Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFAT74GJPCX15ARE61WHZ8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.201105

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to writhe in Rory's peripheral vision. She pressed her palm against the nearest oak, feeling the thrum of something vast and unknowable beneath the weathered wood. The Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsed warm against her skin, a steady rhythm like a second heartbeat. "The boundary thins here," Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching light that shouldn't exist in the deep shade of Richmond Park. The Half-Fae moved with liquid grace between the stones, her bare feet making no sound on the frost-brittle grass. "Step carefully, child. The Grove chooses who enters." Nyx drifted beside Rory, their shadowy form flickering between solid and smoke. "I can feel it," they whispered, their voice like wind through empty corridors. "The pull between realms. It's... familiar." Rory took a breath and stepped forward. The moment she crossed between the standing stones, the world shifted. Sound muted, as if she'd plunged underwater. The December cold vanished, replaced by air that tasted of honey and copper pennies. When she exhaled, her breath didn't fog. "Bloody hell," she breathed, turning in a slow circle. The grove spread before them in impossible splendor. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous color—bluebells and foxglove, poppies and flowers she had no names for, all blooming in defiance of winter. The trees formed a perfect circle around the clearing, their branches woven together overhead in patterns too deliberate to be natural. Through gaps in the canopy, the sky showed not the grey of London's December but a twilight purple shot through with stars that pulsed and danced. Isolde smiled, revealing teeth slightly too sharp. "Welcome to my exile." The grass beneath Rory's feet felt different—softer, more alive. Each step released scents that changed with her movement: lavender, then pine, then something sweet and intoxicating she couldn't identify. The Fae-forged blade at her hip hummed against its sheath, resonating with the magic saturating the air. "Time moves strangely here," Nyx observed, their violet eyes tracking something Rory couldn't see. "The shadows... they're singing." Rory followed their gaze and gasped. The shadows cast by the trees moved independently of their sources, flowing like water across the grove floor. They formed patterns, told stories in a language of light and dark that made her eyes water to follow. "Don't stare too long," Isolde warned, gliding past them toward the grove's center. "Shadow-speech can trap mortal minds in loops of meaning." A fountain bubbled at the heart of the clearing, carved from stone that shifted color with each angle of view—now pearl, now obsidian, now something that hurt to perceive. The water that flowed from it wasn't quite water. It moved too slowly, refracting light in prismatic sprays that hung in the air longer than physics should allow. "Is that..." Rory started, then stopped. The question felt too large for her mouth. "Water from the River Between," Isolde confirmed. "It remembers every realm it's touched." She dipped her fingers into the flow, and for a moment, Rory glimpsed other places in the ripples—a feast hall of impossible grandeur, orchards heavy with fruit that glowed like lanterns, a sky the color of warm amber. The Heartstone pulsed harder, almost painful now. Rory pressed her hand to it through her shirt, feeling heat radiate into her palm. "It's reacting to something." "Of course it is." Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on the pendant with an expression Rory couldn't read. "Hellfire calls to hellfire, even diluted by realms and intention." Nyx had drifted to the grove's edge, where the trees grew closest together. "There are doors here," they said, running an incorporeal hand along the bark. "Hidden passages. I can feel them breathing." "Not doors," Isolde corrected. "Possibilities. The Grove exists in the spaces between. From here, one might step into any realm, any when, if one knew the way." She paused, tilting her head as if listening to something. "But the Grove chooses who may pass. And when. And whether they return unchanged." A sound like wind chimes drew Rory's attention upward. Lights danced between the branches—not quite fireflies, not quite stars. They moved with purpose, spiraling down toward them in curious loops. One brave light descended to hover near Rory's face. This close, she could see it wasn't a light at all but a tiny creature of gossamer and glow, features too small and alien to fully comprehend. "Pixies," Isolde said. "They're curious about you. It's been long since a mortal walked here who wasn't already half-mad from the