Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFF64853MZBYG803KCAHX6

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Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.143955

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bone token felt wrong in Quinn's pocket as she descended the maintenance stairs, its edges too sharp through the fabric of her coat. The constable who'd handed it to her had been sweating despite the October chill, his explanation stumbling over itself—something about evidence leading them here, about following protocol, about jurisdiction. She'd taken the token anyway. Eighteen years on the force had taught her when to push and when to play along. The abandoned platform stretched before her like a throat, emergency lighting casting sickly pools every twenty meters. Camden Market thrummed somewhere above, its Saturday crowds oblivious to what lay beneath their feet. Quinn's footsteps echoed wrong—too many returns, as if the space couldn't decide how big it wanted to be. "Detective Quinn." The voice emerged from shadows near the tracks. "Thank you for coming." Eva Kowalski stepped into the light, round glasses catching the fluorescence. Her red curls were pulled back in a messy bun, and her leather satchel bulged with more than books. Quinn's hand drifted to her sidearm. "Ms. Kowalski." Quinn kept her voice level. "Funny seeing you here. My sergeant said there was a body." "There is." Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, the gesture so practiced it had worn a groove in her movements. "But it's not what your people think." Quinn followed her deeper into the platform. The air grew thick, tinged with copper and something else—ozone, maybe, or the smell before lightning strikes. Market stalls materialized from the gloom: canvas and wood structures that shouldn't exist, displaying wares that made her vision swim. A woman with too many joints in her fingers sorted bottles of liquid shadow. A man whose face kept shifting sold maps drawn on what looked like human skin. The Veil Market. Quinn had heard whispers, dismissed them as folklore. The kind of story criminals told to explain the inexplicable. But here it was, breathing around her like a living thing. "The body," Quinn said, forcing focus. Her worn leather watch showed 3:17 PM, but down here time felt negotiable. Eva led her past a stall selling brass compasses, their faces etched with symbols that hurt to look at directly. One needle spun wildly as Quinn passed. They stopped at a cleared circle near the platform edge, where Metropolitan Police tape sectioned off absolutely nothing. "Your constables put up the tape," Eva said. "Then they left. They won't remember being here." Quinn crouched beside the outline someone had drawn in chalk. Human-shaped, mostly. The proportions were wrong—arms too long, torso compressed. No body, just the suggestion of where one had been. "What am I looking at?" "A Shade." Eva pulled a leather journal from her satchel. "Or what's left of one. They don't leave corpses, not in the traditional sense. When they die, they just... disperse." Quinn stood slowly, military bearing keeping her movements controlled when everything inside wanted to bolt. "And you know this how?" "I research the old texts at the Museum. The restricted ones." Eva's green eyes held steady behind her glasses. "Aurora asked me to—" "Aurora Thorne?" Quinn's voice sharpened. "She's involved in this?" Eva's hesitation told her everything. Quinn had been tracking Aurora's group for months, certain they were running drugs or weapons. The truth was apparently worse. "Detective, you need to understand—" Eva began. "What I understand is a crime scene with no body, an illegal market that shouldn't exist, and you name-dropping a person of interest." Quinn pulled out her notebook, the mundane action grounding her. "Start from the beginning." A bell chimed somewhere, though Quinn saw no source. The market vendors began packing with practiced efficiency. Eva glanced at her watch—an antique thing that probably came from one of these stalls. "The Shade was a broker," Eva said quickly. "Information, mostly. Someone killed it, which shouldn't be possible. Shades exist partially in another realm—you'd need specific methods, specific tools." Quinn studied the chalk outline again. Scorch marks radiated from where the head would be, forming a pattern that looked almost deliberate. She'd seen similar marks three years ago, the night Morris— "How long have you known about this place?" Quinn asked. "Two years. Since I started at the Museum." Eva was packing items into her satchel now—a compass with a spinning needle, bottles of dark liquid. "The archive job is real, but it opened doors. Taught me to see." The market was emptying fast. Canvas folded into impossible angles, disappearing into cases too small to hold them. The woman with wrong fingers gave Quinn a look that might have been pity. "Your partner," Eva said quietly. "Three years ago. Aurora told me." Quinn's hand found her gun. "What do you know about Morris?" "That he saw something he shouldn't have. That he tried to stop it alone." Eva's fingers worried at her satchel strap. "The same thing that killed this Shade might have killed him. We're trying to find out who's doing this." "We?" "Aurora's circle. We're not what you think." Quinn laughed, short and bitter. "Enlighten me." The last vendor vanished up a staircase that hadn't existed thirty seconds ago. The platform lights flickered, threatening to leave them in darkness that felt hungry. "Think of it like... a neighborhood watch," Eva said. "But for things your department isn't equipped to handle. Things that fall through the cracks between what's real and what's possible." Quinn looked at the chalk outline again. The scorch pattern definitely matched the photos from Morris's scene—photos that had mysteriously corrupted on every device, leaving her with only memory and nightmares. "The killer," Quinn said. "Human?" "We don't know." Eva held out a business card that felt too warm. "My real number. When you're ready to see the whole picture." The lights cut out. In the absolute dark, Quinn heard footsteps—too many, moving in directions that didn't exist. Eva's hand found her arm, guided her toward what might be stairs. They climbed blind until gray London light leaked through a service door. They emerged behind a chip shop, the normal world crashing back—car horns, conversation, the smell of frying oil. Quinn's watch read 3:19 PM. Two minutes. It had felt like hours. Eva adjusted her glasses, looking suddenly younger in daylight. "The bone token will dissolve by sunset. Physical evidence has a way of disappearing around the Market. But what you saw—that stays." She walked away before Quinn could respond, red curls bouncing with each step. Quinn stood in the alley, processing. The token in her pocket was already softening, becoming less than bone, less than real. But the questions were solid enough. Morris's death. Aurora's true business. A killer who could destroy beings that existed between worlds. Quinn had always prided herself on seeing what others missed. Now she wondered what else she'd been blind to, walking through London with her eyes half-closed. She pulled out Eva's card—mundane cardstock, but the number written in ink that shifted color in the light. Her partner was gone, but the case had never closed. Not in her mind. And if solving it meant stepping through the cracks in the world, so be it. She pocketed the card and walked back toward the station, already composing the report in her head. Routine investigation. No evidence found. Case transferred to another department. All technically true. The best lies always were.
total_cost0.143955

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said quickly [quickly]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.425
leniency0.85
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.1
87.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1239
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"absolutely"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"tinged"
4"gloom"
5"etched"
6"absolutely"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1224
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount917
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn26
October1
Market3
Saturday1
Eva18
Kowalski1
Veil1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Aurora2
Morris3
London2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"October"
2"Market"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Aurora"
6"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.082
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1224
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean26.61
std15.65
cv0.588
sampleLengths
074
150
214
336
418
530
673
732
819
945
1016
1130
125
1330
1420
1523
169
1725
187
1937
2032
2128
2232
2310
2438
2532
2611
2711
2840
291
307
317
3226
3330
3431
355
3624
3742
3830
3931
4034
4121
4244
4329
4427
458
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"were pulled"
1"was gone"
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was, breathing"
1"were running"
2"was packing"
3"was emptying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences114
ratio0.096
matches
0"The constable who'd handed it to her had been sweating despite the October chill, his explanation stumbling over itself—something about evidence leading them here, about following protocol, about jurisdiction."
1"Quinn's footsteps echoed wrong—too many returns, as if the space couldn't decide how big it wanted to be."
2"The air grew thick, tinged with copper and something else—ozone, maybe, or the smell before lightning strikes."
3"The proportions were wrong—arms too long, torso compressed."
4"Eva glanced at her watch—an antique thing that probably came from one of these stalls."
5"She'd seen similar marks three years ago, the night Morris—"
6"\"Two years. Since I started at the Museum.\" Eva was packing items into her satchel now—a compass with a spinning needle, bottles of dark liquid."
7"The scorch pattern definitely matched the photos from Morris's scene—photos that had mysteriously corrupted on every device, leaving her with only memory and nightmares."
8"In the absolute dark, Quinn heard footsteps—too many, moving in directions that didn't exist."
9"They emerged behind a chip shop, the normal world crashing back—car horns, conversation, the smell of frying oil."
10"She pulled out Eva's card—mundane cardstock, but the number written in ink that shifted color in the light."
95.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount929
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04520990312163617
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.016146393972012917
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean10.74
std6.58
cv0.613
sampleLengths
024
129
25
316
417
515
618
710
84
911
1019
116
127
1311
1423
157
167
1717
1820
1914
2015
213
228
2310
2411
256
2613
2720
287
2918
308
318
3210
332
348
3510
365
3710
3820
3915
405
4119
424
435
444
455
4615
475
487
4933
61.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.40350877192982454
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences83
matches
0"She'd taken the token anyway."
1"Her red curls were pulled"
2"Her worn leather watch showed"
3"They stopped at a cleared"
4"She'd seen similar marks three"
5"They climbed blind until gray"
6"They emerged behind a chip"
7"It had felt like hours."
8"She walked away before Quinn"
9"She pulled out Eva's card—mundane"
10"Her partner was gone, but"
11"She pocketed the card and"
ratio0.145
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"The bone token felt wrong"
1"The constable who'd handed it"
2"She'd taken the token anyway."
3"The abandoned platform stretched before"
4"Camden Market thrummed somewhere above,"
5"Quinn's footsteps echoed wrong—too many"
6"The voice emerged from shadows"
7"Eva Kowalski stepped into the"
8"Her red curls were pulled"
9"Quinn's hand drifted to her"
10"Quinn kept her voice level"
11"Eva tucked a stray curl"
12"Quinn followed her deeper into"
13"The air grew thick, tinged"
14"A woman with too many"
15"A man whose face kept"
16"The Veil Market."
17"Quinn had heard whispers, dismissed"
18"The kind of story criminals"
19"Quinn said, forcing focus"
ratio0.843
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now she wondered what else"
ratio0.012
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The constable who'd handed it to her had been sweating despite the October chill, his explanation stumbling over itself—something about evidence leading them he…"
1"Quinn's footsteps echoed wrong—too many returns, as if the space couldn't decide how big it wanted to be."
2"Market stalls materialized from the gloom: canvas and wood structures that shouldn't exist, displaying wares that made her vision swim."
3"Eva led her past a stall selling brass compasses, their faces etched with symbols that hurt to look at directly."
4"The platform lights flickered, threatening to leave them in darkness that felt hungry."
5"The scorch pattern definitely matched the photos from Morris's scene—photos that had mysteriously corrupted on every device, leaving her with only memory and ni…"
6"In the absolute dark, Quinn heard footsteps—too many, moving in directions that didn't exist."
7"She pulled out Eva's card—mundane cardstock, but the number written in ink that shifted color in the light."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn pulled out, the mundane action grounding her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.35
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.2647%