Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFDMA3HWH5Y4DKQ0MCS0M1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at precisely 9:47 PM. Aurora knew because she'd been staring at the clock for the past seventeen minutes, pretending to read the same paragraph of Eva's research notes for the third time. She padded across the cluttered living room on bare feet, sidestepping Ptolemy, who stretched lazily across the rug. The cat opened one eye, gave her a look of profound judgment, then returned to his nap. Through the peephole, she saw platinum-blond hair catching the hallway light. Her heart did that stupid thing where it tried to climb into her throat. She counted to three, then opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood there in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent, one hand resting on an ivory-handled cane. His amber eye caught the light first, then the black one, and suddenly she was seventeen again, sneaking into that forbidden library section with him, his breath warm against her ear as he translated ancient Latin under his breath. "Aurora," he said, and his voice was exactly the same—smooth as silk, edged with something she couldn't quite name. "May I come in?" She should say no. She should slam the door in his face and tell him to go to hell. Instead, she stepped back. "Ptolemy will judge you." The cat, predictably, had already judged him. He was now sitting upright, tail wrapped around his paws, watching Lucien with the intense focus of a creature who'd seen too much to be easily impressed. Lucien entered, moving with that particular grace she remembered—every step deliberate, every gesture controlled. He surveyed the chaos of books and scrolls, the half-empty tea mugs, the research notes scattered across every available surface. "You've been busy." "You could say that." She closed the door, leaning against it for support. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned, and for a moment something flickered across his face—vulnerability, perhaps, or uncertainty. It was gone so quickly she might have imagined it. "I need your help." The words hung between them like a challenge. She crossed her arms. "After three years of silence, you show up at my door needing help?" "Three years." He repeated the words softly, almost to himself. "It feels like yesterday and a lifetime ago." "Don't." Her voice cracked. "Don't do that. Don't make it sound poetic when you abandoned me." "I didn't abandon you." His jaw tightened. "I left to protect you." "Protect me from what? From you?" She pushed off from the door, anger giving her courage. "You never even told me what you were. Not really. Just hints and riddles and then—poof. Gone." He moved then, closing the distance between them in three swift steps. She should step back. She should keep the wall at her back where it was safe. Instead, she stayed put, breathing him in—that familiar scent of expensive cologne and something darker underneath. "I'm half-demon, Aurora." The words came out rough, stripped of all his usual polish. "Born in Marseille to a human mother who died when I was six, raised by a father from the realm of Avaros who thought emotions were weakness. I left because every day I stayed, I risked dragging you into a world that would destroy you." She searched his face, those mismatched eyes that had haunted her dreams for three years. "You could have told me. You could have trusted me." "I was trying to keep you safe." His hand came up, hesitated, then settled on her shoulder. The touch sent electricity through her. "But I've made a mistake. A big one. And I need someone who can think like you do—someone brilliant and fearless and stubborn enough to tell me when I'm being an idiot." She wanted to pull away. She wanted to lean into his touch. "What kind of mistake?" "The kind that involves a missing artifact, a very angry demon lord, and a price on my head that just went up by several million pounds." He dropped his hand, stepping back to create distance. "I need to find it before he does. And I need someone who can read ancient demonic scripts." Her breath caught. "You're talking about the Codex Maleficarum." His eyes widened slightly. "You've seen it?" "Not seen. Heard about. Eva's been researching it for months." She gestured to the chaos around them. "It's why I'm here. Why we're all here. The Codex is real, Lucien. And if you've lost it, or if someone's taken it from you..." "It wasn't taken." He ran a hand through his hair, disrupting the perfect slicked-back style. "I hid it. Three years ago, when I left. I thought I was being smart, putting it somewhere no one would think to look." "Where?" He met her gaze. "Your flat. In Cardiff. The one you shared with Evan." The name was a slap. She recoiled. "You hid a demonic artifact in my home? With my abusive ex?" "I didn't know about Evan then." His voice was tight with self-recrimination. "I thought it would be safe because no one from our world would think to look there. I was wrong on both counts." She began to pace, mind racing. "Evan must have found it. He always was nosy. But why would he keep it? He didn't believe in any of that stuff." "He might not have known what it was. Or he might be working with someone who does." Lucien moved to the window, checking the street below with the casual paranoia of someone who'd been hunted before. "Either way, we need to get to Cardiff. Now." She stopped pacing. "We?" His reflection in the window glass showed a slight smile. "I can't read the Codex without you. And I can't protect you without you knowing how to protect yourself." He turned. "Besides, I missed you, Aurora. Terribly. I know I have no right to say that, but it's true." The confession hung in the air, raw and honest in a way she'd never heard from him before. She wanted to believe him. She wanted to trust him again. But three years of wondering, of questioning, of building a life without him—it wasn't something she could just set aside. "How do I know this isn't another trick?" she asked softly. "How do I know you're not using me again?" "Because this time, I'm asking instead of telling." He came back to her, close enough that she could feel his breath on her face. "Because I'm offering you the truth instead of hiding it. Because I'm terrified that if I lose you again, I'll lose the best part of myself." His hand came up to cup her cheek, thumb brushing her skin with infinite tenderness. She leaned into the touch before she could stop herself. "We'll need supplies," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Research materials. Weapons. And I need to tell Eva where I'm going." "Eva knows I was coming." He smiled, that familiar curve of lips that made her knees weak. "She's been expecting me for the past hour." She pulled back, startled. "You told Eva before you told me?" "I told Eva because I needed her research. I came to you because I needed you." His fingers traced her jawline. "Always you, Aurora. From the moment we met in that library, stealing forbidden books and