Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNFM5AYQK8JPW0MT4X10PYN

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Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.000238
Provider:
Clarifai

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tubestation hung thick and cold, smelling of damp stone and something else—rotting earth, perhaps, or the faint, metallic tang of something ancient and hungry. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted in the dim light filtering through the cracked concrete ceiling. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her left wrist, a stark contrast to the chaos below. She stood at the edge of a shallow pit, the scene of a murder that defied logic. The victim, a young man in a cheap suit, lay sprawled face-down, a single, perfectly clean bullet hole between his shoulder blades. No blood pooled around him, no drag marks, no struggle. The only evidence was a single, discarded bone token—a small, polished rib bone—lying half-buried in the mud beside the body. Detective Quinn crouched, her sharp jawline set in a line of intense concentration. Her military precision dictated every movement. She ran a gloved hand over the victim’s jacket, noting the absence of a wallet, phone, or any identification. The bullet, recovered from the ground nearby, was standard issue, but the lack of blood suggested something unnatural. She straightened, her eyes scanning the surrounding shadows. The Veil Market was known for its secrets, its hidden entrances, and its clientele who dealt in the forbidden. This pit, hidden beneath the Camden line, was one such entrance, accessible only by a bone token—a relic from some forgotten ritual. Her partner, Detective Eva Kowalski, stood nearby, her red hair escaping a loose braid, glasses perched precariously on her nose. She clutched a worn leather satchel, its contents likely her research notes on the occult. Eva’s freckled complexion was pale, her green eyes wide with a mix of fascination and unease. She adjusted her glasses, her nervous habit of tucking a stray curl behind her left ear momentarily forgotten. “The evidence doesn’t add up, Eva,” Quinn stated, her voice low and controlled, cutting through the oppressive silence. “No struggle, no blood, no ID. Just a clean kill and a bone token. Standard police procedure would point to a hit, but this location... it’s not random. The Veil Market moves every full moon. This pit was active tonight.” Eva nodded, her fingers tracing the edge of her satchel. “I know, Harlow. But the lack of blood... that’s unusual. And the bullet hole is perfectly centered. No defensive wounds. It’s almost... clinical.” Quinn’s brow furrowed. “Clinical? Or supernatural? The Veil Compass,” she murmured, pulling the small brass compass from her pocket. Its face was etched with protective sigils, the patina of verdigris giving it an ancient, almost sinister look. She flipped it open, the needle trembling violently before settling, not north, but directly towards a spot near the edge of the pit, where the mud was slightly darker. “It points to a rift. A supernatural energy source. This wasn’t just a human killing. Something else was involved.” Eva’s eyes widened. “A rift? But how? And why here? The Market’s moved since the last full moon. This location shouldn’t even be active.” Quinn knelt again, her gaze fixed on the bone token. She ran a finger over its smooth surface, feeling the faint warmth still lingering. “The token. It’s not just an entry key. It’s a marker. Someone used it to summon... or to open something. The absence of blood suggests the victim wasn’t human, or wasn’t killed in the conventional way. Maybe the bullet passed through, but the force was absorbed or redirected by the rift’s energy. Or... the victim was already dead, drained of blood before the shot was fired.” Eva stepped closer, her curiosity overriding her caution. “But who? And why target him? He’s just a nobody.” Quinn straightened, the compass still pointing towards the dark patch of mud. “He’s not a nobody, Eva. He was here for a reason. He came for something from the Market. Something valuable enough to risk a supernatural encounter. And whoever he was dealing with... they didn’t want witnesses. Not just a human witness, but a supernatural one. That’s why there’s no blood. That’s why the evidence is so clean. They covered their tracks, but not perfectly. The compass found the rift. The bone token is the key. We need to find who used it last, and why.” Eva looked from the compass to the pit, her mind racing. “So, it’s not just a murder. It’s a ritual? Or a summoning?” Quinn’s gaze was fixed on the mud, her mind already piecing together the fragments. “Something worse. Something that shouldn’t exist. And I need to find out what. Before it happens again.” She tucked the compass away, her worn watch ticking a steady, ominous rhythm against her wrist. The Veil Market had claimed another victim tonight, and Detective Quinn was determined to uncover the truth hidden beneath the surface.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount806
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount806
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"standard"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"sinister"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"standard"
2"scanning"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"furrowed"
7"etched"
8"sinister"
9"warmth"
10"encounter"
11"racing"
12"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences33
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences33
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences41
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount495
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tubestation1
Harlow1
Quinn8
Veil2
Market2
Camden1
Detective4
Eva6
Kowalski1
persons
0"Tubestation"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Market"
4"Detective"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.5
wordCount800
matches
0"not north, but directly towards a spot near the edge of the pit"
1"Not just a human witness, but a supernatural one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean66.67
std34.87
cv0.523
sampleLengths
0130
1105
269
358
433
585
624
790
818
997
1023
1168
62.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences33
matches
0"was known"
1"was etched"
2"was fixed"
3"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs76
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences41
ratio0.073
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Tubestation hung thick and cold, smelling of damp stone and something else—rotting earth, perhaps, or the faint, metallic tang of something ancient and hungry."
1"The only evidence was a single, discarded bone token—a small, polished rib bone—lying half-buried in the mud beside the body."
2"This pit, hidden beneath the Camden line, was one such entrance, accessible only by a bone token—a relic from some forgotten ritual."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount501
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03592814371257485
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01996007984031936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean19.51
std14.81
cv0.759
sampleLengths
029
115
217
317
422
510
620
713
86
919
1018
118
1219
1322
1420
1515
1616
1718
1818
1940
2010
2123
223
2316
2418
2529
2619
273
2821
2910
3014
3166
328
3310
3412
3585
3611
3712
3814
3933
4021
69.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4146341463414634
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners17
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences33
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"Her military precision dictated every"
3"She ran a gloved hand"
4"She straightened, her eyes scanning"
5"Her partner, Detective Eva Kowalski,"
6"She clutched a worn leather"
7"She adjusted her glasses, her"
8"she murmured, pulling the small"
9"Its face was etched with"
10"She flipped it open, the"
11"She ran a finger over"
12"She tucked the compass away,"
ratio0.394
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences33
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted"
2"Her worn leather watch ticked"
3"She stood at the edge"
4"The victim, a young man"
5"The only evidence was a"
6"Detective Quinn crouched, her sharp"
7"Her military precision dictated every"
8"She ran a gloved hand"
9"The bullet, recovered from the"
10"She straightened, her eyes scanning"
11"The Veil Market was known"
12"This pit, hidden beneath the"
13"Her partner, Detective Eva Kowalski,"
14"She clutched a worn leather"
15"Eva’s freckled complexion was pale,"
16"She adjusted her glasses, her"
17"Quinn stated, her voice low"
18"Eva nodded, her fingers tracing"
19"Quinn’s brow furrowed."
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Veil Market was known for its secrets, its hidden entrances, and its clientele who dealt in the forbidden."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn stated, her voice low and controlled, cutting through the oppressive silence"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.364
68.2945%