Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFF38FPAJYYN3FC4RW0SBV

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57.2s
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$0.141930

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The stench hit Detective Harlow Quinn before she even reached the bottom of the maintenance ladder — a sweet, cloying rot mixed with something chemical that made her eyes water. Her boots splashed into ankle-deep water as she dropped the last few feet into the abandoned Tube tunnel beneath Camden. "Watch the third rung from the bottom," DS Chen called down. "It's loose." Quinn swept her torch across the tunnel, the beam catching ripples in the stagnant water. The curved walls glistened with moisture and decades of grime. About twenty meters ahead, portable work lights had been set up around what she assumed was their crime scene. "How the hell did someone even find a body down here?" Quinn asked as Chen descended behind her. "Anonymous tip came in around four this morning. Uniforms thought it was a hoax until they actually checked." Chen's voice echoed off the tunnel walls. "Wait until you see this." They sloshed forward through the fetid water. Quinn kept her breathing shallow, fighting the urge to pull her shirt over her nose. As they approached the lights, she could make out the forensics team in their white coveralls, photographing something against the far wall. "Detective Quinn," the lead technician nodded. "We've processed most of the scene, but I've never seen anything quite like this." Quinn stepped closer, and her breath caught. The victim — a woman in her twenties — sat propped against the tunnel wall in an almost meditative pose. Her hands were folded neatly in her lap, her head tilted back at a precise angle. But it was what surrounded her that made Quinn's skin crawl. A perfect circle had been drawn on the wall behind the body, at least three meters in diameter. Inside the circle, intricate symbols spiraled outward from a central point directly behind the victim's head. The symbols seemed to shimmer in the harsh work lights, as if they'd been drawn with something iridescent. "Time of death?" Quinn asked, crouching beside the body. She noted the victim's clothing — an expensive wool coat, designer boots. Not homeless, then. "Preliminary estimate puts it between midnight and 3 AM," the technician said. "No obvious cause of death. No wounds, no ligature marks, no defensive injuries. It's like she just... stopped." Quinn pulled on latex gloves and gently lifted one of the victim's hands. Rigor had set in, but the fingers were clean, manicured. No sign of struggle. She checked the coat pockets — empty except for an Oyster card and a receipt from a coffee shop in Shoreditch dated two days ago. "What about these symbols?" Chen asked, photographing the wall with his phone. "Some kind of gang tag?" Quinn stood, her knees protesting after years of crime scenes. Something about the symbols nagged at her, a half-remembered detail from a case file she couldn't quite place. She pulled out her own phone and snapped several photos, zooming in on different sections of the circle. "Not gang related," she said. "Too precise. Look at the line work — whoever did this took their time. Hours, maybe." She turned to the forensics lead. "What did they use to draw this?" "That's the thing — we can't tell. It's not paint, not chalk. Under magnification, it almost looks organic. We'll need lab analysis." Quinn circled the scene slowly, her torch beam sweeping the tunnel floor. The water was disturbed in a clear path from the access ladder to the body, but nowhere else. No other footprints, no drag marks. "She walked here," Quinn said. "Voluntarily. In designer boots, through half a foot of sewage water, to sit against a wall and die." "Suicide?" Chen suggested. "Pills, maybe?" "In a place like this? And someone else had to draw these symbols. Unless—" Quinn stopped. Near the edge of the light, something metallic caught her eye. She waded over and knelt, water soaking through her trousers. Half-submerged in the muck was a compass. Not just any compass — the brass casing was green with verdigris, and when she lifted it carefully with an evidence bag, she could see strange markings etched into its face. "Bag this," she told the technician. "Priority processing." Chen was standing too close to the symbol now, practically nose to the wall. "These marks here," he said, pointing to a section near the victim's shoulder. "They look almost like writing." Quinn joined him, squinting at the symbols. He was right — there was a pattern within the chaos, something that might be linguistic rather than purely decorative. She thought of DS Morris, how he'd always noticed patterns others missed. Three years, and she still expected to hear his voice at scenes like this. "Detective Quinn?" A uniform officer appeared at the edge of the light. "There's someone up top insisting they need to speak with you. Says she's a researcher from the British Museum. Won't talk to anyone else." Quinn frowned. "Did she give a name?" "Kowalski, ma'am. Eva Kowalski. Red hair, glasses, carrying enough books to stock a library. Says it's about the symbols." The symbols. Of course someone had leaked photos already. Quinn bit back a curse. "Chen, finish processing here. I want every inch of this tunnel photographed. And get me everything on our victim — fingerprints, dental, the works." She started back toward the ladder, then paused. "And Chen? No more photos on your personal phone. This scene stays need-to-know until I say otherwise." The climb back up felt longer than the descent. Quinn's wet trousers clung uncomfortably, and the smell of the tunnel seemed to have permeated her clothes. When she emerged into the grey Camden morning, she found a small woman with wild red curls pacing beside the police tape, clutching a leather satchel like a lifeline. "Ms. Kowalski?" Quinn approached, noting how the woman's green eyes darted nervously behind round glasses. "I'm Detective Quinn. You have information about our crime scene?" Eva Kowalski tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear — a nervous gesture Quinn catalogued automatically. "I saw the photos online. Someone posted them to a forum I monitor for my research. Those symbols — Detective, you need to know what you're dealing with." "And what exactly are we dealing with?" Eva glanced around, as if checking for eavesdroppers among the uniformed officers. "Not here. Can we talk privately? What I have to tell you... it's going to sound insane." Quinn studied the woman. Educated, nervous but determined, gripping that satchel like it contained state secrets. Her instincts, honed over eighteen years on the force, told her this wasn't a attention-seeker or conspiracy theorist. "There's a café around the corner," Quinn said. "You have ten minutes to convince me you're not wasting my time." As they walked, Quinn's phone buzzed. Chen had sent a preliminary ID on their victim: Sarah Morrison, 27, reported missing from her flat in Shoreditch two days ago. Last seen leaving a boutique in Covent Garden. No criminal record, no apparent enemies. Just another young woman who'd walked into darkness and never walked out. Quinn pocketed her phone and followed Eva Kowalski into the café, unaware that she was about to step into a different kind of darkness entirely — one that had been waiting for her since the night DS Morris died.
total_cost0.14193

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.895
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"nervously"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
1"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"processed"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"processed"
2"perfect"
3"intricate"
4"etched"
5"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1216
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
20.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount847
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Tube1
Camden2
Chen7
Oyster1
Shoreditch2
Morris2
Eva3
Kowalski2
Sarah1
Morrison1
Covent1
Garden1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Chen"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Sarah"
7"Morrison"
places
0"Shoreditch"
1"Covent"
2"Garden"
globalScore0.201
windowScore0.333
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"as if checking for eavesdroppers among the uniformed officers"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1216
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
88.97% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.18
std14.39
cv0.461
sampleLengths
050
113
244
318
430
544
620
754
852
924
1030
1152
1217
1346
1434
1522
1636
1723
185
1937
2038
218
2232
2353
2436
257
2619
2738
2825
2955
3025
3146
327
3329
3434
3520
3642
3712
3839
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences72
matches
0"were folded"
1"been drawn"
2"been drawn"
3"was disturbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences93
ratio0.086
matches
0"The stench hit Detective Harlow Quinn before she even reached the bottom of the maintenance ladder — a sweet, cloying rot mixed with something chemical that made her eyes water."
1"The victim — a woman in her twenties — sat propped against the tunnel wall in an almost meditative pose."
2"She noted the victim's clothing — an expensive wool coat, designer boots."
3"She checked the coat pockets — empty except for an Oyster card and a receipt from a coffee shop in Shoreditch dated two days ago."
4"Not just any compass — the brass casing was green with verdigris, and when she lifted it carefully with an evidence bag, she could see strange markings etched into its face."
5"He was right — there was a pattern within the chaos, something that might be linguistic rather than purely decorative."
6"Eva Kowalski tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear — a nervous gesture Quinn catalogued automatically."
7"Quinn pocketed her phone and followed Eva Kowalski into the café, unaware that she was about to step into a different kind of darkness entirely — one that had been waiting for her since the night DS Morris died."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount842
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.039192399049881234
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013064133016627079
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.08
std7.53
cv0.576
sampleLengths
030
120
211
32
415
510
619
718
825
95
107
1115
1222
136
1414
157
1620
1716
1811
1918
2016
2118
229
2312
243
2512
2618
2713
2810
294
3025
3112
325
3310
3418
3518
365
3722
387
3922
4012
4118
426
435
4418
453
462
4716
4811
4910
93.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5591397849462365
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"Of course someone had leaked"
1"Just another young woman who'd"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her boots splashed into ankle-deep"
1"They sloshed forward through the"
2"Her hands were folded neatly"
3"She noted the victim's clothing"
4"She checked the coat pockets"
5"She pulled out her own"
6"She turned to the forensics"
7"She waded over and knelt,"
8"she told the technician"
9"he said, pointing to a"
10"He was right — there"
11"She thought of DS Morris,"
12"She started back toward the"
13"Her instincts, honed over eighteen"
ratio0.215
90.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences65
matches
0"The stench hit Detective Harlow"
1"Her boots splashed into ankle-deep"
2"DS Chen called down"
3"Quinn swept her torch across"
4"The curved walls glistened with"
5"Quinn asked as Chen descended"
6"Chen's voice echoed off the"
7"They sloshed forward through the"
8"Quinn kept her breathing shallow,"
9"the lead technician nodded"
10"Quinn stepped closer, and her"
11"The victim — a woman"
12"Her hands were folded neatly"
13"A perfect circle had been"
14"The symbols seemed to shimmer"
15"Quinn asked, crouching beside the"
16"She noted the victim's clothing"
17"the technician said"
18"Quinn pulled on latex gloves"
19"Rigor had set in, but"
ratio0.738
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He was right — there was a pattern within the chaos, something that might be linguistic rather than purely decorative."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Chen suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.053
85.3252%