| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the woman said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.292 | | leniency | 0.583 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 74.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1346 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1346 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "reminder" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "firmly" | | 11 | "resolve" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "glistening" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 5 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "sent a chill down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "e with panic" | | 1 | "d in fear" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1332 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1080 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.78 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 30 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 4 | | Tube | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.111 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it led to the active Tube lin" | | 1 | "looked like leather but couldn't be, and" | | 2 | "felt like hours" | | 3 | "quite human, a world that existed in the shadows of her own" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1332 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 34.15 | | std | 14.67 | | cv | 0.429 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 68 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 41 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "been seen" | | 1 | "were lined" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a lanky figure in a dark hoodie—darted around the corner ahead, disappearing into the maze of Soho's backstreets." | | 1 | "The air that wafted up was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet that made her stomach turn." | | 2 | "The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something that reminded Quinn of the scent from the stairwell." | | 3 | "She'd heard whispers of the Veil Market during her years on the force—rumors of a hidden world that existed alongside their own." | | 4 | "It opened easily, revealing a familiar London street—wet pavement glistening under the streetlights, the distant sound of traffic." | | 5 | "Quinn's watch read 2:17 AM—only minutes had passed since she'd entered the market, though it felt like hours." | | 6 | "But she knew one thing for certain—her investigation had only just begun, and the truth she sought was far stranger than she'd ever imagined." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1091 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.02841429880843263 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012832263978001834 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 12.93 | | std | 7.04 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.2912621359223301 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 1 | "She rounded the corner, nearly" | | 2 | "Her eyes caught on a" | | 3 | "She descended the stairs, each" | | 4 | "She spotted the suspect near" | | 5 | "She couldn't risk following without" | | 6 | "She holstered her weapon and" | | 7 | "She'd heard whispers of the" | | 8 | "She'd stumbled into a world" | | 9 | "She'd spent her career upholding" | | 10 | "It opened easily, revealing a" | | 11 | "She pulled out her phone," |
| | ratio | 0.143 | |
| 37.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's leather shoes" | | 1 | "The green neon sign of" | | 2 | "Her breath came in sharp" | | 3 | "The suspect—a lanky figure in" | | 4 | "Quinn's muscles burned from the" | | 5 | "She rounded the corner, nearly" | | 6 | "The suspect was nowhere in" | | 7 | "Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as" | | 8 | "Her eyes caught on a" | | 9 | "The door bore no markings," | | 10 | "Quinn approached cautiously, drawing her" | | 11 | "The door creaked open at" | | 12 | "The air that wafted up" | | 13 | "She descended the stairs, each" | | 14 | "The vaulted ceilings stretched high" | | 15 | "Quinn's footsteps echoed as she" | | 16 | "She spotted the suspect near" | | 17 | "The detective's heart raced as" | | 18 | "Quinn's voice cut through the" | | 19 | "The suspect whirled around, eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open at her touch, revealing a set of concrete steps descending into darkness." | | 1 | "The air that wafted up was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet that made her stomach turn." | | 2 | "The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something that reminded Quinn of the scent from the stairwell." | | 3 | "The woman's eyes held a knowing look that sent a chill down Quinn's spine." | | 4 | "She'd heard whispers of the Veil Market during her years on the force—rumors of a hidden world that existed alongside their own." | | 5 | "A hidden market selling magical goods, suspects who weren't quite human, a world that existed in the shadows of her own?" |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.208 | | leniency | 0.417 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |