| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 92.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 655 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 655 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "disrupting" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "lurched" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 636 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 591 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Fae | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Dymas" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.739 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite solid, as if part of her still lingered in the Fae realm" | | 1 | "as if offering themselves" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 636 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 24.46 | | std | 19.99 | | cv | 0.817 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.149 | | matches | | 0 | "Not from cold—the air here was warm, heavy with the scent of ripe fruit and honeyed wine—but from the sheer wrongness of it all." | | 1 | "The path before them twisted like a serpent—polished cobblestones laid in patterns that made her eyes water if she looked too long." | | 2 | "Trees groaned under the weight of fruits she'd never seen before—globes of pale blue flesh, swollen dark plums with veins of gold—their branches dipping low as if offering themselves." | | 3 | "But no—the sound had rhythm, cadence, murmurs slipping between languages she didn't know." | | 4 | "Its mouth stretched in a permanent, lipless grin, needle teeth clicking as it whispered an invitation—or a warning—in the voice of a child." | | 5 | "Moss-covered statues loomed between the trunks—some humanoid, others monstrous amalgamations." | | 6 | "The smell hit her like a fist—rich, fatty, overwhelming." | | 7 | "As if summoned, a sound echoed from the trees—a wet, rhythmic thumping." | | 8 | "A man—or what had been one—his body grotesquely distended, stretched skin straining over his swollen belly." | | 9 | "More figures slunk from the shadows—some nearly human, others barely recognizable." |
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| 99.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 610 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.040983606557377046 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01639344262295082 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 9.49 | | std | 6.41 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 88.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5671641791044776 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the whispers." | | 1 | "At least, it had been" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Their shadowy form flickered as" | | 1 | "It shimmered, not quite solid," | | 2 | "she said quietly" | | 3 | "She turned her head, just" | | 4 | "Its mouth stretched in a" | | 5 | "They passed deeper into the" | | 6 | "She looked down." | | 7 | "Her mouth watered violently even" | | 8 | "His left arm had elongated" | | 9 | "His eyes, milky with cataracts," | | 10 | "he wheezed, lips cracking as" |
| | ratio | 0.216 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment Aurora stepped through" | | 1 | "The amber sky stretched overhead," | | 2 | "Nyx murmured, their voice like" | | 3 | "Their shadowy form flickered as" | | 4 | "Isolde moved soundlessly beside Rory," | | 5 | "It shimmered, not quite solid," | | 6 | "she said quietly" | | 7 | "Rory flexed her fingers against" | | 8 | "The path before them twisted" | | 9 | "The deeper they went, the" | | 10 | "Trees groaned under the weight" | | 11 | "The air was sticky-sweet, cloying," | | 12 | "She turned her head, just" | | 13 | "Its mouth stretched in a" | | 14 | "Rory's stomach lurched." | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 16 | "Isolde stepped between them." | | 17 | "They passed deeper into the" | | 18 | "Something crunched under Rory's boot." | | 19 | "She looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.686 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Now its limbs warped unnaturally" | | 1 | "As if summoned, a sound" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees groaned under the weight of fruits she'd never seen before—globes of pale blue flesh, swollen dark plums with veins of gold—their branches dipping low as …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he wheezed, lips cracking as they split into a smile" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he wheezed (wheeze)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |