| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chilling" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "charm" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1390 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1328 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.898 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like people—haggled and bartered i" | | 1 | "It was as if she were invisible, or perhaps just beneath their notice" | | 2 | "pits that seemed to swallow the light" | | 3 | "felt like minutes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1390 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 51.41% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 35.64 | | std | 11.76 | | cv | 0.33 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 263 | | matches | | 0 | "was heading" | | 1 | "was wearing" | | 2 | "was happening" |
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| 36.05% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through the growing flood, her breath coming in ragged gasps as she chased the figure ahead—a tall man with a dark coat flapping behind him like a wounded bird." | | 1 | "She rounded the corner just in time to see her quarry duck through a rusted metal door marked with a symbol that made her pause—a circle with three diagonal slashes, something she'd only seen in cold case files." | | 2 | "She had minutes, maybe less, before backup arrived—backup that wouldn't know about the supernatural angle she'd been tracking for months." | | 3 | "People—or things that looked like people—haggled and bartered in languages she didn't recognize." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1342 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03427719821162444 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011922503725782414 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 12.99 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.32710280373831774 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, as if in a" | | 1 | "Then he raised his hands," | | 2 | "Desperately, Quinn reached for anything" | | 3 | "Finally, it ended at a" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded the corner just" | | 1 | "She knelt, pulling out her" | | 2 | "She had minutes, maybe less," | | 3 | "She hesitated for only a" | | 4 | "She passed stalls selling crystals" | | 5 | "It was as if she" | | 6 | "She reached the bead curtain" | | 7 | "She parted the beads just" | | 8 | "It was Morris." | | 9 | "she whispered, her voice catching" | | 10 | "His eyes were empty, black" | | 11 | "he said, his voice a" | | 12 | "She drew her weapon, the" | | 13 | "she commanded, her voice steady" | | 14 | "She shook her head violently," | | 15 | "Her finger tightened on the" | | 16 | "She fired again and again," | | 17 | "She hit the ground hard," | | 18 | "Her hand closed around a" | | 19 | "She swung it wildly, feeling" |
| | ratio | 0.27 | |
| 50.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed" | | 1 | "The suspect cut right, vanishing" | | 2 | "Quinn followed without hesitation, her" | | 3 | "She rounded the corner just" | | 4 | "The door slammed shut behind" | | 5 | "Quinn approached cautiously, her hand" | | 6 | "The door was locked, but" | | 7 | "She knelt, pulling out her" | | 8 | "The rain continued to fall," | | 9 | "The lock clicked open just" | | 10 | "Someone must have called in" | | 11 | "She had minutes, maybe less," | | 12 | "The door opened into darkness." | | 13 | "Quinn clicked on her flashlight," | | 14 | "She hesitated for only a" | | 15 | "The stairs ended at another" | | 16 | "Quinn pushed it open and" | | 17 | "The space was vast, like" | | 18 | "Stalls lined the walls, their" | | 19 | "People—or things that looked like" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through the growing flood, her breath coming in ragged gasps as she chased the figure ahead—a tall man with a dark coat …" | | 1 | "The suspect cut right, vanishing down an alley that smelled of wet garbage and desperation." | | 2 | "Quinn clicked on her flashlight, its beam cutting through the gloom to reveal a narrow staircase descending into the earth." | | 3 | "She hesitated for only a moment before starting down, her footsteps echoing in the confined space." | | 4 | "The air was thick with the scent of exotic spices and something else, something that made her skin crawl." | | 5 | "The figures at the table began to change, their forms melting and reforming into creatures of nightmare." | | 6 | "Quinn fired, the bullet passing through the thing that had been Morris and embedding itself in the wall behind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice catching in her throat" | | 1 | "she commanded, her voice steady despite the fear coiling in her gut" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |