Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFEVTBF050EZ5ZSSKYXBCG

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Duration:
28.9s
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$0.003278
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Hyperbolic

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the disused Camden Tube station was a physical presence, a cocktail of ozone, damp brick, and something sweetly metallic that made the back of Detective Harlow Quinn’s throat itch. The Veil Market, usually a chaotic sprawl of supernatural commerce, was unnervingly still. Yellow police tape cordoned off a stall where awnings of faded velvet were stained with something dark that wasn't oil. Harlow moved with the tight, economical grace of her military training, her worn leather watch a familiar weight on her wrist. Her sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes missing nothing. The local uniforms had done a decent job of holding the perimeter, but their faces were pale, their eyes skittish. They felt the wrongness of the place, even if they couldn't name it. The body lay sprawled behind a counter littered with broken vials, their contents seeping into the grimy floor tiles. A Shade artisan, his grey skin now mottled with the pallor of death. The official report would call it a botched robbery. A struggle, a fall, a fatal blow to the head. The shattered glass, the overturned table, the spilled wares—it all pointed to a simple, brutal narrative. But Harlow’s gut, honed over eighteen years of seeing the stories evidence *really* told, twisted in disagreement. “Quinn.” The voice came from the shadowed archway that led to what was once a service tunnel. Eva Kowalski emerged, her curly red hair a shock of color in the gloom. She pushed her round glasses up her nose, her freckled complexion looking wan under the harsh portable lights. She clutched the worn leather strap of her satchel, a nervous tic Harlow had come to recognize. “Kowalski. They called you in?” Harlow’s tone was flat, professional. The British Museum’s pet occult researcher was a necessary, if irritating, consultant on cases that bled into the preternatural. “Who else were they going to call?” Eva’s voice was a little too bright, a little too quick. She tucked a stray curl behind her left ear. “It’s a mess. Poor Kael. The Market Elders are furious. They want it swept under the rug. ‘Human problems,’ they’re calling it.” “Is that what you see?” Harlow asked, not taking her eyes off the body. “Human problems?” Eva shifted her weight. “Look at it. The place is ransacked. His stock is gone. His money box is empty. It’s a tragedy, but a straightforward one. Desperate people do desperate things, even to get their hands on cheap glamours and scrying mirrors.” Harlow finally turned to look at her. Eva’s green eyes were wide behind her lenses, earnest. Too earnest. “Desperate people,” Harlow repeated softly. “They broke in during market hours? The place was teeming with witnesses. They managed to overpower a Shade—creatures who are notoriously difficult to surprise—without a single vendor or customer noticing the ‘struggle’ until it was over? And then they took the time to empty a cash box but left that?” Harlow pointed a gloved finger not at the body, but at the floor a few feet away. A small, disc-shaped object lay half-under a scrap of black cloth, its brass casing gleaming dully in the light. It was no larger than a pocket watch, etched with intricate, swirling patterns. Eva’s breath hitched almost imperceptibly. “It’s just junk. Part of his stock.” “Is it?” Harlow knelt, careful not to touch anything. She used the tip of her pen to gently nudge the cloth aside. The object was a compass, its face etched with protective sigils she didn’t recognise, its casing marked with a patina of verdigris. The needle wasn’t pointing north. It was spinning in a slow, lazy circle. “This looks like quality work. The kind of thing a ‘desperate’ thief would grab first.” “Maybe they missed it,” Eva offered, her voice tightening. “In the panic.” “Maybe.” Harlow stood up, her gaze sweeping the scene again. The narrative was too neat, too *constructed*. The violence was performative. The overturned table was on the wrong side of the body—if he’d been standing behind the counter when attacked, it should have fallen toward the aisle, not back onto himself. The broken glass was concentrated in one area, as if vials had been swept off the counter in a single, deliberate motion, not knocked over in a frantic fight. Her eyes kept returning to the compass. The spinning needle was a silent scream in the quiet room. “You knew him,” Harlow stated, turning her focus back to Eva. It wasn’t a question. Eva’s hand went to her satchel again. “I’m a researcher. I know a lot of vendors. He had fascinating texts on dimensional theory.” “What does it do?” Harlow asked, nodding toward the compass. “It’s a navigational tool. For… specific routes.” Eva was choosing her words with the care of someone walking through a minefield. “Routes to where?” “Places that aren’t on any map.” Eva’s nervousness was morphing into something else—a defensive tension. “Detective, this really isn’t relevant. The evidence points to a robbery. The Market Elders want it closed. Why are you making this more complicated than it needs to be?” “Because three years ago, my partner walked into a room following ‘straightforward’ evidence and never walked out,” Harlow said, her voice low and hard as iron. “The report called it ‘unexplained circumstances.’ I call it a lie that papered over a truth no one wanted to see. I won’t do that again.” She watched Eva closely. The researcher flinched, her gaze dropping to the body of the Shade artisan. Guilt. She was feeling guilt. Harlow’s mind, a machine of deduction, began to recalibrate the scene, stripping away the false narrative. This wasn’t a robbery. It was a message. A warning. The “thief” hadn’t been after money or common charms. They’d been after something specific. And they’d torn the place apart looking for it, staging the violence after the fact to hide their true purpose. The compass. They’d been looking for the compass. But they’d failed. They’d missed it. Or perhaps… they’d been interrupted. Her eyes snapped to Eva’s satchel. “You didn’t just ‘get called in,’ did you, Kowalski? You were already here.” Eva’s face went ashen. “I don’t know what you mean.” “You’re his contact at the Museum. He had something for you. Or you had something for him.” Harlow took a step closer, her height imposing. “You came for your delivery. You found him like this. And you panicked. You called it in, but you’re lying about why. What were you here for?” The silence stretched, thick and heavy. The spinning needle of the compass seemed to hum. Eva’s shoulders slumped. The fight went out of her. “It points to rifts,” she whispered, her voice barely audible. “To thin places between worlds. Kael was the only one who could make them. He was supposed to give it to me tonight. I was… I was going to try to find out what really happened to your partner, DS Morris. His casefile… the location data… it didn’t make sense in our world. I thought maybe…” The confession hung in the air, recontextualizing everything. The mess wasn’t from a struggle. It was a frantic, violent search for a tool someone else desperately wanted. A tool that could find doors to other places. A tool a detective with unanswered questions would kill for. Harlow looked from Eva’s horrified, guilty face to the spinning compass, then to the body of the artisan. The crime scene wasn’t wrong. She’d just been reading the wrong story. The story wasn’t about a robbery. It was about a key. And now, she realized with a cold chill, she was holding it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow repeated softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
76.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"etched"
count2
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"fascinating"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"imposing"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"velvet"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"shattered"
5"gloom"
6"gleaming"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"constructed"
10"fascinating"
11"tension"
12"imposing"
13"silence"
14"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
77.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1271
ratio0.002
matches
0"really"
1"constructed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount871
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow17
Quinn1
Veil1
Market1
Shade2
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva15
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Museum"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.524
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.787
wordCount1271
matches
0"not at the body, but at the floor a few feet away"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.38
std23.9
cv0.639
sampleLengths
065
164
267
317
41
565
629
749
816
943
1073
1149
1212
1372
1412
1580
1618
1715
1823
1910
2021
213
2244
2352
2422
2560
2619
2719
2810
2952
3015
3175
3246
3353
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was concentrated"
1"been swept"
2"been interrupted"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs140
matches
0"wasn’t pointing"
1"was spinning"
2"was choosing"
3"was morphing"
4"was feeling"
5"was holding"
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences103
ratio0.029
matches
0"The shattered glass, the overturned table, the spilled wares—it all pointed to a simple, brutal narrative."
1"The overturned table was on the wrong side of the body—if he’d been standing behind the counter when attacked, it should have fallen toward the aisle, not back onto himself."
2"“Places that aren’t on any map.” Eva’s nervousness was morphing into something else—a defensive tension."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, disc-shaped object"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.033105022831050226
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014840182648401826
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.34
std9.72
cv0.788
sampleLengths
032
113
220
321
410
520
613
719
813
99
1010
1116
1217
131
1416
1514
1618
1717
1810
1919
2018
219
2222
2314
242
254
2639
277
289
292
305
3150
3217
3319
3413
355
367
379
3813
3922
405
418
4215
439
443
4510
467
474
4830
4929
42.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3106796116504854
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her sharp jaw was set,"
1"They felt the wrongness of"
2"She pushed her round glasses"
3"She clutched the worn leather"
4"She tucked a stray curl"
5"It was no larger than"
6"She used the tip of"
7"It was spinning in a"
8"Her eyes kept returning to"
9"It wasn’t a question."
10"She watched Eva closely."
11"She was feeling guilt."
12"It was a message."
13"They’d been after something specific."
14"They’d been looking for the"
15"They’d missed it."
16"they’d been interrupted."
17"Her eyes snapped to Eva’s"
18"she whispered, her voice barely"
19"It was a frantic, violent"
ratio0.268
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences82
matches
0"The air in the disused"
1"The Veil Market, usually a"
2"Harlow moved with the tight,"
3"Her sharp jaw was set,"
4"The local uniforms had done"
5"They felt the wrongness of"
6"The body lay sprawled behind"
7"A Shade artisan, his grey"
8"The official report would call"
9"A struggle, a fall, a"
10"The shattered glass, the overturned"
11"The voice came from the"
12"Eva Kowalski emerged, her curly"
13"She pushed her round glasses"
14"She clutched the worn leather"
15"Harlow’s tone was flat, professional"
16"The British Museum’s pet occult"
17"Eva’s voice was a little"
18"She tucked a stray curl"
19"Harlow asked, not taking her"
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The British Museum’s pet occult researcher was a necessary, if irritating, consultant on cases that bled into the preternatural."
1"The broken glass was concentrated in one area, as if vials had been swept off the counter in a single, deliberate motion, not knocked over in a frantic fight."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Harlow asked, not taking her eyes off the body"
1"Eva offered, her voice tightening"
2"Harlow stood up, her gaze sweeping the scene again"
3"Harlow said, her voice low and hard as iron"
4"Harlow took, her height imposing"
5"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
53.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Harlow repeated softly (repeat)"
1"Harlow stated (state)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.387
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.194
72.1624%