| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.447 | | leniency | 0.895 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 91.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1182 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1182 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "database" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 97.50% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn moved closer, her训练的本能 keeping her steps measured, preserving what she could of the scene." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1169 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 870 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Londoners | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 10 | | Morris | 4 | | Wainwright | 7 | | English | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Line" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Wainwright" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.925 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Something like a burn, but precise, almost d" | | 1 | "looked like charcoal, though it caught th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1169 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.51 | | std | 20.02 | | cv | 0.702 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 63 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 44 |
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| 94.41% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "were clenched" | | 2 | "been closed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "was speaking" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "was spinning" | | 4 | "wasn't spinning" | | 5 | "was vibrating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of rust and something older—something that reminded her of Morris, three years gone, and the case that had taken him from her." | | 1 | "But his fingers were stained black, as if he'd been handling something corrosive, and around his neck—" | | 2 | "Whatever had killed him, he hadn't seen it coming—or he hadn't been able to fight back." | | 3 | "There—scuffed into the concrete, half-obscured by debris, a mark that didn't belong." | | 4 | "She'd dismissed it at the time as circumstantial—her partner had been chasing shadows, she'd told herself, chasing conspiracy theories that had gotten him killed." | | 5 | "Scrawled across the tiles in what looked like charcoal, though it caught the light strangely—almost iridescent." | | 6 | "The stone was cold—far colder than it should have been, down here, in the residual warmth of the city above." | | 7 | "Her hands found the inside pocket of the coat—and closed around something small, metallic, circular." | | 8 | "Except—wait." | | 9 | "Between the body and—" | | 10 | "And somewhere in the darkness beyond the tunnel mouth, something shifted—watching, waiting, as if it had been waiting for her to finally see." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 881 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.039727582292849034 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01021566401816118 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 10.08 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.707 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 71.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4827586206896552 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Exactly like the marks in" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't turn around." | | 1 | "Her eyes were fixed on" | | 2 | "He wore a expensive coat," | | 3 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 4 | "His legs were straight." | | 5 | "His arms were at his" | | 6 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 7 | "She gestured at the rusted" | | 8 | "She pointed with her flashlight" | | 9 | "She didn't tell him she'd" | | 10 | "She crouched again, this time" | | 11 | "She'd dismissed it at the" | | 12 | "He was standing near the" | | 13 | "Her eyes traced the letters," | | 14 | "She pulled her hand back." | | 15 | "Her hands found the inside" | | 16 | "She drew it out." | | 17 | "It wasn't spinning at random." | | 18 | "It was vibrating, oscillating between" | | 19 | "She looked up." |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The flashlight beam cut through" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn swept the" | | 2 | "The air tasted of rust" | | 3 | "She didn't turn around." | | 4 | "Her eyes were fixed on" | | 5 | "The body was a man," | | 6 | "He wore a expensive coat," | | 7 | "Quinn moved closer, her训练的本能 keeping" | | 8 | "The man's throat bore a" | | 9 | "Something like a burn, but" | | 10 | "A symbol, maybe, etched into" | | 11 | "Wainwright said, consulting his notebook" | | 12 | "She crouched beside the body," | | 13 | "His legs were straight." | | 14 | "His arms were at his" | | 15 | "Whatever had killed him, he" | | 16 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 17 | "She gestured at the rusted" | | 18 | "Quinn circled the body, her" | | 19 | "She pointed with her flashlight" |
| | ratio | 0.671 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "But his fingers were stained black, as if he'd been handling something corrosive, and around his neck—" | | 1 | "She'd dismissed it at the time as circumstantial—her partner had been chasing shadows, she'd told herself, chasing conspiracy theories that had gotten him kille…" | | 2 | "Of the symbols that had been appearing at the edges of her cases for three years, always dismissed, always explained away." | | 3 | "The same people, perhaps, who had left a man dead in an underground station with a symbol burned into his throat and a compass that pointed to nowhere." | | 4 | "And somewhere in the darkness beyond the tunnel mouth, something shifted—watching, waiting, as if it had been waiting for her to finally see." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn circled, her boots crunching on decades of accumulated grit" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She didn't (do)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.237 | | leniency | 0.474 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |