Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFAQ8JJ2ZR4NC08EYD0S73

Run Details

Duration:
5m 11s
Cost:
$0.001300
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock was soft, almost hesitant, which was why Rory didn’t immediately think of a food delivery or a courier. She was curled on Eva’s threadbare sofa, a heavy grimoire balanced on her knees, the scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house below seeping through the floorboards. Ptolemy, the tabby, was a warm, rumbling weight on her feet. The knock came again, a little firmer. Eva was out, chasing down a lead on some cursed Edwardian jewellery in Clerkenwell. Rory marked her page with a takeaway menu and padded to the door, her socks whispering on the worn laminate. She peered through the peephole, a habit ingrained from her old life, and her breath caught. Lucien Moreau filled the distorted fisheye lens, impeccably framed in the narrow hall. He was looking not at the door but down at his own hands, turning his ivory-handled cane slowly. Even through the distortion, the sharp cut of his charcoal suit, the severe line of his slicked-back platinum hair, was unmistakable. The last time she’d seen him, the air between them had been thick with the unsaid, a charged silence after he’d pulled strings she hadn’t asked him to pull, getting Evan permanently and messily out of her life. She’d called it overreach. He’d called it necessity. They hadn’t spoken in six weeks. Her fingers hovered over the three deadbolts. She could pretend she wasn’t here. Eva’s flat was a fortress of paper and secrets; it would be easy to sink back into the shadows and let him assume emptiness. But he knocked a third time, his knuckles barely grazing the wood. “Aurora,” he said, his voice muffled but clear, the French accent softening the edges of her name. “I can hear you breathing.” A flush of irritation, hot and familiar, washed through her. She slid the bolts back, the clicks loud in the quiet flat, and opened the door just enough to look at him. The hall’s single bulb lit him from above, deepening the shadows under his sharp cheekbones, making the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one pitch black—seem even more unsettling. He looked tired. “Eva’s not here,” Rory said, her voice cooler than she felt. “I am aware. I came to see you.” “Why?” “May I come in? The hallway smells distinctly of lamb korma and mildew. It is… an assault.” She didn’t move. “You didn’t answer.” He sighed, a small, weary sound. “I require your particular talent for lateral thinking. And, if I am being honest, I wished to see you. The two are not mutually exclusive.” The admission, so bluntly stated, disarmed her. She’d expected his usual circuitous, faintly mocking patter. This was direct. This was almost vulnerable. With a jerk of her chin, she stepped back, opening the door wider. He entered, his presence immediately shrinking the cluttered space. He navigated the stacks of books and scrolls with an effortless grace, his cane barely touching the floor. His gaze swept the room—the teetering piles on the dining table, the maps pinned to the wall with coloured threads, the cat now watching him with slitted eyes from the sofa. “Charming,” he remarked, though there was no mockery in it. “It’s a research hub, not a show home. What do you want, Lucien?” “Straight to business. Very well.” He turned to face her, leaning lightly on the cane. “A client of mine has come into possession of an item. A music box, late 18th century, French. It is… troubled. It plays a lullaby that induces not sleep, but a waking paralysis filled with intensely personalised nightmares. The client’s wife is currently in a private clinic, catatonic.” Rory folded her arms. “And you’ve come to a Pre-Law dropout who delivers dumplings because…?” “Because you see the angles others miss. Because you are not versed in conventional thaumaturgy, so your mind is not constrained by its rules. And because,” he paused, his amber eye catching the light, “when we last parted, you accused me of treating the world as a game of chess, with people as pieces. I am attempting to consult a piece who has her own mind.” The old hurt, the argument that had driven the wedge between them, simmered in her chest. “You didn’t consult me. You acted. You made me a pawn in your game with Evan.” “I removed a threat. Cleanly. Permanently.” “Without my consent!” “Your consent would have involved you walking into a police station with bruises and a story about a charismatic man who made you feel small. He would have been out on bail before the ink was dry. You know this.” His voice was low, intense. “I saw a problem and I solved it. It is what I do. My methods are not gentle, Aurora, but they are effective. I am sorry if the solution offended your sensibilities.” She looked away, her eyes stinging. He was right, and that was the worst part. Evan was gone. The constant knot of fear in her stomach had slowly unravelled. But the cost had been the feeling of agency, and the complicated, frightening attraction she’d felt for the man who had taken that agency into his own hands. “This music box,” she said, forcing her voice level. “Where is it?” “In a vault. But its influence is… leaking. The nightmares are beginning to affect the household staff, even through shielding. The lullaby is becoming audible in adjacent rooms, though the box remains closed.” Rory walked to the table, pushing aside a