Sight." The pixie chirped something in a language like breaking glass and flower petals. Its fellows descended in a glimmering cloud, surrounding the three visitors. Rory held perfectly still as they investigated, tiny hands no bigger than dewdrops touching her hair, her clothes, hovering near the concealed pendant with obvious interest. "They can smell the Heartstone," Nyx observed. "And something else. You carry more than one realm's mark, Aurora Carter." Before Rory could ask what they meant, the grove shuddered. The pixies scattered like sparks from a fire, vanishing into the canopy with alarmed chimes. The shadows stopped their dancing, going still and watchful. Isolde's expression sharpened. "Someone's pulling at the edges." She moved to the fountain, pressing both hands into the not-water. The liquid climbed her arms like living things, forming spirals and symbols that glowed faintly against her pale skin. "A summoning. Clumsy but powerful." "Summoning what?" Rory's hand went to the Fae blade at her hip. The weapon had gone cold enough to burn, even through its sheath. "Not what." Isolde's eyes reflected the grove's impossible starlight. "Who. Someone seeks the shadow-walker." She looked at Nyx, who had gone utterly still. "Your old name still has power, it seems." Nyx's form rippled, solidifying until they stood as substantial as any mortal. "That's impossible. Aldric died three centuries ago." "Names never truly die." Isolde released the water, which fell back into the fountain with sounds like distant thunder. "They sleep. They wait. They remember." She turned that too-sharp smile on Rory. "As do pendants. As do promises made in the dark between stars." The grove pulsed around them, reality flexing like a breathing thing. The flowers at their feet bloomed brighter, faster, their lifecycle accelerating until petals fell like snow. The air grew thick with magic, tasting of metal and moonlight. "We should go," Nyx said, but their voice carried longing. To be summoned, to be called by name—even here, Rory could feel the pull of it, the terrible temptation to answer. "Should and will are different beasts." Isolde walked the grove's perimeter, trailing her fingers along the trees. Where she touched, the bark revealed glimpses of other places—a library of impossible scope, a garden where every plant bore fruit of different seasons, a throne room built from living shadow. "The Grove brought you here for a reason. It would be... unwise to leave before understanding why." The Heartstone's pulse had become a steady burn. Rory pulled it free of her shirt, watching the crimson gem glow like a coal in the grove's twilight. The pixies, brave again, crept back to observe, their chiming taking on harmonics that resonated in her bones. "There," Isolde pointed to a tree whose trunk split into three, each division leading to darkness profound enough to swallow light. "The Grove offers a choice. Three paths. Three possibilities. Three prices." "You speak in riddles by nature," Rory said, "but could you perhaps speak a bit plainer? What choice?" Isolde's laugh was like silver bells and breaking hearts. "The pendant you wear comes from Dymas, realm of excess and indulgence. But it was crafted for a purpose beyond decoration. The Grove recognizes its resonance, offers passage to its home." She moved to the second trunk. "Or to the shadow realm, where answers to names have power and your companion might reclaim what was lost." At the third trunk, she paused. "Or deeper into Fae lands, where time means nothing and everything is true." "That's not a choice," Nyx said. "It's a trap with three doors." "All choices are traps." Isolde's eyes held centuries of wisdom and madness in equal measure. "The question is which trap serves your purpose." The summoning pull grew stronger. Rory could feel it now, a tugging at the edge of perception. Someone, somewhere, spoke Aldric's name with intent and power, trying to drag Nyx through the Veil by will alone. "If we don't choose," Rory asked, "what happens?" "The Grove chooses for you." Isolde settled beside the fountain, trailing her fingers through the impossible water. "And the Grove's choices are rarely kind to those who hesitate." As if in response, the ground beneath them shivered. The flowers began to wilt, their accelerated blooming reversing into rapid decay. The pixies fled entirely, their departure leaving the air oddly empty. Rory looked at Nyx, saw her own uncertainty reflected in those violet eyes. The Heartstone burned against her palm, the Fae blade ice at her hip. Three paths. Three possibilities. Three prices. And somewhere beyond the Grove, London waited, unchanged by the magic that saturated this place. But she'd already learned that stepping into wonders meant you couldn't step back unchanged. "Bollocks," she muttered, and made her choice.
