Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFHMMAMYEQ74B2H0FKX6Y1

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Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement like a thousand tiny fists, turning the neon signs into smeared watercolors of red and green. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted after her quarry, the leather of her watch strap already soaked through to her skin. The suspect—a scrawny kid with more piercings than sense—darted left into a narrow alley, nearly disappearing into the shadows between buildings. Quinn didn't slow. She'd been running down leads on the Veil Market for three months, and this was the closest she'd gotten to someone who might actually know something. Her partner's face flashed through her mind—Morris, eyes wide with confusion in his final moments—and she pushed harder. "Stop!" she shouted, voice cutting through the downpour. The command carried the weight of eighteen years on the force, but the kid just laughed, a high-pitched sound swallowed by the rain. He made a sharp turn into an abandoned Tube station entrance, vaulting over the rusted turnstiles with practiced ease. Quinn followed, her badge catching on the metal as she slid through. The darkness swallowed them whole, and for a heartbeat she was back in that warehouse three years ago, chasing shadows that moved wrong, breathing that sounded like tearing paper. The kid was already halfway down the platform, heading for a door marked "Authorized Personnel Only" in peeling letters. Quinn's hand went to her holster out of habit, but she knew better than to draw her weapon in a space this confined. Instead, she pulled out her flashlight, the beam cutting through the gloom like a sword. The door at the end of the platform opened before the kid reached it. A figure stood in the threshold—tall, broad-shouldered, with a medallion glinting at his throat. For a second, Quinn thought she'd stumbled onto backup, but something about the way the kid relaxed told her otherwise. This was no cop. "Tomás," the kid gasped, words coming out in ragged bursts. "She's—" "I see her." The man—Tomás—stepped forward, blocking the doorway. His eyes, warm brown in the flashlight's glare, met Quinn's with an unsettling calm. "Detective Quinn, I presume?" Quinn skidded to a halt, boots scraping against the grimy tiles. The kid slipped past Tomás into whatever lay beyond the door. "You know who I am," she said, not a question. Her flashlight never wavered from Tomás's face, taking in the scar along his forearm, the way he stood like someone who'd seen worse than a pissed-off detective. "Everyone in the Veil knows the detective who won't stop asking questions." Tomás's voice carried a Spanish accent, soft consonants that didn't match the hard set of his shoulders. "You're a long way from your jurisdiction, Harlow." "Don't call me that." The words came out sharper than she intended. Morris had been the only one who got away with using her first name. "What is this place? What's beyond that door?" Tomás smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. "The Veil Market. And you don't have a bone token, so you can't go in." Quinn's jaw tightened. She'd heard whispers about the bone tokens, about how they were carved from something that wasn't quite bone, from creatures that weren't quite dead. "I don't need an invitation to investigate a crime scene." "No crime has been committed here." Tomás took a step closer, and Quinn had to fight the urge to step back. "Not by any definition your laws would recognize." "The hell it hasn't." Her free hand found the photograph in her pocket—Morris, grinning in front of the precinct, taken two days before he died. "People are disappearing. Turning up with wounds that aren't natural. I followed the evidence here." "Did you?" Tomás's gaze drifted past her, toward the entrance they'd come through. "Or did something follow you?" The station suddenly felt smaller, the air thicker. Quinn's neck prickled, that cop instinct screaming that they weren't alone. She shifted her stance, putting her back to the wall, flashlight sweeping the platform. Shadows pooled in the corners, deep and hungry-looking. "Show yourself," she called out, voice steady despite the way her heart hammered against her ribs. A figure detached from the darkness near the turnstiles—a woman in a long coat, face obscured by a hood. She moved with a predator's grace, each step placing her precisely where the shadows were deepest. When she spoke, her voice carried an echo, like she was speaking from underwater. "The detective's persistence is noted," the woman said. "But some doors are meant to stay closed, Detective Quinn." Quinn's grip tightened on her flashlight. "I'm not leaving until I get answers about what happened to my partner." The woman paused, tilting her head in a way that wasn't quite human. "DS Morris's death was unfortunate but necessary. Some truths are too dangerous for mortal minds." "Necessary?" The word tasted like acid. "He was a good cop. He didn't deserve whatever ate him." "Eat is such a crude word." The woman stepped into a pool of light, and Quinn's breath caught. Her eyes reflected back yellow, like a cat's, and when she smiled, her teeth were too sharp. "Let's just say his curiosity exceeded his capacity." Quinn's hand found her gun this