Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFDHW31AFQJ422WPX0JCZN

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Duration:
56.8s
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$0.001080
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AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp, mineral smell of London’s forgotten places hit Detective Harlow Quinn as she descended the last crumbling step. It wasn’t the usual stench of a crime scene—cordial bleach, blood, stale sweat—but something older. A cold draft, smelling of ozone and wet stone, whispered up from the darkness. Her worn leather watch, strapped tight to her left wrist, felt heavy. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden was supposed to be sealed. Yet here she was, her footsteps echoing with military precision off curved, grimy tiles that vanished into a blackness not even the portable arc lights could fully conquer. The uniformed officer at the base of the stairs looked young, his face pale under his helmet lamp. “Ma’am. Scene’s just ahead. It’s… odd.” “They all are,” Quinn said, her voice flat. She didn’t break stride. The oddness announced itself before she saw the body. The quality of the light changed. The stark white of the police LEDs was muddied by a flickering, sourceless glow that seemed to seep from the walls themselves, casting long, dancing shadows. The air hummed, a sub-audible thrum that set her teeth on edge. The victim was a man in his fifties, sprawled face-up on the platform edge. Well-dressed, a cashmere overcoat now ruined by a dark, wet stain over his heart. A single, precise wound. But it was the surroundings that held Quinn’s attention. Around the body, arranged with a chilling neatness, were objects that had no place in a London Underground tunnel, sealed or otherwise. A clutch of black feathers tied with red thread. A small, cracked clay bowl holding a dust that shimmered like crushed opal. A knife with a blade of tarnished silver and a hilt carved from what looked like bone. “Detective Quinn.” She turned. Eva Kowalski stood a few feet away, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest with both hands. Her curly red hair was a violent splash of colour in the gloom, her freckles stark against her pale skin. She tucked a strand behind her left ear, a quick, nervous gesture. “Miss Kowalski,” Quinn acknowledged. “Research assistant at the British Museum. They told me you were the one who called it in. Found him during one of your… urban explorations?” Eva’s green eyes, magnified slightly by her round glasses, didn’t waver. “I have access permits for several subterranean historical sites. This station is on the list. I was documenting graffiti.” She gestured vaguely toward the walls, where fading advertisements for long-dead products were defaced with modern tags. “I found him just like this.” Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. It was a clean story. Too clean. “And you didn’t touch anything? These… items?” “I know procedure,” Eva said, a hint of defiance in her voice. “I called it in immediately.” Quinn crouched by the body, her movements economical. She ignored the strange artifacts for a moment, focusing on the man. His hands were clean, nails manicured. No defensive wounds. He hadn’t seen it coming. The wound itself was a narrow, brutal puncture. Not a stabbing motion. A thrust. Professional. But the edges of the fabric around the hole were… wrong. They weren’t cut or torn. They were *crisped*. A faint, acrid smell, like burnt hair and copper, rose from the stain. “Forensics?” Quinn asked, not looking up. A CSM in a white suit shifted nearby. “On their way, ma’am. But the initial scan is… confused. The thermal residue around the wound is off the charts, but the body’s core temp is ambient. It’s as if the weapon was thousands of degrees for a fraction of a second. No metal we know does that without leaving more damage.” “A specialized tool,” Quinn mused. Her eyes flicked to the bone-handled knife on the ground. It looked ceremonial, not practical. “Or it wasn’t a tool at all,” Eva said softly. She had edged closer, her satchel hanging open. Quinn saw the spine of a thick, leather-bound book inside. “The arrangement. The feathers, the *aethereal quartz* dust in the bowl, the *waning-phase* silver blade. This isn’t a random killing. It’s a ritual dismissal. A sending.” Quinn stood up, wiping her hands on her trousers. “A sending.” She let the word hang, dripping with skepticism. “You read a lot of fantasy novels, Miss Kowalski?” Eva’s cheeks flushed. “I have a master’s in Ancient History from Oxford. I specialize in comparative esoteric traditions. This…” she gestured at the scene, “…fits a specific pattern documented in marginalized grimoires. This man wasn’t just murdered. He was *unmade* from a pact. The items are symbolic severances.” Quinn stared at her. The hum in the air seemed to pulse. *Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins.* The words, unbidden, rose from the dark pit of memory where she kept the file on DS Morris. His face, confused, terrified, in the flickering light of a warehouse that should have been empty. The sounds that hadn’t been human. The official report that called it a gas leak and a psychotic episode. She pushed the memory down. “What I see is a dead man, surrounded by staged occult nonsense, likely to throw off the investigation. The killer wants us looking at spellbooks, not spreadsheets.” She turned to the CSM. “I want his ID. Credit card trails, phone records, the works. This is a financial hit dressed up as a midnight movie.” “But the thermal signature—” the CSM began. “—Can be faked with the right chemicals,” Quinn finished. She began to walk a slow grid, her eyes missing nothing. The grit on the floor, the patterns of dust. She stopped. Near the wall, half-hidden in shadow, the dust was disturbed in a perfect, small circle. As if something had been sitting there, recently removed. Not a footstep. A small, flat base. She looked back at the ritual items. They were all *around* the body. Nothing was missing from the tableau Eva described. “You’re wrong,” Eva said, her voice firmer now. She had taken a small, brass object from her satchel. Quinn caught the glint of verdigris on its casing. “This is a Veil Compass. It’s attuned to… anomalous energy.” She didn’t meet Quinn’s eyes, focusing on the device in her palm. “The needle hasn’t stopped spinning since I arrived. It’s pointing right at him.” She gestured to the dead man. “But it’s also pointing *there*.” She aimed a finger at a seemingly blank section of tiled wall, curved where the platform met the tunnel mouth. Quinn followed the line. Just tiles, grime, an old poster for Bovril. Then she saw it. Not with her eyes, but with the trained perception of a detective who knew when a scene had been edited. The dust on the floor in front of that wall was subtly different. Smoothed, as if by a very soft brush or a gentle rush of air. And the quality of the shadow there was a fraction too deep, too solid. She walked over, ignoring Eva’s sharp intake of breath. Up close, the air was colder. The hum was louder. She reached out a hand, not toward the wall, but to the space just before it. Her fingers passed through nothingness—and then a static charge crawled up her arm, making the fine hairs stand on end. She pulled her hand back. There was no visible change, but she *felt* it. A discontinuity. A tear in the fabric of the place. “It’s a rift,” Eva whispered, coming up beside her. “A temporary portal. They’re unstable. The Market moves every full moon.” “The Market?” Quinn asked, her voice dangerously low. “The Veil Market. A black market. For things that aren’t supposed to exist.” Eva was looking at the compass, its needle now quivering violently toward the wall. “He didn’t just break a business deal, Detective. He broke a deal with something that doesn’t play by our rules. The killer came through here, performed the severance ritual to legally—in their terms—nullify the contract, and left back the way they came. The ritual items are a receipt. A notice of termination.” Quinn looked from the impossibly cold, crisped wound on the corpse, to the bizarre artifacts, to the faint, shimmering dust in the bowl that no forensic kit would ever identify, and finally to the patch of wrongness in the air. The clean financial hit theory dissolved. The staged occult scene theory evaporated. What was left was a colder, more terrifying logic. She saw what others had missed. Not the *what* of the objects, but the *why* of their placement. They weren’t for show. They were functional, within a logic she was only beginning to glimpse. The circle in the dust by the wall—something had been placed there to *anchor* the rift. The compass needle pointed to both the corpse and the rift because the corpse’s energy, his very life, had been used as the final payment to seal it shut behind the killer. DS Morris’s face flashed again in her mind. His confusion. The sounds. “You believe me,” Eva said, not as a question. Quinn didn’t answer. She turned to the stunned CSM. “Secure the perimeter. No one touches anything, especially those items. I want a full spectral and ultraviolet scan of this entire section, focusing on that wall.” She pointed to the spot. “And get someone to pull every missing persons, unsolved death, and weird incident report from within a half-mile radius for the last… five years. Look for patterns that don’t make sense.” She finally looked at Eva Kowalski, who was clutching her brass compass like a talisman. The researcher’s face was full of a fearful understanding. “You’re going to tell me everything you know about this Market,” Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for refusal. “And you’re going to show me how that compass works.” The mystery hadn’t been solved. It had simply cracked open, revealing a deeper, darker labyrinth beneath. And Harlow Quinn, with her military bearing and her sharp jaw set in a line of grim resolve, knew she had just stepped into it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
88.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1675
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1675
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"stark"
count2
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"chilling"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"spectral"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"stark"
3"dancing"
4"chilling"
5"shimmered"
6"gloom"
7"flicked"
8"pulse"
9"perfect"
10"glint"
11"spectral"
12"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
97.86% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords15
totalWords1662
ratio0.009
matches
0"crisped"
1"aethereal quartz"
2"waning-phase"
3"unmade"
4"Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins."
