Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFHJQY1EZABV27GDNY0JH7

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eight, just as Rory was settling in with a cup of tea and the last chapter of her constitutional law textbook. She frowned at the interruption, marking her page before padding to the door. The peephole revealed nothing but a distorted blur of movement. "Who is it?" she called through the door. "It's me," came the muffled reply. Rory's heart stuttered in her chest. She knew that voice. After three years, she'd recognize it anywhere. She fumbled with the locks, her hands suddenly clumsy. Three deadbolts slid back with metallic clicks, and she pulled the door open to find Lucien Moreau standing in the hallway, looking like he'd stepped out of a men's fashion magazine rather than a dingy East London corridor. He was dressed in one of his charcoal suits, the fabric tailored to perfection, his platinum blond hair slicked back as always. But there were shadows under his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—that she didn't remember from before. "Lucien," she said, her voice coming out steadier than she felt. "What are you doing here?" He held up a bottle of wine, the dark glass catching the hallway light. "I was in the neighborhood and thought I'd stop by. May I come in?" Rory hesitated. The last time they'd seen each other, she'd been crying, mascara running down her face as she told him it was over. He'd tried to stop her, but she'd been too hurt, too angry. She'd left his flat in Mayfair and hadn't looked back. Now here he was, standing on her threshold like no time had passed at all. She stepped aside. "Sure. Come in." The flat was small, cluttered with books and scrolls that spilled from every surface. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, raised his head from his spot on the couch to regard the intruder with suspicious yellow eyes. "Nice place," Lucien said, though his gaze lingered on the stacks of legal textbooks. "You're still studying law?" Rory busied herself finding a corkscrew. "I never stopped. Pre-law at Cardiff, remember?" "I remember everything about you, Rory." The words were soft, almost lost as she wrestled with the stubborn cork. When she finally extracted it, she poured two glasses without meeting his eyes. They sat on opposite ends of the small couch, the wine between them like a fragile bridge. Rory took a sip, the merlot dark and rich on her tongue, and finally looked at him properly. "What happened to you?" she asked. Lucien's expression shuttered. "What do you mean?" "You look... different. Worn around the edges." He smiled then, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Three years will do that to a person." "Three years since I left," Rory clarified. "Since I walked away because you wouldn't give me a straight answer about who—what—you really are." The amber eye flashed, just for a second, and Rory knew she'd struck a nerve. Good. Maybe now she'd finally get some truth. Lucien set his glass down on the cluttered coffee table. "I told you, I'm a fixer. I work in information. That's the truth." "But not all of it," Rory pressed. "There's something you're not telling me, Lucien. Something big." He leaned back against the couch cushions, his posture deceptively relaxed. "Does it matter? You made your choice. You left." "I left because you were keeping secrets!" The words burst out of her, sharper than she intended. "You'd disappear for days, come back with blood on your cuffs, and when I asked where you'd been, you'd give me that same smile and say 'work.' I couldn't live like that, Lucien. I deserved better." The amber eye darkened, swirling with emotion Rory couldn't name. "And I deserved better than you walking out without giving me a chance to explain." "Explain what? That you're involved in something dangerous? That you might not come home one night?" Rory's voice cracked. "I couldn't do it. I wouldn't do it." Lucien reached for her then, his hand hovering just shy of her arm. "Rory, if you'd only—" The words cut off as the front door burst open. Eva stood there, keys in hand, her mouth falling open at the scene before her. "Oh. My. God." She looked from Rory's flushed face to Lucien's tense posture. "Am I interrupting something?" Rory scrambled to her feet, nearly knocking over the wine bottle. "Eva! I thought you were working late." "Shift got cancelled." Eva's gaze sharpened as she took in the expensive suit, the bottle of wine, the charged atmosphere. "And you are?" Lucien rose smoothly, extending a hand. "Lucien Moreau. An old friend of Rory's." Eva's grip was firm, her eyes never leaving his face. "Eva Chambers. Rory's roommate." "Pleasure." Lucien's smile was charming, but there was something guarded in his expression now. Rory cleared her throat. "Lucien was just leaving." "Were you?" Eva asked, arching a perfectly shaped eyebrow. Lucien's gaze flicked to Rory, something unspoken passing between them. "Actually, I was hoping Rory might join me for dinner. There's a new French place that opened on Regent Street. I'd love her opinion on the authenticity." Rory's heart raced. Dinner? With him? After everything? She opened her mouth to refuse, but the words stuck in her throat. Seeing him again, feeling that familiar pull, remembering how his hands felt on her skin, how his voice sounded when he whispered her name— She couldn't do it. She had to be strong. "I can't," she said finally. "I have to study." Lucien's expression didn't change, but something in his posture shifted, a subtle withdrawal. "Of course. Another time, perhaps." He moved toward the door with fluid grace, pausing only to retrieve his cane from where he'd leaned it against the wall. The ivory handle caught the light as he turned back to her. "It was good to see you, Rory. Take care of yourself." And then he was gone, the door closing softly behind him. Rory stood frozen, her heart hammering against her ribs. Eva's voice cut through the silence. "Well. That was intense. Want to tell me what that was about?" Rory sank back onto the couch, suddenly exhausted. "He's my ex." Eva's eyes widened. "The infamous Lucien? The one you never talk about?" "The one I never talk about," Rory confirmed. "Because?" "Because he broke my heart." The admission came out softer than she'd intended. "Because he wouldn't give me all of him, and I couldn't settle for half of someone I loved." Eva sat beside her, her expression gentle. "Do you still love him?" Rory closed her eyes, remembering the way Lucien had looked at her, the way his hand had almost touched her arm. "I never stopped." "Then maybe it's time you had that conversation you never got to finish. Before he walked out that door." Rory's eyes snapped open. "What conversation?" "The one where you demand the truth. Where you give him a chance to explain instead of assuming the worst." Eva's voice was firm. "You left because you were hurt and scared. But Rory, real love means being brave enough to face the hard things together." Rory thought about Lucien's shadows, his secrets, the way he'd almost reached for her. Her heart ached with possibilities. "Maybe you're right," she said slowly. "Maybe it's time I stopped running." She reached for her phone before she could second-guess herself, pulling up Lucien's number. Her thumb hovered over the call button. "What are you going to say?" Eva asked. Rory's lips curved into a small, determined smile. "I'm going to ask him to dinner. Properly this time. And I'm going to make him tell me everything." She pressed call.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.069
76.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"eyebrow"
2"flicked"
3"unspoken"
4"raced"
5"familiar"
6"silence"
7"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1276
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount817
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.69
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Lucien13
Moreau1
East1
London1
Mayfair1
Eva10
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Mayfair"
globalScore0.154
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1276
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.63
std12.28
cv0.625
sampleLengths
050
18
26
317
447
538
616
728
846
915
106
1135
1218
1313
1432
1535
166
177
187
1917
2023
2123
2223
2316
2420
2553
2625
2727
2817
2925
3017
3118
3223
3313
3414
3514
368
379
3837
398
4037
419
429
4318
4434
4511
4611
4715
4812
4911
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"was dressed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was settling"
1"was, standing"
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences122
ratio0.016
matches
0"But there were shadows under his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—that she didn't remember from before."
1"Seeing him again, feeling that familiar pull, remembering how his hands felt on her skin, how his voice sounded when he whispered her name—"
96.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04390243902439024
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.018292682926829267
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.46
std7
cv0.67
sampleLengths
027
113
210
38
46
56
64
77
89
938
1022
1116
1211
135
1414
1514
162
1722
1812
1910
2015
213
223
2314
2421
2514
264
276
287
2919
3013
3117
3218
336
343
354
367
379
388
397
4016
4115
421
437
4410
4513
467
479
4811
499
49.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3442622950819672
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners42
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Maybe now she'd finally get"
ratio0.014
90.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences74
matches
0"She frowned at the interruption,"
1"she called through the door"
2"She knew that voice."
3"She fumbled with the locks,"
4"He was dressed in one"
5"she said, her voice coming"
6"He held up a bottle"
7"He'd tried to stop her,"
8"She'd left his flat in"
9"She stepped aside."
10"They sat on opposite ends"
11"He smiled then, but it"
12"He leaned back against the"
13"She looked from Rory's flushed"
14"She opened her mouth to"
15"She couldn't do it."
16"She had to be strong."
17"she said finally"
18"He moved toward the door"
19"Her heart ached with possibilities."
ratio0.324
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"She frowned at the interruption,"
2"The peephole revealed nothing but"
3"she called through the door"
4"Rory's heart stuttered in her"
5"She knew that voice."
6"She fumbled with the locks,"
7"He was dressed in one"
8"she said, her voice coming"
9"He held up a bottle"
10"The last time they'd seen"
11"He'd tried to stop her,"
12"She'd left his flat in"
13"She stepped aside."
14"The flat was small, cluttered"
15"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, raised"
16"Lucien said, though his gaze"
17"Rory busied herself finding a"
18"The words were soft, almost"
19"They sat on opposite ends"
ratio0.878
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Now here he was, standing"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice coming out steadier than she felt"
1"Lucien said, though his gaze lingered on the stacks of legal textbooks"
2"Eva's gaze sharpened, the bottle of wine, the charged atmosphere"
98.28% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory clarified (clarify)"
1"Rory pressed (press)"
2"Rory confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.379
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.103
84.9228%