time, drawing it smooth and fast. "Step away from the door. Now." The woman laughed, a sound like breaking glass. "You think your little metal toy scares us? We've seen empires rise and fall, Detective. We've watched your kind stumble in the dark, grasping for answers that would shatter your fragile reality." "Then maybe it's time someone brought a little light." Quinn kept her gun trained on the woman's center mass, but her eyes flicked to Tomás. He hadn't moved, hadn't reached for a weapon, but there was something in his stance—ready, watchful, like he was waiting for a signal. The woman's form began to blur at the edges, like she was melting into the shadows. "The Market moves with the full moon. You'll never find it again." "Watch me." Quinn's voice was steel wrapped in velvet. "I'll burn down every abandoned station in this city if I have to." Something changed in the air then, a shift in pressure that made her ears pop. The woman's form solidified, her expression sharpening with something like respect. "Bold words for a mortal. Perhaps there's more of your partner in you than I thought." "Don't you dare—" Quinn's words cut off as the door behind Tomás opened wider, spilling golden light onto the platform. Music drifted out, strange and haunting, played on instruments she couldn't name. The scent of spices and something electric filled the space between them. Tomás turned slightly, offering Quinn a view of what lay beyond. The space was vast, bigger than the station could possibly contain, filled with stalls and people—if they could be called people. Some had too many limbs, others moved in ways that defied physics. Goods were displayed that made her eyes hurt to look at directly—crystals that swirled with inner light, books bound in something that glistened, jars filled with substances that shouldn't exist. "The Veil Market," Tomás said quietly. "Where the supernatural comes to trade. Where your partner learned things he shouldn't have." Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger, but she didn't fire. "What did he learn?" "That some doors, once opened, can never be closed." The woman was almost gone now, her form dissipating like smoke. "Your partner's death wasn't an ending, Detective. It was a beginning." And then she was gone, leaving only the scent of ozone and the echo of her words. Quinn stood frozen, gun still raised, staring at the impossible market that had swallowed her suspect and so much more. Tomás watched her, his expression unreadable. "You can't stop what's coming, Detective. But you can choose whether you face it blind or with your eyes open." The music from the Market swelled, a siren song promising answers, promising truths that would burn her to ash. Quinn's hand trembled, just once, before she lowered her gun. "Start talking," she said, voice rough. "And pray to whatever gods you believe in that you have answers worth the price of my partner's life." Tomás smiled, but this time it reached his eyes. "I think this is the beginning of a beautiful partnership, Detective Quinn." The door to the Veil Market stood open behind him, an invitation and a threat all at once. Quinn took a step forward, into the unknown, into the shadows her partner had chased three years ago. Some doors, once opened, can never be closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
83.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"The word tasted like [like]"
1"Tomás said quietly [quietly]"
2"her form dissipating like [like]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.133
89.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"carried the weight"
count1
1
word"practiced ease"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"predator"
count1
6
word"echo"
count2
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"carried the weight"
1"practiced ease"
2"gloom"
3"glinting"
4"wavered"
5"predator"
6"echo"
7"flicked"
8"velvet"
9"electric"
10"unreadable"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"e with confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1422
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1049
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Veil2
Market3
Morris3
Tube1
Tomás13
Spanish1
Music1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Tomás"
5"Music"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.499
windowScore0.5
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like tearing paper"
1"quite bone, from creatures that weren't quite dead"
2"quite human"
3"something like respect"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1422
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"prickled, that cop screaming that they"
87.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean33.86
std15.45
cv0.456
sampleLengths
045
168
231
360
457
552
611
727
859
937
1034
1123
1237
1329
1440
1518
1641
1716
1849
1918
2019
2128
2217
2343
2418
2540
2648
2728
2822
2942
3044
3174
3220
3314
3431
3537
3626
3729
3825
3921
4036
418
91.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"were carved"
1"were displayed"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs202
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences101
ratio0.089
matches
0"The suspect—a scrawny kid with more piercings than sense—darted left into a narrow alley, nearly disappearing into the shadows between buildings."
1"Her partner's face flashed through her mind—Morris, eyes wide with confusion in his final moments—and she pushed harder."
2"A figure stood in the threshold—tall, broad-shouldered, with a medallion glinting at his throat."
3"\"I see her.\" The man—Tomás—stepped forward, blocking the doorway."
4"\"The hell it hasn't.\" Her free hand found the photograph in her pocket—Morris, grinning in front of the precinct, taken two days before he died."
5"A figure detached from the darkness near the turnstiles—a woman in a long coat, face obscured by a hood."
6"He hadn't moved, hadn't reached for a weapon, but there was something in his stance—ready, watchful, like he was waiting for a signal."
7"The space was vast, bigger than the station could possibly contain, filled with stalls and people—if they could be called people."
8"Goods were displayed that made her eyes hurt to look at directly—crystals that swirled with inner light, books bound in something that glistened, jars filled with substances that shouldn't exist."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1065
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03380281690140845
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009389671361502348
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.08
std6.66
cv0.473
sampleLengths
020
125
221
33
426
518
68
723
819
912
1029
1119
1223
1315
1414
1514
1620
174
1810
191
209
2114
224
2311
2411
2510
2627
2729
288
2912
3014
318
328
3315
343
3524
3610
3721
388
3925
4015
4113
425
438
4411
4514
468
4716
4819
4916
73.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45544554455445546
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners46
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Instead, she pulled out her"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences76
matches
0"She'd been running down leads"
1"Her partner's face flashed through"
2"she shouted, voice cutting through"
3"He made a sharp turn"
4"His eyes, warm brown in"
5"she said, not a question"
6"Her flashlight never wavered from"
7"She'd heard whispers about the"
8"Her free hand found the"
9"She shifted her stance, putting"
10"she called out, voice steady"
11"She moved with a predator's"
12"Her eyes reflected back yellow,"
13"He hadn't moved, hadn't reached"
14"she said, voice rough"
ratio0.197
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences76
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"The suspect—a scrawny kid with"
2"Quinn didn't slow."
3"She'd been running down leads"
4"Her partner's face flashed through"
5"she shouted, voice cutting through"
6"The command carried the weight"
7"He made a sharp turn"
8"Quinn followed, her badge catching"
9"The darkness swallowed them whole,"
10"The kid was already halfway"
11"Quinn's hand went to her"
12"The door at the end"
13"A figure stood in the"
14"This was no cop."
15"the kid gasped, words coming"
16"The man—Tomás—stepped forward, blocking the"
17"His eyes, warm brown in"
18"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
19"The kid slipped past Tomás"
ratio0.934
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The darkness swallowed them whole, and for a heartbeat she was back in that warehouse three years ago, chasing shadows that moved wrong, breathing that sounded …"
1"Her flashlight never wavered from Tomás's face, taking in the scar along his forearm, the way he stood like someone who'd seen worse than a pissed-off detective…"
2"She shifted her stance, putting her back to the wall, flashlight sweeping the platform."
3"Goods were displayed that made her eyes hurt to look at directly—crystals that swirled with inner light, books bound in something that glistened, jars filled wi…"
4"Quinn stood frozen, gun still raised, staring at the impossible market that had swallowed her suspect and so much more."
5"The music from the Market swelled, a siren song promising answers, promising truths that would burn her to ash."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she shouted, voice cutting through the downpour"
1"the kid gasped, words coming out in ragged bursts"
2"Quinn kept, but her eyes flicked to Tomás"
3"she said, voice rough"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"the kid gasped (gasp)"
2"she called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.133
74.4402%