Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNF99KM1TYBEE23D97WH58N

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory finished taping up the latest box of Eva’s research papers. Three sharp raps, followed by a pause, then two more. A pattern she knew as well as her own heartbeat. Her fingers stilled against the cardboard edge. Ptolemy arched his back beside her knee, tufted tail flicking against her calf. Three more knocks. She exhaled through her nose and crossed the cluttered flat, stepping over stacks of ancient tomes Eva had somehow smuggled out of the British Library. The deadbolts clicked open one after another, each turn of the key sending an ache through her wrist—that old scar from the bicycle spill at age nine, the one Evan had traced with his thumb the night before everything went wrong. The door swung inward. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle clinging to his shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back, hands resting on the ivory handle of his cane. That infuriating half-smile playing at his lips. "You look like hell," he said in that smooth Marseille accent. Rory leaned against the doorframe. "And you look like you walked out of a bad film noir. What do you want?" Ptolemy wound between her ankles, sniffing at the damp hem of Lucien’s trousers. The demon’s mismatched eyes—amber and void—flicked downward. "Did Eva acquire a familiar, or is this your doing?" "He’s a cat, Luc. Not a spell component." She made to shut the door. The cane shot out, wedging in the jamb. "I need your help." The quiet urgency in his voice stopped her. Lucien never asked for anything outright—he bartered, manipulated, negotiated. This was new terrain. Rain dripped from the overhang above, plinking against the metal railing. Somewhere below, the curry house’s lunch rush sent up a waft of cumin and chilies through the stairwell. Rory exhaled. "You’ve got five minutes." His fingers flexed around the cane as she stepped aside. Ptolemy led the procession into the flat, tail held high like a standard. Lucien took in the chaos—the boxes, the scrolls cascading off the dining table, the mug of tea gone cold beside Eva’s laptop. "Moving out?" "Tidying up. Eva’s in Cairo chasing down some lead about—" Rory caught herself. "Not that it’s your business." He set his cane against the sofa—the casual disarmament of a man making a show of trust—and shrugged out of his coat. The movement pulled his shirt taut across his shoulders. Rory turned abruptly toward the kitchenette. "Tea?" she asked, more to occupy her hands than anything. "If you're offering." The kettle hissed as she refilled it. Behind her, Lucien picked through Eva’s notes with two fingers, careful not to disturb the order. Rory knew that look—the slight furrow between his brows, the way his thumb tapped against his thigh. He was working up to something. "You said you needed help," she prompted. "I did." He turned a page. "There’s a book"— She scoffed. "There’s always a book with you." "—that was stolen from my vault three nights ago." The kettle clicked off. Rory poured steaming water over the tea leaves, watching them unfurl in the current. "What makes you think I had anything to do with it?" "I don’t." Lucien set down the papers. "But the thief left this." A playing card slid across the counter toward her—the Queen of Hearts, with a single drop of blood smeared across the queen’s cheek. Rory’s fingertips grazed the edge. Evan’s calling card. "I see," she said carefully. Lucien’s voice dropped. "He’s back in London, Rory." The sound of her name in his mouth sent an unwelcome jolt through her. She pushed the mug toward him, the porcelain clinking louder than necessary. "I’m not getting involved in your demonic pissing contests." "That’s not what this is." "Then what is it?" Lucien caught her wrist as she turned away. His thumb found the crescent scar. Rory froze. For all his careful affectations, his hands were warm. Human-warm. "Your witch friend is digging in places she shouldn’t," he said quietly. "And Evan knows it." A drop of tea slid down the side of the mug, pooling on the counter. Ptolemy leaped up to investigate, tail twitching. "He’s after her research?" Rory tried to pull free, but Lucien held firm. "After her," he corrected. "Just like he came after you." The memory hit like a blow—Evan’s hand around her arm, his breath against her neck as he hissed about loyalty. The way Lucien had appeared in the alley that night, blade drawn from his cane before she could blink. Two months ago. Two months since she’d last seen Lucien. Since she told him to stay away. "You’re not playing fair," she murmured. His thumb stroked her pulse point. "I never do." The flat suddenly felt too small, the air thick with the scent of bergamot and old paper and whatever cologne Lucien favored—something dark and resinous, like frankincense burning. Rory pulled her hand away. "I’ll talk to Eva. But we do this my way. No demons, no deals." Lucien inclined his head. Ptolemy knocked the Queen of Hearts onto the floor. "One more thing," he said, fishing an envelope from his breast pocket. "You left this at my place." Her fingers trembled slightly as she took it. Inside, the train ticket to Cardiff—the one she’d bought the morning after Evan’s arrest, intending to run home to her parents. She’d thought she lost it. Lucien swirled his tea. "I’d have cashed it in, but the expiry date was generous." "You kept it all this time." The corner of his mouth lifted. "Sentimentality is a demon’s worst vice." Rain pattered against the window. Somewhere on Brick Lane, a car horn blasted. Rory slid the envelope into her back pocket. "Your five minutes are up." But neither of them moved toward the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.37% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said carefully [carefully]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.105
