Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFC625ZYRV91HEVNMWSRMB

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.001765
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in silver sheets, turning the neon signs of Soho into bleeding watercolors. Detective Harlow Quinn’s world narrowed to the slap of her own wet shoes on the slick pavement and the retreating figure of the man she’d been tailing for three blocks. He was a ghost in a dark coat, a flicker of movement in the downpour, but Quinn’s focus was absolute, a laser sight trained on his back. Her left wrist ached, a dull throb beneath the worn leather of her watch. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to read a chase like a piece of music, and this one was building to a crescendo. The suspect—a weaselly informant named Finch who dealt in information about the city’s stranger elements—had bolted the second he’d clocked her. He wasn’t just running from a cop; he was running from *her*, from the specific, relentless pressure she applied. He cut down a narrow alley, a gash of darkness between two clubs thumping with bass. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her scalp. The alley stank of rotting garbage and wet brick. Finch was faster, lighter, but Quinn ran with a military precision that wasted no motion, her long legs eating up the ground. She was gaining. He burst out onto another street, skidded on the wet asphalt, and darted across traffic, earning a symphony of blaring horns. Quinn didn’t hesitate, weaving through the stalled cars, her brown eyes never leaving him. He was heading toward Camden, away from the bright lights, into the older, more labyrinthine parts of the city. Her mind raced faster than her feet. Finch was small-time, but he was connected. He was a thread, and if she pulled hard enough, she was certain he’d lead her to the heart of the thing that had taken Morris. Her partner’s face, pale and still in the morgue, flashed behind her eyes. *Unexplained circumstances.* The words were a permanent stain on her career, a ghost that haunted her every case. Finch vanished down a set of grimy steps leading to an abandoned Tube station. A sign, rusted and hanging by one bolt, read “Camden Town – Out of Service.” Quinn slowed, her breath pluming in the cold, damp air. This was it. The threshold. Above ground, she was the law. Down there? She didn’t know what she was. She drew her service weapon, the weight of the Glock a familiar comfort in her hand. The steps were slick with algae and something else she didn’t want to identify. The air grew thick, carrying a strange mélange of scents—ozone, damp earth, exotic spices, and something metallic, like old blood. At the bottom, a figure emerged from the shadows, blocking a heavy iron door set into the tiled wall. He was a big man, his bulk filling the archway. He wasn’t Finch. “You’re lost, Detective,” the man rumbled, his voice like gravel grinding together. Quinn kept her gun low but ready. “I’m pursuing a suspect. He came down here.” “No one came down here,” the man said, his eyes glinting in the weak light. He held out a massive hand. “Token.” She’d heard whispers of this place. The Veil Market. A supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon. The entry requirement was a bone token. She had none. She had only her badge and a burning need for answers. “Metropolitan Police. Step aside,” she said, her voice hard, leaving no room for argument. The man smiled, a chilling sight that didn’t reach his eyes. “That doesn’t mean anything down here. Turn around.” From beyond the door, a low hum of activity reached her—muffled voices, the clink of glass, a strange, melodic chanting. Finch was in there. He had to be. He knew things about the clique she was investigating, the one she was sure was tangled up in Morris’s death. This was her chance. The choice was a physical weight on her shoulders. Protocol screamed at her to call for backup, to secure the perimeter. But backup wouldn’t come down here. They wouldn’t understand. They’d dismiss it, just like they’d dismissed Morris’s death. And Finch, and whatever leads he represented, would vanish into the city’s underground forever. She made her decision. It wasn’t a reckless leap; it was a calculated step into the unknown, the same kind of calculation she’d made a thousand times in her career, just with a different set of variables. In one fluid motion, she feinted left, then drove her right elbow into the guard’s solar plexus. He grunted, his breath exploding out of him, and as he doubled over, she brought the butt of her gun down on the back of his head. He crumpled to the wet concrete without another sound. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She holstered her weapon and dragged the man into a deeper shadow, propping him against the wall. He’d be out for a while. She took a deep breath, smoothed her sodden jacket, and pushed the iron door open. The world shifted. The abandoned Tube station was gone, replaced by a cavernous space that should not have existed. It was the Veil Market. Stalls made of faded silk and rough-hewn wood lined the curved tunnels, lit by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows. The air was thick with the smell of incense, rare herbs, and something else, something alive and electric. Creatures—some almost human, some decidedly not—haggled over items that made the hair on Quinn’s arms stand up: vials of swirling liquid that glowed with internal light, ancient books bound in what looked like skin, jagged pieces of crystal that hummed with power. She saw Finch immediately. He was at a stall thirty yards away, talking urgently to a vendor with unnaturally long fingers, handing over a wad of cash for a small, cloth-wrapped parcel. He hadn’t seen her yet. Quinn moved through the crowd, her senses on high alert. Every instinct told her she was a wolf in a sheepfold that was secretly full of other wolves. She kept her hand near her hip, her posture rigid with controlled tension. She passed a stall where a woman with eyes like a cat was selling locks of hair, each tagged with a name and a date of birth. Another displayed an array of knives that seemed to drink the light around them. Then she saw him. Tomás Herrera. He was standing near a makeshift medical area, a space curtained off by stained sheets. He was checking the pulse of a young woman whose skin had a faint, shimmering quality. He looked exactly as he did in his file: the short, curly dark brown hair, the olive skin, the serious set of his mouth. The Saint Christopher medallion gleamed at his throat. The scar on his forearm was visible as he rolled up his sleeves. The former paramedic, the one who’d lost his license for treating non-human patients. The one who patched up the very people she was hunting. Their eyes met across the crowded market. Herrera’s warm brown eyes widened in pure shock, then narrowed in recognition and something like alarm. He gave a minute, sharp shake of his head. A warning. *Get out.* It was the confirmation she needed. She was in the right place. This was where the threads of her case led. But the warning was also real. Herrera knew this world. He knew what happened to cops who wandered in where they didn’t belong. Finch finished his transaction and turned, finally spotting her. His face went pale. He clutched his package to his chest and bolted deeper into the market, toward a darker tunnel lined with ragged curtains. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She ignored Herrera’s pleading look and plunged after Finch, the strange sounds and smells of the market closing in around her. The tunnel was narrower, the stalls more clandestine. The sense of danger was a taste in the back of her throat, coppery and sharp. She rounded a corner and found herself in a dead end. Finch was gone. The only feature was a single, unmarked door made of dark, polished wood. From behind her, a calm, smooth voice spoke. “Looking for someone, Detective Quinn?” She spun around. A tall man in an impeccably tailored suit stood there, smiling. He held no weapon, but his presence was more threatening than any gun. He had the easy confidence of a man who owned the ground he stood on. “I’m pursuing a suspect,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “There are no suspects here,” the man said. “Only guests. And you, I’m afraid, are not on the guest list.” He took a step forward. Quinn took a step back, her hand drifting toward her hip. “I wouldn’t,” the man said softly, his eyes glinting. “The rules are different here. That badge is just a piece of metal. It won’t protect you.” She was trapped. The door behind her was locked. The man in front of her was a wall of implied violence. And somewhere in this den of monsters and magic was the truth about her partner. She had followed the thread, and now it had pulled her into the labyrinth. The only way out was through.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the man said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
93.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1555
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1555
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"symphony"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count2
7
word"chilling"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"variables"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"clandestine"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"throb"
2"symphony"
3"raced"
4"weight"
5"familiar"
6"glinting"
7"chilling"
8"calculated"
9"variables"
10"silk"
11"dancing"
12"electric"
13"crystal"
14"tension"
15"pulse"
16"clandestine"
17"sense of"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1544
ratio0.003
matches
0"her"
1"Unexplained circumstances."
