Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFGV32200134KKGSK4TSHK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 23s
Cost:
$0.199080

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's fingers tightened around the Fae blade's hilt as she stepped through the shimmering boundary between worlds. The moonsilver dagger remained ice-cold against her palm despite the sudden warmth that washed over her skin. One moment she'd been standing in Richmond Park beneath a grey London sky, and now amber light bathed everything in honeyed tones. "Well," she breathed, blinking against the strange luminescence. "This isn't Kansas anymore." Behind her, Nyx flowed through the portal like smoke given form. Their violet eyes pulsed brighter in this alien atmosphere, shadow-substance rippling as they adjusted to the new realm's physics. "Dymas," they whispered, voice carrying that familiar wind-through-leaves quality. "I haven't set foot here in... centuries." Isolde glided through last, her silver hair catching the amber light like spun metal. She left no impression in the soft earth beneath their feet—earth that looked deceptively normal until Rory noticed the way it sparkled, as if mixed with crushed gemstones. "Time moves strangely here," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes distant. "What seems like hours may be days. What feels like days..." She trailed off, tilting her head as if listening to something only she could hear. Rory took a tentative step forward, then another. The Heartstone pendant grew warm against her chest, pulsing in a rhythm that almost matched her accelerated heartbeat. The air itself felt different here—thicker, sweeter, coating her throat with each breath. It reminded her of walking into a bakery just as fresh bread emerged from the ovens, but magnified tenfold. They stood at the edge of what appeared to be an endless vineyard. But these were no ordinary grapevines. The leaves shimmered between deep purple and burnished gold, shifting color as she watched. The grapes themselves hung in impossible clusters—some glowed like paper lanterns, others seemed to contain swirling galaxies within their translucent skins. "Don't touch anything," Nyx warned, solidifying enough to place a restraining hand on Rory's shoulder. Their touch felt cool against the realm's pervasive warmth. "In Dymas, even the fruit can bind you. One taste and you might never want to leave." "Charming," Rory muttered, but she tucked her free hand into her jacket pocket to resist temptation. The path between the vines beckoned, paved with what looked like crushed pearls that crunched softly beneath her trainers. As they walked, the soundscape of this strange realm revealed itself. Somewhere in the distance, she could hear laughter—not cruel or mocking, but rich with genuine pleasure. Music drifted on the warm breeze, a complex melody played on instruments she couldn't identify. Beneath it all thrummed a bass note that seemed to come from the very ground, a satisfied purr of a well-fed realm. "The Grove was strange enough," Rory said, glancing at Isolde. "But this..." "The Fae touch Earth lightly," Isolde replied, her words carrying their typical cryptic weight. "Hel embraces with both arms and will not let go." They crested a small hill, and Rory's breath caught. Before them stretched a city—if city was even the right word. Structures of polished amber and gold reached toward the perpetually twilight sky, their architecture defying euclidean geometry. Bridges of crystallized honey connected floating platforms where figures moved in elaborate dances. Steam rose from a thousand chimneys, carrying scents that made Rory's mouth water despite her better judgment. "The Palace of Satisfaction," Nyx murmured. "Belphegor's seat of power." Even from this distance, Rory could see the markets sprawling between the impossible buildings. Vendors hawked their wares beneath canopies of silk that rippled like liquid. The sound of sizzling meat and bubbling sauces created a symphony of temptation. "We need to keep moving," Rory said, though her feet seemed reluctant to obey. The Fae blade hummed in her grip, its chill the only thing keeping her grounded. "Whatever answers we're looking for, standing here gawking won't—" A figure materialized on the path before them. Not appeared—materialized, as if the amber air had condensed into solid form. It wore chef's whites that somehow remained pristine despite the realm's golden atmosphere. Human in shape but wrong in every detail—fingers too long, smile too wide, eyes that held depths of hunger no mortal could comprehend. "Visitors!" it exclaimed, voice carrying the rich timbre of aged wine. "How delightful. You must be famished after your journey. Please, allow me to offer—" "We decline your hospitality," Isolde interrupted, stepping forward with fluid grace. "We walk the pilgrim's path and claim the ancient right of passage." The creature's smile flickered but didn't fade. "Of course. But surely a small taste—" "No." Rory was surprised to hear her own voice, firm and clear. The Heartstone pendant burned hotter against her chest. "We have business elsewhere." "Business." The creature—demon, Rory realized with a chill that had nothing to do with the Fae blade—spoke the word like it tasted sour. "How dreadfully boring. But as you wish. The pilgrim's path extends that way." One too-long finger pointed toward a narrower trail that wound away from the city. "Do try not to stray. The orchards can be so... inviting." It dissolved back into the amber air, leaving only the lingering scent of caramelized sugar and something darker underneath. "Well handled," Nyx said, a note of approval in their whispering voice. "Many would have accepted before thinking." They followed the indicated path, and soon the city's temptations faded behind them. But new wonders replaced them. Trees heavy with fruit that looked like jewels lined the way—rubies that dripped juice like blood, sapphires that chimed like bells in the breeze. Rory kept her eyes fixed ahead, but her peripheral vision caught glimpses of impossible things. A fountain of chocolate that formed elaborate sculptures before melting back into itself. Gardens where vegetables grew to the size of houses, tended by figures that might once have been human. "Are those—" she started to ask. "Souls, yes," Nyx confirmed. "Contracts willingly made. The finest chefs, the most innovative gardeners, the masters of their craft. They come to Dymas seeking the ultimate ingredients, the perfect kitchen, the appreciation they craved in life." "And they stay forever." "Forever is a very long time in Hel," Isolde said softly. "Though here, wrapped in pleasure and praise, perhaps it passes more kindly than elsewhere." The path began to climb, winding up a hillside covered in what looked like ordinary grass until Rory noticed each blade was actually a tiny fork, knife, or spoon, silver-bright and sharp. The Heartstone pendant's heat had become almost uncomfortable now, and she pulled it out from beneath her shirt. The crimson gem pulsed with internal light, brighter than she'd ever seen it. "We're close to something," she said. Nyx's form rippled with agitation. "Yes. But close to what?" At the hill's summit stood a single tree, its trunk twisted into a natural spiral. The bark gleamed like polished copper, and its leaves... Rory blinked. Each leaf was a different delicacy from Earth, perfectly preserved at the moment of peak flavor. She saw Sunday roasts, birthday cakes, comfort foods from a dozen cultures, all hanging like impossible fruit. Beneath the tree sat a table set for three. "A trap?" Rory asked, raising the Fae blade. "A test," Isolde corrected. "Look closer." On each plate rested not food, but objects. The first held a compass that pointed not north but to something that made Rory's eyes water to follow. The second contained a key made of crystallized honey. The third... "My mother's recipe book," Rory breathed. She'd know it anywhere—the worn leather cover, the coffee stain on the spine from when she'd knocked over her mug at age twelve. "How is it here?" "It isn't," Nyx said. "It's a echo, a reflection of desire. Dymas knows what you hunger for, and it's rarely food." Rory approached the table slowly, every instinct screaming warnings. The recipe book looked so real she could almost smell the vanilla extract her mother always somehow spilled on page forty-three. But the Fae blade in her hand grew colder with each step, frost forming along its edge. "What does the test want?" she asked. "To see if you understand the nature of true satisfaction," Isolde said. "Take what's freely given, or hunger forever for what's withheld." Rory studied the three objects. The compass might guide them where they needed to go. The key could open doors better left closed. But the recipe book... that was personal. That was bait shaped specifically for her. "None of them," she decided. "We make our own way." The moment the words left her mouth, the tree shuddered. Its copper bark cracked, revealing a hollow within. Inside, stairs descended into darkness—real darkness, not Dymas's amber twilight. "The pilgrim's path continues below," Isolde said with what might have been approval. "You chose wisdom over want." "I chose not to be manipulated," Rory corrected, but she felt a small surge of pride nonetheless. They descended into the dark, leaving Dymas's temptations behind. But Rory knew they were far from safe. The Heartstone pendant still pulsed with heat, and somewhere in the depths below, answers waited. Whether they would satisfy or damn them remained to be seen.
total_cost0.19908

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.036
effectiveRatio0.036
77.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"lightly"
3"perfectly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1536
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"complex"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"crystallized"
count2
7
word"dances"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"symphony"
count1
10
word"chill"
count2
11
word"pristine"
count1
12
word"depths"
count2
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"echo"
count1
16
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"familiar"
3"shimmered"
4"complex"
5"weight"
6"crystallized"
7"dances"
8"silk"
9"symphony"
10"chill"
11"pristine"
12"depths"
13"flickered"
14"perfect"
15"echo"
16"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences103
matches
0"was surprised"
73.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
2"started to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1516
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1194
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae5
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Nyx7
Isolde9
Rory22
Heartstone4
One2
Earth1
Sunday1
Dymas2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.579
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"as if listening to something only she could hear"
1"looked like crushed pearls that crunched"
2"note that seemed to come from the very ground, a satisfied purr of a well-fed realm"
3"seemed reluctant to obey"
4"appeared—materialized as if the amber air had condensed into solid form"
5"looked like jewels lined the way—rubies t"
6"looked like ordinary grass until Rory not"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.639
wordCount1516
matches
0"not cruel or mocking, but rich with genuine pleasure"
1"not food, but objects"
2"not north but to something"
3"not to be manipulated,\" Rory corrected, but she felt a small surge of pride nonetheless"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.94
std20.13
cv0.651
sampleLengths
056
112
246
342
437
558
654
741
835
964
1012
1124
1267
1310
1439
1538
1656
1725
1823
1914
2024
2161
2219
2318
2488
256
2636
274
2825
2963
306
3110
3259
339
348
356
3638
3733
3821
3947
407
4122
4237
4310
4428
4518
4617
4732
4811
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences126
ratio0.087
matches
0"She left no impression in the soft earth beneath their feet—earth that looked deceptively normal until Rory noticed the way it sparkled, as if mixed with crushed gemstones."
1"The air itself felt different here—thicker, sweeter, coating her throat with each breath."
2"The grapes themselves hung in impossible clusters—some glowed like paper lanterns, others seemed to contain swirling galaxies within their translucent skins."
3"Somewhere in the distance, she could hear laughter—not cruel or mocking, but rich with genuine pleasure."
4"Before them stretched a city—if city was even the right word."
5"Not appeared—materialized, as if the amber air had condensed into solid form."
6"Human in shape but wrong in every detail—fingers too long, smile too wide, eyes that held depths of hunger no mortal could comprehend."
7"\"Business.\" The creature—demon, Rory realized with a chill that had nothing to do with the Fae blade—spoke the word like it tasted sour."
8"Trees heavy with fruit that looked like jewels lined the way—rubies that dripped juice like blood, sapphires that chimed like bells in the breeze."
9"She'd know it anywhere—the worn leather cover, the coffee stain on the spine from when she'd knocked over her mug at age twelve."
10"Inside, stairs descended into darkness—real darkness, not Dymas's amber twilight."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1214
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice-cold against her"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03706754530477759
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009060955518945634
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean12.03
std6.34
cv0.527
sampleLengths
017
117
222
38
44
511
619
79
87
914
1028
1111
1226
138
1418
1513
1619
1713
186
1914
2021
2115
229
2317
2416
2519
2611
2716
2815
2922
3010
312
3214
3310
349
3511
3617
3713
3817
396
404
4114
4212
4313
4414
4515
469
478
4812
4913
78.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.5238095238095238
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners66
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, she"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences92
matches
0"she breathed, blinking against the"
1"Their violet eyes pulsed brighter"
2"they whispered, voice carrying that"
3"She left no impression in"
4"She trailed off, tilting her"
5"It reminded her of walking"
6"They stood at the edge"
7"Their touch felt cool against"
8"They crested a small hill,"
9"It wore chef's whites that"
10"it exclaimed, voice carrying the"
11"It dissolved back into the"
12"They followed the indicated path,"
13"she started to ask"
14"She saw Sunday roasts, birthday"
15"She'd know it anywhere—the worn"
16"Its copper bark cracked, revealing"
17"They descended into the dark,"
ratio0.196
68.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
1"The moonsilver dagger remained ice-cold"
2"she breathed, blinking against the"
3"Their violet eyes pulsed brighter"
4"they whispered, voice carrying that"
5"Isolde glided through last, her"
6"She left no impression in"
7"Isolde said, her pale lavender"
8"She trailed off, tilting her"
9"Rory took a tentative step"
10"The Heartstone pendant grew warm"
11"The air itself felt different"
12"It reminded her of walking"
13"They stood at the edge"
14"The leaves shimmered between deep"
15"The grapes themselves hung in"
16"Nyx warned, solidifying enough to"
17"Their touch felt cool against"
18"Rory muttered, but she tucked"
19"The path between the vines"
ratio0.783
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Before them stretched a city—if"
1"Even from this distance, Rory"
2"Whether they would satisfy or"
ratio0.033
42.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She left no impression in the soft earth beneath their feet—earth that looked deceptively normal until Rory noticed the way it sparkled, as if mixed with crushe…"
1"Beneath it all thrummed a bass note that seemed to come from the very ground, a satisfied purr of a well-fed realm."
2"Steam rose from a thousand chimneys, carrying scents that made Rory's mouth water despite her better judgment."
3"Vendors hawked their wares beneath canopies of silk that rippled like liquid."
4"Not appeared—materialized, as if the amber air had condensed into solid form."
5"Human in shape but wrong in every detail—fingers too long, smile too wide, eyes that held depths of hunger no mortal could comprehend."
6"A fountain of chocolate that formed elaborate sculptures before melting back into itself."
35.71% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"they whispered, voice carrying that familiar wind-through-leaves quality"
1"Isolde replied, her words carrying their typical cryptic weight"
2"Rory said, though her feet seemed reluctant to obey"
3"it exclaimed, voice carrying the rich timbre of aged wine"
4"Nyx said, a note of approval in their whispering voice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"Rory muttered (mutter)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"it exclaimed (exclaim)"
6"Isolde interrupted (interrupt)"
7"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
8"Isolde corrected (correct)"
9"Rory breathed (breathe)"
10"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.442
leniency0.885
rawRatio0.478
effectiveRatio0.423
72.9932%