Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF810E9RMB6V5G2B79YY75

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Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The flickering fluorescent lights of the abandoned Camden Tube station cast everything in a sickly green pallor. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully over the debris-strewn platform, her leather-soled shoes silent on the cracked tiles. The air hung thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and coppery that made her nose wrinkle. "Quinn," called DS Patel from the far end of the platform, his voice echoing off the curved walls. "You're going to want to see this." She moved toward him, noting the way he stood slightly apart from the others, his posture rigid with professional restraint. Patel had been with the Met for fifteen years, seen his share of bodies, but something about this scene had rattled him. The victim lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs akimbo in a way that spoke of violence rather than accident. At first glance, it appeared to be a standard junkie overdose—the track marks on the arms, the dilated pupils, the pallor of death already settling in. But Quinn's eyes narrowed as she took in the details that didn't fit. The man's clothes were too clean for someone living rough. His shoes—Italian leather, barely scuffed—spoke of money and care. And those marks on his arms weren't just needle tracks. They formed patterns, deliberate and arcane. "Corner shop owner found him at 0600," Patel said, keeping his voice low. "Called it in immediately. No ID on the body, but I ran the face through facial recognition. Our John Doe is Marcus Reeves, 34, investment banker from Kensington. Lives alone, no criminal record, married with two kids." Quinn crouched beside the body, ignoring the warning prickle at the back of her neck. Three years ago, she'd learned to trust that sensation. It had saved her life more than once since Morris died. "Patel," she said, not looking up, "call the museum. Ask for Dr. Eva Kowalski. Tell her we have a body with occult markings and I need her expertise. Now." Her colleague's eyebrows shot up. "The museum? You think this is—" "I think this is exactly what it looks like," Quinn interrupted, her fingers hovering over the intricate patterns on Reeves' inner arm. "And I think we're about to have company we didn't invite." She stood, brushing dust from her trousers, and surveyed the scene with fresh eyes. The station's decay told its own story—graffiti layered upon graffiti, the remnants of old advertisements peeling from the curved walls, the tracks themselves rusted and unused for decades. But there, near the edge of the platform, something caught her attention. A small brass object, no larger than a fifty-pence piece, lay half-hidden beneath a discarded newspaper. Quinn picked it up carefully, turning it over in her gloved hands. A compass, but not like any she'd seen before. Its face was etched with symbols that made her head ache to look at them directly, and the needle spun lazily, never quite settling on north. "Found something?" Patel asked, joining her. Quinn held up the compass. "Ever seen one of these before?" He leaned in, squinting at the strange device. "Can't say that I have. Looks old." "It's not just old," Quinn said, her voice tight. "It's active. Whatever killed Reeves, this was involved." The sound of footsteps on the stairs leading down to the platform made them both turn. A woman emerged from the shadows, curly red hair escaping from a messy bun, round glasses perched on her freckled nose. She carried a worn leather satchel slung across her body, and her green eyes took in the scene with professional interest. "Dr. Kowalski," Quinn said, stepping forward to meet her. "Thank you for coming so quickly." Eva Kowalski nodded, her gaze already moving past Quinn to the body on the tracks. "Detective Quinn. DS Patel." She offered a brief nod to each before approaching the victim. "I got your message. Occult markings, you said?" "And more," Quinn replied, following her. "Dr. Kowalski, meet Marcus Reeves. Investment banker, apparently. But I don't think money was what brought him here." Kowalski crouched beside the body, her movements precise and careful. She opened her satchel and withdrew a small notebook and pen, already making observations. "These aren't just markings," she murmured, tracing one of the patterns on Reeves' arm without touching the skin. "This is a ritual circle, compressed and tattooed. Someone turned his body into a conduit." "For what?" Patel asked, his skepticism evident. "For power," Kowalski said, standing and turning to face them. "The kind that leaves traces. Detective, where did you find this?" She gestured to the compass in Quinn's hand. "Near the body," Quinn replied. "It was under some rubbish. I think it fell from his pocket." Kowalski's eyes widened slightly. "That's not good." "Why?" Quinn pressed. "What is it?" "It's a Veil Compass," Kowalski said, her voice dropping. "They're attuned to supernatural energy, specifically to rifts and portals. If this was in his possession, then Reeves wasn't just involved in something occult—he was actively seeking it out." The prickling sensation at the back of Quinn's neck intensified. "The Veil Market," she said, the pieces beginning to click into place. "It moves locations, doesn't it? Follows the full moon?" Kowalski nodded. "It does. And the next full moon is tonight." Patel swore under his breath. "You're saying there's a black market for this kind of thing? Right under our noses?" "Worse," Quinn said, her mind racing. "I'm saying Reeves was a customer. And whatever he bought, it killed him." She turned to her colleague, her expression grim. "Patel, I want this station locked down. No one comes in or out without my authorization. Kowalski—" "I'm coming with you," the researcher said, already moving toward the stairs. "If there's a connection to the Veil Market, I need to see it for myself. There are patterns, Detective, cycles to these things. I can help you understand what we're dealing with." Quinn hesitated only a moment before nodding. "Fine. But stay close and do exactly as I say. This isn't like your museum archives, Dr. Kowalski." "Believe me," Kowalski replied, her green eyes fierce behind her glasses, "I understand the difference between academic research and field work. But sometimes, Detective, the lines blur in ways that matter." As they ascended the stairs back to street level, Quinn's phone buzzed with an incoming text. She glanced at the screen, her jaw tightening. "What is it?" Kowalski asked, noting the change in her demeanor. "Forensics just sent over Reeves' phone records," Quinn said, pocketing the device without replying. "In the weeks before his death, he made repeated calls to a number that belongs to a closed psychiatric facility in Hampstead. A facility where my former partner, DS Morris, was committed three years ago." The silence that followed was heavy with unspoken implications. Kowalski's expression softened with understanding, but she said nothing, simply falling into step beside Quinn as they emerged onto the Camden street. The detective paused, looking back at the entrance to the abandoned station. Somewhere in the city, hidden from ordinary eyes, the Veil Market was preparing to open. And she had a feeling that Marcus Reeves was just the beginning. "We need to move quickly," Quinn said, checking her watch—a worn leather piece that had belonged to Morris. "The market won't stay in one place for long, and if Reeves was killed for what he knew or what he bought, then whoever did it might already be there, waiting." Kowalski adjusted her satchel, a determined set to her jaw. "Then we'd better not keep them waiting, Detective. After all, some knowledge is worth killing for. The question is—are we prepared for what we might find?" Quinn didn't answer immediately. Instead, she started walking, her mind already cataloging the resources she'd need, the protocols she'd have to break, the shadows she'd have to step into. Morris had died chasing answers to questions like these. She'd be damned if she'd let his death remain meaningless. "Just remember, Dr. Kowalski," she said finally, her voice hard as the London streets beneath their feet, "in this world, knowledge isn't just power. It's currency, it's weapon, and sometimes, it's poison. And I need to know—are you prepared to pay the price?" The red-haired researcher met her gaze steadily, unflinching. "Detective Quinn, some of us have been paying that price our whole lives. Now, let's go see what the Veil Market has to offer. I have a feeling we're going to need everything we can get."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.04
75.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"lazily"
3"quickly"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
1"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1429
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"standard"
2"intricate"
3"etched"
4"footsteps"
5"tracing"
6"racing"
7"silence"
8"unspoken"
9"determined"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1415
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount832
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.52
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Patel6
Met1
Italian1
Morris3
Eva1
Kowalski10
Veil1
Market1
Marcus1
Reeves1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Patel"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Marcus"
7"Reeves"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
globalScore0.238
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1415
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"trust that sensation"
1"feeling that Marcus"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.44
std16.17
cv0.514
sampleLengths
055
125
242
358
435
550
635
729
811
933
1054
1163
126
1311
1415
1517
1658
1715
1838
1924
2057
217
2229
2317
247
256
2638
2731
2811
2920
3019
3125
3244
3325
3431
3524
3611
3749
3831
3939
4049
4136
4248
4343
4444
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was preparing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences100
ratio0.05
matches
0"The air hung thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and coppery that made her nose wrinkle."
1"At first glance, it appeared to be a standard junkie overdose—the track marks on the arms, the dilated pupils, the pallor of death already settling in."
2"His shoes—Italian leather, barely scuffed—spoke of money and care."
3"The station's decay told its own story—graffiti layered upon graffiti, the remnants of old advertisements peeling from the curved walls, the tracks themselves rusted and unused for decades."
4"\"We need to move quickly,\" Quinn said, checking her watch—a worn leather piece that had belonged to Morris."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount852
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03403755868544601
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.01643192488262911
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean14.15
std8.52
cv0.602
sampleLengths
017
117
221
318
47
520
622
719
826
913
1010
119
1210
136
1413
1537
1615
179
1811
1929
205
216
2222
2311
2414
2528
2612
2716
2812
299
3026
316
325
336
348
357
369
378
3816
3921
4021
419
426
4315
4415
458
466
4718
4810
4914
75.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners47
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Somewhere in the city, hidden"
1"Instead, she started walking, her"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences71
matches
0"She moved toward him, noting"
1"His shoes—Italian leather, barely scuffed—spoke"
2"They formed patterns, deliberate and"
3"It had saved her life"
4"she said, not looking up"
5"Her colleague's eyebrows shot up."
6"She stood, brushing dust from"
7"Its face was etched with"
8"He leaned in, squinting at"
9"She carried a worn leather"
10"She offered a brief nod"
11"She opened her satchel and"
12"she murmured, tracing one of"
13"She gestured to the compass"
14"she said, the pieces beginning"
15"She turned to her colleague,"
16"She glanced at the screen,"
17"She'd be damned if she'd"
18"she said finally, her voice"
ratio0.268
30.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences71
matches
0"The flickering fluorescent lights of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped carefully"
2"The air hung thick with"
3"She moved toward him, noting"
4"Patel had been with the"
5"The victim lay sprawled across"
6"The man's clothes were too"
7"His shoes—Italian leather, barely scuffed—spoke"
8"They formed patterns, deliberate and"
9"Patel said, keeping his voice"
10"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
11"It had saved her life"
12"she said, not looking up"
13"Her colleague's eyebrows shot up."
14"Quinn interrupted, her fingers hovering"
15"She stood, brushing dust from"
16"The station's decay told its"
17"A small brass object, no"
18"Quinn picked it up carefully,"
19"A compass, but not like"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air hung thick with the smell of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and coppery that made her nose wrinkle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"called DS Patel from the far end of the platform, his voice echoing off the curved walls"
1"she said, not looking up,"
2"Quinn said, her voice tight"
3"Patel asked, his skepticism evident"
4"Kowalski said, her voice dropping"
5"Quinn said, her mind racing"
6"Kowalski replied, her green eyes fierce behind her glasses,"
7"she said finally, her voice hard as the London streets beneath their feet,"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.12
78.5612%