Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF7JM6VZAM91E9ZGW1F5Z6

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Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.001160
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The moment Aurora stepped through the Veil, her skin erupted in goosebumps. Not from cold—the air here was warm, heavy with the scent of ripe fruit and honeyed wine—but from the sheer wrongness of it all. The amber sky stretched overhead, not a single cloud disrupting its glassy surface, casting everything in perpetual golden hour light. "This way," Nyx murmured, their voice like wind through dead leaves. Their shadowy form flickered as they led the group forward. Isolde moved soundlessly beside Rory, her silver hair catching the strange light. It shimmered, not quite solid, as if part of her still lingered in the Fae realm. "The earth remembers those who walk upon it," she said quietly. "Here, it remembers hungry teeth." Rory flexed her fingers against the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip, the metal unnaturally cool against her palm. The path before them twisted like a serpent—polished cobblestones laid in patterns that made her eyes water if she looked too long. The deeper they went, the stranger Dymas became. Trees groaned under the weight of fruits she'd never seen before—globes of pale blue flesh, swollen dark plums with veins of gold—their branches dipping low as if offering themselves. The air was sticky-sweet, cloying, making her tongue feel thick. Then came the whispers. Rory stiffened. At first, she thought it was just the wind rustling through the impossible orchards. But no—the sound had rhythm, cadence, murmurs slipping between languages she didn't know. Nyx stilled. "Don't acknowledge them." Too late. She turned her head, just slightly. Beneath the gnarled roots of a tree with bark like stretched skin, a figure crouched. At least, it had been a figure once. Now its limbs warped unnaturally long, fingers fused together into flipper-like appendages. Its mouth stretched in a permanent, lipless grin, needle teeth clicking as it whispered an invitation—or a warning—in the voice of a child. Rory's stomach lurched. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed, warmth flaring against her collarbone. Isolde stepped between them. "Keep walking." They passed deeper into the orchard, where the trees crowded closer together, roots tangled like sleeping serpents. Moss-covered statues loomed between the trunks—some humanoid, others monstrous amalgamations. All with their mouths open, tongues carved in mid-lick. Something crunched under Rory's boot. She looked down. Bones. Small ones, delicate as a bird's. Scattered among them were half-chewed pits, still glistening with saliva. Ahead, the path opened into a clearing. A banquet table stretched as far as she could see, piled high with dishes that steamed despite the warmth. Whole roasted beasts with glazed hides, towers of sugared pastries, goblets overflowing with wine dark as blood. The smell hit her like a fist—rich, fatty, overwhelming. Her mouth watered violently even as her mind recoiled. The chairs were all empty. "Is this a trap?" Rory whispered. Nyx's shadowed head tilted. "More of an invitation." As if summoned, a sound echoed from the trees—a wet, rhythmic thumping. A figure lurched into view, dragging something heavy behind it. A man—or what had been one—his body grotesquely distended, stretched skin straining over his swollen belly. His left arm had elongated into a boneless tendril, gripping the hind leg of a creature Rory didn't want to identify. His eyes, milky with cataracts, fixed on them. "'More for the feast?" he wheezed, lips cracking as they split into a smile. The Heartstone flared hot against Rory's skin. Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying just enough to block the man's advance. "We're just passing through." The man's laugh turned into a wet cough. "No one just passes through." Isolde caught Rory's wrist, her grip cool. "We shouldn't stay." But the trees behind them rustled. More figures slunk from the shadows—some nearly human, others barely recognizable. All watching. All hungry. Nyx exhaled a sound like distant thunder. "Run." They ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.167
92.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount655
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount655
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"disrupting"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"lurched"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"disrupting"
1"flickered"
2"shimmered"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"lurched"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
8"loomed"
9"glistening"
10"echoed"
11"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords636
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount591
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Veil1
Rory9
Fae2
Fae-forged1
Dymas1
Heartstone2
Nyx5
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Dymas"
3"Heartstone"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Veil"
1"Fae"
globalScore0.739
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite solid, as if part of her still lingered in the Fae realm"
1"as if offering themselves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount636
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean24.46
std19.99
cv0.817
sampleLengths
056
121
244
343
447
54
629
75
88
958
1015
116
1236
1325
1461
155
166
178
1867
1914
2024
2113
2210
2321
248
252
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs100
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences67
ratio0.149
matches
0"Not from cold—the air here was warm, heavy with the scent of ripe fruit and honeyed wine—but from the sheer wrongness of it all."
1"The path before them twisted like a serpent—polished cobblestones laid in patterns that made her eyes water if she looked too long."
2"Trees groaned under the weight of fruits she'd never seen before—globes of pale blue flesh, swollen dark plums with veins of gold—their branches dipping low as if offering themselves."
3"But no—the sound had rhythm, cadence, murmurs slipping between languages she didn't know."
4"Its mouth stretched in a permanent, lipless grin, needle teeth clicking as it whispered an invitation—or a warning—in the voice of a child."
5"Moss-covered statues loomed between the trunks—some humanoid, others monstrous amalgamations."
6"The smell hit her like a fist—rich, fatty, overwhelming."
7"As if summoned, a sound echoed from the trees—a wet, rhythmic thumping."
8"A man—or what had been one—his body grotesquely distended, stretched skin straining over his swollen belly."
9"More figures slunk from the shadows—some nearly human, others barely recognizable."
99.14% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount610
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.040983606557377046
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01639344262295082
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean9.49
std6.41
cv0.675
sampleLengths
012
124
220
311
410
512
616
711
85
921
1022
118
1229
1310
144
152
1614
1713
182
193
202
216
2215
238
2412
2523
263
2712
284
292
3017
3110
329
335
343
351
366
3710
387
3919
4017
419
429
435
446
454
464
4712
4810
4916
88.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5671641791044776
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"Then came the whispers."
1"At least, it had been"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences51
matches
0"Their shadowy form flickered as"
1"It shimmered, not quite solid,"
2"she said quietly"
3"She turned her head, just"
4"Its mouth stretched in a"
5"They passed deeper into the"
6"She looked down."
7"Her mouth watered violently even"
8"His left arm had elongated"
9"His eyes, milky with cataracts,"
10"he wheezed, lips cracking as"
ratio0.216
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences51
matches
0"The moment Aurora stepped through"
1"The amber sky stretched overhead,"
2"Nyx murmured, their voice like"
3"Their shadowy form flickered as"
4"Isolde moved soundlessly beside Rory,"
5"It shimmered, not quite solid,"
6"she said quietly"
7"Rory flexed her fingers against"
8"The path before them twisted"
9"The deeper they went, the"
10"Trees groaned under the weight"
11"The air was sticky-sweet, cloying,"
12"She turned her head, just"
13"Its mouth stretched in a"
14"Rory's stomach lurched."
15"The Heartstone pendant at her"
16"Isolde stepped between them."
17"They passed deeper into the"
18"Something crunched under Rory's boot."
19"She looked down."
ratio0.686
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"Now its limbs warped unnaturally"
1"As if summoned, a sound"
ratio0.039
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Trees groaned under the weight of fruits she'd never seen before—globes of pale blue flesh, swollen dark plums with veins of gold—their branches dipping low as …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he wheezed, lips cracking as they split into a smile"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"he wheezed (wheeze)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.5
81.8103%