| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.036 | | effectiveRatio | 0.036 | |
| 77.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1536 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "complex" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "crystallized" | | 7 | "dances" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "symphony" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "pristine" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "desire" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 73.51% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "started to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1516 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1194 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 9 | | Rory | 22 | | Heartstone | 4 | | One | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.579 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening to something only she could hear" | | 1 | "looked like crushed pearls that crunched" | | 2 | "note that seemed to come from the very ground, a satisfied purr of a well-fed realm" | | 3 | "seemed reluctant to obey" | | 4 | "appeared—materialized as if the amber air had condensed into solid form" | | 5 | "looked like jewels lined the way—rubies t" | | 6 | "looked like ordinary grass until Rory not" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.639 | | wordCount | 1516 | | matches | | 0 | "not cruel or mocking, but rich with genuine pleasure" | | 1 | "not food, but objects" | | 2 | "not north but to something" | | 3 | "not to be manipulated,\" Rory corrected, but she felt a small surge of pride nonetheless" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 30.94 | | std | 20.13 | | cv | 0.651 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 88 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 63 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.087 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no impression in the soft earth beneath their feet—earth that looked deceptively normal until Rory noticed the way it sparkled, as if mixed with crushed gemstones." | | 1 | "The air itself felt different here—thicker, sweeter, coating her throat with each breath." | | 2 | "The grapes themselves hung in impossible clusters—some glowed like paper lanterns, others seemed to contain swirling galaxies within their translucent skins." | | 3 | "Somewhere in the distance, she could hear laughter—not cruel or mocking, but rich with genuine pleasure." | | 4 | "Before them stretched a city—if city was even the right word." | | 5 | "Not appeared—materialized, as if the amber air had condensed into solid form." | | 6 | "Human in shape but wrong in every detail—fingers too long, smile too wide, eyes that held depths of hunger no mortal could comprehend." | | 7 | "\"Business.\" The creature—demon, Rory realized with a chill that had nothing to do with the Fae blade—spoke the word like it tasted sour." | | 8 | "Trees heavy with fruit that looked like jewels lined the way—rubies that dripped juice like blood, sapphires that chimed like bells in the breeze." | | 9 | "She'd know it anywhere—the worn leather cover, the coffee stain on the spine from when she'd knocked over her mug at age twelve." | | 10 | "Inside, stairs descended into darkness—real darkness, not Dymas's amber twilight." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1214 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03706754530477759 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009060955518945634 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 12.03 | | std | 6.34 | | cv | 0.527 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 78.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.5238095238095238 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, she" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, blinking against the" | | 1 | "Their violet eyes pulsed brighter" | | 2 | "they whispered, voice carrying that" | | 3 | "She left no impression in" | | 4 | "She trailed off, tilting her" | | 5 | "It reminded her of walking" | | 6 | "They stood at the edge" | | 7 | "Their touch felt cool against" | | 8 | "They crested a small hill," | | 9 | "It wore chef's whites that" | | 10 | "it exclaimed, voice carrying the" | | 11 | "It dissolved back into the" | | 12 | "They followed the indicated path," | | 13 | "she started to ask" | | 14 | "She saw Sunday roasts, birthday" | | 15 | "She'd know it anywhere—the worn" | | 16 | "Its copper bark cracked, revealing" | | 17 | "They descended into the dark," |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 68.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's fingers tightened around the" | | 1 | "The moonsilver dagger remained ice-cold" | | 2 | "she breathed, blinking against the" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes pulsed brighter" | | 4 | "they whispered, voice carrying that" | | 5 | "Isolde glided through last, her" | | 6 | "She left no impression in" | | 7 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 8 | "She trailed off, tilting her" | | 9 | "Rory took a tentative step" | | 10 | "The Heartstone pendant grew warm" | | 11 | "The air itself felt different" | | 12 | "It reminded her of walking" | | 13 | "They stood at the edge" | | 14 | "The leaves shimmered between deep" | | 15 | "The grapes themselves hung in" | | 16 | "Nyx warned, solidifying enough to" | | 17 | "Their touch felt cool against" | | 18 | "Rory muttered, but she tucked" | | 19 | "The path between the vines" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched a city—if" | | 1 | "Even from this distance, Rory" | | 2 | "Whether they would satisfy or" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 42.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She left no impression in the soft earth beneath their feet—earth that looked deceptively normal until Rory noticed the way it sparkled, as if mixed with crushe…" | | 1 | "Beneath it all thrummed a bass note that seemed to come from the very ground, a satisfied purr of a well-fed realm." | | 2 | "Steam rose from a thousand chimneys, carrying scents that made Rory's mouth water despite her better judgment." | | 3 | "Vendors hawked their wares beneath canopies of silk that rippled like liquid." | | 4 | "Not appeared—materialized, as if the amber air had condensed into solid form." | | 5 | "Human in shape but wrong in every detail—fingers too long, smile too wide, eyes that held depths of hunger no mortal could comprehend." | | 6 | "A fountain of chocolate that formed elaborate sculptures before melting back into itself." |
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| 35.71% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice carrying that familiar wind-through-leaves quality" | | 1 | "Isolde replied, her words carrying their typical cryptic weight" | | 2 | "Rory said, though her feet seemed reluctant to obey" | | 3 | "it exclaimed, voice carrying the rich timbre of aged wine" | | 4 | "Nyx said, a note of approval in their whispering voice" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 23 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "it exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 6 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" | | 7 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" | | 8 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 9 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 10 | "Rory corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.442 | | leniency | 0.885 | | rawRatio | 0.478 | | effectiveRatio | 0.423 | |