2"Get out."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1464
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Finch11
Camden1
Morris3
Tube2
Glock1
Veil2
Market2
Herrera4
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Finch"
3"Morris"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
72.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like skin, jagged pieces of crysta"
1"knives that seemed to drink the light around them"
2"something like alarm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1544
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean40.63
std25.26
cv0.622
sampleLengths
072
179
263
354
471
558
650
732
812
915
1022
1140
1214
1319
1452
1553
1637
1753
1844
193
20102
2137
2282
236
24100
257
2629
2744
2834
2948
3027
3113
3242
3312
3420
3516
3626
3756
94.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"was connected"
1"was tangled"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was building"
1"was running"
2"was gaining"
3"was heading"
4"was investigating"
5"was selling"
6"was standing"
7"was checking"
8"was hunting"
12.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences131
ratio0.046
matches
0"The suspect—a weaselly informant named Finch who dealt in information about the city’s stranger elements—had bolted the second he’d clocked her."
1"He wasn’t just running from a cop; he was running from *her*, from the specific, relentless pressure she applied."
2"The air grew thick, carrying a strange mélange of scents—ozone, damp earth, exotic spices, and something metallic, like old blood."
3"From beyond the door, a low hum of activity reached her—muffled voices, the clink of glass, a strange, melodic chanting."
4"It wasn’t a reckless leap; it was a calculated step into the unknown, the same kind of calculation she’d made a thousand times in her career, just with a different set of variables."
5"Creatures—some almost human, some decidedly not—haggled over items that made the hair on Quinn’s arms stand up: vials of swirling liquid that glowed with internal light, ancient books bound in what looked like skin, jagged pieces of crystal that hummed with power."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1476
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, cloth-wrapped parcel."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.023712737127371274
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.009485094850948509
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.79
std7.54
cv0.64
sampleLengths
015
130
227
314
425
521
619
716
813
99
1022
113
1221
1314
1419
157
167
1726
1813
1918
2014
2125
223
232
246
252
266
2716
2814
2920
3019
3110
323
3312
347
358
3615
376
381
396
403
4110
427
433
4411
4514
4611
478
4820
494
36.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3053435114503817
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners40
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Then she saw him."
ratio0.008
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences120
matches
0"He was a ghost in"
1"Her left wrist ached, a"
2"He wasn’t just running from"
3"He cut down a narrow"
4"She was gaining."
5"He burst out onto another"
6"He was heading toward Camden,"
7"Her mind raced faster than"
8"He was a thread, and"
9"Her partner’s face, pale and"
10"She didn’t know what she"
11"She drew her service weapon,"
12"He was a big man,"
13"He wasn’t Finch."
14"He held out a massive"
15"She’d heard whispers of this"
16"She had none."
17"She had only her badge"
18"she said, her voice hard,"
19"He had to be."
ratio0.467
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences120
matches
0"The rain fell in silver"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s world narrowed"
2"He was a ghost in"
3"Her left wrist ached, a"
4"The suspect—a weaselly informant named"
5"He wasn’t just running from"
6"He cut down a narrow"
7"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
8"The alley stank of rotting"
9"Finch was faster, lighter, but"
10"She was gaining."
11"He burst out onto another"
12"Quinn didn’t hesitate, weaving through"
13"He was heading toward Camden,"
14"Her mind raced faster than"
15"Finch was small-time, but he"
16"He was a thread, and"
17"Her partner’s face, pale and"
18"Finch vanished down a set"
19"A sign, rusted and hanging"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Finch was faster, lighter, but Quinn ran with a military precision that wasted no motion, her long legs eating up the ground."
1"*Unexplained circumstances.* The words were a permanent stain on her career, a ghost that haunted her every case."
2"A supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon."
3"The abandoned Tube station was gone, replaced by a cavernous space that should not have existed."
4"Stalls made of faded silk and rough-hewn wood lined the curved tunnels, lit by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows."
5"Creatures—some almost human, some decidedly not—haggled over items that made the hair on Quinn’s arms stand up: vials of swirling liquid that glowed with intern…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"the man said, his eyes glinting in the weak light"
1"she said, her voice hard, leaving no room for argument"
2"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"the man said softly, his eyes glinting"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.0200%