Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFGKD069CSH459ZP03H5K1

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Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.155355

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Quinn's lungs burned as she pounded through the rain-slicked streets of Camden, her leather watch catching the amber glow of streetlights with each stride. The suspect—a lean figure in a dark hoodie—vaulted over a barrier and disappeared down an alley. She followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the neon blur of late-night London. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" Her voice echoed off brick walls, swallowed by the drumming rain. The figure glanced back, face obscured by shadow, then darted left. Quinn cursed and pushed harder, her legs protesting after eighteen years of chasing criminals through these same streets. This one moved differently though—too fluid, too confident in the darkness. She rounded the corner and skidded to a halt. The alley dead-ended at a construction site, orange barriers blocking the way. No sign of her suspect. Quinn's hand moved to her radio, then paused. Water dripped from her salt-and-pepper hair as she scanned the walls, the shadows, anywhere someone could hide. There—a service door, barely visible behind a dumpster. Still swinging on its hinges. Quinn approached carefully, one hand on her baton. The door opened onto a maintenance stairwell that descended into blackness. The air smelled wrong: not just the usual London Underground cocktail of brake dust and stale air, but something else. Incense. Copper. Things that didn't belong. She clicked on her torch and started down. The stairs seemed to go deeper than any Tube station should. Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the space below was vast. At the bottom, another door—this one marked with symbols that hurt to look at directly. Quinn blinked hard, attributing the visual distortion to fatigue and rain in her eyes. The door was ajar. Beyond it, impossible sound: voices haggling, music that scraped against her eardrums, and underneath it all, a thrumming like a massive heartbeat. Quinn pushed through. The abandoned station opened before her like a fever dream. Vendors lined the platforms where trains should run, their stalls draped in fabrics that shifted color without warning. The curved ceiling flickered with lights that had no visible source. And the people—if they were people—moved through the space examining wares she couldn't quite focus on. Her suspect was twenty meters ahead, weaving between stalls with practiced ease. Quinn's training screamed at her to call for backup, to retreat and return with a full team. But something else, some deeper instinct born from three years of unanswered questions about Morris's death, pulled her forward. She kept her torch low, trying to blend in despite her obvious police bearing. A vendor with too many teeth smiled at her as she passed. Another figure, draped in scarves, turned to track her movement with eyes that reflected light like a cat's. The suspect paused at a stall selling bottles filled with what looked like liquid starlight. Quinn closed the distance, hand moving to her cuffs. "Buying or selling?" The stallkeeper's voice was wind through dead leaves. Her suspect turned. Not the junkie she'd been chasing for the Soho drug connection. This was someone younger, olive-skinned with short curly hair. A scar ran along his left forearm, visible where his sleeve had ridden up. He clutched a medical bag to his chest, a Saint Christopher medallion glinting at his throat. "Neither," he said quietly, eyes fixed on Quinn. "Just passing through." She knew that accent—Spanish, softened by years in London. "You ran from a police officer." "Did I?" His fingers tightened on the bag. "I was just hurrying to catch the last train." "There are no trains here." "Aren't there?" He glanced meaningfully at the tunnel where shadows moved in ways shadows shouldn't. The stallkeeper laughed, a sound like glass breaking. "First time in the Veil Market, Detective? How exciting. Tell me, do you have a token?" Quinn's hand moved instinctively to her radio, but static filled her earpiece. Of course. Whatever this place was, it wouldn't let her call out. She was alone, surrounded by... what? The question Morris never got to answer. "I don't need a token," she said, keeping her voice steady. "I'm in pursuit of a suspect." "Everyone needs a token." The stallkeeper's extra teeth gleamed. "Market rules. No token, no leaving. Not the way you came, anyway." The Spanish man—not her original suspect, she realized now—shifted his weight. "I can help," he said quietly. "But not here. Too many eyes." Quinn studied him. Medical bag. Scar that looked like a defensive wound. The careful way he held himself, ready to run but not threatening. "You're a doctor." "Was." His smile was bitter. "Now I'm just someone who helps people your colleagues would rather pretend don't exist." Another piece clicked into place. The Soho connection she'd been tracking—not drugs in the traditional sense, but something else. Medical supplies moving through channels that didn't officially exist, for patients who weren't supposed to be real. "The person I was chasing," she said. "Where did they go?" He tilted his head toward the tunnel. "Caught the express, you might say. But you don't want to follow. Not without understanding what you're walking into." The market pressed in around them. Quinn felt eyes on her back, whispers in languages that predated English. Her sharp jaw clenched as she weighed her options. Three years of questions. Morris's empty desk. Reports that didn't add up. "My partner died in a place like this," she said quietly. The man's expression softened. "Then you already know more than most. Come on. There's someone who might have answers—but we need to leave. Now." He turned toward a different exit, not the way Quinn had entered. She hesitated. Following meant abandoning protocol, stepping into the same shadows that had swallowed Morris. But standing still meant learning nothing, and she'd done enough of that. "What's your name?" she asked, falling into step beside him. "Tomás." He guided her past stalls selling things she didn't want to examine too closely. "And before you ask—yes, I know about the investigation. Yes, I've been avoiding you. But not for the reasons you think." They reached another stairwell, this one leading up. Tomás produced something from his pocket—a small carved bone—and pressed it against a symbol on the wall. The air shimmered. "After you, Detective Quinn." He gestured upward. "Unless you'd prefer to explain to market security why you're here without a token." Quinn climbed, questions multiplying with each step. At the top, they emerged into the stock room of what looked like an ordinary Camden shop. Rain still hammered against the windows. The normal world reasserted itself with jarring suddenness. Tomás locked the door behind them with the bone token. "The market moves next full moon. This entrance won't work after that." He met her eyes. "Your partner—Morris. He was tracking something specific when he died, wasn't he?" Quinn's hand went to her radio, confirming it worked again. She could call this in, have Tomás arrested, return to the investigation she understood. But Morris had played by the rules, and Morris was dead. "Silas Ashford," she said finally. "He was tracking Silas Ashford." Tomás's expression darkened. "Then we definitely need to talk. But not here." He pulled out a card—no name, just an address in Soho. "Tomorrow night. Come alone, or don't come at all." He slipped out into the rain before she could respond. Quinn stood in the empty stock room, water dripping onto cheap linoleum, the bone token weighing heavy in her thoughts. The card in her hand was real. The market below—that was real too. Which meant Morris hadn't been chasing fantasies when he died. She tucked the card into her jacket and stepped out into the storm. Tomorrow night, she'd have to decide whether finding the truth was worth following Morris into the shadows. The rain washed the city clean, but some stains went deeper than water could reach.
total_cost0.155355

