Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF83KNT22K2Z42D3M6BKDE

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Duration:
1m 55s
Cost:
$0.001545
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was a thick, cold soup that tasted of wet stone, rust, and something else, something metallic and coppery that Harlow Quinn knew all too well. Her polished boots echoed with a hollow finality against the grimy tiles, the sound swallowed by the oppressive darkness of the tunnel mouth behind her. The crime scene techs had set up their halogen lamps, and the stark white light they cast felt blasphemous here, illuminating a world that was never meant to be seen so clearly. The body lay near the edge of the platform, a man in a dark overcoat, face down. The initial call had been vague, an anonymous tip about a ‘disturbance’. It hadn’t mentioned the two puncture wounds on the side of his neck, neat and precise, from which a minimal amount of blood had seeped. It hadn’t mentioned the utter lack of a struggle. Quinn crouched, her knees protesting with a familiar ache. She didn’t need to check for a pulse. The unnatural stillness of the form told her everything. She pulled a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket, the snap of the latex loud in the hushed space. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her wrist, a grounding metronome against the bizarre scene. “Took you long enough, Quinn.” The voice came from the shadows near an old ticket booth, layered with a wry weariness that belonged to DS Miller. He stepped into the light, his own face looking sallow under the harsh lamps. He’d been on the scene for twenty minutes already. “Traffic above is a nightmare. Camden on a Saturday,” Quinn replied, her voice low and even. Her eyes never left the body. “What have we got?” “John Doe. No wallet, no phone. Looks like a mugging gone wrong. Throat’s a mess,” Miller said, gesturing vaguely with his chin. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. She leaned in closer, ignoring the stench of death that was beginning to mingle with the damp. “A mess?” she repeated, her tone flat. “These aren’t jagged. They’re surgical. And look at the placement. Jugular and carotid. This wasn’t panic. This was… efficient.” Miller sighed, the sound heavy with condescension. “Come on, Harlow. This place? It’s a dosshouse, a shooting gallery. Some junkie got lucky with a shiv, got scared, and ran. It’s not one of your conspiracy theories.” He’d been her partner for a year, a solid, by-the-book copper who thought her instincts were a relic of a traumatic past. He didn’t say Morris’s name, but he didn’t have to. His ghost was always there, a third presence at any scene that felt even slightly off. Quinn ignored him, her focus absolute. She noted the way the man’s coat was bunched slightly under one arm, as if he’d been reaching for something. His hands were clean, the nails trimmed. This wasn’t a man who lived on the streets. She shifted her weight, and her boot scuffed against something half-hidden in the grime near the body’s outstretched hand. It was a small, circular object. She picked it up, brushing off the dirt. A bone token, carved with intricate, swirling patterns. It felt unnervingly warm in her gloved palm. A ticket. An entry requirement. Her mind raced, colliding the evidence. The precise wounds. The missing valuables, staged to look like a theft. The location, an abandoned station perfect for hiding more than just homeless sleepers. “This wasn’t a mugging, Miller,” she said, her voice dropping to a near-whisper. She held up the token. “He was lured here. Or he came here to meet someone. This is a message. A professional job made to look sloppy.” Before Miller could offer another dismissive retort, a new voice, freckled complexion pale with shock, and large, round glasses that magnified her wide, green eyes. She clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. Quinn recognized her instantly from the file she’d been compiling on the periphery of this new, strange world she was stumbling into. Eva Kowalski. Researcher. Friend to people who dabbled in things best left alone. “Miss Kowalski?” Quinn stood, her bearing straightening with military precision. “This is a crime scene. You shouldn’t be here.” “I… I know him,” Eva stammered, her gaze fixed on the body before flicking away, horrified. She tucked a strand of that vibrant red hair behind her left ear, a nervous, repeated gesture. “His name is Alistair Finch. He’s a… a collector. We were supposed to meet here tonight. To make a trade.” Miller snorted softly, but Quinn held up a hand, silencing him. She kept her eyes on Eva. “A trade. Here. What were you trading, Miss Kowalski?” Eva’s grip on her satchel tightened. She looked from Quinn’s intense, unblinking gaze to Miller’s skeptical sneer, and then down at the bone token Quinn still held. Something in her expression shifted from fear to a desperate resolve. “Knowledge,” she said, her voice gaining a sliver of strength. “He was scared. He said he’d stumbled onto something he shouldn’t have. He had something to show me, something he’d bought here last full moon. He said it was acting strangely.” Quinn’s mind, a trap primed for inconsistencies, snapped shut on a detail. “Last full moon. This market… it moves. You need one of these to get in.” She jiggled the token. Eva nodded, a quick, jerky motion. “Yes. He was paranoid. He wanted to give it back, to trade it for my research, for protection. He said it was pointing somewhere new. Somewhere wrong.” Quinn’s blood ran cold. *Pointing*. She looked from the token in her hand to the body on the ground, then back to Eva’s terrified face. The staged mugging. The professional kill. The token left behind, not taken. It wasn’t a message to the police. It was a message to *them*. To the people who knew about the market, about the things that moved in the shadows. A warning. *This is what happens to those who talk.* Miller was staring at both of them as if they’d started speaking in tongues. “A market? What are you two on about? It’s a dead junkie in a tunnel.” But Quinn was no longer listening to him. She was seeing the scene anew, through a different lens. The lack of a struggle wasn’t because the victim was surprised by a desperate addict. It was because he’d known his killer. Or because his killer was something he never had a chance to fight. The ‘shiv’ wounds were too clean, too deep, made by something far sharper and crueler than a piece of scrap metal. “What was it, Eva?” Quinn asked, her voice barely a breath. “What was he trying to give back?” Eva hugged her satchel tighter, her knuckles white. She looked like a child who had seen a monster and knew no one would believe her. “A compass,” she whispered. “A small brass compass. He said the needle didn’t point north anymore.” The pieces locked into place with an almost audible click in Quinn’s mind. Morris’s case, three years ago. Unexplained circumstances. Evidence that had been dismissed, details that hadn’t added up. A strange symbol found near his body, similar to the ones she’d seen etched on curios in evidence lockers she was never supposed to access. This wasn’t just a murder. It was a thread, pulled from the same dark tapestry that had taken her partner. And the woman standing before her, shaking in her sensible shoes, held the other end. Quinn looked down at Alistair Finch, at the two precise wounds on his neck. A professional job. A silencing. Her eyes lifted, scanning the darkness beyond the halogen lights, into the depths of the tunnel where the rules of her eighteen years on the force ceased to apply. She wasn’t just a detective at a crime scene anymore. She was an outsider stumbling into a war she hadn’t known was being fought, and the first shot had just been fired right in front of her. The evidence didn’t add up because she’d been reading it wrong. She hadn’t known the language. Now, she was starting to learn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1362
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"efficient"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"tapestry"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"oppressive"
2"stark"
3"familiar"
4"pulse"
5"efficient"
6"weight"
7"intricate"
8"raced"
9"perfect"
10"whisper"
11"resolve"
12"etched"
13"tapestry"
14"scanning"
15"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happens to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1358
ratio0.007
matches
0"Pointing"
1"them"
2"This is what happens to those who talk."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1069
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Miller7
Morris2
Kowalski1
Eva7
Alistair1
Finch1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Alistair"
7"Finch"
places(empty)
globalScore0.752
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a child who had seen a monste"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1358
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean45.27
std22.98
cv0.508
sampleLengths
090
163
262
35
444
526
622
747
836
948
1061
1166
1240
1372
1419
1553
1626
1738
1841
1931
2033
2176
2229
2374
2418
2541
2655
2735
28101
296
91.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"was bunched"
1"was surprised"
2"been dismissed"
3"being fought"
4"been fired"
12.73% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was stumbling"
2"was staring"
3"was seeing"
4"was starting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1094
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03016453382084095
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009140767824497258
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12.13
std7.65
cv0.631
sampleLengths
033
125
232
317
412
525
69
79
88
99
1020
1116
125
1321
1414
159
1616
176
184
1922
204
2117
227
2319
247
2529
2622
2710
2816
296
3020
317
329
3319
346
358
368
378
382
393
406
413
429
4313
4413
455
4622
4725
4812
4922
41.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.32142857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences90
matches
0"Her polished boots echoed with"
1"It hadn’t mentioned the two"
2"It hadn’t mentioned the utter"
3"She didn’t need to check"
4"She pulled a pair of"
5"Her worn leather watch ticked"
6"He stepped into the light,"
7"He’d been on the scene"
8"Her eyes never left the"
9"She leaned in closer, ignoring"
10"she repeated, her tone flat"
11"He’d been her partner for"
12"He didn’t say Morris’s name,"
13"His ghost was always there,"
14"She noted the way the"
15"His hands were clean, the"
16"She shifted her weight, and"
17"It was a small, circular"
18"She picked it up, brushing"
19"It felt unnervingly warm in"
ratio0.444
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences90
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Her polished boots echoed with"
2"The crime scene techs had"
3"The body lay near the"
4"The initial call had been"
5"It hadn’t mentioned the two"
6"It hadn’t mentioned the utter"
7"Quinn crouched, her knees protesting"
8"She didn’t need to check"
9"The unnatural stillness of the"
10"She pulled a pair of"
11"Her worn leather watch ticked"
12"The voice came from the"
13"He stepped into the light,"
14"He’d been on the scene"
15"Quinn replied, her voice low"
16"Her eyes never left the"
17"Miller said, gesturing vaguely with"
18"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened."
19"She leaned in closer, ignoring"
ratio0.933
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Before Miller could offer another"
1"To the people who knew"
2"Now, she was starting to"
ratio0.033
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was a thick, cold soup that tasted of wet stone, rust, and something else, something metallic and coppery that Harl…"
1"The crime scene techs had set up their halogen lamps, and the stark white light they cast felt blasphemous here, illuminating a world that was never meant to be…"
2"The voice came from the shadows near an old ticket booth, layered with a wry weariness that belonged to DS Miller."
3"He’d been her partner for a year, a solid, by-the-book copper who thought her instincts were a relic of a traumatic past."
4"Before Miller could offer another dismissive retort, a new voice, freckled complexion pale with shock, and large, round glasses that magnified her wide, green e…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn replied, her voice low and even"
1"she repeated, her tone flat"
2"she said, her voice dropping to a near-whisper"
3"Quinn stood, her bearing straightening with military precision"
4"she said, her voice gaining a sliver of strength"
5"Quinn asked, her voice barely a breath"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva stammered (stammer)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.261
74.8251%