifties, well-dressed in a cashmere coat that was now ruined."
3"She was scanning the walls, the floor, the very air, as if reading an invisible text."
4"The lack of blood spatter was the first thing that snagged in her mind."
5"The compass, left behind because it was useless to anyone who didn’t know what it was, or worse, because the killer knew exactly what it was and its presence wo…"
6"His case file, forever open on her desk, was full of similar oddities – evidence that didn’t add up, scenes that felt staged, a sense of a reality fraying at th…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice clipped"
1"Quinn stated, more to herself than to Eva"
2"Eva replied, though her tone was hesitant"
3"Quinn said, the certainty solidifying in her gut"
4"Quinn observed, her voice low"
5"Eva whispered, her knuckles white where she gripped the compass"
6"Eva asked, her voice barely a breath"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Quinn observed (observe)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.231
70.5105%