Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFEYYFD60Q3A377GFAYZ7B

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Duration:
39.2s
Cost:
$0.001871
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the cobblestones of Soho into a treacherous mirror of neon and shadow. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after the figure in the dark hoodie, her boots splashing through oily puddles that reflected the green glow of The Raven's Nest sign overhead. The suspect—Tomás Herrera, according to her intel—darted around a corner with the agility of someone who knew these streets better than she did. "Met Police! Stop!" Quinn barked, her voice cutting through the drumming rain. Herrera didn’t even glance back. She pushed harder, her breath sharp in her lungs, the weight of her service weapon bouncing against her ribs. Her wristwatch, its leather band worn smooth from years of wear, caught the light as she vaulted over a stack of overturned crates. The alley narrowed, walls pressing in, the scent of wet brick and garbage thick in the air. Herrera disappeared through a rusted service door. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She slammed through after him, into a dim stairwell that reeked of mildew and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of old magic. The steps spiraled downward, the sound of Herrera’s footsteps echoing ahead. At the bottom, a flickering bulb cast jagged shadows across a tunnel. The walls were lined with peeling posters, their edges curling like dead leaves. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. This wasn’t just some back exit. This was something else. She slowed, hand hovering near her holster. The air here was different—thick, charged. A whisper of movement ahead. Herrera’s silhouette paused at a junction, half-turned, as if waiting. "Last chance, Herrera," she called, her voice steady despite the prickle of unease along her spine. "You don’t want to make this worse." He laughed, low and humorless. "You don’t know where you are, do you, Detective?" Before she could answer, he turned and vanished around the corner. Quinn exhaled sharply and followed. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, its vaulted ceiling lost in shadow. But it wasn’t empty. Stalls lined the platform, their awnings strung with fairy lights and hanging charms. Figures moved between them, faces obscured by hoods and scarves, their voices a murmur of languages Quinn didn’t recognize. The air smelled of incense and something darker—burning herbs, maybe, or the coppery hint of blood. The Veil Market. She’d heard whispers of it, of course. A place where the city’s underbelly traded in things that didn’t belong in daylight. But seeing it was something else. Herrera was already halfway across the platform, slipping between two stalls selling what looked like glass vials of liquid moonlight. Quinn hesitated. Going in deeper was a risk. No backup. No jurisdiction. But letting him go meant losing the only lead she had on Morris’ disappearance. She stepped forward. A hand caught her arm. Quinn spun, reaching for her weapon, but the figure—tall, draped in a moth-eaten cloak—shook their head. "You don’t belong here, little hunter," they rasped. She yanked free. "I’m not here for trouble. Just him." The figure chuckled, a sound like dry leaves. "Trouble finds its own." Quinn ignored them and pushed into the crowd. The market swallowed her, the noise rising—vendors hawking their wares, the clink of strange coins, the low hum of something that wasn’t quite music. Herrera was ahead, ducking into a curtained alcove. She followed. Inside, the space was cramped, lit by a single oil lamp. Herrera stood beside a table where a woman with ink-black eyes sorted through a pile of bones. He turned as Quinn entered, his expression unreadable. "You shouldn’t have come down here," he said. "Then you shouldn’t have run," she shot back. Her fingers flexed near her hip. "What is this place?" Herrera exchanged a glance with the woman. "Somewhere you don’t want to be." The lamp flickered. Shadows stretched too long. Quinn’s instincts screamed at her to draw her weapon, but she forced herself still. "You’re involved in something, Herrera. I need answers." He sighed, rubbing the scar on his forearm. "Answers get people killed, Detective. Ask your partner." The words hit like a punch. Morris. Her throat tightened. "What do you know about that?" Herrera’s gaze flicked past her, to the curtain. "Too much. And not enough." A noise outside—footsteps, too many, moving fast. Quinn’s spine went rigid. "You led them here," the woman hissed. Herrera’s jaw clenched. "Didn’t have a choice." Quinn turned, just as the curtain was yanked aside. Three figures stood there, their faces hidden behind masks of stitched leather. The air turned ice-cold. "Shit," Herrera muttered. The tallest of the three tilted their head. "Detective Quinn," they said, voice like gravel. "We’ve been waiting for you." Quinn’s hand closed around her weapon. She had a choice now—fight, or run. Neither option felt safe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount807
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount807
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"pulse"
5"charged"
6"whisper"
7"unreadable"
8"flickered"
9"flicked"
10"jaw clenched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords792
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount687
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás1
Herrera12
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Market"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.481
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if waiting"
1"looked like glass vials of liquid moonlig"
2"quite music"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount792
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean22
std16.56
cv0.753
sampleLengths
070
117
259
345
441
528
623
714
811
925
1048
113
1227
1346
143
1529
1610
1712
1840
192
2036
218
2218
2313
2429
2516
2616
2713
2811
297
307
3125
323
3320
3413
354
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"were lined"
1"was yanked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences90
ratio0.1
matches
0"The suspect—Tomás Herrera, according to her intel—darted around a corner with the agility of someone who knew these streets better than she did."
