| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "reluctantly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1342 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "tapestry" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "resolved" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "sense of" | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "crystalline" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "flawless" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "shattered" | | 20 | "reminder" | | 21 | "crystal" | | 22 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 39.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1321 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1095 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.906 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "pulse that seemed to sync with the faint, shimmering distortion that hung in the air before them like a heat haze" | | 1 | "something between night-blooming jasmine and co" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to shift when Rory looked at them directly" | | 3 | "looked like black glass" | | 4 | "note that seemed to come from everywhere" | | 5 | "looked like a vertical pool of mercury, r" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1321 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 48.93 | | std | 23.69 | | cv | 0.484 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 87 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 78 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 98 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a suggestion of wrongness, a place where the light bent reluctantly and the sounds of Richmond Park—the distant traffic, the chatter of walkers—faded into a muffled silence." | | 1 | "The air was several degrees cooler, carrying a scent Rory couldn’t place—something between night-blooming jasmine and cold stone." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—impossible violets, blood-red poppies, and blossoms of pure gold—carpeted the ground, blooming with a vibrancy that defied any season." | | 3 | "“It minds the stitches. We are not torn cloth; we are merely… static. It will ignore us, unless we try to cut.”" | | 4 | "The discovery of the pool, the alien flora, the silent guardian—it was a cascade of impossibilities." | | 5 | "They were not pressed into the surface; they were suspended within its depth, preserved in flawless detail." | | 6 | "She imprinted it on her mind—the colors, the silence, the scent of cold stone and magic." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1119 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" | | 1 | "silent, crystal-antlered warden." |
| | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.032171581769437 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01519213583556747 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.91 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.646 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 57.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4105263157894737 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the world resolved around" | | 1 | "Only the soft sigh of" | | 2 | "Instead of their three figures," |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a wall, not" | | 1 | "It was a suggestion of" | | 2 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 3 | "Her silver hair seemed to" | | 4 | "she said, her lavender eyes" | | 5 | "They stood in a clearing," | | 6 | "Their caps glowed with a" | | 7 | "They discovered a small, perfectly" | | 8 | "Its surface was mirror-still, reflecting" | | 9 | "She did not touch the" | | 10 | "It was vaguely deer-like, but" | | 11 | "It watched them with eyes" | | 12 | "It did not feel threatening." | | 13 | "It felt ancient, and profoundly" | | 14 | "She walked to the edge" | | 15 | "They were not pressed into" | | 16 | "she repeated Isolde’s words, tracing" | | 17 | "Her voice held a note" | | 18 | "It was beautiful, and it" | | 19 | "She imprinted it on her" |
| | ratio | 0.26 | |
| 63.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant lay heavy" | | 2 | "It wasn’t a wall, not" | | 3 | "It was a suggestion of" | | 4 | "Nyx flowed beside her, their" | | 5 | "they whispered, the sound like" | | 6 | "Isolde stepped forward, her bare" | | 7 | "Her silver hair seemed to" | | 8 | "she said, her lavender eyes" | | 9 | "Rory took a steadying breath," | | 10 | "This box was just…" | | 11 | "The pressure lasted only a" | | 12 | "They stood in a clearing," | | 13 | "The sky above was a" | | 14 | "The air was several degrees" | | 15 | "Their caps glowed with a" | | 16 | "Rory murmured, her voice hushed" | | 17 | "Nyx solidified slightly, their faintly" | | 18 | "The standing stones." | | 19 | "Wildflowers—impossible violets, blood-red poppies, and" |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant lay heavy and warm against her sternum, a persistent pulse that seemed to sync with the faint, shimmering distortion that hung in the air…" | | 1 | "Nyx flowed beside her, their form a humanoid suggestion of darkness that drank the dappled forest light." | | 2 | "The pressure lasted only a heartbeat, but it left Rory’s skin tingling, her ears popping." | | 3 | "At the far end of the clearing stood a circle of towering oaks, but their trunks were too straight, too smooth, carved with spiralling symbols that seemed to sh…" | | 4 | "Wildflowers—impossible violets, blood-red poppies, and blossoms of pure gold—carpeted the ground, blooming with a vibrancy that defied any season." | | 5 | "It was vaguely deer-like, but its hide was the mottled grey of the tree bark, and antlers of crystalline growth sprouted from its head, catching and fracturing …" | | 6 | "This was all precedent-setting case law from a court that didn’t exist." | | 7 | "A soft chime echoed through the grove, a single, clear note that seemed to come from everywhere." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone" | | 1 | "she said, her lavender eyes fixed on the shimmer" | | 2 | "Nyx observed, their shadowy head tilting" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "she repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |