Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFB0CVTGF46A63ES0VB5P6

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37.1s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's fingers tightened around the Heartstone pendant as she stepped through the archway of oak standing stones. The air tasted different here—rich with honeysuckle and something metallic beneath, like biting a coin. She exhaled sharply, watching her breath curl into mist despite the balmy air. "Told you she lived in a fairy tale," Nyx murmured beside her, their shadowy form rippling like smoke disturbed by a breeze. The grove stretched before them in impossible dimensions—a clearing that shouldn't have fit between the birch trees of Richmond Park. Wildflowers glowed in shades Rory had no names for: petals that flickered between violet and tangerine, stems pulsing with bioluminescent sap. Beneath her boots, the moss yielded like memory foam, springing back without a trace of footprints. "This way," Nyx whispered, pointing with a hand that briefly solidified into long, elegant fingers. As they walked deeper, Rory noticed the quality of light shifting—not daylight, not moonlight, but something that painted their skin with mother-of-pearl iridescence. The pendant against her collarbone pulsed gently, its crimson glow synchronized with something unseen ahead. A stone well appeared between two twisted oaks, its moss-covered rim carved with spiraling symbols that made Rory's eyes water if she stared too long. From its depths came a sound like wind through harp strings, plucking at the space behind her sternum. "Careful," Nyx murmured as Rory leaned over the edge. "Time wells differently here." She barely had time to process the warning before silver flashed in her peripheral vision. A blade tip hovered an inch from Nyx Kingston's shadowy throat—had they possessed arteries to sever—and Rory whirled to face its wielder. "Seers do not entertain uninvited guests," said a voice like wind chimes wrapped in silk. Isolde Varga stood between worlds—here in sharp focus, there dissolving at the edges into the grove's ambient glow. Her silver hair moved as if underwater, tendrils curling around the Fae-forged dagger she held effortlessly. Rory noted how the blade's edge blurred slightly, distorting the air like heat haze over pavement. Nyx bowed, an exaggerated flourish that deepened the shadows cascading from theirСККJермform. "Apologies, Lady-of-the-Unseen-Paths. We bring—" "Silence, shade." Isolde's lavender eyes locked onto Rory with unnerving focus. "You carry a Dymasian artifact into my sanctum." The pendant flared in response, casting garnet light across the seer's angular features. Rory resisted the instinct to cover it—the stone's warmth now edged with warning heat. "I was told you could explain what it is." Isolde tilted her head, listening to some whisper Rory couldn't hear. The dagger vanished into her sleeve faster than blinking. "Follow. And touch nothing." The path twisted inward, folding upon itself like origami. Trees bent at angles that defied gravity, their branches weavingEds of glowing leaves overhead. Rory's stomach lurched——were they climbing or descending? The airpressure shifted—between one step and the next, her ears popped. Then—the heart of the grove. A pavilion of living willow stood at the center, its swaying tendrils beadedsilversoft glob tao light cyan. Beneath it, a pool reflected not the canopy above, but swirls of unfamiliar constellations. Rory caught a glimpse of her and reflection—except there, her eyes glowed faintly gold before the image rippled away. "Here, the Veil is tissue." Isolde seated herself on air—no chair, just perfect stillness as if the world'saxis bent around her. "Why does a mortal with no magical blood carry prince Belphegor’s favor?" Nyx made a sound like ink dropped in water—surprise. Rory's fingers found the scar on her wrist unconsciously. "I don’t know any princes," she said. "Some guy at a noodle shop in Soho gave me this." The wildflowers at Isolde’s feet trembled. "And what did you pay for it?" "Nothing. He insisted." Something dangerous flickered in the seer’s smile. "In Dymas, all gifts are bargains." A breeze stirred—wrong-directioned to Sidon live warmth against Rory's neck as Nxy slid be side her. Their form had solidified slightly, millenniumsand features human enough now to show tension. "The stone chooses its keepers," they murmured. Isolde's dagger reappeared in her palm——no wait, different blade——no, the same one, wasn't it? Rory's brain stuttered tryingBr to focus on the object that existedsimultaneously as both leaf-shapeddproof