Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF7END6MZMWZMR6T5CFGM7

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Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.001887
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of damp concrete and something metallic—blood, maybe, or the lingering tang of old magic. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her worn leather watch as she descended the crumbling stairs, her boots echoing against the cracked tiles. The flickering emergency lights cast long shadows that seemed to move just beyond her peripheral vision. At the bottom of the stairs, a uniformed officer stood guard beside a rusted turnstile, his face pale under the sickly yellow glow. He nodded at her. "Detective. Scene's just past the old ticket booth." Quinn didn't waste words. She stepped past him, her sharp jaw set, military precision in every movement. The air grew thicker as she moved deeper into the station, the scent of ozone prickling at the back of her throat. The crime scene was cordoned off near what had once been a platform. The body lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs twisted at unnatural angles. A man, mid-thirties, his throat slit clean. But it wasn’t the wound that made Quinn pause—it was the way the blood pooled in perfect, concentric circles around him, as if drawn by an invisible hand. Eva Kowalski stood near the edge of the platform, her round glasses reflecting the dim light as she scribbled notes in a battered notebook. Her curly red hair was tucked nervously behind one ear, her freckled face tight with concentration. She looked up as Quinn approached. "You're late," Eva said, though there was no real accusation in it. "Traffic," Quinn lied. She crouched beside the body, examining the blood patterns. "What do we know?" Eva adjusted her satchel, the worn leather creaking. "Johnathan Mercer. Antiquities dealer. No known enemies, but he had a reputation for dealing in... unusual artifacts." She hesitated. "The blood isn’t behaving normally." Quinn’s fingers hovered over one of the circles. "You think it’s staged?" "No. I think it’s *spelled*." Eva’s voice dropped. "This wasn’t just a murder. Someone was sending a message." Quinn frowned. She’d seen enough crime scenes to know when something was off, but this—this was something else. The blood wasn’t just pooling; it was *moving*, ever so slightly, like liquid caught in a slow current. She pulled back, wiping her fingers against her slacks. "Who called it in?" "A vendor from the market," Eva said. "Anonymous tip. Said they heard a scream." Quinn’s gaze flicked to the shadows beyond the platform. The Veil Market was supposed to be empty by now—its stalls packed up, its vendors gone until the next full moon. But something lingered here. A presence. A weight. She stood, scanning the tracks. "Where’s his bag?" Eva blinked. "What?" "Dealer like this doesn’t walk around without something to sell or trade." Quinn stepped over the tracks, her boots crunching on broken glass. "So where is it?" Eva followed, her satchel bouncing against her hip. "Maybe the killer took it." "Maybe." Quinn’s eyes caught on a glint of brass near the third rail. She knelt, pulling a small object from the grime—a compass, its casing tarnished with verdigris. The face was etched with strange symbols, the needle spinning lazily before settling at a point just past the body. Eva sucked in a breath. "That’s a Veil Compass." Quinn turned it over in her palm. The metal was warm. "What’s it do?" "Points to supernatural rifts. Portals." Eva’s voice was tight. "If Mercer had this on him..." "Then someone didn’t just kill him for his artifacts." Quinn’s pulse kicked up. "They killed him for what he *knew*." A noise echoed from the tunnel—a whisper of movement, too deliberate to be rats. Quinn’s hand went to her sidearm. Eva stiffened beside her. "You hear that?" Quinn murmured. Eva nodded, her fingers tightening around her notebook. "We’re not alone." The shadows at the far end of the platform shifted. A figure stepped into the dim light—tall, hooded, face obscured. The air around them *warped*, like heat rising off pavement. Quinn leveled her gun. "Metropolitan Police. Identify yourself." The figure didn’t speak. They raised a hand, and the blood at their feet *rippled*, responding to some unseen command. Eva grabbed Quinn’s arm. "We need to go. *Now.*" Quinn didn’t argue. She pocketed the compass and backed toward the stairs, her grip steady on her weapon. The figure didn’t follow. They just stood there, watching, as the blood pooled into new, impossible shapes. By the time they reached the surface, Quinn’s mind was already racing. The evidence didn’t add up. The blood. The missing bag. The compass. And most of all—the way the shadows had *moved*. She turned to Eva. "Tell me everything you know about that market." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear, her green eyes wide. "It’s not just a place, Quinn. It’s a *door*." Quinn’s watch ticked loudly in the silence. She had the unsettling feeling that something had just slipped through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"ever so slightly"
2"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount820
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"perfect"
2"flicked"
3"weight"
4"scanning"
5"glint"
6"etched"
7"pulse"
8"echoed"
9"whisper"
10"racing"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords8
totalWords811
ratio0.01
matches
0"spelled"
1"moving"
2"knew"
3"warped"
4"rippled"
5"Now."
