Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFF9X2GAFYN7Z21TSBZEAY

Run Details

Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement like machine-gun fire, ricocheting off puddles and turning the neon-soaked streets into a hall of mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through the growing flood, her breath coming in ragged gasps as she chased the figure ahead—a tall man with a dark coat flapping behind him like a wounded bird. The suspect cut right, vanishing down an alley that smelled of wet garbage and desperation. Quinn followed without hesitation, her worn leather watch ticking away the seconds. Eighteen years on the force had taught her never to let a lead go cold, especially not one this hot. She rounded the corner just in time to see her quarry duck through a rusted metal door marked with a symbol that made her pause—a circle with three diagonal slashes, something she'd only seen in cold case files. The door slammed shut behind him with a sound like a tomb closing. Quinn approached cautiously, her hand instinctively reaching for her sidearm. The door was locked, but she'd been a detective long enough to know that locks were meant to be picked. She knelt, pulling out her slim set of tools, and set to work. The rain continued to fall, soaking through her coat and chilling her to the bone. The lock clicked open just as a distant siren wailed through the night. Someone must have called in the chase. She had minutes, maybe less, before backup arrived—backup that wouldn't know about the supernatural angle she'd been tracking for months. The door opened into darkness. Quinn clicked on her flashlight, its beam cutting through the gloom to reveal a narrow staircase descending into the earth. She hesitated for only a moment before starting down, her footsteps echoing in the confined space. The stairs ended at another door, this one wooden and ancient-looking. Carved into its surface was the same symbol she'd seen above. Quinn pushed it open and stepped into another world. The space was vast, like a cathedral of commerce. Stalls lined the walls, their wares glowing with an otherworldly light. People—or things that looked like people—haggled and bartered in languages she didn't recognize. The air was thick with the scent of exotic spices and something else, something that made her skin crawl. And there, at the far end of the market, was her suspect, disappearing through a curtain of beads. Quinn moved forward, keeping to the shadows. She passed stalls selling crystals that hummed with power, books bound in what looked disturbingly like human skin, and potions in bottles of every color. A vendor with too many eyes tried to sell her a charm that promised protection from "those who walk between worlds." She declined with a shake of her head and kept moving. The market seemed to have its own rhythm, its own rules. No one paid her any mind, despite her obvious outsider status. It was as if she were invisible, or perhaps just beneath their notice. She reached the bead curtain and paused, listening. Voices came from the other side, low and urgent. She parted the beads just enough to see through. A circle of figures stood around a table, their faces obscured by hoods. At the center of the table was a book, its pages fluttering as if caught in an unfelt breeze. The suspect she'd been chasing stood at the head of the table, his face now visible in the candlelight. It was Morris. Her partner. The one who'd died three years ago in circumstances she'd never been able to explain. "Morris," she whispered, her voice catching in her throat. The figures at the table went silent. Slowly, as if in a dream, Morris turned to face her. His eyes were empty, black pits that seemed to swallow the light. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice a perfect imitation of the man she'd known. "I've been waiting for you." The other figures began to chant, their words a language of hisses and clicks that made her head throb. The book on the table started to glow, its pages turning rapidly until it fell open to a particular passage. Quinn's training took over. She drew her weapon, the sound unnaturally loud in the sudden silence. "Step away from the book," she commanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her gut. Morris smiled, and it was the most terrifying thing she'd ever seen. "You don't understand," he said. "This is bigger than you, bigger than all of us. The veil is thinning, Detective. Soon, nothing will separate our world from what lies beyond." The chanting grew louder, more insistent. The air around the table began to shimmer, reality itself seeming to warp and twist. Quinn felt a pull, a temptation to step forward, to join them, to understand... She shook her head violently, breaking the spell. Her finger tightened on the trigger. "Last warning," she said. "Step away from the table." Morris sighed, a sound of infinite sadness. "You always were stubborn," he said. Then he raised his hands, and the world exploded into chaos. The figures at the table began to change, their forms melting and reforming into creatures of nightmare. Tentacles sprouted from where arms had been, eyes multiplied and shifted, mouths opened to reveal rows of jagged teeth. Quinn fired, the bullet passing through the thing that had been Morris and embedding itself in the wall behind. The chant reached a crescendo, and the book burst into flames, its ashes scattering on an unfelt wind. The creatures lunged at her, moving with a speed that defied physics. Quinn dove to the side, rolling and coming up with her weapon trained on the nearest one. She fired again and again, but her bullets seemed to have no effect. A tentacle lashed out, wrapping around her ankle and yanking her off her feet. She hit the ground hard, her gun skittering away into the darkness. The creature dragged her across the floor, its touch burning like acid through her clothes. Desperately, Quinn reached for anything she could use as a weapon. Her hand closed around a broken bottle, its jagged edge cutting into her palm. She swung it wildly, feeling it connect with something soft and yielding. The creature shrieked, its grip on her ankle loosening. Quinn scrambled to her feet, searching for an escape route. The market was in chaos now, stalls overturned, their owners fleeing in every direction. She spotted a door at the far end of the room, half-hidden behind a collapsing stall. Ignoring the pain in her ankle, she ran for it, the creatures' shrieks echoing behind her. The door opened onto a narrow tunnel, its walls slick with moisture. Quinn plunged into the darkness, her