Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFA65SQM6HNSMJ05CFF8VB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.199980

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora's breath misted in the December air as she followed the narrow deer path through Richmond Park. The Heartstone pendant burned against her chest, its warmth intensifying with each step. Beside her, Nyx flowed between the shadows cast by bare oak branches, their form rippling like smoke on water. "The standing stones should be just ahead," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying the chill of empty spaces. "Can you feel it?" She could. The air itself seemed to thicken, pressing against her skin like silk. The pendant's pulse quickened, matching her heartbeat. Through the trees, she glimpsed them — ancient oaks arranged in a perfect circle, their trunks twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly. "Stop." Nyx solidified beside her, violet eyes narrowing. "Someone else is here." A figure emerged from between the stones, silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't exist at three in the afternoon. Isolde moved without disturbing the frost-brittle grass, her lavender eyes finding Aurora's with unsettling precision. "The one who carries the Heartstone arrives at last," Isolde said, her words dancing around meaning like moths around flame. "Though whether too late or perfectly timed remains unwritten." Aurora's hand went instinctively to the pendant. "You know about this?" "Knowledge flows in many directions, child of two bloods." Isolde's smile revealed nothing. "The question you should ask is not what I know, but what you seek." "We need to reach Dymas," Aurora said. "The winter solstice is tomorrow, and if what Silas told me is true—" "Truths wear many faces when the Veil grows thin." Isolde beckoned them forward. "Come. The grove awaits, and time is both friend and foe today." They stepped between the standing stones, and the world shifted. The transition hit Aurora like diving into deep water. Her ears popped, her vision blurred, and for a moment she couldn't tell up from down. Then reality reasserted itself, and she gasped. The Grove defied winter. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors — blues that shimmered into purple, reds that bled into gold. The air tasted of honey and old magic. Above them, the sky rippled like disturbed water, showing glimpses of other skies — the amber warmth of Dymas, the pearl-gray of dawn, the star-drunk black of deep night. "Bloody hell," Aurora breathed. Nyx's form wavered, as if the Grove's magic disagreed with their nature. "This place exists between," they murmured. "I can feel the boundaries. Earth, Fae, even touches of Hel." Isolde moved ahead, her bare feet leaving no impression on the flower-thick ground. "The Grove remembers when such divisions meant less. Before the Veil, before the exile, before mortals forgot how to see." Aurora followed, trying not to stare at the impossible flora. A butterfly landed on her shoulder, its wings like stained glass, before dissolving into motes of light. The Heartstone's warmth spread through her chest, almost comforting now. "How long have you lived here?" she asked. "Time is a river that flows differently for each swimmer," Isolde replied. "I arrived yesterday. I have been here always. Both truths coexist." They reached the Grove's heart, where a spring bubbled up from nowhere, its water so clear it seemed like liquid air. Isolde knelt beside it, silver hair pooling around her. "The Heartstone seeks its origin," she said, not looking at Aurora. "Dymas calls to what was stolen from its vaults. But paths between realms require... consideration." "Consideration?" Aurora echoed. Isolde's reflection in the spring smiled, though Isolde herself did not. "The Veil weakens tomorrow, but tonight it still holds firm. To pierce it requires either great power or great sacrifice. You possess neither." "Then why—" "But you possess something else." Isolde stood in one fluid motion, turning to face them fully. "The Heartstone chose you. Not Brendan Carter's daughter, not Jennifer Ellis's child, but you. Aurora who thinks sideways, who fled rather than fought, who serves noodles by day and questions the nature of reality by night." The use of her parents' names sent ice through Aurora's veins. "How do you—" "I see many things, child." Isolde reached into the air and plucked something from nothing — a blade that caught light like moonbeams. "This may help where strength alone fails." Aurora took the offered dagger carefully. The Fae blade was cold enough to burn, its leaf-shaped edge humming with contained power. The moment her fingers closed around the hilt, she felt its hunger — a weapon that wanted to cut, to pierce, to divide. "Moonsilver," Nyx observed, keeping their distance. "Old magic. Dangerous magic." "All gifts from the Fae carry weight," Isolde agreed. "But tonight you will need dangerous things. The path to Dymas runs through shadow and appetite. Prince Belphegor's realm welcomes all hungers, but some guests never leave his table." Aurora secured the blade at her belt, its cold presence a counterpoint to the Heartstone's warmth. "We're not going there to feast." "No?" Isolde's laugh sounded like wind chimes made of glass. "Everyone who enters Dymas hungers for something. Power, knowledge, sensation, escape. The Prince sees all appetites and offers to fill them. What hunger drives Aurora Carter to seek the realm of Gluttony?" The question hung in the Grove's honeyed air. Aurora thought of Evan's messages still filling her phone, of the life she'd fled in Cardiff, of the strange new world opening before her. What did she hunger for? "Answers," she said finally. "And maybe the power to protect myself from things I'm only beginning to understand." "Honest appetite." Isolde nodded approvingly. "Better than false abstinence. The Grove will remember you said this." The seer moved to a cluster of standing stones arranged like a doorway. She pressed her palm against one twisted oak, and the air between them shivered. "This threshold will open when the moon rises," she said. "It will take you to the borderlands, where Earth's shadow meets Hel's light. From there, you must find your own way to Dymas. The Heartstone will guide, but beware — others hunt what you carry. The pendant's theft has not gone unnoticed." "Theft?" Aurora's hand went to her chest. "But it was given to me—" "Gifts and thefts often wear the same face, depending on where one stands." Isolde's lavender eyes grew distant. "The benefactor who placed it in your path had their own hungers. Whether they served your interests or their own remains to be seen." The Grove suddenly felt less welcoming. The impossible flowers seemed to lean closer, their colors too bright, their perfume too sweet. Aurora became aware of how the sky above them moved, showing glimpses of realms that shouldn't exist. "We should go," Nyx said quietly. "This place... it's beautiful, but beauty here has teeth." Isolde smiled at that. "The shadow-walker understands. Yes, the Grove is no sanctuary for mortals, even those the Heartstone has chosen. But sunset approaches, and you have preparations to make. The path to Dymas requires more than courage." She led them back toward the standing stones that marked the Grove's entrance. As they walked, Aurora noticed things she'd missed before — flowers with faces in their centers, trees that bled golden sap, mushroom circles that whispered in languages she almost understood. The Fae blade at her hip grew colder with each step, as if warning her away from looking too closely. "One last gift," Isolde said as they reached the threshold. She breathed on her palm, and when she opened it, three silver coins lay there. "Ferryman's toll. Even the paths between realms require payment." Aurora took the coins, their weight surprising for their size. "Thank you. But why help us?" "The Veil weakens, child. What comes through tomorrow's thinning may reshape both realms. I prefer the world shaped by choice rather than appetite alone." Isolde's expression grew serious, the first time Aurora had seen her drop her riddling manner. "And perhaps I grow tired of exile. Perhaps I hope that grateful mortals might speak kindly of me to those who matter." Before Aurora could respond, Isolde gestured to the standing stones. The world tilted again, that same sensation of falling upward, and then they stood in Richmond Park proper. The December cold bit immediately through Aurora's jacket. The Grove had vanished, leaving only a circle of ancient oaks that looked perfectly ordinary in the gray afternoon light. "Did that just happen?" Aurora asked, though the Fae blade's cold weight and the three coins in her pocket answered her question. "The shadow realms leave strange footprints in memory," Nyx replied, their form looking more solid and defined now that they'd returned to mortal earth. "But yes. It happened." Aurora checked her phone and swore. According to the timestamp, they'd been gone for three hours, though it had felt like thirty minutes at most. She had a dozen missed calls from Silas and twice that many texts. "Time moves differently there," she muttered, already heading back toward the path. "He's going to kill me." "If we're lucky," Nyx observed, flowing alongside her through the lengthening shadows, "Silas's anger will be the worst thing we face tonight." The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's chest, warm and insistent. Whatever they'd started by entering the Grove, there was no turning back now. Tomorrow the Veil would thin, and they would walk the paths between worlds to reach Dymas. Aurora touched the Fae blade's hilt and wondered what hungers would drive them forward when they did.