6"moved"
7"door"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
3.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount647
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Kowalski1
Veil1
Market1
Eva14
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.032
windowScore0.167
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seemed to move just beyond her peripheral vision"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount811
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean22.53
std15.11
cv0.671
sampleLengths
058
135
239
360
446
512
616
732
812
918
1045
114
1214
1338
148
153
1627
1713
1848
199
2014
2115
2220
2324
245
2511
2630
278
2820
299
3035
3124
329
3312
3420
3518
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"was cordoned"
1"was tucked"
2"was supposed"
3"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences90
ratio0.1
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of damp concrete and something metallic—blood, maybe, or the lingering tang of old magic."
1"But it wasn’t the wound that made Quinn pause—it was the way the blood pooled in perfect, concentric circles around him, as if drawn by an invisible hand."
2"She’d seen enough crime scenes to know when something was off, but this—this was something else."
3"The blood wasn’t just pooling; it was *moving*, ever so slightly, like liquid caught in a slow current."
4"The Veil Market was supposed to be empty by now—its stalls packed up, its vendors gone until the next full moon."
5"She knelt, pulling a small object from the grime—a compass, its casing tarnished with verdigris."
6"A noise echoed from the tunnel—a whisper of movement, too deliberate to be rats."
7"A figure stepped into the dim light—tall, hooded, face obscured."
8"And most of all—the way the shadows had *moved*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount656
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.0350609756097561
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009146341463414634
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean9.01
std6.18
cv0.686
sampleLengths
021
121
216
323
44
58
64
713
822
913
1012
117
1228
1324
1416
156
1612
173
189
194
208
2119
225
238
244
258
2610
272
2816
2918
309
314
327
337
349
3521
364
372
382
395
403
412
421
4323
444
458
465
4713
4815
4920
53.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences60
matches
0"He nodded at her."
1"She stepped past him, her"
2"Her curly red hair was"
3"She looked up as Quinn"
4"She crouched beside the body,"
5"She’d seen enough crime scenes"
6"She pulled back, wiping her"
7"She stood, scanning the tracks."
8"She knelt, pulling a small"
9"They raised a hand, and"
10"She pocketed the compass and"
11"They just stood there, watching,"
12"She turned to Eva."
13"She had the unsettling feeling"
ratio0.233
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences60
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
2"The flickering emergency lights cast"
3"He nodded at her."
4"Quinn didn't waste words."
5"She stepped past him, her"
6"The air grew thicker as"
7"The crime scene was cordoned"
8"The body lay sprawled across"
9"A man, mid-thirties, his throat"
10"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
11"Her curly red hair was"
12"She looked up as Quinn"
13"Eva said, though there was"
14"She crouched beside the body,"
15"Eva adjusted her satchel, the"
16"Quinn’s fingers hovered over one"
17"Eva’s voice dropped"
18"She’d seen enough crime scenes"
19"The blood wasn’t just pooling;"
ratio0.917
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"By the time they reached"
ratio0.017
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The flickering emergency lights cast long shadows that seemed to move just beyond her peripheral vision."
1"But it wasn’t the wound that made Quinn pause—it was the way the blood pooled in perfect, concentric circles around him, as if drawn by an invisible hand."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn stepped, her boots crunching on broken glass"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn lied (lie)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
78.3362%