Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFHR9W1YHG9PHYJFE7GGFB

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Duration:
1m 3s
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$0.002733
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Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The flashlight beam cut through the darkness like a blade, illuminating the curve of the disused platform where the Northern Line once carried Londoners to Camden Town. Detective Harlow Quinn swept the light across the tiled walls, counting the steps her boots made against the platform edge. Seventeen steps from the tunnel mouth. The air tasted of rust and something older—something that reminded her of Morris, three years gone, and the case that had taken him from her. Behind her, DC Wainwright's torch bobbed uncertainly. "Christ, guv. What sort of bloody place is this?" "The sort of place where someone left a body," Quinn said. She didn't turn around. Her eyes were fixed on the dark shape sprawled across the far end of the platform, half-hidden beneath a rusted signalling board. "The sort of place that doesn't exist on any of our maps." The body was a man, middle-aged, his face turned away from them. He wore a expensive coat, now torn at the shoulder, and his hands were clenched at his sides. No wallet. No phone. But his fingers were stained black, as if he'd been handling something corrosive, and around his neck— Quinn moved closer, her训练的本能 keeping her steps measured, preserving what she could of the scene. The man's throat bore a mark she couldn't immediately identify. Not a ligature mark. Not a bruise. Something like a burn, but precise, almost deliberate in its shape. A symbol, maybe, etched into the skin. "Uniform's already checked the missing persons," Wainwright said, consulting his notebook with the torch held between his teeth. "Nothing matching. No reports of anyone gone missing from the area." "Because there's no 'area,'" Quinn murmured. She crouched beside the body, not touching it, studying the way the man lay. His legs were straight. His arms were at his sides. No defensive wounds on his hands. Whatever had killed him, he hadn't seen it coming—or he hadn't been able to fight back. "That's not right," she said. "What's not right?" She stood, brushing dust from her knees. "The position. If he'd fallen, he'd be crumpled. If he'd been attacked and run, he'd be closer to the tunnel mouth. But he's placed here, almost—" She gestured at the rusted board. "—almost arranged." Wainwright frowned. "Maybe he came to grief and crawled here to die." "Maybe." Quinn circled the body, her boots crunching on decades of accumulated grit. "But there's no blood. No trace of injury beyond that mark on his neck. And his shoes—" She pointed with her flashlight. "Polished. Recently polished. This man took care with his appearance. Yet he comes to a place like this?" "Could've been meeting someone. Could've been a deal gone wrong." "A deal." Quinn's voice was flat. "In an abandoned Tube station with no entrance from the street. In a tunnel that's been sealed for twenty years." Wainwright shifted uncomfortably. "Maybe there's another way in." "There isn't. I had uniform check." She didn't tell him she'd also run the location through every database she had access to, and a few she probably shouldn't. The station had been closed since 1995. Flooded, then sealed. No records of any activity in the underground since. But someone had been here. Recently. She crouched again, this time angling her flashlight beneath the signalling board. There—scuffed into the concrete, half-obscured by debris, a mark that didn't belong. Two parallel lines, about a metre apart, with a smaller line bisecting them. Burned into the stone. "Get SOCO over here," she said. "I need this preserved." "What is it?" "I don't know yet." But she was already photographing it with her phone, the flash washing out the darkness. The symbol reminded her of something. Something she'd seen before, in Morris's case files, in the reports he'd been compiling before he died. She'd dismissed it at the time as circumstantial—her partner had been chasing shadows, she'd told herself, chasing conspiracy theories that had gotten him killed. But here it was. Burned into the stone. Exactly like the marks in Morris's photographs. Wainwright was speaking, his voice distant. "Guv? There's something else you should see." He was standing near the tunnel mouth, pointing his torch at the wall. Quinn joined him, and felt her stomach tighten. Writing. Scrawled across the tiles in what looked like charcoal, though it caught the light strangely—almost iridescent. Symbols she didn't recognise, interspersed with what might have been English, or might have been something older. Her eyes traced the letters, struggling to form words from the unfamiliar shapes. "Translation's going to take ages," Wainwright said. "If it's even a language. Could be nonsense. Some kids playing at occult nonsense—" "It's not nonsense." The words came out harder than she'd intended. Quinn touched the wall, her fingers brushing the symbols. The stone was cold—far colder than it should have been, down here, in the residual warmth of the city above. And beneath her fingertips, something pulsed. Faint. Rhythmic. Like a heartbeat. She pulled her hand back. "Guv?" Wainwright was watching her with concern. "You all right?" "Fine." But she was already moving back toward the body, crouching beside it again, searching. Her hands found the inside pocket of the coat—and closed around something small, metallic, circular. She drew it out. A compass. Brass, tarnished green with age, its face etched with symbols she didn't recognise. The needle was spinning, never settling, pointing everywhere and nowhere. Except—wait. Quinn tilted the compass, watching the needle. It wasn't spinning at random. It was vibrating, oscillating between two points. Between the body and— She looked up. Toward the tunnel mouth. Toward the writing on the wall. Toward the darkness beyond. "Get a uniform on this tunnel," she said quietly. "No one goes in or out until I say so." "Guv, we don't even know where it leads—" "But someone does." She stood, tucking the compass into her pocket. "Someone knew exactly where to bring this man. And they left him here deliberately, with that mark on his throat, with this—" She held up the compass. "This isn't a murder scene, Wainwright. It's a message." "What kind of message?" Quinn thought of Morris. Of the files he'd kept, the ones she'd never quite been able to throw away. Of the symbols that had been appearing at the edges of her cases for three years, always dismissed, always explained away. The clique, he'd called it. A network of people operating in the spaces between the world's layers. Dealing in things that shouldn't exist. The same people, perhaps, who had left a man dead in an underground station with a symbol burned into his throat and a compass that pointed to nowhere. "The kind of message," she said, "that someone's been trying to send for a very long time." She turned back to the body, to the writing on the wall, to the impossible compass still vibrating in her pocket. And somewhere in the darkness beyond the tunnel mouth, something shifted—watching, waiting, as if it had been waiting for her to finally see.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.895
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.053
91.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1182
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"etched"
2"database"
3"stomach"
4"traced"
5"warmth"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
97.50% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0.009
matches
0"Quinn moved closer, her训练的本能 keeping her steps measured, preserving what she could of the scene."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount870
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Northern1
Line1
Londoners1
Camden1
Town1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Morris4
Wainwright7
English1
persons
0"Line"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
4"Wainwright"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.925
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"Something like a burn, but precise, almost d"
1"looked like charcoal, though it caught th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1169
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean28.51
std20.02
cv0.702
sampleLengths
078
116
249
351
450
529
652
75
83
941
1012
1153
1210
1326
148
1547
166
1741
1810
193
2066
2115
2213
2321
2447
2521
2651
275
2810
2934
3025
3124
3217
3319
348
3547
364
3763
3828
3917
4044
94.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"were fixed"
1"were clenched"
2"been closed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was speaking"
1"was standing"
2"was watching"
3"was spinning"
4"wasn't spinning"
5"was vibrating"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences116
ratio0.095
matches
0"The air tasted of rust and something older—something that reminded her of Morris, three years gone, and the case that had taken him from her."
1"But his fingers were stained black, as if he'd been handling something corrosive, and around his neck—"
2"Whatever had killed him, he hadn't seen it coming—or he hadn't been able to fight back."
3"There—scuffed into the concrete, half-obscured by debris, a mark that didn't belong."
4"She'd dismissed it at the time as circumstantial—her partner had been chasing shadows, she'd told herself, chasing conspiracy theories that had gotten him killed."
5"Scrawled across the tiles in what looked like charcoal, though it caught the light strangely—almost iridescent."
6"The stone was cold—far colder than it should have been, down here, in the residual warmth of the city above."
7"Her hands found the inside pocket of the coat—and closed around something small, metallic, circular."
8"Except—wait."
9"Between the body and—"
10"And somewhere in the darkness beyond the tunnel mouth, something shifted—watching, waiting, as if it had been waiting for her to finally see."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.039727582292849034
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01021566401816118
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.08
std7.12
cv0.707
sampleLengths
027
120
26
325
47
59
611
74
822
912
1012
1118
122
132
1417
1515
1610
174
183
1911
207
2118
2211
236
2414
254
266
276
2816
295
303
317
3232
332
342
3510
3613
3722
3818
3910
406
4120
423
435
4428
457
463
479
485
491
71.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4827586206896552
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners56
40.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Exactly like the marks in"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences82
matches
0"She didn't turn around."
1"Her eyes were fixed on"
2"He wore a expensive coat,"
3"She crouched beside the body,"
4"His legs were straight."
5"His arms were at his"
6"She stood, brushing dust from"
7"She gestured at the rusted"
8"She pointed with her flashlight"
9"She didn't tell him she'd"
10"She crouched again, this time"
11"She'd dismissed it at the"
12"He was standing near the"
13"Her eyes traced the letters,"
14"She pulled her hand back."
15"Her hands found the inside"
16"She drew it out."
17"It wasn't spinning at random."
18"It was vibrating, oscillating between"
19"She looked up."
ratio0.293
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences82
matches
0"The flashlight beam cut through"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn swept the"
2"The air tasted of rust"
3"She didn't turn around."
4"Her eyes were fixed on"
5"The body was a man,"
6"He wore a expensive coat,"
7"Quinn moved closer, her训练的本能 keeping"
8"The man's throat bore a"
9"Something like a burn, but"
10"A symbol, maybe, etched into"
11"Wainwright said, consulting his notebook"
12"She crouched beside the body,"
13"His legs were straight."
14"His arms were at his"
15"Whatever had killed him, he"
16"She stood, brushing dust from"
17"She gestured at the rusted"
18"Quinn circled the body, her"
19"She pointed with her flashlight"
ratio0.671
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"But his fingers were stained black, as if he'd been handling something corrosive, and around his neck—"
1"She'd dismissed it at the time as circumstantial—her partner had been chasing shadows, she'd told herself, chasing conspiracy theories that had gotten him kille…"
2"Of the symbols that had been appearing at the edges of her cases for three years, always dismissed, always explained away."
3"The same people, perhaps, who had left a man dead in an underground station with a symbol burned into his throat and a compass that pointed to nowhere."
4"And somewhere in the darkness beyond the tunnel mouth, something shifted—watching, waiting, as if it had been waiting for her to finally see."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn circled, her boots crunching on decades of accumulated grit"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
1"She didn't (do)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.105
81.1600%