pile of notes to clear a space. Her mind, ever practical, latched onto the puzzle. “A binding, then. But one that’s deteriorating. What’s the box made of?” “Rosewood. Inlaid with mother-of-pearl. The key is silver, shaped like a sleeping fox.” “Silver conducts. Could be a focus. The lullaby—do you have the melody?” Lucien produced his phone, tapped the screen, and a few tinny, haunting notes played—a simple, repetitive melody. It made the hairs on Rory’s arms stand up. Ptolemy hissed and vanished under the sofa. “It’s not the melody itself,” Rory said, thinking aloud. “It’s a carrier. Like a frequency. The box isn’t creating the nightmares; it’s resonating with something already in the listener’s head. Amplifying their own fears, regrets, shames.” She looked at him. “Your client. His wife. What aren’t you telling me?” A faint, approving smile touched his lips. “The client acquired the box from an auction of items belonging to the wife’s first husband, who died in a sailing accident she survived. There was… speculation. Never proven.” “Guilt,” Rory whispered. “Or fear of discovery. The box keys into that. It’s a psychic echo chamber.” She rubbed the small crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous habit. “You can’t destroy the box without potentially releasing the binding entirely. You need to break the resonance. Change the frequency.” “How?” “You need to play something else through it. Something stronger. Not to drown it out, but to… retune it. A countersong.” Lucien was watching her, his expression unreadable. “And what song would you suggest?” “I don’t know. Something that embodies peace, finality. Not a lullaby. A requiem. But it would have to be played on the same mechanism, with the same key.” “A musical exorcism.” He nodded slowly. “It is elegantly unorthodox. It might work.” The business was concluded, but he made no move to leave. The silence stretched, filled with the ghosts of their last conversation and the hum of the city outside. “You said you wanted to see me,” Rory said, not looking at him. “I did.” “Why?” He took a step closer. The subtle scent of his cologne, sandalwood and something cold like ozone, cut through the spice in the air. “Because these past weeks have been irritatingly quiet. Because no one else tells me I am a high-handed, manipulative bastard to my face. And because I miss the way your mind works.” She finally met his gaze, the mismatched eyes holding hers. “It’s not just my mind you miss, is it?” He didn’t flinch. “No. It is not.” The admission hung between them, fragile and dangerous. She remembered the brush of his hand against hers in a darkened bar, the way he’d leaned in to hear her over the music, the electric, unacted-upon tension that had existed before the fallout over Evan. “You hurt me,” she said, the words simple and raw. “I know. And for that, I have no adequate apology. I would do it again to ensure your safety, but I regret the pain it caused you. The distance it created.” He lifted a hand, as if to touch her face, then let it fall. “I am not a good man, Aurora. My world is not one of gentle choices. But my regard for you is… singular.” She saw it then, the weariness wasn’t just from lack of sleep. It was the weight of his nature, the constant negotiation between his human and demonic halves. He was a fixer, a broker, a creature of deals and damning solutions. And he was here, in a messy flat, admitting a weakness. Rory uncrossed her arms. The anger was still there, but it was thawing, turning into something else—a resigned, aching understanding. “The next time you have a problem that involves me,” she said quietly, “you talk to me first. We consult. No more unilateral moves.” A real smile, small and genuine, softened his austere features. “That sounds suspiciously like a partnership.” “It sounds like common decency.” “A concept I am still learning, *ma chère*.” He reached into his inner pocket and drew out a simple, unmarked card. An address was written in elegant script. “The vault. Tomorrow, at ten. Will you come? To perform this… countersong.” She took the card. Their fingers brushed. The contact sent a jolt through her, a reminder of the attraction that all the hurt couldn’t quite erase. “I’ll bring the requiem,” she said. He held her gaze for a moment longer, then gave a slight, formal bow of his head. “Until tomorrow, then.” He turned and let himself out, the door closing with a soft, final click. Rory stood in the sudden quiet, the card warm in her hand. Ptolemy emerged from his hiding place and wound around her ankles. Below, the curry house clattered with dinner service. Up here, the air still vibrated with the things they had finally said, and the much larger things they had not. She looked at the address, then at the grimoire on the sofa. She had research to do. A song to find. And a dangerous, complicated man to see in the morning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He nodded slowly [slowly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.315
leniency0.63
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.074
83.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"intensely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"lightly"
3"intensely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Rosewood"
49.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1776
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"effortless"
count1
6
