Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFAZB63ABQWDFWRPXGVVM7

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Duration:
5.4s
Cost:
$0.000238
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air thickened, heavy with the scent of overripe fruit and something else—something faintly metallic, like blood. Aurora’s nostrils flared as she stepped over the threshold. The world outside, the familiar grey of London, vanished. Before her stretched a valley carved from impossible stone, bathed in a warm, honeyed amber light that seemed to emanate from the very sky itself. Vines, thick as serpents, coiled around colossal, gnarled trees whose leaves shimmered with impossible hues of violet and gold. The ground beneath her boots was soft, yielding, carpeted with a moss that glowed faintly in the twilight. “This is... not right,” Nyx breathed, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. They shifted, their form flickering like a shadow caught in a candle flame, solidifying into a tall, slender silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around them. “The Veil is thin here. Too thin.” Isolde stood beside her, her silver hair catching the strange light, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon where the sky met the distant, impossibly tall spires of what looked like a castle made of living coral. “The Veil weakens during the winter solstice,” she murmured, her voice low and resonant. “It is a time of crossing, of doors opening where they should not.” She traced a finger along the edge of her silver pendant, the Fae-Forged Blade resting cool and heavy against her thigh. “We tread carefully, Rory. This place... it remembers.” Aurora’s gaze swept over the valley. The sheer scale was staggering. Beyond the trees, a grand pavilion, its roof woven from vines and flowers, stood sentinel. The air vibrated with the low hum of countless voices, a cacophony of laughter, clinking glasses, and the sizzle of exotic spices. She saw chefs, their faces obscured by tall hats, wielding knives that seemed to glow with inner fire, preparing dishes that looked like living sculptures—fruits that pulsed with light, meats that steamed with an ethereal steam. Helbound souls, their forms translucent and faintly glowing, moved silently among the tables, serving wine from goblets that never emptied. “It’s... beautiful,” Aurora breathed, a tremor of awe in her voice. She reached out, her fingers brushing the moss. It felt alive, warm, humming with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in her bones. “But... how do we find what we’re looking for?” “The Heartstone,” Nyx stated, their shadow-form flickering as they turned to face her. “It pulses. It calls to the Veil.” They gestured vaguely towards the pavilion. “It’s here. But so is Belphegor. And his games.” Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, enigmatic smile. “The Heartstone is a key, Rory. But it is also a beacon. To the unwary, it is a lure. To the vigilant, it is a map.” She looked towards the pavilion, her eyes sharp. “We move now. The Veil is thin, but it is also hungry. It will try to distract us.” Aurora nodded, tucking the small, crimson Heartstone pendant deeper into her pocket. The warmth from it was a constant, reassuring pulse against her skin. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade, its cold steel a stark contrast to the heat of the valley. The blade hummed faintly, a low thrum that resonated with the earth itself. She took a deep breath, the scent of decay and excess filling her lungs, and stepped forward, following Isolde’s silent lead towards the heart of the valley, the thrumming of the Heartstone a steady, insistent drumbeat in her mind, guiding her deeper into the alien, wondrous, and dangerously alive realm of Dymas.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
83.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount592
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"cacophony"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"enigmatic"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"shimmered"
2"whisper"
3"traced"
4"sentinel"
5"vibrated"
6"cacophony"
7"pulsed"
8"enigmatic"
9"beacon"
10"warmth"
11"pulse"
12"stark"
13"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences29
matches
0"a tremor of awe"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences29
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences34
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords587
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount475
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Aurora4
Isolde3
Heartstone2
Dymas1
persons
0"Blade"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"light that seemed to emanate from the very sky itself"
1"silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around them"
2"looked like a castle made of living coral"
3"knives that seemed to glow with inner fire, preparing dishes that looked like living sculptures—fruits that pulsed with light, meats that steamed with an ethereal steam"
4"looked like living sculptures—fruits that"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount587
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
65.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs8
mean73.38
std27.85
cv0.38
sampleLengths
097
148
294
3104
443
535
660
7106
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs77
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences34
ratio0.059
matches
0"The air thickened, heavy with the scent of overripe fruit and something else—something faintly metallic, like blood."
1"She saw chefs, their faces obscured by tall hats, wielding knives that seemed to glow with inner fire, preparing dishes that looked like living sculptures—fruits that pulsed with light, meats that steamed with an ethereal steam."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount480
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.029166666666666667
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.016666666666666666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences34
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences34
mean17.26
std10.61
cv0.615
sampleLengths
017
19
29
325
419
518
614
727
87
938
1014
1134
128
136
145
1515
1622
1736
1820
1911
208
2115
229
2313
2413
259
268
2734
2818
2912
3012
3117
3213
3352
60.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences34
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences29
matches
0"They shifted, their form flickering"
1"she murmured, her voice low"
2"She traced a finger along"
3"She saw chefs, their faces"
4"She reached out, her fingers"
5"It felt alive, warm, humming"
6"They gestured vaguely towards the"
7"She looked towards the pavilion,"
8"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade,"
9"She took a deep breath,"
ratio0.345
11.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences29
matches
0"The air thickened, heavy with"
1"Aurora’s nostrils flared as she"
2"The world outside, the familiar"
3"Vines, thick as serpents, coiled"
4"The ground beneath her boots"
5"Nyx breathed, their voice a"
6"They shifted, their form flickering"
7"Isolde stood beside her, her"
8"she murmured, her voice low"
9"She traced a finger along"
10"Aurora’s gaze swept over the"
11"The sheer scale was staggering."
12"The air vibrated with the"
13"She saw chefs, their faces"
14"Aurora breathed, a tremor of"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"It felt alive, warm, humming"
17"Nyx stated, their shadow-form flickering"
18"They gestured vaguely towards the"
19"Isolde’s lips curved into a"
ratio0.897
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences29
matches
0"Before her stretched a valley"
ratio0.034
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Before her stretched a valley carved from impossible stone, bathed in a warm, honeyed amber light that seemed to emanate from the very sky itself."
1"They shifted, their form flickering like a shadow caught in a candle flame, solidifying into a tall, slender silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around t…"
2"She saw chefs, their faces obscured by tall hats, wielding knives that seemed to glow with inner fire, preparing dishes that looked like living sculptures—fruit…"
3"It felt alive, warm, humming with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in her bones."
4"She took a deep breath, the scent of decay and excess filling her lungs, and stepped forward, following Isolde’s silent lead towards the heart of the valley, th…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx breathed, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
1"she murmured, her voice low and resonant"
2"Aurora breathed, a tremor of awe in her voice"
3"Nyx stated, their shadow-form flickering as they turned to face her"
4"She looked, her eyes sharp"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx stated (state)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
65.9366%