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"He glanced meaningfully [meaningfully]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said quietly [quietly]"
4"He gestured upward [upward]"
5"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.343
96.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1328
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"practiced ease"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"scanned"
2"footsteps"
3"flickered"
4"practiced ease"
5"glinting"
6"weight"
7"jaw clenched"
8"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1052
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Camden2
London3
Underground1
Tube1
Morris8
Soho3
Saint1
Christopher1
Quinn16
Spanish2
English1
Tomás4
persons
0"Morris"
1"Saint"
2"Christopher"
3"Quinn"
4"Spanish"
5"Tomás"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.74
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite focus on"
1"looked like liquid starlight"
2"looked like a defensive wound"
3"looked like an ordinary Camden shop"
46.63% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.534
wordCount1304
matches
0"not just the usual London Underground cocktail of brake dust and stale air, but something else"
1"not drugs in the traditional sense, but something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"knew that accent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean27.17
std14.61
cv0.538
sampleLengths
055
114
240
351
413
545
68
751
826
93
1055
1112
1236
1344
1424
1511
1653
1711
1815
1917
205
2115
2224
2337
2417
2521
2623
2727
2819
2936
3011
3126
3239
3311
3424
3539
3610
3736
3828
3921
4038
4138
4235
4310
4432
4553
4630
4715
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences127
ratio0.087
matches
0"The suspect—a lean figure in a dark hoodie—vaulted over a barrier and disappeared down an alley."
1"This one moved differently though—too fluid, too confident in the darkness."
2"There—a service door, barely visible behind a dumpster."
3"At the bottom, another door—this one marked with symbols that hurt to look at directly."
4"And the people—if they were people—moved through the space examining wares she couldn't quite focus on."
5"She knew that accent—Spanish, softened by years in London."
6"The Spanish man—not her original suspect, she realized now—shifted his weight."
7"The Soho connection she'd been tracking—not drugs in the traditional sense, but something else."
8"Tomás produced something from his pocket—a small carved bone—and pressed it against a symbol on the wall."
9"\"Then we definitely need to talk. But not here.\" He pulled out a card—no name, just an address in Soho."
10"The market below—that was real too."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1073
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.035414725069897485
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0130475302889096
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.27
std5.23
cv0.51
sampleLengths
024
116
215
314
411
518
611
79
812
95
108
1117
128
135
148
1511
1620
171
181
194
208
2111
2211
2315
2414
254
2622
273
2810
2918
3011
3116
3212
3317
3419
3514
3612
3718
3815
399
4011
413
4211
439
4414
4516
468
473
489
496
71.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4409448818897638
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners56
32.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Still swinging on its hinges."
ratio0.01
98.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences102
matches
0"She followed, her boots splashing"
1"Her voice echoed off brick"
2"She rounded the corner and"
3"She clicked on her torch"
4"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as"
5"Her suspect was twenty meters"
6"She kept her torch low,"
7"Her suspect turned."
8"He clutched a medical bag"
9"he said quietly, eyes fixed"
10"She knew that accent—Spanish, softened"
11"His fingers tightened on the"
12"He glanced meaningfully at the"
13"She was alone, surrounded by..."
14"she said, keeping her voice"
15"he said quietly"
16"His smile was bitter"
17"He tilted his head toward"
18"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.304
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences102
matches
0"Quinn's lungs burned as she"
1"The suspect—a lean figure in"
2"She followed, her boots splashing"
3"Her voice echoed off brick"
4"The figure glanced back, face"
5"Quinn cursed and pushed harder,"
6"This one moved differently though—too"
7"She rounded the corner and"
8"The alley dead-ended at a"
9"Quinn's hand moved to her"
10"Water dripped from her salt-and-pepper"
11"There—a service door, barely visible"
12"Quinn approached carefully, one hand"
13"The door opened onto a"
14"The air smelled wrong: not"
15"Things that didn't belong."
16"She clicked on her torch"
17"The stairs seemed to go"
18"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as"
19"Quinn blinked hard, attributing the"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
48.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the neon blur of late-night London."
1"Quinn cursed and pushed harder, her legs protesting after eighteen years of chasing criminals through these same streets."
2"The door opened onto a maintenance stairwell that descended into blackness."
3"Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the space below was vast."
4"Beyond it, impossible sound: voices haggling, music that scraped against her eardrums, and underneath it all, a thrumming like a massive heartbeat."
5"Medical supplies moving through channels that didn't officially exist, for patients who weren't supposed to be real."
6"Following meant abandoning protocol, stepping into the same shadows that had swallowed Morris."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said quietly, eyes fixed on Quinn"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.3307%