secrets. You were my rebellion. My hope. My heart." The words were everything she'd wanted to hear for three years. But wanting and trusting were different things. "We'll go to Cardiff," she said finally. "We'll find this Codex. But slowly, Lucien. Slowly and carefully. And if I find out you're lying to me again—" "You won't." He caught her hand, bringing it to his lips. "I swear on everything I am, I will never lie to you again." She wanted to believe him. God help her, she wanted to believe him so badly it hurt. "Then let's pack." She pulled her hand free, stepping back to gather her thoughts. "But I drive. And I pick the music." "Anything you want." He moved to help her gather research materials, movements efficient and practiced. "Though I should warn you, I know every word to every Taylor Swift song from the past decade." She paused, looking at him over a stack of books. "You're serious." "Completely." He grinned, and it was the boyish smile she remembered from those stolen moments in the library stacks. "I may be half-demon, but I have excellent taste in pop music." "Perfect." She stacked the books on the table, mind already racing ahead to Cardiff, to Evan, to the secrets waiting in her old flat. "Then we're going to get along just fine." Outside, the city moved on—cars honking, people laughing, lives continuing as they always did. But inside Eva's flat, something shifted. The past and present collided, and two people who had been broken apart began the slow, dangerous process of finding their way back to each other. The adventure was just beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she asked softly [softly]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.369
leniency0.738
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.062
53.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count1
8
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
9
adverb"slowly"
count2
10
adverb"carefully"
count1
11
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"lazily"
2"suddenly"
3"quickly"
4"softly"
5"really"
6"very"
7"slightly"
8"barely above a whisper"
9"slowly"
10"carefully"
11"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1512
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"profound"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"disrupting"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"racing"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"tenderness"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"silk"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"familiar"
5"disrupting"
6"perfect"
7"racing"
8"could feel"
9"tenderness"
10"whisper"
11"traced"
12"efficient"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1497
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount827
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.48
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Moreau1
Latin1
Lucien4
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1497
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean28.79
std14.71
cv0.511
sampleLengths
035
135
233
362
423
527
634
737
819
928
1025
1118
1216
1312
1433
1544
1659
1725
1855
1916
2053
219
227
2342
2439
251
2614
2719
2835
2929
3045
314
3249
3349
3420
3550
3625
3723
3825
3911
4045
4118
4227
4324
4417
4522
4633
4712
4831
4932
91.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"was gone"
1"been hunted"
2"been broken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences117
ratio0.051
matches
0"\"Aurora,\" he said, and his voice was exactly the same—smooth as silk, edged with something she couldn't quite name."
1"Lucien entered, moving with that particular grace she remembered—every step deliberate, every gesture controlled."
2"He turned, and for a moment something flickered across his face—vulnerability, perhaps, or uncertainty."
3"Instead, she stayed put, breathing him in—that familiar scent of expensive cologne and something darker underneath."
4"But three years of wondering, of questioning, of building a life without him—it wasn't something she could just set aside."
5"Outside, the city moved on—cars honking, people laughing, lives continuing as they always did."
86.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.05489260143198091
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.017899761336515514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean12.79
std8.5
cv0.664
sampleLengths
07
128
218
317
411
514
68
723
839
919
104
114
1215
134
144
157
1627
1714
1820
193
2013
216
2214
2310
244
258
264
2713
2810
298
304
3112
327
335
3416
3517
3612
374
3812
3916
4014
4145
4215
4310
4417
456
4632
475
487
494
45.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3418803418803419
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners40
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Instead, she stepped back."
1"Instead, she stayed put, breathing"
ratio0.027
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences75
matches
0"She padded across the cluttered"
1"Her heart did that stupid"
2"She counted to three, then"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"he said, and his voice"
5"She should say no."
6"She should slam the door"
7"He was now sitting upright,"
8"He surveyed the chaos of"
9"She closed the door, leaning"
10"He turned, and for a"
11"It was gone so quickly"
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He repeated the words softly,"
14"Her voice cracked"
15"His jaw tightened"
16"She pushed off from the"
17"He moved then, closing the"
18"She should step back."
19"She should keep the wall"
ratio0.693
6.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences75
matches
0"The knock came at precisely"
1"Aurora knew because she'd been"
2"She padded across the cluttered"
3"The cat opened one eye,"
4"Her heart did that stupid"
5"She counted to three, then"
6"Lucien Moreau stood there in"
7"His amber eye caught the"
8"he said, and his voice"
9"She should say no."
10"She should slam the door"
11"The cat, predictably, had already"
12"He was now sitting upright,"
13"Lucien entered, moving with that"
14"He surveyed the chaos of"
15"She closed the door, leaning"
16"He turned, and for a"
17"It was gone so quickly"
18"The words hung between them"
19"She crossed her arms."
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She padded across the cluttered living room on bare feet, sidestepping Ptolemy, who stretched lazily across the rug."
1"He was now sitting upright, tail wrapped around his paws, watching Lucien with the intense focus of a creature who'd seen too much to be easily impressed."
2"She searched his face, those mismatched eyes that had haunted her dreams for three years."
3"The past and present collided, and two people who had been broken apart began the slow, dangerous process of finding their way back to each other."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, and his voice was exactly the same—smooth as silk, edged with something she couldn't quite name"
1"He repeated, almost to himself"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.031
76.2043%