Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFA7F5RT8JCG9QVWZ38GWS

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Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.191910

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Aurora was wrestling with the temperamental lock on Eva's middle deadbolt. She froze, key halfway turned, pulse suddenly hammering against her ribs. Eva never knocked — she'd burst through her own door like a hurricane, usually mid-rant about whatever mystical catastrophe had befallen her day. "Eva?" Aurora called through the wood. "Did you forget your keys again?" Silence. Then, a voice she hadn't heard in three months: "It's me, Rory." Her hand slipped on the key. That accent — French silk over gravel, unmistakable even muffled by the door. She pressed her forehead against the wood, breathing through the sudden tightness in her chest. Of all the nights for Lucien Moreau to materialize on Eva's doorstep, it had to be when her flatmate was pulling an all-nighter at the British Library, leaving Aurora to feed Ptolemy and water the plants. "Eva's not here," she managed. "I know." A pause. "I came to see you." The words landed like stones in still water, ripples spreading through her. Aurora's fingers found the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old habit when anxious. Three months since that night at the docks. Three months since she'd watched him walk away, ivory-handled cane clicking against wet cobblestones, without looking back. "Rory." Softer now, almost careful. "Please." She turned the remaining locks with quick, angry movements. Better to get this over with. Whatever Lucien wanted — information, a favor, another one of his elaborate schemes — she'd hear him out and send him on his way. Simple. The door swung open, and simple evaporated like morning mist. He looked terrible. Oh, he was still devastatingly put-together in his charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back with mathematical precision. But shadows haunted the hollows beneath his cheekbones, and his heterochromatic eyes — amber and black, demon and human — held an exhaustion she'd never seen before. His left hand gripped his cane with white knuckles. "You look like hell," she said, because it was easier than saying any of the other words crowding her throat. His mouth quirked, not quite a smile. "Charming as always." His gaze traveled over her, taking in her delivery uniform, still damp from the evening rain. "Yu-Fei working you late again?" "Don't." She crossed her arms. "You don't get to show up here and make small talk. What do you want?" "May I come in?" "No." "Rory—" "No." She planted herself more firmly in the doorway. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed plaintively, probably hoping the visitor had brought food. "Whatever game you're playing, whatever angle you're working, I'm not interested. We agreed, Lucien. A clean break." "You agreed," he corrected, and there was something raw in his voice that made her stomach twist. "I simply... acquiesced." The word hung between them, weighted with everything they hadn't said three months ago. Aurora's fingers found her scar again. She remembered his hands — one warm, one fever-hot with his demon heritage — cradling her face in the rain. Remembered saying the words that sent him away: "I can't be another one of your assets, Luc. I won't." "Why are you here?" she asked again, quieter now. He shifted his weight, a tell she'd learned to read during their months of circling each other. Lucien Moreau, who could lie in four languages without blinking, who'd built an empire on secrets and strategic silences, was nervous. "There was an incident in Avaros," he said finally. "My father's realm. A coup attempt." Aurora's breath caught. Demon politics were brutal, often literally cutthroat. "Is he—?" "Alive. Diminished, but alive." Lucien's amber eye flashed, a glimpse of the inhuman fire that lived beneath his polished surface. "The usurper's forces are hunting half-breeds. Eliminating potential claims to power." The pieces clicked into place with sickening clarity. "They're coming for you." "They've already tried. Twice." He tilted his head, and she caught sight of a half-healed gash along his jawline, nearly hidden by his collar. "My usual safe houses are compromised. My contacts are being watched." "And you came here." Anger flared, hot and familiar. "To Eva's flat. You're putting her in danger—" "I came to you," he interrupted, taking a step closer. She could smell his cologne now, bergamot and smoke, could see the fine tremor in his cane hand. "Because despite everything, despite how we ended, you're the only person in London I trust to tell me the truth." The confession knocked the air from her lungs. In all their dealings — the careful dance of information and favors, the stolen moments between crises, the night everything fell apart — Lucien had never admitted to trusting anyone. "What truth?" she managed. His mismatched eyes held hers, amber and black, fire and void. "Whether I should keep running, or make my stand here." Ptolemy chose that moment to wind around Aurora's legs, purring like a tiny engine. The mundane gesture broke the spell, reminded her where they were: Eva's doorway, curry-scented air drifting up from the restaurant below, her life moving forward without him. Or trying to. "That's not my decision to make," she said. "Isn't it?" He leaned against the doorframe, a gesture that might have looked casual if she couldn't see the exhaustion pulling at his edges. "Three months ago, you told me I treat people like chess pieces. That I move them around my board without caring about the consequences." "You do." "Yes." No denial, no deflection. Just quiet acknowledgment. "But you were never a piece, Rory. You were—" He stopped, jaw tightening. "You are the board itself. The ground everything else moves across. Without you, the game doesn't exist." Her heart stuttered. In the distance, a siren wailed, very ordinary and very human. But here in Eva's doorway, with a half-demon fixer bleeding elegant metaphors into the space between them, the world felt paper-thin. "Pretty words," she said, voice not quite steady. "You always did have those." "Would ugly ones serve better? Fine." He straightened, and for a moment she saw past the polish to something raw and desperate. "I'm being hunted by demons who will peel me apart layer by layer to ensure my father's bloodline ends. I've spent three months telling myself I made the right choice in walking away. That keeping you clear of my world was worth—" He cut himself off, knuckles white on his cane. "I have perhaps days before they find me. And I'm here because I'm a selfish bastard who wants to spend whatever time remains near the only person who's ever looked at both sides of my heritage without flinching." The words hung in the curry-scented air like a challenge. Or a confession. Or both. Aurora felt the crescent scar beneath her fingertips, remembered the bike accident that caused it, the shock of pain and the dizzying realization that skin could split so easily. Lucien was offering her another kind of wound — the reopening of something barely healed. "The wards on Eva's flat are strong," she heard herself say. "Stronger than most safe houses." Something flickered in his eyes — hope, maybe, though he'd deny it. "Is that an invitation?" She stepped aside, decision made in the space between heartbeats. "It's a temporary arrangement. Until we figure out your demon problem." "Our?" He moved past her, careful not to touch. The absence of contact felt louder than collision. "I'm not letting you get Eva killed because you decided to darken her doorstep." Aurora closed the door, fingers moving automatically through the locks. "So yes. Our problem." When she turned, he was standing in the center of Eva's chaos, looking simultaneously out of place and perfectly at home among the towering books and mystical debris. Ptolemy had already claimed his left shoe, purring against the expensive leather. "For what it's worth," Lucien said quietly, "I tried to stay away." Aurora met his mismatched gaze across the cramped space. Three months of carefully rebuilt walls, and he'd demolished them with a knock and a handful of truths. "I know," she admitted, and watched something ease in his expression. "Tea?" His mouth curved, the first real smile since she'd opened the door. "Please. Though I doubt Eva keeps anything civilized." "There's builder's tea and whatever mystical concoction she's brewing in the blue pot. Your funeral if you choose wrong." "Given the circumstances, perhaps poor phrasing." But he followed her deeper into the flat, Ptolemy trailing behind like a devoted shadow. As Aurora filled the kettle, she felt the weight of Lucien's presence reshaping the space, filling corners that had learned his absence. Outside, London hummed its nighttime song — sirens and laughter, humanity and magic existing in uneasy parallel. Inside Eva's flat, two people who'd parted on complicated terms began the delicate work of existing in the same space again. The kettle whispered to life on the hob. Aurora reached for the everyday mugs, the ones without protective runes, and tried not to think about how easy it was to fall back into this rhythm. Tried not to notice how Lucien had positioned himself with clear sightlines to both door and window, even exhausted and trusting. "Rory," he said, and she could hear three months of distance in the way he shaped her name. "Tea first," she said. "Then we save your life. Then..." She turned to find him watching her with those impossible eyes, human warmth and demon fire. "Then we figure out what comes next." He inclined his head, accepting her terms as he'd accepted her non-invitation invitation — with grace and something that might have been gratitude. They had time, Aurora told herself. Whatever was hunting him, whatever had driven him to her door, they'd face it better together than apart. The kettle began to sing.
total_cost0.19191

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she asked again [again]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.092
84.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"potential"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"ensure"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"silk"
3"firmly"
4"stomach"
5"weight"
6"potential"
7"familiar"
8"dance"
9"ensure"
10"flickered"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1623
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"They had time, Aurora told herself."
94.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1172
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Eva7
Silence1
French1
Lucien9
Moreau2
British1
Library1
Ptolemy5
Anger1
London1
Three3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Anger"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"London"
3"Three"
globalScore0.945
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"not quite steady"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1623
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean27.05
std20.48
cv0.757
sampleLengths
050
112
213
370
45
59
652
76
840
910
1056
1120
1231
1320
144
151
161
1738
1820
1959
209
2138
2215
2312
2431
2512
2635
2717
2848
2938
304
3121
3244
338
3448
352
3638
3735
3813
39111
4015
4144
4216
4316
4421
4517
4628
4740
4812
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
34.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was wrestling"
1"was pulling"
2"was offering"
3"was standing"
4"was hunting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences130
ratio0.077
matches
0"Eva never knocked — she'd burst through her own door like a hurricane, usually mid-rant about whatever mystical catastrophe had befallen her day."
1"That accent — French silk over gravel, unmistakable even muffled by the door."
2"Whatever Lucien wanted — information, a favor, another one of his elaborate schemes — she'd hear him out and send him on his way."
3"But shadows haunted the hollows beneath his cheekbones, and his heterochromatic eyes — amber and black, demon and human — held an exhaustion she'd never seen before."
4"She remembered his hands — one warm, one fever-hot with his demon heritage — cradling her face in the rain."
5"In all their dealings — the careful dance of information and favors, the stolen moments between crises, the night everything fell apart — Lucien had never admitted to trusting anyone."
6"Lucien was offering her another kind of wound — the reopening of something barely healed."
7"Something flickered in his eyes — hope, maybe, though he'd deny it."
8"Outside, London hummed its nighttime song — sirens and laughter, humanity and magic existing in uneasy parallel."
9"He inclined his head, accepting her terms as he'd accepted her non-invitation invitation — with grace and something that might have been gratitude."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03592814371257485
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013686911890504704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.48
std8.68
cv0.695
sampleLengths
016
111
223
36
46
51
612
76
813
915
1036
115
124
135
1412
1515
168
1717
185
191
209
216
2224
231
2410
253
2617
2727
289
2920
307
3119
325
335
3415
354
361
371
389
3912
4017
4117
423
4314
446
4520
4619
479
4817
4921
74.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4846153846153846
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners63
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then, a voice she hadn't"
1"Just quiet acknowledgment."
ratio0.022
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences91
matches
0"She froze, key halfway turned,"
1"Her hand slipped on the"
2"She pressed her forehead against"
3"She turned the remaining locks"
4"He looked terrible."
5"His left hand gripped his"
6"she said, because it was"
7"His mouth quirked, not quite"
8"His gaze traveled over her,"
9"She crossed her arms"
10"She planted herself more firmly"
11"he corrected, and there was"
12"She remembered his hands —"
13"she asked again, quieter now"
14"He shifted his weight, a"
15"he said finally"
16"He tilted his head, and"
17"he interrupted, taking a step"
18"She could smell his cologne"
19"His mismatched eyes held hers,"
ratio0.385
91.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences91
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"She froze, key halfway turned,"
2"Eva never knocked — she'd"
3"Aurora called through the wood"
4"Her hand slipped on the"
5"That accent — French silk"
6"She pressed her forehead against"
7"The words landed like stones"
8"Aurora's fingers found the crescent"
9"She turned the remaining locks"
10"Whatever Lucien wanted — information,"
11"The door swung open, and"
12"He looked terrible."
13"His left hand gripped his"
14"she said, because it was"
15"His mouth quirked, not quite"
16"His gaze traveled over her,"
17"She crossed her arms"
18"She planted herself more firmly"
19"he corrected, and there was"
ratio0.736
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Lucien Moreau, who could lie in four languages without blinking, who'd built an empire on secrets and strategic silences, was nervous."
1"Aurora felt the crescent scar beneath her fingertips, remembered the bike accident that caused it, the shock of pain and the dizzying realization that skin coul…"
2"When she turned, he was standing in the center of Eva's chaos, looking simultaneously out of place and perfectly at home among the towering books and mystical d…"
3"As Aurora filled the kettle, she felt the weight of Lucien's presence reshaping the space, filling corners that had learned his absence."
4"Inside Eva's flat, two people who'd parted on complicated terms began the delicate work of existing in the same space again."
5"He inclined his head, accepting her terms as he'd accepted her non-invitation invitation — with grace and something that might have been gratitude."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stopped, jaw tightening"
1"Aurora closed, fingers moving automatically through the locks"
2"But he followed, Ptolemy trailing behind like a devoted shadow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"he interrupted (interrupt)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.369
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.092
82.4957%