only thought to put as much distance between herself and the nightmare behind her as possible. The tunnel seemed to go on forever, twisting and turning until she had no idea which direction she was heading. Finally, it ended at a ladder leading up to a manhole cover. She climbed quickly, pushing the cover aside and emerging into the night. She was in an alley she didn't recognize, the sounds of the city muffled and distant. Quinn leaned against the wall, trying to catch her breath and make sense of what had just happened. Her partner was alive. Or something was wearing his face. And there were others, creatures that could pass for human until they chose not to. A whole hidden world operating beneath the surface of the one she knew. Quinn checked her watch. Hours had passed since she'd entered the market, though it felt like minutes. She needed to report this, to warn someone. But who would believe her? Who could she trust with this knowledge? She looked down at her hands, still shaking from the adrenaline and the horror of what she'd seen. The cuts from the broken bottle had already stopped bleeding, healing with unnatural speed. Whatever was happening, whatever had caused the veil to thin, she was now a part of it. The question was, would she be its savior or its destroyer? Quinn pushed herself away from the wall, squaring her shoulders. She had a job to do, a mystery to solve. And she would do it alone if she had to. But first, she needed answers. And she knew just where to start looking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"chilling"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"chilling"
1"gloom"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"otherworldly"
5"charm"
6"perfect"
7"throb"
8"silence"
9"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1390
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1328
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn16
Morris5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
42.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like people—haggled and bartered i"
1"It was as if she were invisible, or perhaps just beneath their notice"
2"pits that seemed to swallow the light"
3"felt like minutes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1390
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"know that locks"
51.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean35.64
std11.76
cv0.33
sampleLengths
054
147
251
358
440
541
631
752
818
964
1035
1126
1251
1320
149
1530
1619
1739
1833
1942
2035
2123
2224
2336
2437
2542
2641
2737
2833
2932
3034
3144
3234
3338
3437
3532
3628
3730
3813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs263
matches
0"was heading"
1"was wearing"
2"was happening"
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through the growing flood, her breath coming in ragged gasps as she chased the figure ahead—a tall man with a dark coat flapping behind him like a wounded bird."
1"She rounded the corner just in time to see her quarry duck through a rusted metal door marked with a symbol that made her pause—a circle with three diagonal slashes, something she'd only seen in cold case files."
2"She had minutes, maybe less, before backup arrived—backup that wouldn't know about the supernatural angle she'd been tracking for months."
3"People—or things that looked like people—haggled and bartered in languages she didn't recognize."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1342
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.03427719821162444
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.011922503725782414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.99
std6.25
cv0.481
sampleLengths
020
134
215
312
420
538
613
710
820
913
1015
1113
127
1320
145
1520
1616
1711
1811
199
209
2111
2213
2319
2418
257
2625
2732
2811
2911
3013
318
329
339
3413
3519
3619
373
382
3915
409
417
4211
4312
4414
455
4619
4720
484
4912
49.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.32710280373831774
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences100
matches
0"Slowly, as if in a"
1"Then he raised his hands,"
2"Desperately, Quinn reached for anything"
3"Finally, it ended at a"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences100
matches
0"She rounded the corner just"
1"She knelt, pulling out her"
2"She had minutes, maybe less,"
3"She hesitated for only a"
4"She passed stalls selling crystals"
5"It was as if she"
6"She reached the bead curtain"
7"She parted the beads just"
8"It was Morris."
9"she whispered, her voice catching"
10"His eyes were empty, black"
11"he said, his voice a"
12"She drew her weapon, the"
13"she commanded, her voice steady"
14"She shook her head violently,"
15"Her finger tightened on the"
16"She fired again and again,"
17"She hit the ground hard,"
18"Her hand closed around a"
19"She swung it wildly, feeling"
ratio0.27
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences100
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"The suspect cut right, vanishing"
2"Quinn followed without hesitation, her"
3"She rounded the corner just"
4"The door slammed shut behind"
5"Quinn approached cautiously, her hand"
6"The door was locked, but"
7"She knelt, pulling out her"
8"The rain continued to fall,"
9"The lock clicked open just"
10"Someone must have called in"
11"She had minutes, maybe less,"
12"The door opened into darkness."
13"Quinn clicked on her flashlight,"
14"She hesitated for only a"
15"The stairs ended at another"
16"Quinn pushed it open and"
17"The space was vast, like"
18"Stalls lined the walls, their"
19"People—or things that looked like"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through the growing flood, her breath coming in ragged gasps as she chased the figure ahead—a tall man with a dark coat …"
1"The suspect cut right, vanishing down an alley that smelled of wet garbage and desperation."
2"Quinn clicked on her flashlight, its beam cutting through the gloom to reveal a narrow staircase descending into the earth."
3"She hesitated for only a moment before starting down, her footsteps echoing in the confined space."
4"The air was thick with the scent of exotic spices and something else, something that made her skin crawl."
5"The figures at the table began to change, their forms melting and reforming into creatures of nightmare."
6"Quinn fired, the bullet passing through the thing that had been Morris and embedding itself in the wall behind."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, her voice catching in her throat"
1"she commanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her gut"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
76.3978%