| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "Isolde nodded approvingly [approvingly]" | | 2 | "Nyx said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.475 | | leniency | 0.951 | | rawRatio | 0.103 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |
| 87.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1563 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "sanctuary" | | 13 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1564 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 78 | | wordCount | 941 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.44 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | December | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 23 | | Isolde | 19 | | Grove | 8 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "December" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.278 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like wind chimes made of glass" | | 1 | "as if warning her away from looking too closely" | | 2 | "felt like thirty minutes at most" |
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| 8.18% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.918 | | wordCount | 1564 | | matches | | 0 | "not what I know, but what you seek" | | 1 | "Not Brendan Carter's daughter, not Jennifer Ellis's child, but you" | | 2 | "not Jennifer Ellis's child, but you" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 28.96 | | std | 15.12 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 42 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 63 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 61 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Through the trees, she glimpsed them — ancient oaks arranged in a perfect circle, their trunks twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors — blues that shimmered into purple, reds that bled into gold." | | 2 | "Above them, the sky rippled like disturbed water, showing glimpses of other skies — the amber warmth of Dymas, the pearl-gray of dawn, the star-drunk black of deep night." | | 3 | "\"I see many things, child.\" Isolde reached into the air and plucked something from nothing — a blade that caught light like moonbeams." | | 4 | "The moment her fingers closed around the hilt, she felt its hunger — a weapon that wanted to cut, to pierce, to divide." | | 5 | "As they walked, Aurora noticed things she'd missed before — flowers with faces in their centers, trees that bled golden sap, mushroom circles that whispered in languages she almost understood." |
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| 96.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 947 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.044350580781414996 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013727560718057022 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 8.07 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 70.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.46153846153846156 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then reality reasserted itself, and" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "They stepped between the standing" | | 1 | "Her ears popped, her vision" | | 2 | "They reached the Grove's heart," | | 3 | "she said, not looking at" | | 4 | "she said finally" | | 5 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 6 | "She led them back toward" | | 7 | "She breathed on her palm," | | 8 | "She had a dozen missed" | | 9 | "she muttered, already heading back" |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 19.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's breath misted in the" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant burned against" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 4 | "The pendant's pulse quickened, matching" | | 5 | "Nyx solidified beside her, violet" | | 6 | "A figure emerged from between" | | 7 | "Isolde moved without disturbing the" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her words dancing" | | 9 | "Aurora's hand went instinctively to" | | 10 | "Isolde's smile revealed nothing" | | 11 | "Isolde beckoned them forward" | | 12 | "They stepped between the standing" | | 13 | "The transition hit Aurora like" | | 14 | "Her ears popped, her vision" | | 15 | "The Grove defied winter." | | 16 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 17 | "The air tasted of honey" | | 18 | "Nyx's form wavered, as if" | | 19 | "Isolde moved ahead, her bare" |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 65.79% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora could respond, Isolde" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 14.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "A figure emerged from between the stones, silver hair catching moonlight that shouldn't exist at three in the afternoon." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors — blues that shimmered into purple, reds that bled into gold." | | 2 | "Nyx's form wavered, as if the Grove's magic disagreed with their nature." | | 3 | "Aurora became aware of how the sky above them moved, showing glimpses of realms that shouldn't exist." | | 4 | "She led them back toward the standing stones that marked the Grove's entrance." | | 5 | "As they walked, Aurora noticed things she'd missed before — flowers with faces in their centers, trees that bled golden sap, mushroom circles that whispered in …" | | 6 | "The Grove had vanished, leaving only a circle of ancient oaks that looked perfectly ordinary in the gray afternoon light." |
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| 73.28% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying the chill of empty spaces" | | 1 | "she said, not looking at Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde stood, turning to face them fully" |
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| 18.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde's smile revealed (reveal)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 5 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 6 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 7 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.311 | | leniency | 0.623 | | rawRatio | 0.421 | | effectiveRatio | 0.262 | |