1"She slammed through after him, into a dim stairwell that reeked of mildew and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of old magic."
2"The air here was different—thick, charged."
3"The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, its vaulted ceiling lost in shadow."
4"The air smelled of incense and something darker—burning herbs, maybe, or the coppery hint of blood."
5"Quinn spun, reaching for her weapon, but the figure—tall, draped in a moth-eaten cloak—shook their head."
6"The market swallowed her, the noise rising—vendors hawking their wares, the clink of strange coins, the low hum of something that wasn’t quite music."
7"A noise outside—footsteps, too many, moving fast."
8"She had a choice now—fight, or run."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount704
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.026988636363636364
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005681818181818182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean8.8
std5.89
cv0.669
sampleLengths
019
128
223
312
45
519
623
717
87
93
1024
1111
1212
1313
146
156
164
177
186
195
2010
2116
227
235
249
2511
265
2716
284
2913
3019
3116
323
337
3414
356
3620
372
386
392
402
4114
423
435
4416
458
463
477
488
494
59.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences70
matches
0"She pushed harder, her breath"
1"Her wristwatch, its leather band"
2"She slammed through after him,"
3"She slowed, hand hovering near"
4"she called, her voice steady"
5"He laughed, low and humorless."
6"She’d heard whispers of it,"
7"She stepped forward."
8"She yanked free."
9"He turned as Quinn entered,"
10"she shot back"
11"Her fingers flexed near her"
12"He sighed, rubbing the scar"
13"Her throat tightened."
14"they said, voice like gravel"
15"She had a choice now—fight,"
ratio0.229
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences70
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after"
2"The suspect—Tomás Herrera, according to"
3"Quinn barked, her voice cutting"
4"Herrera didn’t even glance back."
5"She pushed harder, her breath"
6"Her wristwatch, its leather band"
7"The alley narrowed, walls pressing"
8"Herrera disappeared through a rusted"
9"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
10"She slammed through after him,"
11"The steps spiraled downward, the"
12"The walls were lined with"
13"Quinn’s pulse hammered in her"
14"This wasn’t just some back"
15"This was something else."
16"She slowed, hand hovering near"
17"The air here was different—thick,"
18"A whisper of movement ahead."
19"Herrera’s silhouette paused at a"
ratio0.886
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Before she could answer, he"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted after the figure in the dark hoodie, her boots splashing through oily puddles that reflected the green glow of The Raven's Nest …"
1"The suspect—Tomás Herrera, according to her intel—darted around a corner with the agility of someone who knew these streets better than she did."
2"She slammed through after him, into a dim stairwell that reeked of mildew and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or the metallic tang of old magic."
3"Herrera’s silhouette paused at a junction, half-turned, as if waiting."
4"The market swallowed her, the noise rising—vendors hawking their wares, the clink of strange coins, the low hum of something that wasn’t quite music."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn barked, her voice cutting through the drumming rain"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn barked (bark)"
1"the woman hissed (hiss)"
2"Herrera muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.3
72.7158%