word"pawn"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"resonance"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"ensure"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"charged"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"navigated"
5"effortless"
6"pawn"
7"stomach"
8"echo"
9"resonance"
10"unreadable"
11"electric"
12"tension"
13"ensure"
14"reminder"
15"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1764
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma chère"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1051
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Eva3
Edwardian1
Clerkenwell1
Moreau1
Evan3
French1
Lucien3
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Clerkenwell"
globalScore0.977
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite erase"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.268
wordCount1764
matches
0"not at the door but down at his own hands, turning his ivory-handled cane slowly"
1"not sleep, but a waking paralysis filled with intensely personalised nightm"
2"not gentle, Aurora, but they are effective"
3"Not to drown it out, but to… retune it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"taken that agency"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean30.95
std23.12
cv0.747
sampleLengths
067
150
2104
337
434
561
611
78
81
917
106
1131
1235
1358
1410
1513
1663
1715
1866
1932
206
213
2277
2357
2412
2533
2635
2713
2812
2933
3049
3136
3249
331
3421
3513
3628
3713
3829
3913
402
411
4256
4319
447
4544
4610
4767
4852
4944
90.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences93
matches
0"was curled"
1"was gone"
2"was concluded"
3"was written"
91.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was looking"
1"was watching"
2"was thawing"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences129
ratio0.047
matches
0"Eva’s flat was a fortress of paper and secrets; it would be easy to sink back into the shadows and let him assume emptiness."
1"The hall’s single bulb lit him from above, deepening the shadows under his sharp cheekbones, making the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one pitch black—seem even more unsettling."
2"His gaze swept the room—the teetering piles on the dining table, the maps pinned to the wall with coloured threads, the cat now watching him with slitted eyes from the sofa."
3"Lucien produced his phone, tapped the screen, and a few tinny, haunting notes played—a simple, repetitive melody."
4"“It’s a carrier. Like a frequency. The box isn’t creating the nightmares; it’s resonating with something already in the listener’s head. Amplifying their own fears, regrets, shames.” She looked at him."
5"The anger was still there, but it was thawing, turning into something else—a resigned, aching understanding."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.036827195467422094
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.015108593012275733
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean13.67
std10.81
cv0.791
sampleLengths
020
129
211
37
414
520
616
713
818
921
1038
114
124
136
147
156
1624
1712
1817
195
2010
2122
2226
233
2411
258
261
2717
283
293
306
3125
327
338
343
354
3613
379
3818
3931
4010
4113
4215
4348
444
4511
4666
4716
4816
496
48.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32558139534883723
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences91
matches
0"She was curled on Eva’s"
1"She peered through the peephole,"
2"He was looking not at"
3"She’d called it overreach."
4"He’d called it necessity."
5"They hadn’t spoken in six"
6"Her fingers hovered over the"
7"She could pretend she wasn’t"
8"he said, his voice muffled"
9"She slid the bolts back,"
10"He looked tired."
11"She didn’t move."
12"He sighed, a small, weary"
13"She’d expected his usual circuitous,"
14"He entered, his presence immediately"
15"He navigated the stacks of"
16"His gaze swept the room—the"
17"he remarked, though there was"
18"He turned to face her,"
19"he paused, his amber eye"
ratio0.505
3.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences91
matches
0"The knock was soft, almost"
1"She was curled on Eva’s"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby, was a"
3"The knock came again, a"
4"Eva was out, chasing down"
5"Rory marked her page with"
6"She peered through the peephole,"
7"Lucien Moreau filled the distorted"
8"He was looking not at"
9"The last time she’d seen"
10"She’d called it overreach."
11"He’d called it necessity."
12"They hadn’t spoken in six"
13"Her fingers hovered over the"
14"She could pretend she wasn’t"
15"Eva’s flat was a fortress"
16"he said, his voice muffled"
17"A flush of irritation, hot"
18"She slid the bolts back,"
19"The hall’s single bulb lit"
ratio0.912
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Even through the distortion, the"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But the cost had been the feeling of agency, and the complicated, frightening attraction she’d felt for the man who had taken that agency into his own hands."
1"She remembered the brush of his hand against hers in a darkened bar, the way he’d leaned in to hear her over the music, the electric, unacted-upon tension that …"
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory said, her voice cooler than she felt"
1"he paused, his amber eye catching the light,"
2"Rory said, not looking at him"
3"He lifted, as if to touch her face, then let it fall"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.037
74.0034%