Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFM225VWNK3C4S03E0KP7X

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Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's leather shoes splashed through puddles as she sprinted down the rain-slicked alley. The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered in her peripheral vision, its glow diffused by the downpour. Her breath came in sharp bursts, each exhale forming a cloud in the cold night air. The suspect—a lanky figure in a dark hoodie—darted around the corner ahead, disappearing into the maze of Soho's backstreets. Quinn's muscles burned from the chase, but she pushed forward. Eighteen years on the force had taught her never to let a suspect escape, especially one who'd been seen entering the Veil Market. She rounded the corner, nearly slipping on a patch of black ice hidden beneath the rainwater. The suspect was nowhere in sight. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she scanned the narrow passage. Her eyes caught on a rusted metal door half-hidden behind a stack of discarded crates. The door bore no markings, but something about its placement felt deliberate. Quinn approached cautiously, drawing her service weapon. The door creaked open at her touch, revealing a set of concrete steps descending into darkness. The air that wafted up was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet that made her stomach turn. She descended the stairs, each step echoing in the confined space. At the bottom, she found herself in what appeared to be an abandoned Tube station. The vaulted ceilings stretched high above, their curved walls covered in decades of graffiti. Flickering fluorescent lights cast an eerie glow over the platform. Quinn's footsteps echoed as she moved forward, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. She spotted the suspect near the far end of the platform, talking to a hooded figure beside an old vending machine. The detective's heart raced as she drew closer, staying in the shadows. "Freeze!" Quinn's voice cut through the damp air. "Metropolitan Police!" The suspect whirled around, eyes wide with panic. The hooded figure melted back into the shadows, disappearing before Quinn could get a clear look. The suspect bolted, leaping onto the tracks and disappearing into a dark tunnel. Quinn hesitated. The tunnel looked like it led to the active Tube lines. She couldn't risk following without backup. But something in her gut told her this was her only chance to catch the suspect and uncover the truth about the Veil Market. She holstered her weapon and climbed down onto the tracks. The third rail hummed with electricity nearby, a constant reminder of the danger. Quinn moved quickly, her eyes straining to see in the near-total darkness. The tunnel curved ahead, and she could hear the suspect's footsteps echoing off the walls. As she rounded the bend, Quinn found herself in a cavernous space unlike anything she'd seen before. The walls were lined with makeshift stalls, their wares illuminated by strings of fairy lights and flickering candles. Figures in cloaks and hoods moved between the stalls, their faces obscured. The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something that reminded Quinn of the scent from the stairwell. A hand closed around her wrist, yanking her into the shadows. Quinn reacted instinctively, twisting her arm and driving her elbow into her assailant's stomach. The figure grunted and released her grip. "Detective Quinn," a voice rasped. "You shouldn't be here." Quinn's eyes adjusted to the darkness, and she found herself face to face with a woman in her fifties, her face lined with age and wisdom. The woman's eyes held a knowing look that sent a chill down Quinn's spine. "Who are you?" Quinn demanded, keeping her voice low. "What is this place?" The woman smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. "This is the Veil Market. And you, Detective, are very far from your jurisdiction." Quinn's mind raced. She'd heard whispers of the Veil Market during her years on the force—rumors of a hidden world that existed alongside their own. But she'd always dismissed them as urban legends, stories told to scare rookie cops. "I'm following a suspect," Quinn said, her voice firm despite the unease crawling up her spine. "A criminal who's been linked to this place." The woman's smile widened. "And what crime has this suspect committed? Selling moon-touched herbs? Trading in dragon scales? Or perhaps they've been caught using magic without a license?" Quinn's grip tightened on her weapon. "I don't know what you're talking about. But I know illegal activity when I see it." The woman chuckled, a sound like dry leaves skittering across pavement. "Illegal, you say? In whose eyes, Detective? Yours? The law of mortals that doesn't even acknowledge our existence?" A commotion erupted near one of the stalls. Quinn turned to see her suspect struggling against two figures in dark robes. The suspect's hood had fallen back, revealing a young face twisted in fear. "Help me!" the suspect cried out, his voice cracking. "They're going to—" A robed figure pressed something against the suspect's neck. The young man's eyes rolled back, and he went limp. The figures dragged him away into the shadows. Quinn moved to intervene, but the woman's hand on her arm stopped her. "It's too late," the woman said softly. "He broke the rules. Now he'll face the consequences." Quinn's mind reeled. What rules? What consequences? She'd stumbled into a world she didn't understand, and it was clear these people operated by a different set of laws. "I need to take that suspect in," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous. "He's wanted for questioning in connection with multiple crimes." The woman's eyes narrowed. "And what crimes would those be, Detective? Existing in a world you refuse to acknowledge? Breathing the same air as creatures you've been taught to fear?" Quinn's jaw clenched. She'd spent her career upholding the law, but here, in this hidden market, the lines between right and wrong blurred into obscurity. "I'm bringing him in," Quinn said firmly. "With or without your cooperation." The woman sighed, a sound of weary resignation. "Very well. But know this, Detective Quinn—once you step into our world, there's no going back. The truth you seek comes with a price." Quinn met the woman's gaze, her resolve hardening. "I've already paid that price. Three years ago, when I lost my partner in circumstances I still can't explain. I'm done turning a blind eye to what's right in front of me." The woman studied Quinn for a long moment, then nodded slowly. "Follow the main tunnel to the end. There's a service door that leads to the surface. But be warned—the