Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFEPBB2ARQERMF92MJDQFN

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Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.000294
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed the London streets like a thousand tiny whips, turning the pavement into a mirror of grey and black. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted in the cold night air as she sprinted, her worn leather watch ticking a frantic rhythm against her left wrist. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to her sharp jawline, was plastered to her skull, clinging to the sweat that still prickled her skin beneath her heavy coat. She’d been chasing him for blocks, the slick asphalt swallowing her footsteps, the neon glow of Soho’s signs blurring into streaks of color behind her. Her military precision kept her stride efficient, her eyes scanning the shadows for any sign of the suspect, Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic who now provided off-the-books care to the clique. He’d vanished into the mouth of an alley, a narrow passage choked with overflowing dumpsters and the stench of decay. Quinn followed, her boots splashing in a shallow puddle that reflected the flickering sign of *The Raven’s Nest*, its distinctive green neon sign a beacon in the gloom. The alley ended abruptly at a brick wall, but Quinn didn’t slow. She pushed past a sagging fire escape, her hand instinctively going to the grip of her service pistol tucked into her waistband, the weight of it a familiar comfort. The air grew colder, thicker, charged with an unnatural stillness. And then, before her, the wall shimmered, dissolving into a veil of shadow and mist. The Veil Market. Tomás had led her here. The bone token, a small, polished fragment of something ancient and dark, had been pressed into her palm moments before he’d slipped through the shimmering barrier. Now, the entrance yawned open, revealing a cavernous space carved from the earth beneath Camden. The air was thick with the smell of damp stone, ozone, and something else—something sweet and metallic, like blood and ozone mixed. The walls were lined with stalls, their contents obscured by deep shadow, but Quinn could make out the glint of strange metals, jars of iridescent liquid, and the occasional flicker of arcane symbols etched into the stone. Tomás stood near the center of the market, his short, curly dark hair damp with rain, his olive skin pale in the dim light. A Saint Christopher medallion, cold and heavy, hung against his chest beneath his damp shirt. He turned, his eyes meeting hers, a flicker of surprise crossing his face before it hardened into defiance. "Detective," he said, his voice low and gravelly, the scar on his left forearm, a jagged white line against his dark skin, seeming to pulse in the gloom. "You shouldn't have followed." Quinn didn't move closer. She kept her pistol steady, her gaze sweeping the market, taking in the unfamiliar faces—humans with eyes that held too much knowledge, creatures that shimmered at the edges of perception, and the palpable sense of danger that hung like a shroud. The bone token in her pocket felt cold and heavy, a key to a world she didn't understand, a world her partner, DS Morris, had vanished into three years ago. The memory of his unexplained death, the supernatural origins she still didn't comprehend, fueled her anger and her determination. She couldn't let Tomás slip away now. "Tomás," she said, her voice cutting through the damp silence. "You know why I'm here. The clique. The illegal activities. You provide them cover, you provide them care. Where is he?" He didn't answer immediately. He looked past her, towards the deeper recesses of the market, where the shadows seemed to writhe. "You think you can just walk in here and demand answers?" His voice held a dangerous edge. "This isn't Scotland Yard. This is the Veil. It has its own rules." Quinn took a step forward, her boot sinking slightly into the damp earth. "Rules can be enforced, Herrera. Or broken. Which is it?" He met her gaze, his own eyes, warm brown like his hair, holding a strange intensity. "You don't belong here, Detective. Not like this." He gestured vaguely at the market. "The Veil sees you. It remembers." The air crackled with unseen energy. Quinn felt a prickle of unease crawl up her spine, a sensation she’d learned to trust. This wasn't just a physical chase anymore; it was a confrontation with forces beyond her understanding. Her partner’s ghost seemed to whisper in the damp stone, urging her forward, demanding answers. But the Veil Market was a labyrinth, its secrets guarded by ancient pacts and dangerous entities. The bone token was her only key, but it was also a potential trap. She looked back at Tomás, the rain still drumming a relentless tattoo on the market’s roof. The decision was hers alone. Follow him deeper into this treacherous, supernatural underworld, where the rules were written in blood and bone, or turn back and risk losing him—and the truth—forever. The weight of her watch on her wrist seemed to amplify the ticking seconds, each one a choice. The Veil Market waited, silent and hungry.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
