Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFBFVPTHWJ4BNXDXZMRM5R

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Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.002485
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the grove tasted different. It wasn't just the damp, loamy scent of Richmond Park anymore, now seasoned with something sweet and alien, like crushed herbs Rory couldn't name. She stood just past the ring of ancient oak stones, the Heartstone pendant a warm, insistent weight against her sternum. It hadn’t pulsed with the warning heat of a Hel portal, but it hummed, a low thrum she felt more than heard, tuned to the strange frequency of this place. Beside her, Eva let out a soft, choked gasp. "The flowers..." Rory followed her gaze. The clearing was carpeted in wildflowers of impossible colors—blooms that shimmered with sapphire luminescence, petals edged in silver that seemed to drink the muted light. It was the height of a London summer outside, but here, the air was cool and carried the crispness of an eternal, perfect autumn evening. The sky above wasn't the grimy grey of the city, but a deep, velvety twilight, pricked with stars that were too large, too bright. "It's like stepping into a dream," Eva whispered, her voice hushed with reverence. She took a tentative step forward, her boot sinking into the soft moss. "And the air... it's so clean." "Too clean," Rory murmured, her hand instinctively going to the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade secured at her hip. The moonsilver was ice-cold against her palm, a stark contrast to the ambient warmth of the pendant. The dagger had been Isolde’s gift, a tool for cutting through things that shouldn’t be. She wondered what, exactly, it might need to cut through here. A shadow detached itself from the base of the nearest oak stone, coalescing into the tall, humanoid form of Nyx. Their violet eyes glowed faintly in the twilight, surveying the grove with an ageless curiosity. "Time pulls thin here," they whispered, the sound like dry leaves rustling just out of sight. "It loops and eddies. An hour could be a minute. Or a day." "That's not unnerving at all," Rory said flatly, her gaze scanning the perimeter. The standing stones didn't look the same from this side. Their surfaces, which had been rough and gnarled on the outside, were now smooth as polished river stone, swirling with intricate, glowing patterns that pulsed with a slow, steady light. "It is a place of power, not of menace," Nyx said, their shadowy form seeming to absorb the grove's faint light. "But power is never without its... residents." As if summoned by the words, a soft chime echoed through the clearing. It was followed by another, and another, until the air itself seemed to vibrate with a crystalline melody. From the canopy of a tree whose leaves were spun gold, tiny lights drifted down. They weren't fireflies. They were miniature beings with gossamer wings, leaving shimmering trails of iridescent dust in their wake. "Sprites," Eva breathed, her face alight with wonder. She held out a hand, and one of the creatures alighted on her fingertip, its light blinking slowly. It had the delicate features of a child carved from light and looked up at her with eyes like tiny black pearls. Rory watched, her pragmatic mind warring with the sheer wonder of it. She saw the beauty, but she also saw the potential for distraction, for陷阱. Her fingers tightened on the cold dagger. "Don't make any promises," she warned Eva softly, recalling Isolde's caution about Fae compulsion. Eva nodded, mesmerized, as the sprite took flight again, joining its kin in a swirling dance around the golden tree. Nyx flowed forward, a patch of deeper darkness moving through the twilight. They paused before a pool of water so still and clear it looked like a sheet of obsidian, reflecting the impossible stars above. "The water shows not what is," they murmured, leaning over it. "But what could be." Rory approached cautiously, Eva following. She peered into the pool. For a moment, she saw only their three reflections: Eva, wide-eyed and hopeful; Nyx, a void of shifting shadow; and herself, her own face pale, her blue eyes narrowed with suspicion. Then the water shimmered. The images dissolved, replaced by a flash of memory—the crimson sky of Dymas, the scent of roasting meats and exotic spices, the terrifying, opulent presence of Prince Belphegor. The pendant on her chest gave a sudden, sharper thrum of warmth at the memory of that Hellish place, a stark reminder of why they were here, seeking answers in a Fae-touched grove. She blinked, and the vision was gone, the water once again a perfect mirror. A cold dread trickled down her spine. This place didn't just warp space and time; it rifled through your mind. "Let's keep moving," Rory said, her voice firm, pulling her gaze away from the unsettling pool. "Isolde said the heart of the grove would hold answers." They moved deeper, the path winding between trees that hummed with a low, resonant energy. The flora grew more bizarre. They passed a bush laden with fruit that glowed with a soft internal light, pulsing like a heartbeat. A little further on, they found a patch of mushrooms that released tiny puffs of glowing spores when Eva accidentally brushed against them, filling the air with a constellation of drifting green lights. The unease Rory felt was a quiet, constant companion, a counterpoint to Eva's growing exhilaration. It was the silence that bothered her most. Beyond the chimes of the sprites and the hum of the trees, there was no birdsong, no rustle of small animals. It was a beautiful, curated silence, and it felt unnatural. The path ended at a small, natural amphitheater. In the center grew the largest tree Rory had ever seen. Its trunk was wide enough that all three of them linking hands couldn't have encircled it, and its branches spread like a canopy, blocking out the starry sky. Its bark was silver-white, and its leaves were a deep, shifting violet. Nestled within the great roots was a simple stone bench, and seated upon it was Isolde. The Half-Fae seer was just as Rory remembered: ageless, ethereal, her silver hair cascading over her shoulders like a waterfall. Her lavender eyes were closed, but as they approached, they opened, regarding the trio with knowing stillness. "You have passed through the outer wonders," Isolde said, her voice melodic and calm. "And you have felt the inner disquiet. This is the nature of the grove. It reflects truth, not comfort." Eva bowed her head slightly. "We seek guidance." "And you have it," Isolde replied, her gaze drifting to Rory. "The blade you carry is a key as much as a weapon. The Veil weakens with the turning season. The gluttonous prince you encountered stirs, his hunger reaching across the divide." Rory’s crescent-shaped scar itched, a nervous habit. "How do we stop him?" Isolde’s lips curved into a faint, enigmatic smile. "You ask the wrong question, child of Cardiff. The question is not how to stop a force of nature, but how to redirect it. The feast must happen, but the guest list... that can be changed." She gestured to the great tree. "This is an echo of the World Tree, whose roots touch all realms. Here, the boundaries are suggestions. You have walked in Hel. You walk now in Faerie. Remember the path." Nyx, who had been observing silently, solidified fully beside Rory. "The paths are not fixed," they whispered, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde. "They are woven. We are threads." "Precisely, shadow-walker," Isolde said. "You, who are caught between, understand the weave." She stood, her feet making no impression on the soft moss. "Your time here grows short. The grove gives clarity, but prolonged exposure... changes mortals. You begin to forget the weight of your own world." As she spoke, Rory realized with a start that the memory of London's constant hum of traffic, the smell of rain on pavement, was becoming hazy, softened at the edges by the grove's enchanting stillness. It was a seductive forgetting. "Come on," Rory said, grabbing Eva's arm with more force than she intended. "We have what we came for." Eva looked reluctant, her eyes still full of the grove's magic, but she nodded. Nyx simply dissolved back into shadow, a silent agreement. As they retraced their steps, the grove seemed to watch them go. The glowing flowers dimmed slightly; the chimes of the sprites faded. By the time they reached the ring of standing stones, the alien sweetness was already fading from the air, replaced by the familiar, gritty scent of the city. Rory stepped back through the stones first, the transition hitting her like a physical blow. The noise of the park rushed back—a distant shout, the whine of a plane overhead. The sky was its usual dull傍晚 grey. She turned back. The stones were just stones again, ancient and gnarled. There was no shimmering portal, no glimpse of twilight stars. But the Heartstone pendant was still warm against her skin, and the Fae-Forged Blade was still cold in its sheath. They had brought pieces of that other world back with them. And as the clarity of the grove receded, the weight of Isolde's cryptic warning settled on her shoulders, heavy and real. The feast was coming. And they had to decide who would be on the menu.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory said flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
80.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"cautiously"
3"slightly"
4"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"stark"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"potential"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"cascading"
count1
16
word"enigmatic"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"shimmered"
3"perfect"
4"stark"
5"warmth"
6"scanning"
7"intricate"
8"echoed"
9"crystalline"
10"potential"
11"dance"
12"reminder"
13"down her spine"
14"silence"
15"cascading"
16"enigmatic"
17"echo"
18"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"t with wonder"
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
90.44% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences2
adjustedGibberishSentences2
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0.019
matches
0"She saw the beauty, but she also saw the potential for distraction, for陷阱."
1"The sky was its usual dull傍晚 grey."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1552
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1281
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory16
Heartstone2
Hel1
Eva12
London2
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde9
Nyx6
Fae5
Dymas1
Prince1
Belphegor1
Hellish1
Fae-touched1
Half-Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Blade"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
5"Prince"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Hellish"
5"Fae-touched"
globalScore0.875
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a sheet of obsidian, reflecti"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.644
wordCount1552
matches
0"not how to stop a force of nature, but how to redirect it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean48.5
std25.27
cv0.521
sampleLengths
081
111
278
332
462
564
653
728
865
948
1046
1120
1250
13106
1434
1526
1671
1754
1875
1937
2033
218
2242
2312
2481
2529
2647
2740
2819
2923
3088
3189
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"was followed"
2"were spun"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs209
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences106
ratio0.057
matches
0"The clearing was carpeted in wildflowers of impossible colors—blooms that shimmered with sapphire luminescence, petals edged in silver that seemed to drink the muted light."
1"For a moment, she saw only their three reflections: Eva, wide-eyed and hopeful; Nyx, a void of shifting shadow; and herself, her own face pale, her blue eyes narrowed with suspicion."
2"The images dissolved, replaced by a flash of memory—the crimson sky of Dymas, the scent of roasting meats and exotic spices, the terrifying, opulent presence of Prince Belphegor."
3"This place didn't just warp space and time; it rifled through your mind."
4"The glowing flowers dimmed slightly; the chimes of the sprites faded."
5"The noise of the park rushed back—a distant shout, the whine of a plane overhead."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1292
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03637770897832817
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010835913312693499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.64
std8.36
cv0.571
sampleLengths
07
124
220
330
49
52
64
725
825
924
1013
1113
126
1319
1417
1515
1611
1720
1815
1916
2013
2113
2210
2330
2421
257
2613
2718
2815
293
3016
318
3218
3322
3412
3513
367
3714
3820
3912
4023
4111
424
435
445
4531
464
4728
4833
4914
53.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3490566037735849
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners37
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then the water shimmered."
ratio0.011
70.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences91
matches
0"It wasn't just the damp,"
1"She stood just past the"
2"It hadn’t pulsed with the"
3"It was the height of"
4"She took a tentative step"
5"She wondered what, exactly, it"
6"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
7"they whispered, the sound like"
8"Their surfaces, which had been"
9"It was followed by another,"
10"They weren't fireflies."
11"They were miniature beings with"
12"She held out a hand,"
13"It had the delicate features"
14"She saw the beauty, but"
15"Her fingers tightened on the"
16"she warned Eva softly, recalling"
17"They paused before a pool"
18"they murmured, leaning over it"
19"She peered into the pool."
ratio0.374
42.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"It wasn't just the damp,"
2"She stood just past the"
3"It hadn’t pulsed with the"
4"Rory followed her gaze."
5"The clearing was carpeted in"
6"It was the height of"
7"The sky above wasn't the"
8"Eva whispered, her voice hushed"
9"She took a tentative step"
10"Rory murmured, her hand instinctively"
11"The moonsilver was ice-cold against"
12"The dagger had been Isolde’s"
13"She wondered what, exactly, it"
14"A shadow detached itself from"
15"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
16"they whispered, the sound like"
17"Rory said flatly, her gaze"
18"The standing stones didn't look"
19"Their surfaces, which had been"
ratio0.835
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"As if summoned by the"
1"By the time they reached"
ratio0.022
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The clearing was carpeted in wildflowers of impossible colors—blooms that shimmered with sapphire luminescence, petals edged in silver that seemed to drink the …"
1"The sky above wasn't the grimy grey of the city, but a deep, velvety twilight, pricked with stars that were too large, too bright."
2"Their surfaces, which had been rough and gnarled on the outside, were now smooth as polished river stone, swirling with intricate, glowing patterns that pulsed …"
3"They moved deeper, the path winding between trees that hummed with a low, resonant energy."
4"Nyx, who had been observing silently, solidified fully beside Rory."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"they whispered, the sound like dry leaves rustling just out of sight"
1"Rory said flatly, her gaze scanning the perimeter"
2"Nyx said, their shadowy form seeming to absorb the grove's faint light"
3"Eva breathed, her face alight with wonder"
4"Isolde said, her voice melodic and calm"
5"Isolde replied, her gaze drifting to Rory"
6"they whispered, their violet eyes fixed on Isolde"
7"She stood, her feet making no impression on the soft moss"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
3"Eva breathed (breathe)"
4"she warned (warn)"
5"they murmured (murmur)"
6"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.467
77.0954%