| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 93.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1639 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1639 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "determined" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1624 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1059 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Cambden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 12 | | Renaissance | 1 | | Markham | 6 | | Cult | 1 | | London | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Camden | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Detective | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Markham" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cambden" | | 1 | "Town" | | 2 | "Renaissance" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 0.933 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "blades that seemed to drink the light" |
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| 76.85% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.232 | | wordCount | 1624 | | matches | | 0 | "not neatly, not with the satisfaction of a puzzle solved, but with the terrible clarity of a picture she hadn't known she" | | 1 | "not with the satisfaction of a puzzle solved, but with the terrible clarity of a picture she hadn't known she" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 35.3 | | std | 26.73 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 77 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 101 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 97 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 75 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 68 | | 39 | 49 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 69 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 30 |
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| 90.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "were folded" | | 1 | "were interlaced" | | 2 | "been told" | | 3 | "been told" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was screaming" | | 1 | "was looking" | | 2 | "was pulling" | | 3 | "wasn't pointing" | | 4 | "was pointing" | | 5 | "was building" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "His hands were folded across his chest like someone had taken the time to pose him, and around his neck hung a bone token on a leather cord—the kind of thing you'd see at a Renaissance fair, except this one hummed with a frequency she felt in her molars." | | 1 | "The man's face was placid, almost peaceful—no death rattle, no final terror frozen in his features." | | 2 | "Quinn had heard the rumors—occult rings meeting in underground spaces, trading in items that shouldn't exist." | | 3 | "The tunnel curved, and then—" | | 4 | "There, in the corner where shadow pooled deepest, she could see it now—a faint distortion in the air, like heat rising from summer asphalt." | | 5 | "And then his face changed—subtly, like watching ice begin to crack." | | 6 | "Quinn felt the pieces rearrange themselves in her mind—not neatly, not with the satisfaction of a puzzle solved, but with the terrible clarity of a picture she hadn't known she was building." | | 7 | "The compass in her pocket—she'd picked it up without thinking, compelled by some instinct she didn't fully understand—grew warm against her thigh." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1093 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.026532479414455627 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012808783165599268 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 14 | | std | 11.55 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 61.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.43103448275862066 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "His hands were folded across" | | 1 | "She didn't move from the" | | 2 | "He handed her a pair" | | 3 | "She pulled on the gloves" | | 4 | "She crouched beside him, studying" | | 5 | "She glanced up at Markham" | | 6 | "She'd dismissed them as the" | | 7 | "He gestured toward the far" | | 8 | "He stopped, and Quinn saw" | | 9 | "He shook his head" | | 10 | "He met her eyes" | | 11 | "She'd been told it was" | | 12 | "She'd been told to close" | | 13 | "She'd started looking into the" | | 14 | "They walked the length of" | | 15 | "She looked terrified and determined" | | 16 | "She glanced at the body" | | 17 | "She gestured at the empty" | | 18 | "It was pointing at the" | | 19 | "she said slowly" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 54.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency lights cast the" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stood at" | | 2 | "The body lay twelve feet" | | 3 | "His hands were folded across" | | 4 | "She didn't move from the" | | 5 | "He handed her a pair" | | 6 | "She pulled on the gloves" | | 7 | "The man's face was placid," | | 8 | "She crouched beside him, studying" | | 9 | "She glanced up at Markham" | | 10 | "Quinn stood, brushing dust from" | | 11 | "The words hung in the" | | 12 | "Quinn had heard the rumors—occult" | | 13 | "She'd dismissed them as the" | | 14 | "He gestured toward the far" | | 15 | "He stopped, and Quinn saw" | | 16 | "He shook his head" | | 17 | "He met her eyes" | | 18 | "The mention of Morris hit" | | 19 | "She'd been told it was" |
| | ratio | 0.81 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The emergency lights cast the abandoned Cambden Town platform in shades of sickly amber, their humming the only sound beneath the distant rumble of trains that …" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the threshold of the tunnel, her boots crunching on debris that crunched like broken teeth, and waited for her eyes to adjust to…" | | 2 | "Quinn had heard the rumors—occult rings meeting in underground spaces, trading in items that shouldn't exist." | | 3 | "She'd dismissed them as the kind of urban legend that flourished in a city as old as London." | | 4 | "But now, standing over a body that made no sense, she felt the ground shift beneath her assumptions." | | 5 | "They walked the length of the platform in silence, their footsteps echoing against tile that hadn't seen a broom in decades." | | 6 | "Glass vials containing liquids that moved of their own accord." | | 7 | "The world folded around her, and Detective Harlow Quinn disappeared into the space between worlds, following the pull of a compass that had been waiting three y…" |
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| 65.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "DI Markham emerged, his flashlight painting erratic arcs across the walls" | | 1 | "Eva stepped, her voice dropping" | | 2 | "She pulled, its face glowing now, its needle spinning toward the rift" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Markham breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |