| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 31 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.596 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1560 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "utterly" | | 5 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1560 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "profound" | | 11 | "resonance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1544 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 69 | | wordCount | 1159 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 22 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | December | 2 | | London | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae | 4 | | Aldric | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Aldric" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Three" |
| | globalScore | 0.551 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 29.52% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to writhe in Rory's peripheral vision" | | 1 | "quite water" | | 2 | "as if listening to something" | | 3 | "not quite fireflies, not quite stars" | | 4 | "not quite stars" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.648 | | wordCount | 1544 | | matches | | 0 | "not the grey of London's December but a twilight purple shot through with stars" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 35.91 | | std | 18.44 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 87 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 65 | | 30 | 45 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 84 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous color—bluebells and foxglove, poppies and flowers she had no names for, all blooming in defiance of winter." | | 1 | "The grass beneath Rory's feet felt different—softer, more alive." | | 2 | "A fountain bubbled at the heart of the clearing, carved from stone that shifted color with each angle of view—now pearl, now obsidian, now something that hurt to perceive." | | 3 | "\"It remembers every realm it's touched.\" She dipped her fingers into the flow, and for a moment, Rory glimpsed other places in the ripples—a feast hall of impossible grandeur, orchards heavy with fruit that glowed like lanterns, a sky the color of warm amber." | | 4 | "Lights danced between the branches—not quite fireflies, not quite stars." | | 5 | "To be summoned, to be called by name—even here, Rory could feel the pull of it, the terrible temptation to answer." | | 6 | "Where she touched, the bark revealed glimpses of other places—a library of impossible scope, a garden where every plant bore fruit of different seasons, a throne room built from living shadow." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1172 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03498293515358362 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007679180887372013 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 13.2 | | std | 7.33 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 66.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.452991452991453 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 2 | "she breathed, turning in a" | | 3 | "They formed patterns, told stories" | | 4 | "It moved too slowly, refracting" | | 5 | "She dipped her fingers into" | | 6 | "they said, running an incorporeal" | | 7 | "She paused, tilting her head" | | 8 | "They moved with purpose, spiraling" | | 9 | "Its fellows descended in a" | | 10 | "She moved to the fountain," | | 11 | "She looked at Nyx, who" | | 12 | "She turned that too-sharp smile" | | 13 | "She moved to the second" | | 14 | "she muttered, and made her" |
| | ratio | 0.174 | |
| 29.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 4 | "The Half-Fae moved with liquid" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted beside Rory, their" | | 6 | "they whispered, their voice like" | | 7 | "Rory took a breath and" | | 8 | "The moment she crossed between" | | 9 | "The December cold vanished, replaced" | | 10 | "she breathed, turning in a" | | 11 | "The grove spread before them" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 13 | "The trees formed a perfect" | | 14 | "Isolde smiled, revealing teeth slightly" | | 15 | "The grass beneath Rory's feet" | | 16 | "Each step released scents that" | | 17 | "The Fae-forged blade at her" | | 18 | "Nyx observed, their violet eyes" | | 19 | "Rory followed their gaze and" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could ask what" | | 1 | "To be summoned, to be" | | 2 | "As if in response, the" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 31.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to writhe in Rory's peripheral vision…" | | 1 | "Each step released scents that changed with her movement: lavender, then pine, then something sweet and intoxicating she couldn't identify." | | 2 | "The Fae-forged blade at her hip hummed against its sheath, resonating with the magic saturating the air." | | 3 | "It moved too slowly, refracting light in prismatic sprays that hung in the air longer than physics should allow." | | 4 | "Rory held perfectly still as they investigated, tiny hands no bigger than dewdrops touching her hair, her clothes, hovering near the concealed pendant with obvi…" | | 5 | "The liquid climbed her arms like living things, forming spirals and symbols that glowed faintly against her pale skin." | | 6 | "The pixies, brave again, crept back to observe, their chiming taking on harmonics that resonated in her bones." |
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| 92.74% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 31 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, but their voice carried longing" | | 1 | "Isolde pointed, each division leading to darkness profound enough to swallow light" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 6 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 7 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 8 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.288 | | leniency | 0.577 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.346 | |