| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "He glanced meaningfully [meaningfully]" | | 2 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 4 | "He gestured upward [upward]" | | 5 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.343 | |
| 96.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1328 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "practiced ease" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "jaw clenched" | | 8 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1304 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1052 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Morris" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | London | 3 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 8 | | Soho | 3 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Spanish | 2 | | English | 1 | | Tomás | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Morris" | | 1 | "Saint" | | 2 | "Christopher" | | 3 | "Quinn" | | 4 | "Spanish" | | 5 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.74 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite focus on" | | 1 | "looked like liquid starlight" | | 2 | "looked like a defensive wound" | | 3 | "looked like an ordinary Camden shop" |
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| 46.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.534 | | wordCount | 1304 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the usual London Underground cocktail of brake dust and stale air, but something else" | | 1 | "not drugs in the traditional sense, but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 27.17 | | std | 14.61 | | cv | 0.538 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 38 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a lean figure in a dark hoodie—vaulted over a barrier and disappeared down an alley." | | 1 | "This one moved differently though—too fluid, too confident in the darkness." | | 2 | "There—a service door, barely visible behind a dumpster." | | 3 | "At the bottom, another door—this one marked with symbols that hurt to look at directly." | | 4 | "And the people—if they were people—moved through the space examining wares she couldn't quite focus on." | | 5 | "She knew that accent—Spanish, softened by years in London." | | 6 | "The Spanish man—not her original suspect, she realized now—shifted his weight." | | 7 | "The Soho connection she'd been tracking—not drugs in the traditional sense, but something else." | | 8 | "Tomás produced something from his pocket—a small carved bone—and pressed it against a symbol on the wall." | | 9 | "\"Then we definitely need to talk. But not here.\" He pulled out a card—no name, just an address in Soho." | | 10 | "The market below—that was real too." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1073 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.035414725069897485 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0130475302889096 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 10.27 | | std | 5.23 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 71.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4409448818897638 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 32.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Still swinging on its hinges." |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 98.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed, her boots splashing" | | 1 | "Her voice echoed off brick" | | 2 | "She rounded the corner and" | | 3 | "She clicked on her torch" | | 4 | "Her footsteps echoed strangely, as" | | 5 | "Her suspect was twenty meters" | | 6 | "She kept her torch low," | | 7 | "Her suspect turned." | | 8 | "He clutched a medical bag" | | 9 | "he said quietly, eyes fixed" | | 10 | "She knew that accent—Spanish, softened" | | 11 | "His fingers tightened on the" | | 12 | "He glanced meaningfully at the" | | 13 | "She was alone, surrounded by..." | | 14 | "she said, keeping her voice" | | 15 | "he said quietly" | | 16 | "His smile was bitter" | | 17 | "He tilted his head toward" | | 18 | "Her sharp jaw clenched as" | | 19 | "she said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn's lungs burned as she" | | 1 | "The suspect—a lean figure in" | | 2 | "She followed, her boots splashing" | | 3 | "Her voice echoed off brick" | | 4 | "The figure glanced back, face" | | 5 | "Quinn cursed and pushed harder," | | 6 | "This one moved differently though—too" | | 7 | "She rounded the corner and" | | 8 | "The alley dead-ended at a" | | 9 | "Quinn's hand moved to her" | | 10 | "Water dripped from her salt-and-pepper" | | 11 | "There—a service door, barely visible" | | 12 | "Quinn approached carefully, one hand" | | 13 | "The door opened onto a" | | 14 | "The air smelled wrong: not" | | 15 | "Things that didn't belong." | | 16 | "She clicked on her torch" | | 17 | "The stairs seemed to go" | | 18 | "Her footsteps echoed strangely, as" | | 19 | "Quinn blinked hard, attributing the" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the neon blur of late-night London." | | 1 | "Quinn cursed and pushed harder, her legs protesting after eighteen years of chasing criminals through these same streets." | | 2 | "The door opened onto a maintenance stairwell that descended into blackness." | | 3 | "Her footsteps echoed strangely, as if the space below was vast." | | 4 | "Beyond it, impossible sound: voices haggling, music that scraped against her eardrums, and underneath it all, a thrumming like a massive heartbeat." | | 5 | "Medical supplies moving through channels that didn't officially exist, for patients who weren't supposed to be real." | | 6 | "Following meant abandoning protocol, stepping into the same shadows that had swallowed Morris." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said quietly, eyes fixed on Quinn" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |