Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFKV94C4903QAQF7MG5PGF

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Duration:
34.0s
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The lift hadn't worked in forty years, so Harlow Quinn took the stairs—eighteen flights down to a station that shouldn't exist on any Tube map. Her footsteps echoed off tiled walls slick with moisture, the sound stretching strange and thin in the darkness. The Met's forensic team had rigged temporary lighting, but the bulbs cast more shadow than illumination, pooling black in the corners of the abandoned platform. She'd been a detective for eighteen years. She'd seen bodies in alleyways, in canal water, in the sterile antiseptic of hospital morgues. But this—whatever this was—sat wrong in her chest like a bone splinter working its way toward her heart. The body lay near what had once been a ticket barrier, now corroded into rust and memory. A man, mid-thirties, dressed in clothes that didn't belong to any decade she recognized—a charcoal coat with unusual buckles, boots polished to a military shine. His face was frozen in an expression she could only describe as reverence, eyes open and fixed on something above. No visible wounds. No blood. The forensic team had already processed the scene and come up empty-handed. "Natural causes," said DS Chandra Kapoor, appearing at her elbow with a notebook. He'd been with her for two years now—eager, methodical, and utterly incapable of seeing anything that didn't fit into neat categories. "Tox screen came back clean. No signs of struggle. We're waiting on the coroner, but—" "But there's no reason for a natural death in an abandoned Tube station." Quinn crouched, studying the victim's hands. Fingers curled loosely around nothing. "What's in his pocket?" Chandra flipped through his notes. "Personal effects. Wallet—genuine leather, good quality, contains two hundred pounds in cash and identification for one Daniel Ashworth, residential address in Islington. No phone. No keys. No anything else." Quinn stood, brushing dust from her knees. The platform stretched in both directions into darkness, the tracks long since removed, leaving only gulleys of rust and debris. At the far end, something glinted—metal, maybe, catching the weak light. "Someone came down here to die," she said. "Or someone brought them." "With respect, ma'am, there's no evidence of foul play. Could be a hermit. Some of these urban explorers take it too far." "He died of what, exactly? Fear?" She gestured at the face, the upturned eyes. "He wasn't running from anything. He was waiting for something." Chandra frowned but said nothing. Quinn moved toward the glinting object, her footsteps muffled now by accumulated debris—rotted newspapers, scattered detritus, the occasional skeleton of a rat. The object resolved itself as she approached: a compass, small enough to fit in a palm, its brass casing mottled with green verdigris. She didn't touch it, crouching instead to examine it where it lay on the filthy ground. The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize—lines and curves that seemed to shift in the dim light, though she knew that was a trick of exhaustion. The needle pointed firmly toward the far wall of the platform, toward a darkness that seemed somehow deeper than the rest. "Chandra. Come look at this." He joined her, squinting. "A compass? What was he, a collector?" "These markings." She pointed. "Have you seen anything like them before?" He shook his head. "Could be ornamental. Some people collect—" "The needle's pointing at the wall." "So?" Quinn stood, walking to where the compass indicated. The wall was brick, old London clay, slick with moisture and decades of grime. She ran her hand across the surface, feeling for anything unusual—loose mortar, a draft, anything. Nothing. But as she stood there, she felt it—a vibration so faint it might have been her imagination. A hum, low and subsonic, felt more than heard. Like standing near a massive electrical transformer. Like the air before a storm. "Ma'am?" Chandra had stayed by the compass. "There's someone here. Says she's from the British Museum. Authentication or something—she's got credentials." Quinn turned. A woman stood at the top of the stairs, backlit by the weak emergency lighting. Curly red hair, round glasses catching the light, a worn leather satchel slung across her body. She looked entirely out of place—a professor dragged into a nightmare. "This is a crime scene," Quinn called out. "How did you even get down here?" The woman descended the stairs slowly, carefully, as if navigating a church. When she reached the platform, Quinn could see her more clearly: green eyes, freckled complexion, a nervous habit of tucking her hair behind her left ear. She carried herself like someone used to libraries and quiet_archive rooms, not crime scenes and death. "Detective Quinn?" The woman's voice was steadier than her posture suggested. "My name is Eva Kowalski. I work in the restricted archives at the British Museum. I was contacted by a colleague who saw the coroner's preliminary report." She paused. "May I see the body?" "You don't look like a coroner's consultant." "I'm not. But I've seen deaths