5"around"
6"there"
7"felt"
8"what"
9"why"
10"anchor"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1192
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London2
Detective1
Harlow2
Quinn20
Tube1
Camden1
Underground1
Kowalski2
Eva12
Morris2
Bovril1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.661
windowScore0.5
61.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"glow that seemed to seep from the walls themselves, casting long, dancing shadows"
1"looked like bone"
2"a finger at a seemingly blank section of ti"
19.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.805
wordCount1662
matches
0"Not with her eyes, but with the trained perception of a detective who knew"
1"not toward the wall, but to the space just before it"
2"Not the *what* of the objects, but the *why* of their placement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean44.92
std28.94
cv0.644
sampleLengths
099
124
212
353
4102
52
652
729
853
918
1017
1181
126
1360
1420
1554
1628
1748
1869
1959
207
2162
2221
2393
2477
2535
2644
2720
288
2979
3061
3182
3212
339
3471
3524
3671
80.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount9
totalSentences127
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was muddied"
2"were defaced"
3"were *crisped"
4"was disturbed"
5"been edited"
6"been placed"
7"been used"
8"been solved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was looking"
1"was clutching"
81.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences140
ratio0.021
matches
0"It wasn’t the usual stench of a crime scene—cordial bleach, blood, stale sweat—but something older."
1"Her fingers passed through nothingness—and then a static charge crawled up her arm, making the fine hairs stand on end."
2"The circle in the dust by the wall—something had been placed there to *anchor* the rift."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1202
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, leather-bound book"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02745424292845258
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012479201331114808
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.87
std9.63
cv0.811
sampleLengths
019
115
214
312
411
528
618
76
88
94
109
116
1226
1312
1414
1514
164
179
1822
199
2013
2117
222
232
2418
2520
2612
274
2825
2911
3036
316
324
335
342
357
3612
375
388
3912
406
413
425
438
444
452
461
4710
481
495
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners44
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Just tiles, grime, an old"
1"Then she saw it."
ratio0.018
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences114
matches
0"It wasn’t the usual stench"
1"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
2"She didn’t break stride."
3"Her curly red hair was"
4"She tucked a strand behind"
5"She gestured vaguely toward the"
6"It was a clean story."
7"She ignored the strange artifacts"
8"His hands were clean, nails"
9"He hadn’t seen it coming."
10"They weren’t cut or torn."
11"They were *crisped*."
12"Her eyes flicked to the"
13"It looked ceremonial, not practical."
14"She had edged closer, her"
15"She let the word hang,"
16"she gestured at the scene"
17"His face, confused, terrified, in"
18"She pushed the memory down."
19"She turned to the CSM"
ratio0.333
52.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences114
matches
0"The damp, mineral smell of"
1"It wasn’t the usual stench"
2"A cold draft, smelling of"
3"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
4"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
5"The uniformed officer at the"
6"Quinn said, her voice flat"
7"She didn’t break stride."
8"The oddness announced itself before"
9"The quality of the light"
10"The stark white of the"
11"The air hummed, a sub-audible"
12"The victim was a man"
13"A single, precise wound."
14"A clutch of black feathers"
15"A small, cracked clay bowl"
16"A knife with a blade"
17"Eva Kowalski stood a few"
18"Her curly red hair was"
19"She tucked a strand behind"
ratio0.816
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"As if something had been"
ratio0.009
43.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Yet here she was, her footsteps echoing with military precision off curved, grimy tiles that vanished into a blackness not even the portable arc lights could fu…"
1"The stark white of the police LEDs was muddied by a flickering, sourceless glow that seemed to seep from the walls themselves, casting long, dancing shadows."
2"Around the body, arranged with a chilling neatness, were objects that had no place in a London Underground tunnel, sealed or otherwise."
3"A small, cracked clay bowl holding a dust that shimmered like crushed opal."
4"His face, confused, terrified, in the flickering light of a warehouse that should have been empty."
5"She finally looked at Eva Kowalski, who was clutching her brass compass like a talisman."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice flat"
1"Eva said, a hint of defiance in her voice"
2"Quinn asked, not looking up"
3"Eva said, her voice firmer now"
4"Quinn asked, her voice dangerously low"
5"Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for refusal"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.111
78.3944%