84.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount985
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"standard"
count1
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"porcelain"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"flicked"
2"familiar"
3"standard"
4"cascading"
5"porcelain"
6"pulse"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords970
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount760
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Eva4
British1
Library1
Evan4
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien14
Queen2
Hearts2
Cardiff1
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Marseille"
3"Queen"
4"Cardiff"
5"Brick"
6"Lane"
globalScore0.579
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount970
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean17.02
std11.95
cv0.702
sampleLengths
036
123
266
34
437
511
621
720
810
914
1012
1121
1229
136
1423
1524
1618
1737
1810
193
2046
217
229
238
249
2529
2612
2723
288
295
308
3126
329
335
344
3516
3610
3716
3822
3913
4010
4139
4217
436
449
4528
4619
4713
4818
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was working"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences105
ratio0.105
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked open one after another, each turn of the key sending an ache through her wrist—that old scar from the bicycle spill at age nine, the one Evan had traced with his thumb the night before everything went wrong."
1"The demon’s mismatched eyes—amber and void—flicked downward."
2"Lucien never asked for anything outright—he bartered, manipulated, negotiated."
3"Lucien took in the chaos—the boxes, the scrolls cascading off the dining table, the mug of tea gone cold beside Eva’s laptop."
4"He set his cane against the sofa—the casual disarmament of a man making a show of trust—and shrugged out of his coat."
5"Rory knew that look—the slight furrow between his brows, the way his thumb tapped against his thigh."
6"\"There’s a book\"—"
7"A playing card slid across the counter toward her—the Queen of Hearts, with a single drop of blood smeared across the queen’s cheek."
8"The memory hit like a blow—Evan’s hand around her arm, his breath against her neck as he hissed about loyalty."
9"The flat suddenly felt too small, the air thick with the scent of bergamot and old paper and whatever cologne Lucien favored—something dark and resinous, like frankincense burning."
10"Inside, the train ticket to Cardiff—the one she’d bought the morning after Evan’s arrest, intending to run home to her parents."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount767
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03129074315514994
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00651890482398957
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.24
std6.37
cv0.689
sampleLengths
016
110
210
37
413
53
625
741
84
917
1013
117
1211
135
1416
1513
167
1710
1814
198
204
218
229
234
2411
2518
262
274
2810
2913
3022
312
3213
335
3422
359
366
3710
383
397
4016
4117
426
437
446
453
462
476
489
494
60.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.38095238095238093
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners40
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house’s"
1"Somewhere on Brick Lane, a"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences74
matches
0"Her fingers stilled against the"
1"She exhaled through her nose"
2"he said in that smooth"
3"She made to shut the"
4"His fingers flexed around the"
5"He set his cane against"
6"she asked, more to occupy"
7"He was working up to"
8"He turned a page"
9"she said carefully"
10"She pushed the mug toward"
11"His thumb found the crescent"
12"he said quietly"
13"His thumb stroked her pulse"
14"he said, fishing an envelope"
15"Her fingers trembled slightly as"
16"She’d thought she lost it."
ratio0.23
34.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences74
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"A pattern she knew as"
2"Her fingers stilled against the"
3"Ptolemy arched his back beside"
4"She exhaled through her nose"
5"The deadbolts clicked open one"
6"The door swung inward."
7"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
8"Platinum hair slicked back, hands"
9"That infuriating half-smile playing at"
10"he said in that smooth"
11"Rory leaned against the doorframe."
12"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
13"The demon’s mismatched eyes—amber and"
14"She made to shut the"
15"The cane shot out, wedging"
16"The quiet urgency in his"
17"Lucien never asked for anything"
18"This was new terrain."
19"Rain dripped from the overhang"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.105
85.7983%