like this before." Eva's eyes moved to the far wall, the one the compass had pointed to. Her face went pale. "Oh no." "What do you know?" Quinn caught the woman's arm, perhaps harder than necessary. "You know something about this." "The compass." Eva's voice had dropped to a whisper. "Where is it?" "By the body. What does it mean?" Eva pulled free gently, moving toward the compass with the reverence of someone approaching an altar. She crouched but didn't touch it. "A Veil Compass. I've only seen them in texts." She looked up at Quinn. "This wasn't a natural death, Detective. This was a doorway." "A doorway to what?" Eva stood slowly, turning to face the far wall. "In certain places, the barrier between our world and others grows thin. People have always found these places—sacred groves, stone circles, places where the walls are thin enough to..." She trailed off, pressing her palm against the brick. The hum grew louder. Quinn felt it in her teeth now, in the bones of her skull. "There's a market," Eva said quietly. "Underground. It moves—every full moon, they move to a new location. Camden, tonight. This station." She turned back to Quinn. "Someone summoned him here. Or promised him something. The Veil Compass points to rifts—to doorways between worlds. He was trying to step through." "You're telling me this man died trying to—what? Walk into another dimension?" "He died stepping through." Eva's eyes were sad, ancient. "But the door closed. They're not supposed to close once you've committed. Something went wrong. Or someone." She glanced at the body. "He was betrayed. Someone gave him a false compass, or told him the wrong words. He walked into a wall and the... the other side rejected him." Quinn's mind raced. Eighteen years of service. Eighteen years of evidence and procedure and logic. But three years ago, her partner Morris had died on a case that made no sense—bodies found in sealed rooms, witnesses who remembered nothing, a darkness that the surviving officers couldn't describe. She'd buried that. Told herself it was trauma, exhaustion, the mind playing tricks. But the patterns were the same. They were always the same. "Chandra." Her voice came out hoarse. "Bag the compass. Full forensic. And call the coroner back—tell them to look for cellular degradation inconsistent with standard post-mortem intervals. Tissue damage at the molecular level." "Ma'am?" "Do it." Chandra hesitated, then moved toward the body, shooting her a confused look. Eva watched this, then turned back to the wall. "The market is still here. Tonight. The sellers, the buyers—they'll have answers. Someone knew he was coming. Someone wanted him to fail." Quinn stepped closer, feeling that hum in her blood now, in the scar tissue where Morris's death had left her incomplete. "How do we find them?" Eva reached into her satchel and withdrew a bone token, small and white and carved with symbols that matched the compass. "You need one of these to enter." She pressed it into Quinn's palm. The bone was warm, almost alive. "But Detective—once you go through, you can't unsee it. Everything you've built your career on, every rational explanation—it all falls apart. Are you ready for that?" Quinn looked at the token. Then at the wall. Then at the body of a man who had died reaching for something impossible. Morris had been reaching for something too. She was sure of it now. "Show me," she said. The wall shimmered, and the hum became a song, and Detective Harlow Quinn stepped forward into the space between worlds.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.077
79.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"loosely"
2"slowly"
3"carefully"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"processed"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"resolved"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"firmly"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"standard"
count1
12
word"almost alive"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"processed"
3"methodical"
4"glinting"
5"resolved"
6"etched"
7"firmly"
8"navigating"
9"whisper"
10"raced"
11"standard"
12"almost alive"
13"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount926
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn17
Tube1
Met1
Chandra5
Kapoor1
Fingers1
London1
Eva8
Morris3
Detective1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Met"
3"Chandra"
4"Kapoor"
5"Fingers"
6"Eva"
7"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.582
windowScore0.5
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed somehow deeper than the rest"
1"as if navigating a church"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean27.25
std20.49
cv0.752
sampleLengths
068
140
279
349
428
534
638
712
822
924
105
1161
1249
135
1411
1511
1610
176
181
1937
201
2139
2221
2344
2415
2554
2645
277
2829
2918
3012
317
3246
334
3447
3517
3649
3712
3858
3960
4011
4133
421
432
4412
4531
4626
4766
4823
4913
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"was—sat"
1"was frozen"
2"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences118
ratio0.093
matches
0"The lift hadn't worked in forty years, so Harlow Quinn took the stairs—eighteen flights down to a station that shouldn't exist on any Tube map."
1"But this—whatever this was—sat wrong in her chest like a bone splinter working its way toward her heart."
2"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in clothes that didn't belong to any decade she recognized—a charcoal coat with unusual buckles, boots polished to a military shine."
3"He'd been with her for two years now—eager, methodical, and utterly incapable of seeing anything that didn't fit into neat categories."
4"At the far end, something glinted—metal, maybe, catching the weak light."
5"Quinn moved toward the glinting object, her footsteps muffled now by accumulated debris—rotted newspapers, scattered detritus, the occasional skeleton of a rat."
6"The face was etched with symbols she didn't recognize—lines and curves that seemed to shift in the dim light, though she knew that was a trick of exhaustion."
7"She ran her hand across the surface, feeling for anything unusual—loose mortar, a draft, anything."
8"But as she stood there, she felt it—a vibration so faint it might have been her imagination."
9"She looked entirely out of place—a professor dragged into a nightmare."
10"But three years ago, her partner Morris had died on a case that made no sense—bodies found in sealed rooms, witnesses who remembered nothing, a darkness that the surviving officers couldn't describe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount940
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03404255319148936
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013829787234042552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.01
std8.14
cv0.678
sampleLengths
025
118
225
37
415
518
617
725
820
93
102
1112
1213
1321
1415
1519
165
174
185
1929
207
2120
2211
238
244
2522
2614
2710
285
2922
3023
3116
3228
3321
345
354
367
374
387
394
406
416
421
438
4414
4515
461
4717
489
497
64.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.423728813559322
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners50
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then at the wall."
1"Then at the body of"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her footsteps echoed off tiled"
1"She'd been a detective for"
2"She'd seen bodies in alleyways,"
3"His face was frozen in"
4"He'd been with her for"
5"She gestured at the face,"
6"She didn't touch it, crouching"
7"He joined her, squinting."
8"He shook his head."
9"She ran her hand across"
10"She looked entirely out of"
11"She carried herself like someone"
12"Her face went pale."
13"She crouched but didn't touch"
14"She looked up at Quinn"
15"She trailed off, pressing her"
16"She turned back to Quinn"
17"She glanced at the body"
18"She'd buried that."
19"They were always the same."
ratio0.288
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences80
matches
0"The lift hadn't worked in"
1"Her footsteps echoed off tiled"
2"The Met's forensic team had"
3"She'd been a detective for"
4"She'd seen bodies in alleyways,"
5"The body lay near what"
6"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in"
7"His face was frozen in"
8"The forensic team had already"
9"He'd been with her for"
10"Quinn crouched, studying the victim's"
11"Fingers curled loosely around nothing."
12"Chandra flipped through his notes."
13"Quinn stood, brushing dust from"
14"The platform stretched in both"
15"She gestured at the face,"
16"Chandra frowned but said nothing."
17"Quinn moved toward the glinting"
18"The object resolved itself as"
19"She didn't touch it, crouching"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in clothes that didn't belong to any decade she recognized—a charcoal coat with unusual buckles, boots polished to a military shine…"
1"He'd been with her for two years now—eager, methodical, and utterly incapable of seeing anything that didn't fit into neat categories."
2"The woman descended the stairs slowly, carefully, as if navigating a church."
3"But three years ago, her partner Morris had died on a case that made no sense—bodies found in sealed rooms, witnesses who remembered nothing, a darkness that th…"
4"Then at the body of a man who had died reaching for something impossible."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"her posture suggested (suggest)"
1"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.077
82.8147%