and full-length sword. "Hold out your hand," the seer commanded. M Бум. Everyone froze. Between one blink and the next, a second Isolde stood behind the first——no, the same Isolde occupying two spaces—— no, Rory’s vision doubledas temporal layers briefly in the grove's impossibile parameters overlapped. The gloaming pressed close. Somewhere in the treesglass/chime music sounded——somewhere a feast was happening——somewhere Rory was stilleatingWhit Evan in Cardiff——and Чꤡ렀헍    She came back to herself clutching the Fae-blade's hilt , its moonsilver biting into her palm with delicious coldness.Nyx was halfway across the clearing, shadow-tendrils spread like wings. Isolde regardedser with new calculationalу interest. "For someone who claims ignorance," the seer said quietly, "you wield Faesteel like a born wArden." Not a gift this time——a test. Rory exhaled sharplya come downfrom the adrenaline dump. The blade in her hand dimmed from opal-bleach to quicksilver . "So what’s the verdict?"She aimed forег humor. "Amпараноидально? Isolde's laugh filled the glade with the sound of ice cracking Whaum. "Worse. Interesting." The constellations in the pool realigned. Above them, the leavesRUSTled/whispered/spoke in some ancient, familiar tongue——and Rory Carter understood, just for a heartbeatКод as the grovekissed the edge of her soul, that nothing would everbethesame again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the seer said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.083
78.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount913
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"gently"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount913
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"synchronized"
count1
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"lurched"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
14
word"parameters"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulsed"
2"synchronized"
3"depths"
4"silk"
5"cascading"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"whisper"
9"stomach"
10"lurched"
11"perfect"
12"trembled"
13"tension"
14"parameters"
15"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
54.19% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences5
adjustedGibberishSentences5
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0.071
matches
0"Nyx bowed, an exaggerated flourish that deepened the shadows cascading from theirСККJермform."
1"Somewhere in the treesglass/chime music sounded——somewhere a feast was happening——somewhere Rory was stilleatingWhit Evan in Cardiff——and Чꤡ렀헍 She came back to herself clutching th…"
2"Isolde regardedser with new calculationalу interest."
3"\"So what’s the verdict?\"She aimed forег humor."
4"The constellations in the pool realigned. Above them, the leavesRUSTled/whispered/spoke in some ancient, familiar tongue——and Rory Carter understood, just for a heartbeatКод as the…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords887
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
24.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount759
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory19
Nyx7
Kingston1
Isolde10
Varga1
Fae-forged1
Sidon1
Nxy1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Fae-blade1
Whaum1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Varga"
4"Nxy"
5"Evan"
6"Fae-blade"
7"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kingston"
3"Sidon"
globalScore0.248
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.382
wordCount887
matches
0"not daylight, not moonlight, but something"
1"not moonlight, but something"
2"not the canopy above, but swirls of unfamiliar constellations"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean25.34
std14.45
cv0.57
sampleLengths
045
122
257
315
438
543
613
737
815
950
1016
1119
1227
139
1424
1541
165
1750
1833
1936
2013
213
2213
2336
2431
257
264
2732
2821
2934
3016
3125
328
3314
3435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount33
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences70
ratio0.257
matches
0"The air tasted different here—rich with honeysuckle and something metallic beneath, like biting a coin."
1"The grove stretched before them in impossible dimensions—a clearing that shouldn't have fit between the birch trees of Richmond Park."
2"As they walked deeper, Rory noticed the quality of light shifting—not daylight, not moonlight, but something that painted their skin with mother-of-pearl iridescence."
3"A blade tip hovered an inch from Nyx Kingston's shadowy throat—had they possessed arteries to sever—and Rory whirled to face its wielder."
4"Isolde Varga stood between worlds—here in sharp focus, there dissolving at the edges into the grove's ambient glow."
5"Rory resisted the instinct to cover it—the stone's warmth now edged with warning heat."
6"Rory's stomach lurched——were they climbing or descending?"
7"The airpressure shifted—between one step and the next, her ears popped."
8"Then—the heart of the grove."
9"Rory caught a glimpse of her and reflection—except there, her eyes glowed faintly gold before the image rippled away."
10"\"Here, the Veil is tissue.\" Isolde seated herself on air—no chair, just perfect stillness as if the world'saxis bent around her."
11"Nyx made a sound like ink dropped in water—surprise."
12"A breeze stirred—wrong-directioned to Sidon live warmth against Rory's neck as Nxy slid be side her."
13"Isolde's dagger reappeared in her palm——no wait, different blade——no, the same one, wasn't it?"
14"Between one blink and the next, a second Isolde stood behind the first——no, the same Isolde occupying two spaces—— no, Rory’s vision doubledas temporal layers briefly in the grove's impossibile parameters overlapped."
15"Somewhere in the treesglass/chime music sounded——somewhere a feast was happening——somewhere Rory was stilleatingWhit Evan in Cardiff——and Чꤡ렀헍 She came back to herself clutching the Fae-blade's hilt , its moonsilver biting into her palm with delicious coldness.Nyx was halfway across the clearing, shadow-tendrils spread like wings."
16"Not a gift this time——a test."
17"The constellations in the pool realigned. Above them, the leavesRUSTled/whispered/spoke in some ancient, familiar tongue——and Rory Carter understood, just for a heartbeatКод as the grovekissed the edge of her soul, that nothing would everbethesame again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount786
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.035623409669211195
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01653944020356234
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean12.67
std7.82
cv0.617
sampleLengths
017
115
213
322
420
521
616
715
823
915
1025
1118
129
134
1415
1522
1615
1718
1816
1916
2012
214
2211
238
2413
2514
269
2711
289
294
309
3114
327
3311
345
3517
3614
3719
3821
3912
409
419
427
4311
446
457
463
477
486
4916
97.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5857142857142857
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"Then—the heart of the grove."
1"Somewhere in the treesglass/chime music"
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences53
matches
0"She exhaled sharply, watching her"
1"She barely had time to"
2"Her silver hair moved as"
3"Their form had solidified slightly,"
ratio0.075
44.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences53
matches
0"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
1"The air tasted different here—rich"
2"She exhaled sharply, watching her"
3"Nyx murmured beside her, their"
4"The grove stretched before them"
5"Wildflowers glowed in shades Rory"
6"Nyx whispered, pointing with a"
7"The pendant against her collarbone"
8"A stone well appeared between"
9"Nyx murmured as Rory leaned"
10"She barely had time to"
11"A blade tip hovered an"
12"Isolde Varga stood between worlds—here"
13"Her silver hair moved as"
14"Rory noted how the blade's"
15"Nyx bowed, an exaggerated flourish"
16"Isolde's lavender eyes locked onto"
17"The pendant flared in response,"
18"Rory resisted the instinct to"
19"Isolde tilted her head, listening"
ratio0.83
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers glowed in shades Rory had no names for: petals that flickered between violet and tangerine, stems pulsing with bioluminescent sap."
1"As they walked deeper, Rory noticed the quality of light shifting—not daylight, not moonlight, but something that painted their skin with mother-of-pearl irides…"
2"A stone well appeared between two twisted oaks, its moss-covered rim carved with spiraling symbols that made Rory's eyes water if she stared too long."
3"Her silver hair moved as if underwater, tendrils curling around the Fae-forged dagger she held effortlessly."
4"Trees bent at angles that defied gravity, their branches weavingEds of glowing leaves overhead."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their shadowy form rippling like smoke disturbed by a breeze"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.333
73.6899%