38.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.222
94.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount845
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"efficient"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count2
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"palpable"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"potential"
count1
19
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"efficient"
2"scanning"
3"beacon"
4"gloom"
5"weight"
6"familiar"
7"charged"
8"shimmered"
9"glint"
10"flicker"
11"etched"
12"pulse"
13"palpable"
14"sense of"
15"silence"
16"intensity"
17"whisper"
18"potential"
19"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
87.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences44
matches
0"a flicker of surprise"
1"felt a prickle"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences44
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords837
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount762
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn7
Soho1
Tomás5
Herrera1
Raven1
Veil3
Market3
Camden1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Market"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount837
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
87.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean76.09
std34.63
cv0.455
sampleLengths
0129
1114
2108
389
4101
531
651
723
836
983
1072
73.37% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences44
matches
0"was plastered"
1"been pressed"
2"were lined"
3"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences49
ratio0.082
matches
0"The air was thick with the smell of damp stone, ozone, and something else—something sweet and metallic, like blood and ozone mixed."
1"She kept her pistol steady, her gaze sweeping the market, taking in the unfamiliar faces—humans with eyes that held too much knowledge, creatures that shimmered at the edges of perception, and the palpable sense of danger that hung like a shroud."
2"This wasn't just a physical chase anymore; it was a confrontation with forces beyond her understanding."
3"Follow him deeper into this treacherous, supernatural underworld, where the rules were written in blood and bone, or turn back and risk losing him—and the truth—forever."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount770
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"short, curly dark hair"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024675324675324677
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01038961038961039
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean17.08
std8.94
cv0.523
sampleLengths
021
125
227
325
431
520
628
712
829
910
1015
113
125
1326
1415
1522
1637
1724
1815
1918
2028
214
224
2341
2430
2519
267
2710
2821
294
3017
3117
3213
3313
3410
3516
3614
376
386
3916
4016
4115
4216
4314
4416
455
4626
4718
487
40.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.30612244897959184
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences44
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
1"She’d been chasing him for"
2"Her military precision kept her"
3"He’d vanished into the mouth"
4"She pushed past a sagging"
5"He turned, his eyes meeting"
6"he said, his voice low"
7"She kept her pistol steady,"
8"She couldn't let Tomás slip"
9"she said, her voice cutting"
10"He didn't answer immediately."
11"He looked past her, towards"
12"His voice held a dangerous"
13"He met her gaze, his"
14"He gestured vaguely at the"
15"Her partner’s ghost seemed to"
16"She looked back at Tomás,"
ratio0.386
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences44
matches
0"The rain lashed the London"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
3"She’d been chasing him for"
4"Her military precision kept her"
5"He’d vanished into the mouth"
6"Quinn followed, her boots splashing"
7"The alley ended abruptly at"
8"She pushed past a sagging"
9"The air grew colder, thicker,"
10"The Veil Market."
11"Tomás had led her here."
12"The bone token, a small,"
13"The air was thick with"
14"The walls were lined with"
15"Tomás stood near the center"
16"A Saint Christopher medallion, cold"
17"He turned, his eyes meeting"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"Quinn didn't move closer."
ratio0.909
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"Now, the entrance yawned open,"
ratio0.023
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She’d been chasing him for blocks, the slick asphalt swallowing her footsteps, the neon glow of Soho’s signs blurring into streaks of color behind her."
1"Quinn followed, her boots splashing in a shallow puddle that reflected the flickering sign of *The Raven’s Nest*, its distinctive green neon sign a beacon in th…"
2"She kept her pistol steady, her gaze sweeping the market, taking in the unfamiliar faces—humans with eyes that held too much knowledge, creatures that shimmered…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice cutting through the damp silence"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.0756%