total_cost0.201105

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.596
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1560
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"perfectly"
4"utterly"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1560
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count4
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"resonated"
count1
10
word"profound"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"etched"
3"pulsed"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"dancing"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"resonated"
10"profound"
11"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1544
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1159
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Heartstone4
Richmond1
Park1
Half-Fae1
December2
London2
Fae-forged1
Nyx10
Isolde15
Fae4
Aldric1
Veil1
Grove1
Three3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Aldric"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Veil"
4"Grove"
5"Three"
globalScore0.551
windowScore0.667
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to writhe in Rory's peripheral vision"
1"quite water"
2"as if listening to something"
3"not quite fireflies, not quite stars"
4"not quite stars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.648
wordCount1544
matches
0"not the grey of London's December but a twilight purple shot through with stars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean35.91
std18.44
cv0.514
sampleLengths
061
148
231
346
487
511
646
718
843
922
1057
1114
1251
1326
1427
1533
1651
1766
1822
1950
2019
2134
2243
2324
2431
2519
2644
2738
2831
2965
3045
3132
3218
3384
3412
3523
3636
378
3828
3932
4032
4129
427
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences117
ratio0.06
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in riotous color—bluebells and foxglove, poppies and flowers she had no names for, all blooming in defiance of winter."
1"The grass beneath Rory's feet felt different—softer, more alive."
2"A fountain bubbled at the heart of the clearing, carved from stone that shifted color with each angle of view—now pearl, now obsidian, now something that hurt to perceive."
3"\"It remembers every realm it's touched.\" She dipped her fingers into the flow, and for a moment, Rory glimpsed other places in the ripples—a feast hall of impossible grandeur, orchards heavy with fruit that glowed like lanterns, a sky the color of warm amber."
4"Lights danced between the branches—not quite fireflies, not quite stars."
5"To be summoned, to be called by name—even here, Rory could feel the pull of it, the terrible temptation to answer."
6"Where she touched, the bark revealed glimpses of other places—a library of impossible scope, a garden where every plant bore fruit of different seasons, a throne room built from living shadow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03498293515358362
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007679180887372013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean13.2
std7.33
cv0.555
sampleLengths
023
120
218
321
419
58
612
713
86
97
1011
117
1214
137
149
158
1623
1721
1826
197
204
219
2220
2317
2414
254
266
2718
2819
2913
309
3129
329
3319
346
358
367
3744
387
3915
404
4117
4210
4313
4413
457
464
4733
4814
499
66.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.452991452991453
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners53
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences86
matches
0"She pressed her palm against"
1"they whispered, their voice like"
2"she breathed, turning in a"
3"They formed patterns, told stories"
4"It moved too slowly, refracting"
5"She dipped her fingers into"
6"they said, running an incorporeal"
7"She paused, tilting her head"
8"They moved with purpose, spiraling"
9"Its fellows descended in a"
10"She moved to the fountain,"
11"She looked at Nyx, who"
12"She turned that too-sharp smile"
13"She moved to the second"
14"she muttered, and made her"
ratio0.174
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences86
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before"
1"She pressed her palm against"
2"The Heartstone pendant at her"
3"Isolde murmured, her silver hair"
4"The Half-Fae moved with liquid"
5"Nyx drifted beside Rory, their"
6"they whispered, their voice like"
7"Rory took a breath and"
8"The moment she crossed between"
9"The December cold vanished, replaced"
10"she breathed, turning in a"
11"The grove spread before them"
12"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
13"The trees formed a perfect"
14"Isolde smiled, revealing teeth slightly"
15"The grass beneath Rory's feet"
16"Each step released scents that"
17"The Fae-forged blade at her"
18"Nyx observed, their violet eyes"
19"Rory followed their gaze and"
ratio0.86
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Before Rory could ask what"
1"To be summoned, to be"
2"As if in response, the"
ratio0.035
31.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark-covered surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to writhe in Rory's peripheral vision…"
1"Each step released scents that changed with her movement: lavender, then pine, then something sweet and intoxicating she couldn't identify."
2"The Fae-forged blade at her hip hummed against its sheath, resonating with the magic saturating the air."
3"It moved too slowly, refracting light in prismatic sprays that hung in the air longer than physics should allow."
4"Rory held perfectly still as they investigated, tiny hands no bigger than dewdrops touching her hair, her clothes, hovering near the concealed pendant with obvi…"
5"The liquid climbed her arms like living things, forming spirals and symbols that glowed faintly against her pale skin."
6"The pixies, brave again, crept back to observe, their chiming taking on harmonics that resonated in her bones."
92.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx said, but their voice carried longing"
1"Isolde pointed, each division leading to darkness profound enough to swallow light"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"Isolde warned (warn)"
5"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
6"Isolde corrected (correct)"
7"Nyx observed (observe)"
8"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.577
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.346
77.8149%