Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFB96RX7YZ5QC8CZQPRR1Y

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Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.001411
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the smells of damp concrete, ozone, and something metallic that Quinn couldn’t quite place. Yellow police tape, a garish slash of modern authority, was strung across the arched entrance to the old platform, cordoning off a world that most of London didn’t know existed. The Veil Market had moved on, as it did every full moon, leaving behind only echoes and this. Quinn stepped under the tape, her boots scuffing on grit-strewn tiles. The single overhead work lamp the techs had set up cast a harsh, unforgiving light, creating long, dancing shadows that made the cavernous space feel even more immense. In the centre of the pool of light was the body. A man, late thirties, dressed in the kind of expensive but nondescript clothing favored by those who moved in the Market’s circles. His wallet was still in his pocket, his watch still on his wrist. This wasn’t a robbery. “Quinn.” The voice came from the edge of the light. Eva Kowalski stood there, her freckled face pale, her hands clutching the worn leather strap of her satchel. Her round glasses reflected the lamplight, hiding her green eyes. “It’s a mess.” “Tell me something I don’t know, Kowalski,” Quinn said, her voice flat. She kept her gaze on the body, her mind already cataloguing. She’d pulled Eva into consulting on cases like this over a year ago, after the Morris incident. The girl from the museum’s restricted archives understood the things Quinn’s training couldn’t explain. Most of the time, Quinn hated needing that understanding. “The initial report called it a magical discharge,” Eva said, tucking a curl of red hair behind her left ear. A nervous habit. “Backfired ritual. It happens down here. People get greedy, try to channel more than they can hold.” Quinn finally looked at her. “Does it?” Eva gestured vaguely at the scene. “Look at the scorch pattern. Radial, outward from the centre. The stone is vitrified. The energy had to come from him.” Quinn knelt, ignoring the protest from her knee, a souvenir from her military days. She examined the floor around the body. The concrete was indeed blackened and glassy in a near-perfect circle, the epicenter directly under the victim’s torso. It looked textbook. A perfect, self-contained accident. But textbooks didn’t account for the feeling in Quinn’s gut, the same cold coil of wrongness she’d felt three years ago in a warehouse by the docks, just before the world went sideways and Morris stopped answering his radio. She focused on the details, the things that didn’t demand a PhD in the occult to see. The man’s jacket was unbuttoned. His left hand was curled into a loose fist, but his right was splayed open, palm up, as if he’d been reaching for something. Or offering it. “What was he doing here after the Market cleared out?” Quinn mused, more to herself than to Eva. “Maybe he was late. Maybe he was meeting someone for a private sale.” Eva hugged her satchel closer. “The energy signature is clean, Quinn. Brutal, but clean. It reads like a catastrophic personal failure, not an attack.” Quinn’s eyes kept moving, tracing the lines of the scene. The radial burn was perfect. Too perfect. An explosion, even a magical one, wasn’t a geometric exercise. There should be irregularities, tendrils of energy, something. This looked like a stencil. Her gaze drifted from the body, past the circle of light, into the deeper shadows of the platform. Something glinted. A tiny, dull reflection near the wall, about fifteen feet from the body. Away from the epicenter. She stood and walked toward it, her movements precise, controlled. Eva followed, a silent, anxious shadow. “Where are you going? The scene is here.” Quinn didn’t answer. She crouched again, fishing a pair of nitrile gloves from her pocket. The glint was a small, brass object half-hidden in a crumbling gap between the platform and the wall. She picked it up. It was a compass. Small, the casing etched with intricate, swirling designs that looked less like navigation aids and more like protective sigils. A patina of green verdigris coated the metal, and the glass over the face was smudged but intact. “What is that?” Eva asked, peering over her shoulder. Quinn didn’t know, but it was out of place. It was too deliberate, too crafted, to be random debris in this grimy tomb. She held it flat in her palm. The needle didn’t point north. It quivered, spinning in a slow, uneasy circle before settling, pointing unerringly back toward the centre of the platform. Toward the body. “It’s pointing at the residual energy,” Eva said, her voice gaining a note of academic curiosity. “A locus compass. They’re used to find sources of power. See? It confirms the discharge came from him.” Quinn watched the needle. It wasn’t pointing at the centre of the scorch mark. It was pointing at a spot just to the left of the victim’s outstretched right hand. She walked slowly back to the body, keeping the compass level. The needle held its course. She stopped where it indicated. There was nothing there. Just scorched floor. “Quinn, the circle is the source. The compass is just confused by the aftermath,” Eva insisted, her nervous tic returning. She kept looking toward the tunnel entrance as if expecting the Market to return any second. But Quinn was no longer listening to Eva. She was listening to the silent scream of the evidence. The perfect circle. The body positioned in the centre, yet with one hand reaching out. The compass, pointing not to the man, but to a void beside him. She looked from the empty spot on the floor to the victim’s splayed right hand. The posture wasn’t one of someone being exploded from within. It was one of someone offering an item. Or having an item taken. The wrongness in her gut solidified into a cold, hard certainty. “It’s not a discharge,” Quinn said, her voice low and firm. “It’s a cover-up.” Eva stared at her. “What? How can you—” “The burn pattern is too clean. It’s not an explosion; it’s an application. Someone used a hell of a lot of power, but they directed it *at* him. They burned him out from the outside in and crafted this perfect circle around him to make it look self-inflicted.” She held up the compass. “And this? This wasn’t confused. It was dropped. It led me right to the point of origin. The real one. Right here.” She pointed at the empty space on the floor. “Someone stood right here and did this to him.” She looked at the victim’s open hand. “He was holding something. Something important. His killer took it, then used enough force to vaporize not just the man, but any botched ritual. This was an assassination. Neat, professional, and designed to be misread by anyone who knows her earlier confidence deflated. She looked from the body to the compass in Quinn’s hand, the implications settling over her. “A Shade artisan crafted that compass,” she whispered. “They’re… precise. It wouldn’t be wrong.” Quinn closed her fingers around the cold brass casing, the etched sigils pressing into her palm. She looked from the manufactured scene of the crime back into the hungry darkness of the tunnels. Someone had walked out of here. Someone who knew how to make magic lie. Someone who thought they were clever. But they’d been in a hurry. They’d dropped a key. And now Detective Harlow Quinn was holding it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn mused more [more]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
96.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1268
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"dancing"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count6
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"dancing"
2"perfect"
3"tracing"
4"glint"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"quivered"
8"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1262
ratio0.001
matches
0"at"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount958
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn17
London1
Veil1
Market3
Eva12
Kowalski1
Morris2
PhD1
Detective1
Harlow1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
5"PhD"
6"Harlow"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.613
windowScore0.5
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"as if expecting the Market to return any second"
41.52% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.585
wordCount1262
matches
0"not to the man, but to a void beside him"
1"not just the man, but any botched ritual"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"needing that understanding"
1"crafted that …"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean38.24
std22.77
cv0.595
sampleLengths
072
189
241
363
440
57
627
746
839
949
1018
1137
1240
1337
1416
158
1637
1741
189
1957
2034
2146
2212
2336
2446
2538
2611
2714
288
2993
3080
3153
3218
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"was unbuttoned"
1"was curled"
2"was splayed"
3"was smudged"
4"being exploded"
26.84% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs154
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"was pointing"
2"was listening"
3"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"“The burn pattern is too clean. It’s not an explosion; it’s an application. Someone used a hell of a lot of power, but they directed it *at* him. They burned him out from the outside in and crafted this perfect circle around him to make it look self-inflicted.” She held up the compass."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount955
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"perfect, self-contained accident."
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.028272251308900525
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0062827225130890054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.62
std10.88
cv0.862
sampleLengths
024
130
218
311
428
511
622
713
84
910
1018
1110
123
1312
1411
1517
1614
179
1820
193
2017
215
222
236
2421
2514
267
2718
283
294
3039
3117
325
3324
343
3518
3618
3719
3810
395
402
4110
428
435
4418
452
4613
474
4810
496
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.33
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners33
76.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"Away from the epicenter."
1"Just scorched floor."
ratio0.023
91.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences87
matches
0"His wallet was still in"
1"Her round glasses reflected the"
2"She kept her gaze on"
3"She’d pulled Eva into consulting"
4"She examined the floor around"
5"It looked textbook."
6"She focused on the details,"
7"His left hand was curled"
8"Her gaze drifted from the"
9"She stood and walked toward"
10"She crouched again, fishing a"
11"She picked it up."
12"It was a compass."
13"It was too deliberate, too"
14"She held it flat in"
15"It quivered, spinning in a"
16"It wasn’t pointing at the"
17"It was pointing at a"
18"She walked slowly back to"
19"She stopped where it indicated."
ratio0.322
34.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"The Veil Market had moved"
2"Quinn stepped under the tape,"
3"The single overhead work lamp"
4"A man, late thirties, dressed"
5"His wallet was still in"
6"This wasn’t a robbery."
7"The voice came from the"
8"Eva Kowalski stood there, her"
9"Her round glasses reflected the"
10"Quinn said, her voice flat"
11"She kept her gaze on"
12"She’d pulled Eva into consulting"
13"The girl from the museum’s"
14"Eva said, tucking a curl"
15"A nervous habit."
16"Quinn finally looked at her."
17"Eva gestured vaguely at the"
18"Quinn knelt, ignoring the protest"
19"She examined the floor around"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The single overhead work lamp the techs had set up cast a harsh, unforgiving light, creating long, dancing shadows that made the cavernous space feel even more …"
1"His left hand was curled into a loose fist, but his right was splayed open, palm up, as if he’d been reaching for something."
2"Small, the casing etched with intricate, swirling designs that looked less like navigation aids and more like protective sigils."
3"Quinn closed her fingers around the cold brass casing, the etched sigils pressing into her palm. She looked from the manufactured scene of the crime back into t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"Eva said, her voice gaining a note of academic curiosity"
2"Eva insisted, her nervous tic returning"
3"Quinn said, her voice low and firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.087
77.6656%