Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFAC98N070FDJM32PBS5EX

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.001914
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air shifted as they stepped through the shimmering distortion. One moment, Aurora felt the crisp bite of the London evening on her skin; the next, a warm, amber glow enveloped her. The transition was seamless, like stepping through a curtain she hadn’t noticed was there. The air smelled faintly sweet, like ripe fruit and honey, but with an undercurrent of something darker—something rich and almost metallic. “Well,” Nyx said, their voice a whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once, “this is certainly... indulgent.” Aurora blinked, adjusting to the sudden change. The sky above wasn’t a sky at all—it looked like molten gold, swirling lazily in patterns that reminded her of caramel being stirred. The ground beneath her feet was soft, covered in a thick moss that pulsed faintly with a bioluminescent glow. It felt warm, almost alive. She glanced down at her boots, half expecting the moss to cling to them, but it didn’t. It seemed to part as she moved, as if it were aware of her presence. “Dymas,” Isolde murmured, her voice carrying a melodic echo. Her silver hair glinted in the amber light, and her lavender eyes scanned the horizon with a mixture of curiosity and wariness. “A realm of excess, of gluttony. Be mindful, Rory. Even the air here tempts.” Aurora reached up instinctively to touch the Heartstone pendant around her neck. It pulsed faintly against her skin, a steady warmth that grounded her. She could feel the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, its cold presence a stark contrast to the warmth of the moss underfoot. She took a deep breath, forcing herself to focus. The landscape stretched before them like a dreamscape. Towering trees with bark that shimmered like polished bronze rose in the distance, their leaves a kaleidoscope of colors—deep purples, vibrant oranges, and hues she didn’t have names for. Between the trees, paths of smooth, obsidian-like stone wound through the mossy ground, leading deeper into the grove. The air was alive with sound: the soft rustle of leaves, the distant rush of water, and a faint hum that seemed to emanate from the trees themselves. “Which way?” Aurora asked, her voice low. Isolde tilted her head, her expression unreadable. “The paths here are... fluid. They change depending on desire. But we must tread carefully. What you seek may not always lead you where you wish to go.” Nyx materialized beside Aurora, their shadowy form solidifying into a tall, humanoid shape. Their violet eyes glowed faintly, and their voice was quieter than usual. “This place feels... heavy. Like it’s watching us.” Aurora nodded, unease prickling at the edges of her thoughts. She turned to Isolde. “Do you sense anything? Any danger?” Isolde’s gaze remained fixed on the trees. “The grove is alive, Rory. It knows we are here. Whether it welcomes us or seeks to consume us remains to be seen.” Aurora clenched her jaw, her hand drifting to the hilt of her blade. “We don’t have much of a choice. We need to find Belphegor.” Isolde hummed softly, her footsteps leaving no trace on the mossy ground. “Then we move forward. But remember—here, temptation is a weapon.” They started down one of the obsidian paths, the moss parting silently beneath their feet. As they walked, the grove seemed to breathe around them, the trees shifting subtly, their leaves whispering secrets in a language Aurora couldn’t understand. The air grew warmer, thicker, laden with the scent of flowers and spilled wine. It was intoxicating, almost overwhelming. “Careful,” Nyx warned, their voice barely audible. “The air here... it’s not just air. It’s trying to influence you.” Aurora nodded, focusing on the pendant’s warmth against her chest. It pulsed steadily, a reminder of why she was here. She glanced back at Isolde, who walked with her usual ethereal grace, her silver hair shimmering like moonlight. Beyond her, Nyx drifted in and out of shadow, their form flickering as if the grove itself were trying to claim them. The path widened as they approached a clearing, and Aurora froze at the sight before her. The clearing was dominated by a massive fountain, its basin carved from what looked like translucent amber. The water that flowed from it shimmered like liquid gold, cascading down into the basin with a sound that was almost musical. Around the fountain, tables laden with food stretched as far as the eye could see—platters of fruit so ripe they seemed to glow, meats glistening with juices, pastries dusted with sugar that sparkled like diamonds. The sight was breathtaking, but it was the people—or rather, the beings—that made her stomach twist. Figures moved among the tables, their forms both human and grotesque. Some had elongated limbs, others too many eyes or mouths. They laughed and feasted with abandon, their voices a cacophony of delight and hunger. “Helbound souls,” Isolde said softly. “Those who indulged too deeply in life, now bound to serve as chefs and entertainers in Dymas. Do not speak to them. Do not accept anything they offer.” Aurora’s grip tightened on her blade as a figure noticed them—a tall, gaunt being with skin that shimmered like oil on water. Its mouth stretched into a grin too wide for its face, and it approached with a fluid, almost predatory grace. “Travelers,” it hissed, its voice dripping with delight. “Hungry? Thirsty? We have the finest offerings in all of Dymas.” Aurora shook her head, her voice firm. “No, thank you.” The creature’s grin widened, and it tilted its head at an unnatural angle. “Are you sure? The fruit is sweet, the wine is divine. One bite, one sip, and all your worries will melt away.” Aurora felt a pull, a sudden, overwhelming desire to taste the fruit, to drink the wine. She took a step forward, her hand reaching out almost against her will. The pendant at her chest pulsed sharply, the warmth turning to a searing heat that snapped her out of the trance. She stumbled back, her breath coming in short gasps. “No,” she said, her voice trembling. “We’re not here for that.” The creature’s grin faltered, and its eyes narrowed. “Pity,” it hissed before melting back into the crowd. Nyx’s form solidified beside her, their violet eyes glowing with concern. “Are you alright?” Aurora nodded, though her heart was still pounding. “I’m fine. Let’s keep moving.” They left the clearing behind, the path narrowing once more. The grove seemed darker here, the trees twisting into strange, almost sinister shapes. The air was cooler, the scent of honey and fruit replaced by something sharper, almost acrid. “We’re getting closer,” Isolde murmured. “I can feel him.” Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant again, its warmth steadying her. She glanced at Nyx, who nodded silently, their form flickering faintly. Together, they pressed on, deeper into the grove, where the amber sky darkened and the whispers of the trees grew louder.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.08
78.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"almost alive"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count5
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count3
10
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"desire"
count2
13
word"footsteps"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"cascading"
count1
16
word"glistening"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"cacophony"
count1
19
word"searing"
count1
20
word"pounding"
count1
21
word"sinister"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulsed"
2"almost alive"
3"echo"
4"scanned"
5"warmth"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"stark"
9"shimmered"
10"kaleidoscope"
11"unreadable"
12"desire"
13"footsteps"
14"reminder"
15"cascading"
16"glistening"
17"stomach"
18"cacophony"
19"searing"
20"pounding"
21"sinister"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"g with delight"
39.34% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount942
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
London1
Heartstone1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde8
Nyx6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.704
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"whisper that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"looked like molten gold, swirling lazily"
2"hum that seemed to emanate from the trees themselves"
3"looked like translucent amber"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1153
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.19
std23.2
cv0.624
sampleLengths
067
121
286
345
458
583
67
735
833
920
1030
1125
1222
1358
1419
1560
1690
1751
1833
1942
2019
2110
2235
2359
2411
2517
2614
2713
2839
299
3042
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was dominated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"were trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences85
ratio0.082
matches
0"One moment, Aurora felt the crisp bite of the London evening on her skin; the next, a warm, amber glow enveloped her."
1"The air smelled faintly sweet, like ripe fruit and honey, but with an undercurrent of something darker—something rich and almost metallic."
2"The sky above wasn’t a sky at all—it looked like molten gold, swirling lazily in patterns that reminded her of caramel being stirred."
3"Towering trees with bark that shimmered like polished bronze rose in the distance, their leaves a kaleidoscope of colors—deep purples, vibrant oranges, and hues she didn’t have names for."
4"Around the fountain, tables laden with food stretched as far as the eye could see—platters of fruit so ripe they seemed to glow, meats glistening with juices, pastries dusted with sugar that sparkled like diamonds."
5"The sight was breathtaking, but it was the people—or rather, the beings—that made her stomach twist."
6"Aurora’s grip tightened on her blade as a figure noticed them—a tall, gaunt being with skin that shimmered like oil on water."
92.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04842105263157895
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015789473684210527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.56
std6.99
cv0.515
sampleLengths
010
122
214
321
421
57
623
719
85
917
1015
119
1222
1314
1412
1512
1625
179
188
1929
2018
2128
227
237
2428
2513
2612
278
2810
294
306
317
3223
3313
3412
3512
3610
3715
3824
3914
405
417
4212
4310
4410
4518
4622
4716
4817
4922
63.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4235294117647059
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences68
matches
0"It felt warm, almost alive."
1"She glanced down at her"
2"It seemed to part as"
3"Her silver hair glinted in"
4"It pulsed faintly against her"
5"She could feel the weight"
6"She took a deep breath,"
7"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
8"She turned to Isolde."
9"They started down one of"
10"It was intoxicating, almost overwhelming."
11"It pulsed steadily, a reminder"
12"She glanced back at Isolde,"
13"They laughed and feasted with"
14"Its mouth stretched into a"
15"it hissed, its voice dripping"
16"She took a step forward,"
17"She stumbled back, her breath"
18"she said, her voice trembling"
19"it hissed before melting back"
ratio0.324
11.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences68
matches
0"The air shifted as they"
1"The transition was seamless, like"
2"The air smelled faintly sweet,"
3"Nyx said, their voice a"
4"Aurora blinked, adjusting to the"
5"The sky above wasn’t a"
6"The ground beneath her feet"
7"It felt warm, almost alive."
8"She glanced down at her"
9"It seemed to part as"
10"Isolde murmured, her voice carrying"
11"Her silver hair glinted in"
12"Aurora reached up instinctively to"
13"It pulsed faintly against her"
14"She could feel the weight"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"The landscape stretched before them"
17"The air was alive with"
18"Aurora asked, her voice low"
19"Isolde tilted her head, her"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The sky above wasn’t a sky at all—it looked like molten gold, swirling lazily in patterns that reminded her of caramel being stirred."
1"Towering trees with bark that shimmered like polished bronze rose in the distance, their leaves a kaleidoscope of colors—deep purples, vibrant oranges, and hues…"
2"The air was alive with sound: the soft rustle of leaves, the distant rush of water, and a faint hum that seemed to emanate from the trees themselves."
3"She glanced back at Isolde, who walked with her usual ethereal grace, her silver hair shimmering like moonlight."
4"Beyond her, Nyx drifted in and out of shadow, their form flickering as if the grove itself were trying to claim them."
5"The water that flowed from it shimmered like liquid gold, cascading down into the basin with a sound that was almost musical."
6"Around the fountain, tables laden with food stretched as far as the eye could see—platters of fruit so ripe they seemed to glow, meats glistening with juices, p…"
7"Aurora’s grip tightened on her blade as a figure noticed them—a tall, gaunt being with skin that shimmered like oil on water."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice carrying a melodic echo"
1"Aurora asked, her voice low"
2"Nyx warned, their voice barely audible"
3"it hissed, its voice dripping with delight"
4"she said, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"it hissed (hiss)"
3"it hissed (hiss)"
4"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.4
64.4395%