total_cost0.19998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"Isolde nodded approvingly [approvingly]"
2"Nyx said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.951
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.098
87.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1563
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"warmth"
count4
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"sanctuary"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"silk"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"perfect"
6"dancing"
7"shimmered"
8"wavered"
9"comforting"
10"echoed"
11"weight"
12"sanctuary"
13"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1564
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount941
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
December2
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone4
Nyx8
Aurora23
Isolde19
Grove8
Dymas2
Fae4
Evan1
Cardiff1
Silas1
Veil1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Grove"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Veil"
places
0"December"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.278
windowScore0.333
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like wind chimes made of glass"
1"as if warning her away from looking too closely"
2"felt like thirty minutes at most"
8.18% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.918
wordCount1564
matches
0"not what I know, but what you seek"
1"Not Brendan Carter's daughter, not Jennifer Ellis's child, but you"
2"not Jennifer Ellis's child, but you"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28.96
std15.12
cv0.522
sampleLengths
049
121
246
312
434
529
611
727
820
925
1010
1132
1259
134
1429
1533
1637
178
1823
1930
2026
213
2234
232
2452
2514
2630
2744
2810
2938
3022
3142
3237
3318
3416
3527
3652
3713
3842
3938
4015
4138
4263
4334
4416
4561
4656
4722
4828
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences117
ratio0.051
matches
0"Through the trees, she glimpsed them — ancient oaks arranged in a perfect circle, their trunks twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors — blues that shimmered into purple, reds that bled into gold."
2"Above them, the sky rippled like disturbed water, showing glimpses of other skies — the amber warmth of Dymas, the pearl-gray of dawn, the star-drunk black of deep night."
3"\"I see many things, child.\" Isolde reached into the air and plucked something from nothing — a blade that caught light like moonbeams."
4"The moment her fingers closed around the hilt, she felt its hunger — a weapon that wanted to cut, to pierce, to divide."
5"As they walked, Aurora noticed things she'd missed before — flowers with faces in their centers, trees that bled golden sap, mushroom circles that whispered in languages she almost understood."
96.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount947
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.044350580781414996
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013727560718057022
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean13.37
std8.07
cv0.604
sampleLengths
017
113
219
317
44
52
612
77
825
98
104
1119
1215
1320
149
157
164
1713
1814
197
2013
2113
2212
2310
249
2516
267
274
2818
298
3029
314
3212
336
3411
3513
3620
3710
3817
3910
408
4112
4211
4321
449
4511
4615
473
4811
4923
70.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners54
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Then reality reasserted itself, and"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences76
matches
0"They stepped between the standing"
1"Her ears popped, her vision"
2"They reached the Grove's heart,"
3"she said, not looking at"
4"she said finally"
5"She pressed her palm against"
6"She led them back toward"
7"She breathed on her palm,"
8"She had a dozen missed"
9"she muttered, already heading back"
ratio0.132
19.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences76
matches
0"Aurora's breath misted in the"
1"The Heartstone pendant burned against"
2"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying"
3"The air itself seemed to"
4"The pendant's pulse quickened, matching"
5"Nyx solidified beside her, violet"
6"A figure emerged from between"
7"Isolde moved without disturbing the"
8"Isolde said, her words dancing"
9"Aurora's hand went instinctively to"
10"Isolde's smile revealed nothing"
11"Isolde beckoned them forward"
12"They stepped between the standing"
13"The transition hit Aurora like"
14"Her ears popped, her vision"
15"The Grove defied winter."
16"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
17"The air tasted of honey"
18"Nyx's form wavered, as if"
19"Isolde moved ahead, her bare"
ratio0.882
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Before Aurora could respond, Isolde"
ratio0.013
14.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A figure emerged from between the stones, silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't exist at three in the afternoon."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors — blues that shimmered into purple, reds that bled into gold."
2"Nyx's form wavered, as if the Grove's magic disagreed with their nature."
3"Aurora became aware of how the sky above them moved, showing glimpses of realms that shouldn't exist."
4"She led them back toward the standing stones that marked the Grove's entrance."
5"As they walked, Aurora noticed things she'd missed before — flowers with faces in their centers, trees that bled golden sap, mushroom circles that whispered in …"
6"The Grove had vanished, leaving only a circle of ancient oaks that looked perfectly ordinary in the gray afternoon light."
73.28% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying the chill of empty spaces"
1"she said, not looking at Aurora"
2"Isolde stood, turning to face them fully"
18.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde's smile revealed (reveal)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
4"Nyx observed (observe)"
5"Isolde agreed (agree)"
6"she muttered (mutter)"
7"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.623
rawRatio0.421
effectiveRatio0.262
73.3845%