world you return to will never look the same." Quinn nodded her thanks and moved toward the tunnel, her mind racing with questions. As she walked, she passed stalls selling jars of glowing liquid, books bound in what looked like leather but couldn't be, and crystals that hummed with an energy she could feel in her bones. At the end of the tunnel, she found the service door. It opened easily, revealing a familiar London street—wet pavement glistening under the streetlights, the distant sound of traffic. But as Quinn stepped out into the night, she couldn't shake the feeling that she'd left a piece of herself behind in the Veil Market. The rain had eased to a drizzle, and the neon sign of The Raven's Nest glowed softly in the distance. Quinn's watch read 2:17 AM—only minutes had passed since she'd entered the market, though it felt like hours. She pulled out her phone, her thumb hovering over the speed dial for her sergeant. But something stopped her. How could she explain what she'd seen? A hidden market selling magical goods, suspects who weren't quite human, a world that existed in the shadows of her own? Quinn slipped the phone back into her pocket. For now, she would keep this discovery to herself. But she knew one thing for certain—her investigation had only just begun, and the truth she sought was far stranger than she'd ever imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the woman said softly [softly]"
1"Quinn said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.167
74.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"echoing"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"raced"
count2
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"firmly"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"jaw clenched"
2"scanned"
3"stomach"
4"echoing"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"raced"
8"reminder"
9"chill"
10"firmly"
11"resolve"
12"racing"
13"could feel"
14"familiar"
15"glistening"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
3
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
2"The air was thick with"
3"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences87
matches
0"e with panic"
1"d in fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1332
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1080
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.78
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn30
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Veil4
Market4
Tube2
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
2"London"
globalScore0.111
windowScore0
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like it led to the active Tube lin"
1"looked like leather but couldn't be, and"
2"felt like hours"
3"quite human, a world that existed in the shadows of her own"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1332
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
79.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean34.15
std14.67
cv0.429
sampleLengths
050
152
259
348
450
547
610
737
843
950
1068
1132
129
1340
1413
1523
1639
1724
1828
1922
2029
2134
2212
2327
2413
2516
2628
2723
2830
2925
3012
3132
3240
3339
3448
3554
3638
3747
3841
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"been seen"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences103
ratio0.068
matches
0"The suspect—a lanky figure in a dark hoodie—darted around the corner ahead, disappearing into the maze of Soho's backstreets."
1"The air that wafted up was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet that made her stomach turn."
2"The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something that reminded Quinn of the scent from the stairwell."
3"She'd heard whispers of the Veil Market during her years on the force—rumors of a hidden world that existed alongside their own."
4"It opened easily, revealing a familiar London street—wet pavement glistening under the streetlights, the distant sound of traffic."
5"Quinn's watch read 2:17 AM—only minutes had passed since she'd entered the market, though it felt like hours."
6"But she knew one thing for certain—her investigation had only just begun, and the truth she sought was far stranger than she'd ever imagined."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02841429880843263
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012832263978001834
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.93
std7.04
cv0.544
sampleLengths
015
119
216
319
410
523
616
76
810
915
1012
117
1216
1325
1411
1515
1614
1710
1814
1921
2012
218
222
238
2416
2513
262
2711
286
2924
3010
3113
3212
3315
3417
3518
3612
3721
3811
3914
407
415
424
4326
4414
459
464
479
4814
493
45.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2912621359223301
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences84
matches
0"Her breath came in sharp"
1"She rounded the corner, nearly"
2"Her eyes caught on a"
3"She descended the stairs, each"
4"She spotted the suspect near"
5"She couldn't risk following without"
6"She holstered her weapon and"
7"She'd heard whispers of the"
8"She'd stumbled into a world"
9"She'd spent her career upholding"
10"It opened easily, revealing a"
11"She pulled out her phone,"
ratio0.143
37.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences84
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's leather shoes"
1"The green neon sign of"
2"Her breath came in sharp"
3"The suspect—a lanky figure in"
4"Quinn's muscles burned from the"
5"She rounded the corner, nearly"
6"The suspect was nowhere in"
7"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
8"Her eyes caught on a"
9"The door bore no markings,"
10"Quinn approached cautiously, drawing her"
11"The door creaked open at"
12"The air that wafted up"
13"She descended the stairs, each"
14"The vaulted ceilings stretched high"
15"Quinn's footsteps echoed as she"
16"She spotted the suspect near"
17"The detective's heart raced as"
18"Quinn's voice cut through the"
19"The suspect whirled around, eyes"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The door creaked open at her touch, revealing a set of concrete steps descending into darkness."
1"The air that wafted up was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet that made her stomach turn."
2"The air was thick with the smell of incense and something else—something that reminded Quinn of the scent from the stairwell."
3"The woman's eyes held a knowing look that sent a chill down Quinn's spine."
4"She'd heard whispers of the Veil Market during her years on the force—rumors of a hidden world that existed alongside their own."
5"A hidden market selling magical goods, suspects who weren't quite human, a world that existed in the shadows of her own?"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.083
68.5800%